The Last Whisper of the Aeons

Submitted into Contest #279 in response to: Write a story from the POV of a zombie, mutant, or infected creature.... view prompt

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Adventure Historical Fiction


On the wind-swept plains of Mesopotamia, where the first cities had risen from the clay, I once walked among the ancients. My name is Eshmun, a name lost to history, subsumed into the whispers of the dreams of men. I, too, was a man, once. But I was more than that. I was a mutant.

Long before the rise of empires and the scribes etching words into stone tablets, I was a child of the soil, born under a crimson moon that hung low like a curse. My mother had said I was chosen, but she spoke through fear, not divine prediction. I was the first to bear the mark of the silver eyes, a genetic anomaly passed through generations. The eldest women in my family had foreseen this, but what they could not foresee was the fear it would instill in others. Among our tribe, all like me were considered harbingers of dread and master of calamities.

My body was a tapestry of peculiar changes. My hair glistened like the sun on the Euphrates, but my skin bore the hue of ochre, as if the clay of our land had woven itself into my very being. My eyes, those silver orbs much like the moonlit waters, reflected an otherness that transcended simple human fears. I could see things that others could not—fleeting shades and shadows that slithered through the mind’s periphery, echoes of things untold.

I roamed the fertile banks of the rivers, watching the seasons give birth to bountiful harvests while I remained untouched by the fruits of my kin’s labor. My friends, laughed loud and joyful until whispers reached their ears, causing them to recoil and, eventually, leave me behind, one by one. The cruel isolation of my existence cut deeply; communal gatherings became reminders of my separateness.

“You are not like us, Eshmun,” a young boy had said. “Your eyes are strange, and your laugh grates on the ear. You do not belong.” The words struck, even harder than rocks flung in play. What bond could I forge with the world while stigma clung tightly like mud on bare feet?

My solace lay in the earth. I would dig my fingers into the soil, relying on the ancient spirit of nature to soothe the storm that raged within me. Stars twinkled overhead, shimmering like my aberrant eyes as I cast my wishes into the night, begging the sacred energies of the universe to help me find my place.

One fateful day, I climbed the steep banks of the Tigris, yearning to explore the remains of the abandoned temple dedicated to Ea, the god of wisdom and water. Stalactites clung to the ceiling like the fangs of ancient beasts, and as I made my way deeper into the hallowed halls, I stumbled upon a mural. There were images of great beings; their features bore similarities to my own, their eyes shimmering brilliantly. Below them, ancient script described their power, how they guided the flow of water and brought forth harvests.

“Mutants,” I whispered in the silence, a breath escaping my lips like a revelation. They had been revered once, worshipped as protectors of life. Had I become the despised embodiment of what once was sacred?

As I traced the contours of the mural, a tremor shook the ground beneath me. The earth cracked, and in an astonishing moment, I found myself tumbling down into a hidden chamber, embraced by darkness. I landed on the hard stone, my body both sore and electric with a new sensation. The air was charged, vibrating against my skin like the first buzz of life. My breath quickened; the chamber was alive.

In the dim light, I beheld an unnaturally large crystal pulsating in shades of deep blue, echoing the rhythm of my heartbeat. The walls appeared to throb with stories—the narratives of life, creation, and the intellection of long-lost beings. With a reckless abandon fueled by the desire to understand, I reached out to touch it.

As my fingertips brushed the surface, a flood of visions cascaded through me. I saw the past unfurling like the petals of a flower, revealing a time where beings like myself went beyond survival—they thrived, weaving their existence into the sinews of the very land they lived upon. They shared their knowledge, and the Earth flourished under their stewardship. Yet power brings fear. Fearing the unknown, those who were ‘normal’ banded together to extinguish the aberrations, succeeding in driving the mutants into obscurity.

And then, as if drowning in a tide of despair, I caught glimpses of myself floating among the stars, my unique essence melding with the cosmos, whispering to the universe itself. I was not an abomination; I was a remnant of a time when difference was celebrated.

The crystal pulsed harder, ripping me from my reverie, retreating back into the depths of that sacred history. I understood that my existence wasn’t solely tragic; it embodied a legacy unfulfilled. I was a link—a vessel for the promise of what had been extinguished.

Pulling away, I crawled back toward the cracked earth that had opened this path for me, but this time I emerged anew. The world had shifted, as if each grain of sand now bent toward me with reverence. The fear that had thrived in some hearts began to slip, like shadows retreating before dawn.

Returning to my village, I found my friends whispering, faces strained with concern as they spoke of omens and the water's rising fury. In that moment of fear, I realized I had a power, one greater than my differences. I could lead them, guiding them to understand there need not be the conflict between the 'normal' and the other.

Standing before them, I felt the hum of the crystal echo still in my bones, and spoke their names with conviction: “We are bound to this earth; we are bound to each other.” My silver eyes reflected light, dizzying and entrancing, and for the first time, I saw them reach out, not in fear, but in hope.

The winds of change rustled through Mesopotamia, watering the seeds of acceptance, scattering them to the farthest corners until the cries of the last mutant would finally meet the embrace of the world—a whisper stretching across the aeons. Forever bound by blood, clay, and the elemental truth whispered amidst the twilight stars.

November 30, 2024 23:23

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