Submitted to: Contest #319

A Sharpling's Gift

Written in response to: "Write a story about a misunderstood monster."

Fantasy Fiction

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

The scent of fear was a bitter perfume on the night wind, a familiar tang that prickled Eldrin’s nostrils. Below him, nestled in the valley like a cluster of panicked fireflies, lay the village of Verloren. Torches flickered, casting dancing shadows that exaggerated the villagers’ every frantic movement. He heard the distant clang of an alarm bell, a tinny, desperate sound that echoed his own hollow heart. Another hunt. Another night where the very air thrummed with the desperate intent to end his existence.

Eldrin was no stranger to fear. It had been his constant companion since the day he first opened his eyes in the cavern’s depths, a day that felt like a lifetime ago, yet remained as vivid as the blood on his claws. He remembered the pain, the tearing, the primal urge to live. He remembered the frantic, echoing shriek that had accompanied his birth, a sound that, even now, sent shivers down his spine. They called him the Shadow Beast, the Night Terror, the Scourge of the Gemissant Woods. To them, he was a monster, a creature of malice and insatiable hunger.

He looked the part, he knew. His body was a tapestry of jagged shadows, his skin like petrified bark, thick and ridged. His limbs were long and disproportionate, ending in claws that could rend stone, and his head was a nightmare of horn and fangs, with eyes that glowed with an unsettling, emerald light in the perpetual twilight he inhabited. A low, guttural growl was his natural speaking voice, a sound that could easily be mistaken for a predator’s warning. He was a creature born of the ancient magic that seeped from the heart of the Gemissant Woods, a place shunned and feared by mankind.

But beneath the terrifying exterior, Eldrin was… lost. He craved warmth, connection, and understanding. He watched the villagers from afar, their bustling lives a mesmerizing, unattainable dance. He saw their laughter, their tears, their simple joys, and a profound ache settled in his chest, a place he hadn’t known existed until he saw their shared humanity. He tried, once, to approach. A lone woodsman, gathering kindling near the forest edge. Eldrin had merely wanted to observe, to perhaps glean some secret of their existence. The woodsman had screamed, dropping his axe, and fled as if pursued by a demon. Eldrin had only wanted to learn.

His instincts, raw and untamed, were a constant battle. The whispers of the ancient magic that birthed him urged him to hunt, to dominate, to revel in the fear he inspired. But a deeper, quieter voice within him, born of observation and a strange, nascent empathy, urged him to resist. He fed on the fear, yes, for it was the very essence of his being, a byproduct of the fear he inspired, but he did not prey on the fearful. He sought only sustenance, not destruction. He preferred the fear of a scurrying rabbit, the instinctive terror of a deer caught in a moonbeam, not the soul-shattering terror of a human. Yet, the legends grew. Children disappeared, livestock vanished, and always, the blame fell to the Shadow Beast.

The truth was far more insidious. A true predator, a creature of pure malice, lurked in the deeper woods. The Sharpling, a monstrous wolf-like beast with eyes of burning amber, truly stalked Verloren. It reveled in the hunt, in the warm gush of blood, in the terror it instilled. Eldrin had encountered it once, a brutal, silent clash in the heart of the forest. The Sharpling, sensing Eldrin's power, had initially fled. But it was cunning. It used Eldrin’s fearsome reputation as a shield, leaving behind its grisly kills for the villagers to discover, knowing they would attribute the horror to the creature they already knew and feared.

Tonight, the fear was different. It was sharper, laced with desperation. Eldrin saw the torches converging, not on the edge of the woods, but on a central building. The church. He heard screams, not of general panic, but of a specific, agonizing terror. Something was terribly wrong.

He moved, a blur of shadow and raw power, through the ancient trees. The whispers in his mind raged, urging him to flee, to let them destroy themselves. But the quieter voice, the one that sought understanding, pushed him forward. He burst from the tree line, a dark phantom against the torchlit chaos.

The church was aflame, its wooden beams collapsing inward. In front, a monstrous shape, larger than any wolf, with fur the color of dried blood, stood over a fallen man, its jaws dripping. The Sharpling. It had finally grown bold enough to attack the village directly.

The villagers, previously focused on the burning church, turned their terrified gaze to Eldrin. A collective gasp, then a renewed wave of screams. “The Shadow Beast!” someone shrieked. “It’s come for us all!”

Eldrin ignored them. His emerald eyes, usually a source of terror, fixed on the true horror. The Sharpling, startled by Eldrin’s sudden appearance, snarled, its amber eyes glinting with a challenge. It dropped the villager, who lay motionless, and lunged.

This was no silent clash in the depths of the forest. This was a brutal dance of tooth and claw, silhouetted against the burning church. The Sharpling was powerful, its movements swift and deadly, but Eldrin possessed a raw, untamed strength born of the very magic of the woods. He met the attack head-on, his claws tearing at the monster’s hide, the Sharpling’s fangs raking across his petrified bark-skin. The air filled with snarls and the sickening sound of flesh tearing.

The villagers watched, frozen in a tableau of terrified confusion. They expected Eldrin to join the slaughter, to turn his fury on them. But he fought the Sharpling with a ferocity they had never witnessed, a primal rage that seemed to protect them, not threaten. He was bleeding, a thick, tar-like ichor seeping from his wounds, but he pressed the attack, driving the Sharpling back, away from the burning church, away from the scattered, bewildered villagers.

Finally, with a thunderous roar, Eldrin pinned the Sharpling to the ground. He held it there, its struggles weakening, its amber eyes losing their cruel fire. Then, with a decisive, brutal movement, he ended its life.

Silence descended upon Verloren, broken only by the crackle of the dying fire and the ragged breathing of the villagers. Eldrin stood over the corpse of the Sharpling, his body scarred, his emerald eyes glowing in the dark. He looked at the villagers, expecting the usual fear, the usual flight.

But something was different. They were still afraid, yes, but there was also… bewilderment. A dawning realization. They looked from the dead monstrosity at his feet to his imposing, shadowed form, and the pieces began to click into place.

Then, a small voice, clear and trembling, cut through the silence. It belonged to a child, a little girl with wide, tear-filled eyes, who pointed a tiny finger at Eldrin. “He saved us…” she whispered.

A ripple went through the crowd. Murmurs, hesitant and uncertain, began to spread. They didn't understand him, not truly. But they had seen. They had seen the protector, not the destroyer.

Eldrin felt a strange sensation in his chest, a warmth that had nothing to do with the fading embers of the church. It was fleeting, a fragile ember of hope in the vast emptiness of his being. He turned, not waiting for their judgment, and disappeared back into the protective embrace of the Gemissant Woods, leaving them to their dawning understanding.

He moved through the familiar darkness, the scent of fear replaced, for a moment, by something akin to awe. He would always be the Shadow Beast, the Night Terror. But perhaps, just perhaps, he wouldn’t always be misunderstood.

He reached his cavern, the ancient, moss-covered stone a comfort. As he settled into the cool embrace of the rock, the shimmering, emerald light in his eyes flickered, revealing for a brief, unsettling moment, not the primal instincts of a beast, but the cold, calculating intelligence of something far older, far more knowing.

A soft, almost inaudible sigh escaped his lips. The whispers in his mind, once a chaotic symphony, settled into a quiet hum of satisfaction.

The Sharpling had been a useful distraction, but it had grown too reckless. It had drawn too much attention. And Eldrin, the misunderstood protector, now had the perfect alibi for all the little disappearances that would continue to happen under the cover of the ever-spreading fear.

Posted Sep 11, 2025
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20:36 Sep 28, 2025

A fantastic story for this prompt. I noticed you followed me a while ago, but I didn't have time to check you out. I return only occasionally at present, as I am busy with getting a book published. It's soon to happen. But the work goes on with books 2 and 3. I came back this week to write and read. Welcome, all the best, and keep on writing. I know the prompts don't always lend themselves to a story popping into one's head. As you are new, I haven't 'liked' yet because so many new members click 'follow' but don't ever read anyone else's stories. It's ok. Even those who visit for a short time are most welcome. And comments, I believe, are what encourage and help us grow as writers.

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J.D. Graves
18:57 Sep 29, 2025

Thank you for the comment! No worries on not getting a chance to check out my stuff before. We all have lives outside of Reedsy and things we are working on. I like to follow now and read later.

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21:09 Sep 29, 2025

Fair enough. And some of us have hectic lives, at that. I'm intrigued. What motivated you to follow me? I usually read several stories over the course of several weeks from a member who follows me or reads and comments on a story/stories. I am often interested in what they put in their profile. A kindred spirit, maybe? Someone to welcome who is new? Writers and authors often have more in common than they think. Then I follow, but it is a sort of commitment. I did that for a couple of years before becoming too busy lately. Sometimes I like the comments members put on others' stories, and I will check them out and read a story or two. And when I look down the list of stories in competitions, I see interesting titles and read them for that reason. I often check out the short lists. They may not be my cup of tea. However, a variety of judges have put them forward through the judging process, and it's interesting to note how the members wrote in response to a prompt, described things, and employed metaphors, etc. I've learned a lot. I am always true to my stories, and in the end, I am happy if they are read and commented on. The secret I've found with gaining loyal followers is to give helpful, tactful, and worthwhile comments. But following and reading later is ok too. LOL.

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