The Rose Box

Submitted into Contest #33 in response to: Write a story about a character making a big change.... view prompt

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I’m not sure why I opened that first box. Maybe it was a greedy impulse or pure curiosity, even madness. Looking back now, I probably should have let it alone. Those little mahogany boxes changed the course of my life forever.

I got the first box in the fall of my senior year. I had just turned eighteen and I felt as if the world was at my feet. I can now see that it was just him. I don’t know why he chose that day to give it to me. Was it coincidence or did he plan out that specific day to give it to me? 

It was definitely planned. He always had a plan. 

I was running late, so I smelled strongly of perfume masking gross body odor. In my defense, I didn’t have time to take a shower. I stumbled out of the house and onto the bus into my usual seat next to my friend Kris. He looked at me and said, “Someone didn’t hear their alarm go off.”

“Is it that obvious?” I asked ominously. “Sorry Kat, It’s pretty obvious.” I sighed and did calculus homework. 

When we got off the bus, I went to my locker and threw all my books into a big pile on the second shelf. As I walked to my first-period class, I had the strange feeling I was being watched. I ignored it and made it to English 12 with three minutes to spare. 

When class ended, I headed back to my locker to organize all the books I carelessly cast in there as I got off the bus. 

    When I opened it, I was astonished to see that all my books and folders were color-coordinated. “What the..” I was cut off by my surprise. On top of the folders and books was a small box. As I examined it closer, I saw that it had intricately painted roses with entangled stems. All I could muster up to say was, “Wow.”

    I was awestruck that someone would spend the time to make something so nice for me. I opened the lid and tried to decipher who it was from. Inside was a beautiful rose necklace with a gold chain. As I looked closer, I saw that the petals of the rose were translucent; inside were small golden flecks. 

    I took the necklace out of the box and looked for a note. There was a little piece of pink paper taped to the bottom. I took out and broke the little white seal. It said, “To the girl who has the world at her feet.” I looked on the back for the name of the sender. To my bewilderment there was none.

    For the rest of the day, my mind was filled with so many questions. Why wouldn’t the person who sent me the box put his name? Didn’t they want recognition for their work? There must be a reason they sent me the necklace, it didn’t look cheap. 

    Even though I was a little uneasy about the idea that the person who sent me the necklace didn’t include their name; I decided to wear it anyway. It was pretty, and there was no reason to just leave it in the box. Maybe if I wore it to school my secret admirer would reveal himself. 

    For the next couple of months, I wore the rose necklace every day. After a while, I started to lose hope that he would ever come. One day while I was riding the bus home Kris asked me, “Why have you been wearing that necklace so much?” I shrugged and said, “I honestly don’t know at this point. Someone left it in my locker a couple months ago with a note. I thought if I wore it every day eventually they would show themself.”

    “Huh, that quite the predicament. Have you ever thought about not wearing it? Maybe if you took it off he would think you’re losing interest and reveal his identity.” Kris said. “That’s actually not a bad idea, Kris.”

    The next day I didn’t wear a necklace. It was an unofficial screw you to this mystery guy. The day went normal and I was disappointed to find nothing in my locker. I got off the bus feeling glum. I walked into the kitchen and upstairs into my bedroom. As I opened the door, I found a gigantic bouquet of red roses. “Finally!” I exclaimed. I ran to them and searched for the note. When I found it I quickly ripped it away and read it happily. The note said, “Dear Kat, You’re probably pretty mad at me right now for not telling you who I am yet. But I promise you all will be revealed soon. Each day I keep myself a mystery from you makes my heartache. Meet me at the park beside the school at 7. - Your Secret Admirer”. 

    After reading the note, all I could think about was finally meeting my dream boy. I tried to picture how he might look, but I kept coming up blank. Truth is, I didn’t want to picture him in case I was disappointed at the outcome. 

    6:30 finally came and I made my way to the park. My heart raced with every step. I decided to bring the necklace and one of the roses from the bouquet with me because I wanted to tell him how much I liked it. 

    I got to the park and I saw a figure in the distance that I could only assume was my secret admirer. A big smile spread across my face.

As I got closer, I realized that it wasn’t him because this man was forty years old. When he started to approach me I felt anxious like something wasn’t right. I started to walk away but he was following me. I went from walking to running. The man was running behind me. He tackled me to the ground and I began to scream. Then everything went black. 

    That was the last time anyone saw Katherine Forrester. 

    The next time I woke up, the first thing I saw was my face plastered on an old, ratty television. I started to panic when I looked down and saw that I was tied to a pipe. I calmed myself by focusing on the television. A news reporter was saying my name. As I listened closer I made out what he was saying. It was hard though because I was droning in and out of consciousness. “...stolen from the park… by a man wearing a… if seen call…” Then I went back to sleep for the last time. 




March 16, 2020 05:23

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04:30 Mar 26, 2020

Wow! That was a great story. It had a very gripping plot. Good effort, keep it up!

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