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Contemporary Holiday Fiction

George Salter came upon his eighth empty bus shelter, and sighed. The bench inside the Plexiglas enclosure looked so inviting, but he knew he’d never get up again if he sat down now, and the app on his phone told him the same thing it had told him at the other seven stops: “Bus delayed.”

He huffed, wiped hoarfrost from his brow, and trudged around the next snowdrift – his baggage trundling ever behind him. Every step was half-jerk and half-stumble.

The only things that kept him going were thoughts of the Riviera Maya, of the all-inclusive stay at the Grand Ocean Dreams resort. Of finally arriving and grabbing himself a tall, refreshing mojito, donning a pair of shorts, and letting the hot climate swaddle him.

And of course, of seeing Dolores again.

Then a fat, lazy, beautiful snowflake settled upon his nose, and when he looked up, he saw that snow had started falling again.

Another grumble. This was the worst start to a vacation, ever.

It was bad enough when his cab cancelled on him, at four in the morning – and “cancelled” was George being generous, because the ass ghosted him. It took half an hour to get through to their call centre, and the jerk on the other end told him that cab service was horribly backed up across the whole city.

“Because of the storm.”

George swore in response, demanded to speak to a manager, and then hung up before the guy had a chance to respond. Instead of wasting more time with the city’s worst cab company, George called another one. And another. And even that other other one, that kept getting into the papers for all the wrong reasons. But they all gave him the same response. Cabs were either delayed or not running at all.

“Because of the storm.”

George broke his rule about new-fangled technology and even tried those rideshare apps. The idea of getting into a random local serial killer’s personal car made his skin crawl, but he was running out of options. But of course, the lazy idiots gave him the same runaround as the taxis.

“Because of the–”

“–Shut up!”

By five AM, after his fifth coffee, he made an executive decision. If he was going to catch his flight he needed to get moving, and if he couldn’t count on other people – and really, when could you? – he’d do it himself. He’d drive himself to the airport and eat the exorbitant airport parking fee.

And later that evening, he’d eat fresh coconut on the beach. And he’d meet sexy people who liked adventures and life and fun and who didn’t waste their lives talking about the weather, “Because of the storm.”

Just like Nathalie and Craig from last year, those two wild honeymooners he’d kept in touch with, and made plans to meet up again with this year. Or Ben and Wallace and Megan and that other one – the British scuba aficionados that convinced George to dive. Worth it! And of course Dolores – this was the year he’d tell her how he felt.

You didn’t get that at home. At home, everyone just complained the stores put up the Christmas decorations earlier each year, and then having complained, did nothing about it.

Pathetic.

No! thought George. Not pathetic. In keeping with the season, Bah humbug!

When he opened his door, snow spilled into his house. He could have sworn he saw his lawn the day before, but now everything was covered in smooth dunes of knee-high trash weather. With a grumble, George shoveled towards his driveway, only to find his Ford Focus had turned into an even bigger mound of snow.

He ground his teeth and got to work. It took till seven AM to unearth both his car and enough of the driveway to get to the street. That the street was covered in featureless drifts taller than his car’s wheels was its own issue, and one he’d been purposely ignoring. But he could only kick that can so far down the road, and he just hoped his Focus could plow through the mess. After all, that’s what you did with snow, right? You plowed it.

Unless you were the city, of course. Then you left your constituents holding the bag.

But the streets didn’t end up being a problem, because it turned out George could always count on his quality-built, expertly engineered car, to let him down.

The damn thing wouldn’t start. The battery, dead. Frozen, probably, or whatever batteries did when you were counting on them. He couldn’t get so much as a fart out of his starter. Couldn’t even get the annoying seatbelt dinging to nag him.

Another waste of time. Like he never took a vacation at all, and was still at work. With a hand-shaking, tooth-rattling, face-reddening shriek, he decided on the next best mode of transport: buses.

What was the point of having a car if you still had to bus? Well, he supposed he could chat to the other passengers and brag about how he spent a load of money only to end up with a lazy, shiftless paperweight with wheels, that did nothing but sit around his house, taking up space. Could be an ice breaker for people with kids.

But no, who was he kidding? The bus people were sad drab lumps themselves, and if you could stir a conversation out of them it would probably be about snow.

Not like the buses in Mexico. Not like six years ago, when he signed up for a day trip to Chichén Itzá and met that hilarious elderly Turkish couple. Career historians full of amazing tales, they also loved hearing all about George’s winter exploits. And never once did they chat about weather.

But the first bus stop was deserted, and snowed in. George watched a trio of municipal snow plows rumble down the street – not his street, but at least something was getting plowed – scraping the road and depositing a jagged new winrow on the bike lane. That, at least, gave him a smile.

By the time the bus was fifteen minutes late – still early in bus-time – George checked the bus app on his phone and learned the entire bus service was delayed across the city. Naturally. Why pay taxes to subsidize something and actually expect it to work, right? At least if you assume it will fail, it can’t disappoint you.

Things would be different if he was in power, that much he knew. For one, he’d abolish the travesty of public transit. He’d trust in the wheels of commerce and a private service would unerringly fix the whole situation–

“Oh,” George said, recalling the taxi debacle. “Right.”

He had a choice. Sit here and wait interminably, or do something about it himself. Never one to wait for others to fix his problems, George decided to walk – well, wade through the snow – to the next stop. He grinned, thinking he’d race the bus, seeing how far he could get before it finally caught up to him.

Fixing things himself had always worked out. One, it was how he dodged this horrible holiday season every year. Two, it was how he first met Dolores, twenty years ago.

As a bright-eyed young tourist, he signed up for pretty much whatever stupid trip the reps put in front of him – within his meagre price range. That first year he had stayed in a half-star dive in Cancún, and the only thing he could afford was a shopping trip to Playa del Carmen, which didn’t make much sense since he hadn’t come to shop, and if he had, there were stores in Cancún. But he didn’t want to sit around all week.

There was supposed to be an included lunch, but the guy running the tour got the runs and had to duck out for a while, and when he said “I’ll be right back, don’t go anywhere,” George accepted the challenge and went exploring.

A dingy little hole in the wall first caught his eye, where some gruff customers sat outside drinking tequila by glass instead of by shot. Then it caught his ear, when he heard the strum of an unplugged guitar from within, and then the most alluring voice he’d ever heard. And then, it caught him by the heart, when he went inside and saw Dolores on stage.

Time did a weird thing in that bar. He entered in the morning but a minute later it was dark out, and somehow Dolores’ entire set was over. But he caught it all, and she caught him catching it – maybe it was hard to miss the one guy in the bar who stood up to clap. She sat down with him and they chatted and laughed long into the night. She told him she did a lot of bar gigs, but she was hoping to be a famous singer one day. He told her he hoped so too.

She gave him her schedule and he went to every show she played. He even continued going when he learned about Jorge, her boyfriend. What an idiotic name for an idiotic face, George thought, but he stuck around with them anyway, because any time close to Dolores was better than away.

And he found her again a year later – with Paulo, this time – and again another year later – with Antonio – and every year after that. When she left the Cancún circuit and went up and down the Riviera, he moved base camp. When he learned she married Francisco, he grit his teeth and congratulated her. When she divorced him, he congratulated himself. And when she later married Javier, George consoled himself knowing it was temporary. Knowing that next year, or the year after that, was his.

And all through those years they remained close. Her star grew, though it never quite rose – that would certainly happen next year too, or the year after – and tracking her down for a reunion always felt like coming home. Indeed, Dolores and Javier had invited him to their home a number of times, and their little six-year old Alejandra even remembered him, and called him Tío Georgie.

George smiled. The memories, and the anticipation of seeing Dolores again – of maybe this year being his year – kept him going past bus stop fifteen.

At stop sixteen, he finally did see a bus, though it was going the opposite direction. Its brakes groaned as it glided along the icy road, gradually turning one-eighty, and with the delicate grace of a ballerina it gently fishtailed into a snowbank, sending up a white puff of applause, before snuggling down to sleep.

Its hazards turned on, and its destination changed to “Not in service.”

“Because of the storm,” George muttered.

With no other buses in sight – no traffic at all – he resigned himself to walking the rest of the way to the airport. By four PM he arrived at the terminal, nearly-but-not-quite-dead tired. His arms would have hurt after dragging his luggage across town, if he could still feel them.

He missed his flight. He knew that. Maybe he could get a refund, but that was secondary. More important, he’d have to find another flight out to Mexico, and probably pay an excruciating fee for it.

Anything to get out of this horrid city, this horrid season. Anything to get back to where he belonged, to Dolores.

There were no lines at the check-in desks, so that was a small blessing. Actually, there weren’t really any people at all, save for a single security guy at the doors, a mop guy near the bathrooms, and a lone check-in lady at the lone check-in desk that showed any signs of life. And they all looked like people who picked the wrong day to go to work.

“Hi!” said George, dragging his baggage. The woman startled, as though she’d never seen a customer before. “I need a flight to Mexico. Riviera Maya. ASAP.”

She blinked. “You want… a flight to Mexico?”

“Yes!”

Now?

“Yes!”

She looked off into the distance, and George followed her gaze, through the giant terminal windows, where the world was obscured by drifting flurries and twisting winds.

“Sir,” she said, “I appreciate wanting to be in Mexico right now – believe me, I do – but every single plane is grounded.”

“What?”

She directed his attention to a screen showing all the flights, and every single one of them had a red “Cancelled / Annulé” status. Even his eight AM flight was on there, red and dead.

“Because of the storm,” she said.

“Oh,” he said. “Right.

“Sir? Was there anything else I could do for you? Because I’m about to finish my shift.”

“No, thanks. That’s all.”

He watched her log off, leave the desk, and head to the small food court. Maybe she fiddled around with her phone, maybe she realized she couldn’t get a ride home because the roads were crap and she was stuck here – George didn’t know. But he did see her bury her face in her hands, which was how he felt.

A winter without Dolores. And it was meant to be his year! The year he finally told her how he felt, and she’d fall into his arms, and their passion would be wild and hot and…

Only, he realized he didn’t exactly feel it. Every one of the past twenty years felt like the year, except they never were. And if he was honest, he liked Javier too, and little Alejandra was very much a niece to him. They made a good family. A great family.

Much as Dolores meant to him, he didn’t want to break that beautiful family apart. And if he was really honest – that cold, brutal kind – he doubted he could. Dolores had always been a friend, a great friend, and never more than that.

George sighed. So, his vacation was ruined. He tromped halfway across the city and wore out his knees for nothing, and worse, was now stuck in a bland grey town during a bland grey season. And even worse, he was actually stuck in a bland grey airport terminal, because it was really starting to come down outside and there was no way in hell he was going to march home again. Stuck, just like the poor, miserable check-in lady, with her head on a cafeteria table.

And to top it off, George’s stomach rumbled.

Because of the storm.

So what was he going to do about it all? Stand around, enjoying some well-deserved ruing, waiting until the blizzard died down and they were dug out?

Bah, thought George, humbug to that.

He went to the one fast food place that was open, ordered a couple of sandwiches and coffees – and left a ten as a tip – and then made his way to the table the check-in lady was moping on.

“You look like you could use a coffee,” he said.

And she smiled up at him.

December 05, 2023 22:36

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33 comments

Michelle Oliver
12:40 Dec 06, 2023

Love it. I love the determination that George has to get out of there. So much so that he single-handedly takes on the brutal weather conditions. The growth at the end is great, letting go of a dream and embracing now. I hope George and the check-in lady have the start of a beautiful friendship.

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Michał Przywara
21:47 Dec 06, 2023

Thanks, Michelle! I think sometimes we hold onto dreams long after we've stopped believing in them. Maybe it would just feel weird without them, so we cling, or we fear some vague notion of failure. I hope it works out for them too. Just a coffee to ride out a storm, with no expectations dragged around like baggage. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Mary Bendickson
02:24 Dec 06, 2023

Like you lived it. Prompt really took off even if the planes and buses and taxis and cars didn't because of the storm.

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Michał Przywara
21:49 Dec 06, 2023

Some of it was definitely lived :) I'm not a regular visitor to the Mayan Riviera, but I am very familiar with blizzards, and shoveling, and dead batteries - and once I did indeed witness a poor bus lose all traction and do the world's slowest 180 on an otherwise deserted street. And I do like moaning about snow - that's a free gift we all get to enjoy up here :) Thanks for reading, Mary!

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Alexis Araneta
16:05 Dec 20, 2023

What an adventure ! I love George's steely determination...and his growth at the end. Hey, maybe, the check-in lady is single. Hahahaha !

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Michał Przywara
21:56 Dec 21, 2023

Yeah, it could be the start of something great :) Thanks for reading, Stella - I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Helen A Howard
18:12 Dec 14, 2023

I like the way you build up the character of George. On the one hand, he seems a determined character , even if his metaphorical house seems to be built on sand, but on the other, he seems to live in a fantasy world. This time next year, etc. Always looking to a future that never quite arrives. It may be that fantasy that keeps him ploughing through life, but so many people live life like that. He is easy to relate to. Unexpectedly, by the end of the story, there’s a smidgin of hope that this time he might just have someone he’d stand a chan...

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Michał Przywara
21:38 Dec 14, 2023

Thanks, Helen! That's wonderful feedback, particularly that “everyday heroics” idea. I'm sure people everywhere, every day, are going through private struggles and conflicts, invisible to the rest of us, but potentially life-defining for the individual. George was fun to write, but I think he needed to change, finally, and so the more hopeful ending felt like a good fit. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Rachel Kroninger
00:35 Dec 14, 2023

The reoccurring phrase/theme “because of the snow” made me smirk every time. Great description, sentence variation, and word usage. I also loved the ending; I took the check-in lady as a symbol of hope for a new dream. It’s crazy how a couple words can stand for so much. Thanks for the read :)!

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Michał Przywara
21:43 Dec 14, 2023

Thanks, Rachel! Yeah, a new dream and a new hope, for sure. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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AnneMarie Miles
14:32 Dec 12, 2023

Poor George. I would be devastated if a storm stifled my chance at a tropical escape and my Dolores. And I gotta say, he really handles all the setbacks rather calmly. Perhaps, that composure is what fuels his unrelenting determination, all those attempts: cabs, personal car (despite those god awful airport parking expenses), bus, feet.... I mean, he *really* tries, his persistence is unyielding despite the storm. And all of those efforts really builds up the strength of his desire and the tension around his continued failures. It helps us u...

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Michał Przywara
21:43 Dec 13, 2023

Ha! I swear I have nothing against cabs :) Living in a very wintry city (I say that, but right now it's unusually mild) I've seen people demonstrate such unrelenting determination, often past the point of sense. I don't recall having a single snow day, where things just shut down, ever. Even when highways were closed due to whiteouts and the rest of the province behaved more reasonably, we were collectively stubborn. I've seen more than one person braving their bike during a blizzard, when the concept of “bike lane” has been washed away by...

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AnneMarie Miles
18:15 Dec 15, 2023

I don't know, friend, I think your subconscious has something against rideshares. Biking through a blizzard... my mouth is truly hanging open. You and I are two very different species, I reckon. Any temperature with a negative sign in front of it means I am hunkering down for a LONG time. I am true to the California stereotype: a little bit of rain scares me. Lol. I'd love to read another one of George's adventures in the future. You could place that foolish stubbornness in any situation and it would be entertaining. I'm looking forward...

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Michał Przywara
21:40 Dec 15, 2023

Let me tell ya, that dang subconscious gets into everything, like sand :) I'll keep George in mind for future work. I don't have anything for him right now, but stubbornness is a gift that keeps giving stories.

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Livana Teagan
23:31 Dec 09, 2023

“At least if you assume it will fail, it can’t disappoint you” — my life’s motto. Hi Michal. I like George. I am George. I think we all are sometimes. Trying to escape uncomfortable things. Like truth or snow or minor inconveniences. Even to the extent of doing ridiculous things to delude ourselves. Humans are so good at that. It’s my favorite game really. I do this thing, not unlike George, which is kind of funny that I’m catching this story this week in an Idiosyncratic kind of way, where I make really unrealistic plans for my future...

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Michał Przywara
21:32 Dec 10, 2023

Yeah, your comments absolutely make sense. I get where you're coming from, and I don't think that's unique to Americans. We definitely get that in Canada, and I've heard others from around the world have similar sentiments. And certainly, I've had, and still sometimes have, similar experiences. It's like there's this overwhelming pressure to win (but at what? this is never really specified, because how do you win living?) and anything we're doing that doesn't further it, is losing. And it's implied you don't want to be a loser - but again,...

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Suma Jayachandar
18:13 Dec 09, 2023

A bit bloody late to catch up on your work, Michal- much like George Salter reaching the airport- at last. But Unlike what happens to George- I can always count on ending up reading an engaging, witty and thoughtful piece whenever I open your page, be it once in weeks or months 🤣 Best line- 'Why pay taxes to subsidize something and actually expect it to work, right?' A close second-'The idea of getting into a random local serial killer’s personal car made his skin crawl, but he was running out of options.'- yeah, what all one can do to hold ...

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Michał Przywara
16:06 Dec 10, 2023

Thanks, Suma! Looking forward to 100 - or 104, to mark two years. Not sure what comes after :) Glad you enjoyed this piece! George was a fun character to write - seems like a cynical optimist, or something like that - and the story gave me an opportunity to dig through some winter memories. Though this year, it's been bizarrely mild so for. Anyway, I appreciate hearing from you - thanks for dropping by!

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Suma Jayachandar
07:26 Dec 11, 2023

Wow! Such dedication is sure to bear fruits, Michal. An anthology? a novel? a podcast? Whatever you plan in future, best of luck and keep us updated:)

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Marty B
23:21 Dec 08, 2023

Poor George! I see the storm as a physical manifestation (a big, cold and powerful one) of the reality that he will never actually tell Dolores how feels, she is an unattainable myth. And by focusing on Dolores, he is missing what is right in front of him. The world conspired to show him the correct path, by eliminating every other possible way out! A beautiful check-in lady ! I loved the ballerina bus! '....gradually turning one-eighty, and with the delicate grace of a ballerina it gently fishtailed into a snowbank, sending up a whi...

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Michał Przywara
16:33 Dec 09, 2023

Yeah, that's a great way of looking at it! Sometimes reality just becomes unignorable, and we realize we don't even want to fight it anymore. I saw a bus do such a thing once, when the roads were particularly slippery. It wasn't quite 180, and thankfully nothing/nobody was in the way, but a bad day for driving for sure. Glad you enjoyed it, Marty!

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E. B. Bullet
22:40 Dec 08, 2023

Wow George kind of sucks LMAO though I'm happy for his turnaround at the end. It only took a giant blizzard to convince him that Dolores was in fact, a woman with autonomy and her own life, and not just a prize for him. Whaddaya know! Novel concept, really. That said, his character was very entertaining. Gotta love an asshole, but one with a heart of gold 🪙 Kinda sorta Also the funny of George disliking the name Jorge is not lost on me. Very fun character moment LOL Impeccable characterization Mr. Przywara! Always look forward to your st...

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Michał Przywara
02:51 Dec 10, 2023

Thanks, E. B.! Yeah, George certainly had some unhealthy attitudes. Thankfully he was able to reflect and revise. I think sometimes we just cling to a dream because we don't know what else to cling to. I appreciate your feedback!

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Laurel Hanson
19:00 Dec 08, 2023

Your characters are always so engaging. I get so caught up in his tribulations, that at first I don't notice all the little ironic zingers like the Turkish couple who "loved hearing all about George’s winter exploits. And never once did they chat about weather" or, "Jorge, her boyfriend. What an idiotic name," or "He’d trust in the wheels of commerce and a private service would unerringly fix the whole situation–" The mounting frustrations build a lot of tension and as we uncover why he is so determined to take the trip, the absurdity of hi...

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Michał Przywara
23:42 Dec 09, 2023

I did once witness a bus slide almost like that. Thankfully that was the extent of it - a slow slide, no collisions, no hurt people. There was a mesmerizing inevitability to it. "clinging to their dreams beyond reason" - I think that's right on. There's such pressure to make and follow dreams, especially when you're younger, that we tie our identities to them. But that seems silly, especially if we grow and learn, and realize that not everything is about just us. Always happy to hear from you, Laurel - thanks for leaving your thoughts!

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Aeris Walker
04:06 Dec 08, 2023

Love the snark that comes through in this one. Getting to the airport on time is already stressful enough. Add bad weather, dead batteries, and unreliable public transit? I would have given up. I like how we learn about George through the habits he pursues, even when it's clearly a dead end for his love life. Smooth writing and well-rounded plot. Well done. :) Favorite lines: "But the streets didn’t end up being a problem, because it turned out George could always count on his quality-built, expertly engineered car, to let him down." "So w...

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Michał Przywara
21:55 Dec 08, 2023

Thanks, Aeris! Snark is a powerful fuel source, isn't it? It can get you where you're going despite the setbacks :) Giving up is probably the sensible thing, but there's fun to be had with characters that defy sense - and I guess by the end, he ultimately does let go. We get weather like this up here, and judging by the large number of fender benders, lots of people might be in the same boat. Glad you enjoyed it :)

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Jack Kimball
01:09 Dec 08, 2023

Excellent work Michal, as always. You can turn out a tale like singing sunshine, and make it look easy as a porch swing. The end of course is great. “He went to the one fast food place that was open, ordered a couple of sandwiches and coffees – and left a ten as a tip – and then made his way to the table the check-in lady was moping on. “You look like you could use a coffee,” he said. Makes me believe in humanity! You’re so skilled, though I can’t help thinking you might have the kind of skill to dig deeper. Just me I suppose, but not m...

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Michał Przywara
21:57 Dec 08, 2023

Thanks, Jack - that comment means a lot. Particularly the digging deeper part, those are some heavy subjects you highlighted. Empathy is an important theme to me, and I think it's what allows us to write believable characters who are very different from us. And I think, the mere act of reading someone else's words is enough to train empathy, even subconsciously. After all, we are literally “seeing the world from someone else's perspective” when we read. “Makes me believe in humanity” - yeah, there was room here for George to go Grinch, but...

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Karen Corr
11:49 Dec 07, 2023

What begins as a blizzard, turns into a storm of desperation as delusions meet reality. The result is a fantastic feel good ending. I hope George and the check-in lady hit it off and next year travel to Mexico together, where someone will say, “Because of the storm,” during the introduction. Thanks Michal! 😊

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Michał Przywara
22:04 Dec 07, 2023

Ha, that would be a great follow up :) And a hated phrase becomes a “how did you meet?” instead. Glad you enjoyed it, Karen!

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Calm Shark
02:57 Dec 06, 2023

Hi Michal, it's been a long time since I've read your stories. This story had the same prose you've always had with your previous stories, which is good. Loved how George began to not dwell upon his past failures but instead move forward. I found it funny how George comments how idiotic the name Jorge is when Jorge translated from Spanish to English is George😂 Anyways, I hope you have a good night or day!

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Michał Przywara
21:48 Dec 06, 2023

Thanks, Shark! I'm glad you picked up on the George/Jorge thing - I think he was blinded by envy :) Though he does eventually learn to move on, yeah - first pushing through the snow, then from a dream that no longer served him. I appreciate the feedback! I hope you have a great week too :)

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