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I’m still in the process of extracting all the knives in my back as I write this cautionary tale of misplaced trust and betrayal.

After just completing my novel, I was cautiously optimistic when I signed up for a panel of movie producers who were looking for the next blockbuster. While waiting for the start of the event, I met Sandra Lindsky at the bar.

She told me she was starting a movie production company and was looking for projects about strong women in difficult situations. Excited to be face-to-face with an actual producer, I gave her one of many flash drives that held my literary baby, and hoped for the best. Two days later, Sandra called me at work, very excited about my novel. She said it was exactly what her production company was looking for and immediately offered to option it for a movie. I was thrilled! I called all my friends and family. I began rehearsing my acceptance speech and making a list of who I was going to thank at the Oscars.

Then the phone rang.

Sandra told me she’d sent the book to some friends who thought it "needed work" and suggested we get together with a script doctor to fine tune the novel. We met with the "doctor" who told me there was too much going on in my novel and to make it a good script, I needed to focus on one theme and he'd turn it into a romantic comedy. Sandra was excited. I was excited, even the script doctor was getting chills. I went home and increased my award’s speech by two pages.

Then the phone rang.

Sandra didn't think it was necessary for her to pay the script doctor and suggested I write the script myself since I'd already written the book. Having no clue as to how to do this, she dropped off several "how to" books on scriptwriting and introduced me to her new partner Dereck. He said he too had read the book and loved the new idea of the script. They decided to have a party and invite all the film people they knew to introduce their new project and have investors come who would give them the money to make the film. I called all my friends and family and began looking for a great dress to wear for the movie premier.

Then the phone rang.

Sandra had added another partner to her production company. Eilene was an experienced screenwriter who would help me write the script in exchange for being a producer. She said she could give it depth and emotion and she'd turn it into a major hit. I phoned my friends and family and told them how great everything was going.

Then the phone rang.

Sandra had added another partner to her production company. Carl was a lawyer who would write up the contracts in exchange for being a producer. We all met at the party. I read some of my script to the guests who applauded enthusiastically. Many wanted to hear more. There wasn't more. People from the film industry were talking about my book! I went home on a natural high. So what if the plot had changed just a little, that's the movie business. I could handle a few minor changes.

Then the phone rang.

Sandra called for a meeting at Chris' office the next morning. We needed to sign some papers and make some minor changes in the plot. "But don't worry," she said. "It's still a great book, the script is wonderful, it's just that some fine tuning was needed."

The next day I went to the meeting and Eilene handed me a two page synopsis of her minor plot changes. Eilene had not read the book, but was convinced the story needed more emotion and suggested we give one of the characters cancer, so we could hit up a few organizations for sponsorships. I tried to tell her that no one in my book so much as caught a cold, but she assured me that movie scripts went through all kinds of changes, so I shouldn't worry. So, I didn't worry.

She also suggested we change the main character's background from a radio station to a winery so that we could get money from the local vineyards in the community. And we should throw in some Mafia guys to spice things up, since movies about gangsters were hot that year. That's when I started to worry. I went home and didn't talk to anyone for days.

Then the phone rang.

Sandra was really excited. She had just got a call from Melissa whose husband Peter had been at the party and loved my original idea. He wanted to help write the script with me. I spoke to Peter and told him about the changes the Eilene had tried to make with my book. He was astounded that anyone would want to write a completely different script from what the book was about and insisted he knew exactly what should be done with my work. Sandra, Dereck and I met with him and Melissa. Peter knew how to write a screenplay. He had a video of the last movie he had written. He had an Oscar on the floor of his den!

I picked up the statue. It was heavy. It was the real thing. And it HAD HIS NAME ON IT!. I couldn't believe it! This man who'd won an Academy Award for screenwriting wanted to help me write my script! I gave him my copy and we agreed to another meeting the following week. I went home and called my family and friends. I was going to be famous! I was going to be rich! Start packing for the Hollywood and bring your sun screen!

Then the phone rang.

Sandra told me she was going to hire Peter to write the script. Peter hadn't read the book. Peter was going to create dialogue and emotion and create the greatest romantic comedy ever. I called Peter and asked him when Eilene and I could get together. Peter told me that Eilene was no longer working on the script. He said he liked to work alone and would call when he was finished with the first draft. Oh and by the way, he laughed when he admitted the movie he'd made never saw a theater screen and the Oscar wasn't real. It was a real statue, he said, but it was given to him by a friend. He'd never won an Academy Award, it was just there for inspiration. But I shouldn't worry. The script was my baby, he'd take good care of it. And I'd be so excited when I heard my words coming out of the mouths of actors at the script reading party at the end of the month it wouldn't matter that he was a liar and a phony. I hung up. That was the first time I'd heard of any script party. And the first time my stomach started to hurt.

The script was finished a week before the party. Sandra dropped it off at my work on Monday morning. By Monday afternoon my stomach ache had turned into full blown nausea. Peter had totally rewritten my story. And he registered it under his name only. He not only stole my characters, my setting, my plot and my title but he turned my story into something shy of Debby Does Dallas. He'd taken out the romance and added some kind of S&M scenes. I didn't recognize any of my characters, except by name. I was in a state of shock.

Then the phone rang.

Sandra was thrilled. She'd gotten her script and was off to the party. I asked her if she intended to sign our updated contracts as she had promised. She told me no problem. I shouldn't worry about a thing and to just bring the contracts to the reading. So I did.

The theater was about half full when I arrived. Everyone was talking about the great new screenplay that Peter had written. My name had mysteriously vanished from every piece of marketing material, including the copies of the script. There was no reference to my book or credit on any of the program handouts.

I met with Sandra before the reading began and put the papers and pen on the counter. She looked at them, then at me. Then she flatly stated "I'm not going to sign these." and she left.

I picked up the papers, the pen and walked out. A few days later, I contacted my attorney. Three days after that, I received a letter saying that the production company filed Chapter 11 and had been dissolved.

The phone hasn't rung since.

March 09, 2024 14:37

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Kailani B.
19:48 Mar 21, 2024

What a bunch of scumbags! Good read though. Thanks for sharing!

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GW LeCroy
01:20 Mar 20, 2024

As the story began, I thought it was really funny and quirky. It was really well written with those continuous beats, and as the story progressed, I started thinking "well hang on, this is getting serious!" Since you already established in the very beginning that she was betrayed, it's something I knew in the back of my mind as I was reading, but something that still felt really disappointing when it actually happened because I found myself really rooting for the protagonist! The ending turned serious real quick and the ending was great with...

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Alexis Araneta
15:24 Mar 18, 2024

Raven, this was a stunning one. The repetition of the phone ringing was genius, a great way to symbolise your protagonist's hopes. Lovely work.

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Helen A Smith
08:19 Mar 17, 2024

If it was me, I’d want to either take that phone off the hook or throw it at the wall, but that wouldn’t have solved anything. The way the writer was treated was both immoral and heartbreaking. A reality check here. I liked the way the story built, only for hopes to be dashed and recognition thwarted. Your story had me invested.

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Jessie Laverton
08:14 Mar 16, 2024

This has great rhythm, with the recurring phone ringing and building up of hopes, only to be dashed so terribly in the end. My heart broke a little more for the writer at every stage.

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Corey Melin
16:12 Mar 14, 2024

Very well written story about the corruption of humanity. Excited about your story just to have minions dash your hopes. A common theme in society. Good read

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Raven West
13:06 Mar 15, 2024

Thank you for being a fan, Corey and for your great comment on this story!

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