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Science Fiction Asian American Contemporary

There is a habitat for fishing pond fish as entertainment for humans, the location is right at the estuary facing the sea, sometimes when the tide is in the sea, the water enters the pond and when it recedes it is not uncommon for many wild fish to get trapped there such as groupers, crabs—ketang-ketang, baronang fish and various brackish water fish that inhabit the pond which will soon even be displaced by the big tyrannical bosses in the name of humanity who are transformed into gods or goddesses who save people, that's the reason.

In that pond there are resident fish which are deliberately kept by the owner of the pond, namely milkfish which live like famous animals, how come they are not lied to, fed every day--fished-cooked and fried-eaten by humans, their friends and also the food is, plankton and types of shrimp such as small prawns, giant prawns, fire prawns and even white prawns, and even white snapper, which is strange, some fresh water fish are also forced to live there, such as goldfish, tilapia and various other creatures that inhabit the pond, such as water insects and other inhabitants. . If they find out about the owner's affair with their customer, they will go on a hunger strike for sure. As if they didn't know that as long as they lived there from their seniors to them, they were always lied to

Milkfish that live in the city's bay are indeed widely distributed from the Indian Ocean to the Pacific Ocean. How could it not be that in its natural habitat in the interior of other regions of this country, milkfish can reach a maximum size of up to 7 kg or more? Indeed, the two fish are similar in reproduction, but in this region, human efforts in cultivating milkfish are very clever and unique, similar to the lobsters found in floating cages on the peninsula of the waters of this country. This country is indeed a central destination for lobsters to just stop by and reproduce because its waters and sea have a tropical temperature and marine morphology which is ideal for them to reproduce from the southern islands of Sumatra, Java to Papua. It's different from my village, which rarely has barriers or high levels of pollution, so lobsters and milkfish deserve to live to adulthood.

Meanwhile the nine fish whispered softly that it would not become extinct until it reached its adult size. To be honest, they like to be treated like this because it's only natural that fish should be consumed by wild animals or humans, or even because of human activities, they are often exposed to waste that is intentionally or unintentionally disposed of by humans from the river into the sea. Sad indeed.

I do not know what is in the minds of humans as bosses on earth. Are they not aware that their big boss, namely God, is paying attention to their despotism, whether the reason for the land area is not abrasion to sea water, expanding land, accommodating even more residents or a new endeavour, making reclamation is clearly permissible as long as it does not limit the distribution of the colonies of the fish and their habitat from river to sea. Is it true that before reclamation was made, piles, condominiums, high-rise buildings and various ornaments for human splendour were immediately made on the peninsula and bay in this city? The reason for business is clear, pragmatic clearly does not disappear from the human mind, whether it's only here or in other parts of the world.

The creation of irrigation that blocks the migration of various aquatic habitats is clear and visible. It will not be possible for fish to migrate just to reproduce if there are obstacles and obstacles, it will not be possible for them to swim and meet irrigation concrete for them to go ashore first and then walk across the barrier then when they pass an obstacle they return to the water.

Many of the existing endemic fish have started to disappear. Moreover, the endemic fish that live here are very, very variable with changes in water and climate. It must be in virgin condition, its habitat similar to the habitat in Kalimantan, Sulawesi or Papua. You will not bother looking for endemic fish in this country. But it's different in the current area where they live, it's sad to see it

Patchouli fish, catfish, carp and tawes have lost their identity because they have been forced to live there and then with them by those buildings too because the river habitat is no longer safe to visit. They scream where their current habitat is because they were displaced by the magnificent buildings of humans who never thought they would be marginalized, let alone evicted. They are no longer in power.

For more than 4 decades, the natural conditions have become strange, wanting to imitate cities in Singapore or Dubai or cities in developed countries in other parts of the world. Maybe the initial concept is right, but over the years it doesn't pay attention to the existing natural scheme so that it actually complicates the conditions here. How could the waterway not be blocked from the river to the sea? They feel their deaths have been in vain because they are not served on a plate at a human dinner table or used as bait for apes or otters. The giant prawns were now straight and skinny, feeling that they had lived in vain

This condition spurred them to put up a fight. They agreed to colonize and did not want to be separated from each other on the basis of the same desire, namely to demand their rights which had long been mortgaged. "The elders downstream of the hotter mud grouper" immediately mobilized troops to break down the dam that connects apartments, condominiums, tall buildings and concrete from upstream to downstream say the demonstration commander, namely grouper fish.

The news about plans for large-scale demonstrations reached sharks and whales as leaders in open waters and they also agreed to support the movement against these tyrannical humans and would carry out a resistance even if only in open waters far from land. Driven by small fish where they have dared to do kamikaze some time ago and have also informed the heads of the plates and faults as well as not forgetting the mountains to shed a little of their larvae into the air as a sign of a form of instruction to immediately move against human tyranny which begins by the mountain which is near the strait that flanks the two large islands to carry out a joint demonstration. It is clear that active plates and faults as well as mountains are more pro to them than humans and this will become a trending topic covered by television for the world of water as well as humans.

December 04, 2022 00:46

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12:43 May 30, 2024

This is narrative texts, this tell about marine life. crabs, plankton, shrimp, and various types of fish live in the ocean. Sometimes when the sea water recedes, fish emerge from the surface, including milkfish. However, over time, human activities can damage marine ecosystems, for example waste water.

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Vinia Vannesa
02:07 May 21, 2024

The type of story is Narrative Text In conclusion, the habitat for fishing pond fish serves as entertainment for humans at the estuary facing the sea. The interaction between wild fish and resident fish in the pond reflects a complex dynamic influenced by human activities and natural processes. The challenges faced by these fish, such as habitat displacement and environmental changes, highlight the delicate balance between human development and ecological preservation.

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Kethrin Sitorus
02:05 May 21, 2024

Through this narrative, the fish embody the struggle against human tyranny, demanding a balance that respects natural ecosystems while accommodating human progress

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Faiza Azzahra
01:55 May 21, 2024

This type of the story is Narrative Text, What I can take from the story is Forced to coexist alongside humans due to the destruction of their river habitat, aquatic creatures express dismay at their displacement by towering human constructions. Over four decades, misguided attempts to emulate developed cities like Singapore or Dubai have disrupted natural ecosystems, endangering their survival. Feeling marginalized and powerless, they unite to demand their long-mismanaged rights. In a bid to reclaim their habitats, they mobilize to dismantl...

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03:02 May 16, 2024

The type of story is Narrative Text, because this story tells of fish that want to regain their lost rights, which are experiencing tides and forcing fish to move to other areas that threaten the life of the fish, this development also makes them threatened. As a result of this they demand the rights they have lost, as well as their natural habitat. As a result of this and the development, they are doing everything they can to get their rights back.

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02:53 May 16, 2024

This text is a narrative text because it tells the story of a beach that is a fish habitat that is threatened by human development, and wants to try to regain their rights, their natural habitat.

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02:50 May 16, 2024

Narrative Text. fable story, describing the situation of fish and humans. This development makes them endangered and they carry out movements demanding their rights and threatening inhumane humans. Nama: Tiara Murtiningsih Kelas: X ULW-1

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Triana Lintang
02:42 May 16, 2024

This texs is a narrative texs because, the story is about in the city, beaches that are fish habitats are threatened by human development. Fish include milkfish, goldfish and tilapia which live among the causes of habitat destruction. Endemic species are disappearing due to obstruction of migration routes and habitat degradation. The fish put up a fight led by groupers, supported by sharks and whales. They aim to break down barriers and reclaim their rights.

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02:40 May 16, 2024

this is a narrative text. the story tells about fishes and their habitat. they are trying to reclaim their habitat, and it also tell about the impact of human activities.

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02:33 May 16, 2024

this text is a narrative because "Massive Demo of Estuary Fish" is a story that tells of an unusual event in an estuary, where a group of fish staged a massive demonstration to voice their complaints and demands regarding human behavior that destroys their natural habitat

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Arjuna Dwi Putra
02:33 May 16, 2024

i think this is narrative text, synopsis : The story is about a habitat for pond fish near an estuary, where wild fish get trapped during tides. The owner keeps milkfish there, feeding them plankton and shrimp. The fish, including freshwater ones, are forced to live there due to human activities like reclamation and pollution. Endemic fish are disappearing, and various species are losing their habitat due to urban development. The fish organize a resistance, with leaders like groupers, sharks, and whales joining forces to fight human tyranny...

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Aurell Nikita
02:31 May 16, 2024

this text is a narrative because it tells of an area on the edge of an estuary facing the sea, there is a habitat for fishing pond fish which is entertainment for humans. However, natural changes and human activities have disrupted the balance of the ecosystem, causing fish to become trapped and threatened by human development. As conditions worsen, the fish band together to fight human injustice, mobilizing support from other marine animals, even to the leaders of the whales and sharks. In the battle between human interests and the rights o...

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Zainal Arifin
02:24 May 16, 2024

This story is narrative text, This story tells about a fish pond in an estuary which is a habitat for ornamental and wild fish. In this pond, fish such as milkfish are deliberately kept by the ko owner.The story also highlights environmental changes resulting from human actions, such as beach reclamation which threatens fish habitats,This condition triggers a reaction from the fish,in their resistance This protest action attracted world attention and became a topic reported by the mass media.

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Aditiyas Putra
02:21 May 16, 2024

This type of the story is Narrative Text, What I can take from the story is Forced to coexist alongside humans due to the destruction of their river habitat, aquatic creatures express dismay at their displacement by towering human constructions. Over four decades, misguided attempts to emulate developed cities like Singapore or Dubai have disrupted natural ecosystems, endangering their survival. Feeling marginalized and powerless, they unite to demand their long-mismanaged rights. In a bid to reclaim their habitats, they mobilize to dismant...

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RAMZI HAFIZ
02:17 May 16, 2024

In my opinion, this is a narrative text, this story tells about fish habitats, various types of fish, the pictures describe the situation of fish in ponds, their interactions with humans, and their struggle against habitat change.

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Keyla Septiara
04:37 May 14, 2024

narrative: demonstration of the scale of estuary fish synopsis: telling about various fish, there are milkfish and the nine fish, namely those that live in the bay of this city, which are spread widely from the Indian Ocean to the Pacific Ocean. This milkfish can reach a maximum size of up to 7 kg or even more? In this area, human efforts to cultivate milkfish are very clever and unique, so many people attract the attention of Mrs

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04:35 May 14, 2024

This story is considered to be a narative text. It tells about the story of fishes, fishing pond, and human. these fishes try to regain their rights, their natural habitat. because of human reclamation and development those fishes are forced to move and live in an un-natural habitat.

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Prita Widodo
04:33 May 14, 2024

i think this is a narrative text, In the fishing pond habitat at the sea estuary, the fish are trapped due to the tides. Milkfish are the center of attention, fed and living in balance with the environment. However, reclamation and development plans are forcing the fish into unnatural habitats, putting them at risk of extinction. In resistance, the fish unite to demand their rights and confront tyrannical human power.

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04:28 May 14, 2024

This type of the story is Narrative Text, because the character is fish, this is a fable story. Sinopsis: an estuary experiences ups and downs and forced the fish to move to another area. The milkfish become the center of attention, a development forces them to move to an unnatural area. This development makes them threatened with extinction and they are carrying out movements to demand their rights and threaten inhumane humans.

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04:26 May 14, 2024

This text is a narrative Because of the story or not. The news of plans for a massive demonstration reached the ears of the sharks and whales as leaders in open waters and they agreed to support the movement against tyrannical humans and would carry out resistance even if only in open waters far from land. Encouraged by small fish where they had dared to kamikaze some time ago and had also informed the heads of plates and faults and not forgetting that the mountains would release a few of their larvae into the air as a sign of instruction. ...

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