An Incident In The Parking Lot.

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Mystery

Now.

Ayesha is sitting on the floor, in a parking lot near her car, her head resting on the door of the driver's seat. She looks numb, emotionless.


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One hour before.

The sound of a car approaching the parking lot can be heard, as Ayesha is sitting inside her car, her hands on the steering wheel. She is sweating profusely, while looking toward the entrance of the lot. Her hands are trembling.

The car enters inside, and halts at a parking spot, a few feet away from Ayesha's car. Ayesha's gaze is fixed over the car that can be seen through the rear-view mirror. She is breathing heavily while sweating. She wipes off the sweat from her forehead, and takes her left hand near the dashboard trying to grab something.

No one gets out from the car for a few seconds. Ayesha is continuously looking at the car with fear in her eyes. The car door opens and the driver steps out. He is wearing a mask that is covering his whole face, but not his eyes. He opens the door behind the driver's seat and forces a girl of around eight years to come out. Her hands are tied behind her back, and her eyes are blindfolded. She starts crying, but the man slaps her on her right cheek. He then takes the cloth hanging around her neck, opens her mouth, and inserts the cloth back inside. The girl can be heard muffling. The guy holds her right arm, and takes her to the centre of the parking lot.

Unknown to Ayesha, her phone starts vibrating, that is kept on the front passenger seat. The time is 2:57 am. There is a duffle bag kept on the same seat.

“Pick up the damn phone, Ayesha!” Vicky murmurs to himself while trying to call her.

Vicky is roaming in the living room in random patterns, his left hand holding the phone to his ear, and his right hand on his forehead. A photo frame of Vicky, Ayesha, and that little girl is hanging on the wall in front of the couch. All seem to be happy in the picture. Vicky hurriedly takes some keys kept on the table near the couch, and leaves the apartment.

Back in the parking lot, Ayesha takes her phone and keeps it in the right pocket of her jeans. She takes a gun kept on the dashboard and hides it behind her jacket. She then takes the bag and gets out of the car. The guy removes the blindfold from the girl's eyes. The girl looks at Ayesha, and tries to free herself from the man's clutches.

Ayesha looks at the girl. She runs toward the girl, with tears in her eyes, but suddenly stops when she sees the man pointing a gun at her.

“If you want her back, give me the money!” said the man.

Ayesha kept the bag down, and opened it.

“Go back and stand near your car!” ordered the man. Ayesha quietly followed his instructions. The man took the girl near the bag. He saw the bag, which was full of money. He released his grip on the girl, and she went running to Ayesha and hugged her, tears rolling down her eyes. Ayesha loosened the rope on the girl's hands, and gestured the girl to be quiet. She then took out the gun hidden behind her jacket, and slowly approached the man, pointing the gun toward him.

Vicky was driving at the speed of 120 kilometres, while still trying to connect to Ayesha, but in vain because of connectivity issues. He looks at his watch. It's 3:13 am.

The guy, who was busy in counting note bundles, was startled when he heard a clicking sound of the gun. He looked up to find Ayesha pointing a gun at his head. He slowly raises his hands. Ayesha's hands start trembling. The man smiles, and in a snap, he knocks the gun off her hands, and bends it hard. He wraps his left arm around her neck, and points his gun on her head from his right hand. Ayesha is struggling to free herself. Her hands are trying to loosen the man's grip. The man hits her on her head with his gun, knocking her unconscious. He loosens his grip, and Ayesha falls down on the ground. The girl approaches her, but the man gives her a stern look, and she gets back near the car.

The man stretches his neck, and bends down to zip the bag. He takes the zip and turns to approach his car when he finds Ayesha standing with her gun pointed toward him. Before the man does anything, Ayesha shoots him in the head. The man gets a setback, and blood starts oozing out from his head. He falls down on his back. Ayesha approaches him, and pulls him by the collar.

“This was not the deal! You got what you deserved” murmurs Ayesha.

She gets up and throws her gun away. She then bends down and takes the man's gun.

“Mom!” shouts the girl standing near the car.

Ayesha looks at the girl.

“Rhea!” sighs Ayesha.

Rhea wipes her tears and runs toward Ayesha. She is smiling. Another gunshot is heard, and Rhea gets a setback. Blood starts oozing out of her stomach region. Ayesha approaches her. Rhea looks at her.

“I! Am! Not! Your! Mom!” exclaims Ayesha, pressing hard on Rhea's wound. Rhea is shouting and crying in agony, until a moment comes when her voice goes silent.


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Now.

Ayesha is sitting on the floor, in a parking lot near her car, her head resting on the door of the driver's seat. She looks numb, emotionless. A bike approaches the parking lot. It's Vicky. He stops the bike, gets down, and runs toward Ayesha, but his steps gradually slow down when he sees the area surrounding the car. Rhea is lying down on her stomach, the area surrounding her covered in blood. The man is lying on his back, blood still oozing out of his head.

Vicky covers his face with his palms. He gets down on his knees and holds Ayesha's face.

“What happened, Ayesha?”

There's no response.

“Ayesha, tell me what happened!” shouts Vicky.

Vicky crawls over to Rhea, and turns her around. The innocent girl's eyes are now closed.

“Rhea! Wake up! Please!” cries Vicky.

“Tell me what happened, Ayesha!”

“You want to know what happened? That bloody kidnapper killed our daughter in front of my eyes! He approached her, pressed her stomach hard, and made her cry until it was silent everywhere! That is what happened here! You still want to know more?” Ayesha snaps back. She starts crying.

Vicky gets numb. There are tears rolling down his eyes. Vicky kisses Rhea on her forehead. He sits down near Ayesha, his back resting on the car door.

After a few minutes, Vicky composes himself, wipes off his tears, and holds Ayesha's hand. Ayesha stars to cry. Vicky stops her from crying, and wipes her tears.

“It's okay!” says Vicky.

Ayesha hugs him, rests her head on Vicky's chest, and looks with a devilish smile toward Rhea.

January 31, 2020 17:25

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