Unforgettable Proposal 🤗😍

Submitted into Contest #50 in response to: Write a story about a proposal. ... view prompt

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Here I am going to tel you one of my friends funny love story that happend to him.

He usually go to my job by Bus. So from the starting month of his job its been two years in this two years every now and then he used to see one pretty girl who is slim and who also used to travel by same bus same time in morning and evening.

He was observing her from past one year every now and then and one day finally decided to talk with her. But some questions sparked in my mind before speaking with her.

If he speak with her will she respond to me or not?

If she thinks anything negative then how can he overcome that?

He also started thinking that If she warned me not to follow again then what is my situation at that time and how should I respond to her? And like this so many questions sparked in my mind in positive and negative ways.

Finally what happened around one year after this whole incident she got disappeared for few months means she is not visible to me at regular bus stop. From then around few months let's say for 4 to 5 months he didn't seen her.

So on those 4 to 5 months whenever he started feeling "I am at that bus stop in morning or returning from my office their will be an automatic conversion between my mind and heart" as follows.

Heart: Shut..!! Where is that pretty girl at least i didn't speak with her. I missed her now feeling a lot. :-(

Mind: Is that necessary for you? Just concentrate on your goals first.

Heart: I know about that but at least I have to speak with her on those days. I missed a lot. I think I won't get that opportunity again. With some kind of pain in heart.

Brain: Then what you did all these days man?just time passing and you Dont have courage to speak with her and you are just disturbing yourself. Is it that much important to you. All these things come and go its not much important.

Heart: Of course but at least I had to ask her what is her Good Name? but it is some kind of special feeling that I cant express in words and i have never felt like this before.

Mind: Forgot all those and keep concentrate only on you goals dont say all cock and bull stories.

So finally what happen after few months he saw that pretty girl at same bus stop but she is slightly changed but he didn’t bother about that again heart and mind converse with him, first my heart said just go and speak with her and mind said nothing.

Finally i approached her and started conversion

Me: Excuse me..

Girl: Yes, tell me..

Me: May i know weather you are student or Employee..?

Girl: I am working as an employee at so and so place. Why? are you asking me? Do you want any Job?

Me: No.. Just casually i asked i said and said her that i am seeing you from past more than one year here in same bus stop.

Girl: But i didn't know who are you? You said that you are seeing me from past one year.. so what you want..

Me: If you don’t mine can i have your number?

Girl: Sorry no.. i cant because i don’t know who are you..

Me: Okay.. Thank you..

Girl: its okay..

Here the funny thing happened after around 10 days of this conversation with her i realized that i speak with the wrong person who is not exactly the same person who i had seen first..

My mind stops thinking for few minutes and the whole day i started thinking about this incident how it happened.

Next day i realized after seeing both girls looking quite similar so i got confused.

But still i haven't speak with right girl. He shared his funny proposal with me as a friend and even I shared my romantic proposal with him as below.

My fiancé and I have been dating a little over 3 years, he took me to one of our regular date spots for dinner and as dessert came out so did a little plate with 5 valentines conversation hearts which read "I love you, real love, marry me, say yes, soul mates" I still didn't get it. I thought the restaurant was just being sweet and romantic as it was a week before Valentine's Day... My fiancée asked me if I read them. I started to read them out loud to him and from the corner of my eye I saw him get down on one knee I looked over- he was crying and asked, "will you marry me?" I responded "are you serious???" With tons of excitement and then we stood up kissed and the whole restaurant started clapping and cheering! As we sat back down, all of a sudden my little sister and her fiancée walked in she surprised me and flew in from across the country! My fiancée knew that she's the first person Id want to see right after that! I wanted to call my parents immediately but they were overseas on vacation and I couldn't get through! I tried my entire family and no one picked up! Then he suggested we get a get a celebratory drink somewhere and I said we had to go to the spot we first met at 3 1/2 years ago! We got in an uber and the four of us headed there! When we walked in my fiancée pulled me upstairs to this private area and there were 45 of our closest friends and our families who had flown in from various places and once everyone parted off to the side I saw my parents who had flown back 26.5 hours and surprised us there.

so we have our own flip book of the proposal also.

Pooja Sarmalkar

July 13, 2020 16:55

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