Note: Part twooooo!!! Please comment any feedback you have and check my comment for a longer note!
Lionel
βAre you coming tonight?β Bea asked, tugging on my sleeve.Β
βSorry Bea, not tonight. I need to get some sleep, before tomorrow. Big things are happening in a few days.βΒ
Bea pouted and crossed her arms, βyouβre a terrible brother.β She spat.Β
βIβll work on it.βΒ
Bea scrunched her face to try and hide her smile.
I swallowed a laugh and shook my head, βyou have fun at dessert, ok? You better come back and tell me all about the new treats you have.βΒ
Bea grinned and nodded, running out of my room.Β
Once Bea had disappeared out the door I collapsed into a nearby chair by the fire. The weight of the day piled onto my shoulders, keeping me grounded and out of the clouds. Staying grounded wasn't the worst thing though, kept me focused, getting everything done faster.Β
βYour highness, a letter has arrived for you.βΒ
I nodded and the maid hurried forwards with the note. I knew immediately the note was from Eve considering it was scribbled onto the back of a napkin.Β
πΈ ππππ π’ππβππ ππππππππ’ πππππ, πππ ππ πππ π πππ ππππ ππ ππππ? π½ππ ππππ πππ ππππ ππππ ππππ ππ πππ ππ π’ππ, πππ ππβπ π πππ πππππππ πππππ ππππππππ ππππππ πππππ πππ . πΈ ππππ π’ππ πππ ππππππ π πππ πππππππ ππππ, πππ πΈ ππππππ’ ππππ ππ ππππ ππ π’ππ. πΈπβπ ππ ππ π’ππβππ πππ ππ ππ ππππππ, πΈ πππ ππ, πππ ππππ πππππππ ππ π’ππ πππ'π, ππππ ππ πΈ πππ ππ ππ πππππ πππππ’. πΈπ π’ππ ππ ππππ πΈβπ ππππππ ππππ πππππ πππ , ππ πππππ’ ππππππ ππβπ ππππππππππ’ ππππ.Β -π΄ππ
I smiled at Eveβs note, crumbs from chocolate cake creased into the napkin. Thatβs Eve for you.
Β Sighing I read over the note again. She made it seem important and it wasn't like I had anything else going on, so why not.Β
I tossed my suit jacket into the corner and hurried out the door, hoping that if I was fast Eve would still have a little cake left.Β
Eve mustβve heard me coming. I didn't even get to knock before the door flew open and she pulled me inside. Eve twirled in her dinner gown, the blue on her dress sparkling like Cinderellaβs dress. She laughed before falling onto the floor out of dizziness.
I raised a brow, picking at one of the cookies on the dessert tray.
βYou seem giddy tonight?β
Eve beamed, βI suppose you could say so,β She said before she burst out laughing.Β
βDid something happen? Iβm lost.β
That made Eve laugh harder and I really couldn't understand what was so funny.
βAre you gonna tell me?β
She caught her breath, sitting up and quickly.Β
βMy sisterβs having her baby soon!βΒ
βThatβs great Eve!βΒ
βYou don't get it though,β She started, her face falling slightly. βScaip Cla babies are very rare these days. Indi has been super nervous the last few weeks because this is usually the stage the baby doesn't survive through. This is the stage when all of the women get sick and since we don't have medicine to help them they just have to push through and hope their babies will do the same.β
I stopped, watching as her eyes fell to the ground.Β
βThereβs more, isn't there?βΒ
Eve nodded, refusing to look up. Her giddiness was completely faded as she walked over to her bed and sat on the end, tugging a blanket over her broad shoulders.Β
βMy mother wants me home while Indi is in labor, plus some time after. She worries she won't be able to handle everything. Between handling my father's duties while heβs out of town, doubling as queen, me being here and Indi having the baby she doesn't think sheβll be able to do it alone.βΒ
A sigh escaped me and Eve glanced up worriedly.Β
βIs that a no?βΒ
βEve, I-β
βI know we had the big plan and everything, and I still want to go through with it, but since you still have a few more weeks before you have to make your decision I thought maybe I could leave. Just for a few days and help my family at home. If not than you can drop me and find someone you will actually spark with. Iβll find a different solution. My main priority right now is my family, and Indiβs baby.βΒ
βEve slow down, I can barely understand what youβre saying.βΒ
Eve bit her lip and nodded for me to continue.Β
βOn normal circumstances I wouldn't hesitate to let you go home, especially with whatβs going on in your family.β
βBut?β
βBut, my father has placed in some recentβ¦time restraints that makes my decision much more complicated.βΒ
βWhat are the time restraints?β She asked, playing with a loose string on her blanket.Β
βI have to announce my decision for queen in two days.βΒ
Eveβs eyes grew wide as she stammered out a response.Β
βLionel wha- why? Why in two days? Whatβs the rush?βΒ
βIβm not sure. I assume it has something to do with the Valles-Esten war.β
βWhat does that have to do with your search for queen?βΒ
βThe sooner I find a queen the sooner my father can step down and a new leader can step up, giving the people of Esten hope.βΒ
βAnd your father actually wants to step down?β
βDefinitely. Heβs wanted to step down for years, since a few months after my mother passed away. And now that Iβm old enough, the sooner the better, in his mind.βΒ
Eve stared forwards, not saying a word.Β
I moved away from the wall and plopped down into the arm chair in the corner.Β
βIβm really sorry to put you in this position Eve. Youβve got a few options but none of them are ideal.βΒ
βSo I can either go home and help my family and leave you to find a different queen or stay here to worry about my family?βΒ
I bit my lower lip, βthere is one other option I can think of.βΒ
Eve cocked her head, sitting up straighter.Β Β
I exhaled shakily, resting my head on my hand.Β
βWe could also continue with our plan and I could propose to you tomorrow.βΒ
Eve
I gaped, shaking my head.Β
βYou can't actually be suggesting that?β
Lionel looked away, shrugging.Β
I buried my head in my hands.
βThis is going way too fast, and weβve basically planned nothing. What if the plan doesn't work? What if I can't get you troops? How can you be considering this? Haven't you sparked with anyone? You don't even love me!βΒ
I didn't realize I had shouted those last words until after Lionel winced and stood up.Β
βEve I think I should go.βΒ
βIβm sorry Lionel, I didn't mean to yell. This just- itβs not going according to plan.β
Lionel stopped, and turned back to me, a spark of curiosity in his eyes. He sat back in the arm chair and leaned forwards.Β Β
βWhat was your plan Eve?βΒ
βMy father wanted me to pretend. To win your heart and then reveal the truth and leave you after we had gotten what we needed for Scaip Cla to survive.β
βThat was your father's plan. What was your plan, Eve?βΒ
I sighed, pulling my hair over one shoulder.Β
βI was hoping that if I was upfront during our first meeting you would agree and we could plan a fair trade. We would have weeks to figure all the small details out. How we would provide for the other persons country, how we would play a happy married couple.β I paused and met Lionelβs eyes.Β Β
βIt surprised me when you agreed, but I just assumed you had to be super desperate or really anxious for the war to be over. Or maybe both. And then when it was time I would go home for Indiβs baby's birth and help my mother and then be back to sort out everything else here.β
A small laugh slipped out from Lionelβs tightly pursed lips.
βThis is definitely not according to your plan.βΒ
I shook my head, and Lionel stood up.Β
βI really am sorry to put you in this position.β He said again.Β
I sighed, frustrated that he was sorry. I wanted to have a reason to scream at Lionel and blame him. If I could blame Lionel, I could convince myself that this situation isn't completely because of me.Β None of what I wanted made sense anymore.
βIs there any way you could get an extension from your father? Do something else for him in return?βΒ
βAny ideas?β he asked and I could hear the sliver of hope creeping out in his smooth voice.Β
βGive me the night and Iβll try to come up with something. Come back here before breakfast and you can escort me there after Iβve briefed you on the potential plan.βΒ
Lionel nodded, making his way towards the door. I fell back onto my bed, almost fully asleep before he even shut the door.Β
βDon't stay up too late,β he added walking out, his shoes clicking down the hallway.Β Β
I forced my eyes to stay open, getting up and taking my chair back to my desk before plopping down and pulling out a scrap piece of paper.Β
βOk, Eve, all you need to focus.βΒ
I told myself it was like how I used to strategize with father and my cousin, Noam. Noam would come over on weekends and we would play Savior of Nations. Noam would go to one side of the grounds and plan his strategies with my uncle while I would do the same with father.Β
βYou must think and consider every detail Eve. Think through all of your options and take small steps. Small steps will lead you to greatness. If you start with a leap there are chances you will fall. When youβre all the way back here thereβs no way to see whatβs that far ahead of you. Stick to small steps, to ensure youβre continuing on the right path.βΒ
βStay on the right path Eve,β I repeated. βConsider every detail and think through your options.β
I scribbled down different ideas, making multiple graphs as I tried to think up the perfect plan and by dawn coming up with any plan seemed impossible.Β
After a number of hours of writing, crumpling paper, and nodding off I thought I had finally come up with something.Β
βOh my god! That could actually work!β
I looked over my notes again, double checking.Β
βThis is the best we can do,β I told myself, trying to reassure the anxiety inside of me. This felt like my only chance to have everything work out. To stay on the right path with my plan.Β
I dragged myself to my bed hoping I could get a few hours of sleep before Lionel showed up. The sun barely peaked through the deep blue curtains, shielding me from the new day.Β
βEve you have a visitor,β I heard someone say. I rubbed my eyes and recognized that the voice belonged to Liza, one of my maids.Β Β
βYou might want to get ready quickly for this visitor,β She urged a grin lighting up her eyes.Β
I shot up and cursed as I realized who the visitor was.Β
I flew out of bed, realizing I had slept in my gown and I could see the disapproval in Lizaβs eyes. She passed me a new dress, simpler and pastel colored for breakfast. I slipped in it as fast as I could before motioning for Liza to open the door.Β
Lionel nodded at Liza before Liza glanced at me and slipped out the door. I went to the bathroom to fix my hair and makeup and watched Lionel in the mirror that faced out of the bathroom.Β Β
βYouβre welcome to sit down,β I called out to Lionel who was awkwardly standing in the middle of my room.Β
He sunk into the arm chair by the small fireplace in my room. That was my sanction, my safe place. Lionel seemed to feel the same thing.Β
I pinned up my hair as best I could, spraying down the runaway strands.Β
βDid you figure anything out?β He asked as I moved to my make up, picking out a light neutral.Β
βYeah, I stayed up all night brainstorming and I think I actually came up with something decent.βΒ
I set down my palette and grabbed my notebook off my desk, passing it to him.Β Β
Lionel crossed his legs, peering at my scribbled notes.Β
βYou really think this will work?β He asked, glancing up from the notebook. I ran back to the bathroom, knowing I didn't have long before breakfast started and quickly put on a few layers of mascara.Β
βYes. And if it doesn't than we will have to figure that out when we get there. Small steps lead to success.βΒ
Lionel set the notebook down, βOk, fine. I will talk to my father as soon as I can and get it all sorted out.βΒ
I smiled, βwonderful.β
As we arrived at breakfast and Lionel started towards his end of the table I grabbed his arm and pulled him closer.Β
βThank you for all of this,β I whispered.Β
Lionel flashed a smile.Β
βMy pleasure.βΒ
Lionel
Talking to father about these sorts of things always got me super worked up. I had to do this for Eve and for myself. Having more time was going to be a giant relief. All I had to do was talk with father.Β
The guards bowed as I walked through the open door to father's office.Β
βAn unexpected visit?β Father immediately questioned.Β
I felt for the paper in my pocket before nodding. Eve had given me her notes this morning before I left.Β
βI fear that if I rush my decision for my queen I will make the wrong decision and Esten will suffer.βΒ
βAre you suggesting that you don't trust my judgment? I fully believe you will make the right choice tomorrow.βΒ
βThe thing is father, I have yet to spark with any of the women here. Therefore, I think it would be better to give me a little more time. Maybe two weeks?β
βLionel we need something to distract the public and give them hope. If they see that you have a queen and I will be stepping down soon they will have hope for this everlasting war to be over soon.β
βBut the public will not trust some random woman one of the guards picked up off the streets. I propose we do a meet and greet. Let the public into the castle and have them interact with all of the princesses. Then we take a poll and see who the publics favorite is. That way my queen will make the public happy and hopeful.β
Father raised a dark brow and thought for a long time.Β
βIf you can organize this βmeet and greetβ by tomorrow and have the event happen the day after then I will allow it and give you an extension.βΒ
I could tell from fathers sigh that my smile was too big for the occasion. I stood up straighter and smoothed my jacket.Β
βI will send you all of the details by tomorrow night and the meet and greet will happen the day after.βΒ
βDo not disappoint me son.βΒ
I nodded, hurrying out.Β
I basically skipped to Eveβs room, knocking over and over until I heard her grumble something to one of her maids.Β
The maid from yesterday, Liza, opened the door and dipped into a deep curtsy, her red braids falling over her shoulders.Β
I smiled back and walked through as Liza scurried away.Β
βYou seem happier than I was last night,β Eve said, looking up from her book.Β
βYou might want to put that down, you might throw it when you hear my news if you don't.βΒ
Eve furrowed her brows, closing her book.
βIs your news good or bad?β
βDefinitely good,β I said, trying to slow my words.Β
βAnd the news is?β She pressed.Β
I sat back into the arm chair by the fire, best place in Eveβs room by far.Β
βMy father approved your meet and greet idea!β
Eve shot up from her bed and gasped.Β
βNo way! Oh my god, no way!βΒ
She repeated her disbelief into those words for quite a few minutes before meeting my eyes.Β
βThank you,β she said.Β
I smiled, glad I could do something helpful for once.Β
βBut since it was your idea you have to help me organize it.β
βOk. What do we do first?βΒ
I laughed at her excitement, βThatβs where my father's catch comes into play. We have to have it organized by tonight and it must happen tomorrow. Then weβll poll to see who the public's favorite is and if all goes well, Father will give me a two week extension.βΒ
βSo I can go home the day after tomorrow?βΒ
βYes, but you must be back by Sunday. Four days is all I can give you, though I still need to discuss your departure with my father.βΒ
βI can't thank you enough Lionel.βΒ
βWeβre a team now, we have to work together.β
Eveβs smile grew, βSo, where do we start?βΒ
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I HAVE BEEN DOWNVOTED!!!!!!! I HAD ABOUT 1100+ POINTS, AND NOW I AM LEFT AT 660+.... PLEASE HELP ME, MY REEDSY FRIENDS STOP DOWNVOTING NOW!!!!!
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awww I'm so sorry! I know how it feels to be downvoted and I'll do what I can, but remember your points dont define how good your writing is
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Yeah, thanks a lot! It just kinda makes me mad, that some people have been on the leaderboard for months and they have remained on their places and they are not letting new ones to join them....
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yeah, I totally understand that
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Yup!
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hiii
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How are you
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im good!! how are you?
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Good But falling into an endless cycle of Hamilton obsession.
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been there- it's quite fun XD
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This was a great addition to the first part! Yet another cliffhanger, wondering what Eve and Lionel are going to do. There were a few typos I caught here and there, but other than that, this story was awesome! the fourth Sanderson sister
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thanks so much!! <3
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you're welcome! <33
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HELLLOOOO HRU WHERE YA BEEN HELLO
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HEYYYY GOOD WBUUUU IVE BEEN A LIL BUSYYYY WHERE HAVE YOU BEENNNNNN
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IVE BEEN GRATE π§π§π§ ;D how iz summer goinggg
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YAY THAT'S GRATE it's going good! I go back to school in like less than two weeks which I am NOT excited for, but we go to the beach tmrw for a week and it's the last thing in the summer and I'm exciteddd!! hbu? Done anything fun?!
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oooooooooooooooooooooooooo definitely a surprise to see this mini series make a return! You're soooooooooooooooooooooooo close to 20 stories! that's a great mile-marker!!! I love the bits and pieces of emotion and details interspersed through this, like the characters are so developed that I can guess what they're going to say next. The details are lacking a bit, but that's because the pace is faster (not always a bad thing). I'll be looking forward to the future parts (cause that cliffhanger is just no good XD)! I noticed some very small...
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hehe yeah, I have a bit of a track record with struggling to continue series/cliff hangers but this one felt like there was more to say and yessss im so excited!!! I've been a bit slower to hit 20 than other ppl but it's fineeeee;) yeah, descriptions arent my strong suit but I'm hoping now that I've used the first two parts to lay down the ground work I can take a bit of a slower pace and I'll keep in mind to add more details:) omg thank you, you're a life saverrrrrr fixing em now thank youuuuu<333
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I agree with that lol Makes sense Ofc, anything to help a friend of mine improve their writing ;) <333
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Hey again! Please do check some of my latest stories/poems and comment on them. I have a blog too, if you can check that out! Hoping to read the Reedsycast soon!
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Will do! Oh cool, I'll check that out as well! Thanks, working on it! Love your character you sent in!
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So, will it be a MC?
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not sure yet! gonna wait until I close the form to figure out characters:) I'll keep you posted tho!!
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Ok
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hi!!
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lol heyy!
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LUNA it's been so longgg
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omg ikkkkk how are you?!
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I'm gooddd. how are youu?!
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im great!
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Noice!! Doing NaNoWriMo this year?
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yep! I actually tried planning this year and i feel kinda prepared and at the same time suuuuper unprepared lol hbu?
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HIIIII
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hi!!!
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How are you?
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im good! hru?
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Great! My dad is sick but I'm not.
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aw sorry to hear about your dad but i hope you stay healthy and he gets better quickly!!
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Happy Birthday (belated) to you, LUNANA!!! Hope you had a nice day?!
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I did, tysmmm!!!
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Hey Luna! Ivy Carter is coming back sometime next week along with Abigail Cross, spread the word!
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omg yayyyy!!
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yeah, I'm excited too :DDD How have you been?
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pretty good, hbu?
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doing alright. do you/did you start school soon?
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I start monday:/ wbu?
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man i wish i had your writing style luna- it works so WELL also i like where this is going there's a perfect setup for both some romance and some dRaMa
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omg ur too kind- tysm sarah!! your writing style is amazing too tho, i need to reed more of ur stories
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Helloooooooo! It's been a while since we've talked! I was wondering if you wanted to join my Reedsycast. ;)
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heyyyyyy!! And omg ofc I want to!!
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Thanks! I needed one more person, so here! https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfGEWmL2BlUwEvt8kKxgV1zp5XgPsc4BKje3T0R3HLz3TeRMQ/viewform
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yayyyy!!!
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Do we put a made up name or our reedsy name for the reedsycast character?
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I'm choosing names, but if you hav a name you want me to use, you can tell me.
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ok, sounds good!
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Hello Luna, I am back, to read this story.... Here are some things that I noticed on the way: --> Once Bea had disappeared out the door I collapsed into a near by chair by the fire. {NEARBY SHOULD BE A SINGLE WORD, ACCORDING TO ME} --> She worries she wont be able to handle everything. Between handling my fathers duties while heβs out of town, doubling as queen, me being here and Indi having the baby she doesn't think sheβll be able to do it alone.β {TWO MISTAKES HERE, FIRSTLY, IT SHOULD BE 'can't' AND NEXT, IT SHOULD BE 'father's'} --> Tha...
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omg ty for those edits! I'll fix them now!! thanks! and yeah, I've had some people say it was slow at the end and got boring and some people say it was rushed so I'm getting the idea that this wasnt my best part two. Which is completely fine. Gives me an easier time improving my writing for part 3. I love that titleeeeee
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You're always welcome!!! You can try out the quizzes I have in my bio. Also, a feedback from your end on my stories will be appreciated! :) I'll appreciate it if you use this title.... ;)
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I'll try and do all of those!! and yep, changed it a few days ago!!:D
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Yeah...waiting. Yup! Checked it. =D
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P.S: I just read, you changed the title ... XD
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EKEKEKEKEKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LUNANANNAANNANANNAANANANANANNAAA HILOOOOO SISSS WHERE HAVE YO BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN?????? *ahem ahem* heyyyy, this was super sweet! the pace was a lilllll fast for me, but maybe thats just me, so yeah it was a lil boring towards the end, (no hate sis i love this) soo, maybe add a lil thrill okie? thats it from meee
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SIANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IDKKKKK IVE BEEN BUSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY yeah, I've gotten that a few times. I'm hoping now that I've laid down the ground work for the series I can just focus on taking a slower pace and keeping things interesting. Thanks for the feedback and thanks for readinggggg<3333
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YESHGHGGGGGHHHYYYHHGGGHHGG ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Okieeee, thanks for a great story!! <3
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I'VE MISSED YOU YOKIE SISSSSSSSSS <33
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YOKIEEE :DD
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Heyyyyy As always this is my long note section sooo yeah 1. *sigh* I dont think I've ever been good at naming things but I especially hate this one. The "Two Sides of One Story" is kind of growing on me but "Extensions"? Seriously Luna? Anyways this is me pleading for title ideas, yet again 2. This story was a bit of a surprise. I usually talk about my stories a lot and give an obnoxious amount of updates, but I was very motivated to write this week and just went with it. Hoping to get pt 3 and pt 4 out in the next week or two!
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DEALing with Marriage....rest, I'll tell more if I can think of after reading this story...
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ooooh ok! ty for reading!
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Yeah...
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