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Elmer sat in front of the large office desk, rhythmically drumming his fingers against his thigh, matching the steady yet anticipatory beat of his heart. Dust particles danced around him in the still air, seemingly sharing his excitement. His gaze was fixed on the folder before him, containing his resignation letter. A grin, perhaps an unusual response in such a situation, spread across his face. It was the thrill of reclaiming his freedom, paired with the exhilarating thought of leaving for uncharted possibilities—possibilities that included the familiar struggles of being broke, wandering city streets, savoring cheap coffee from paper cups, and spending endless days chilling in the public library.

The bird that flies highest, flies freest.

He had never understood the allure of drugs, but now, he thought he did. This was no cheap thrill; this was the ultimate high. Freedom was his drug of choice, a fact he embraced without shame. The end of his 9-to-5 life was near.

His thoughts were interrupted as the door swung open, and a tall figure entered. Elmer's rhythmic drumming ceased immediately. The man was not who he had expected. His surprise was evident, prompting the newcomer, a handsome man with an authoritative air, to raise an eyebrow quizzically.

"Good afternoon, Mr. Hunter. I'm taking over for Ms. Skora, placing me in charge of this unit for the next few weeks. I trust this arrangement is satisfactory," he said, his voice marked by a crisp British accent. They exchanged a brief handshake, and Elmer recognized him as Mr. Cameron, known to all as Mr. Charming. Famous for his persuasive abilities, Mr. Cameron could sway anyone, regardless of age, gender, or disposition, with his charm—a dangerous and effective tool. He had a way of dominating any room he entered: Veni, vidi, vici. He tolerated no resistance.

Elmer felt as though the ground had shifted beneath him. He had not anticipated this turn of events, this unexpected twist in his planned moment of triumph. He had imagined a flustered Ms. Skora, not Mr. Cameron's confident poise.

Mr. Cameron's piercing steel-blue eyes held Elmer's gaze. Elmer unconsciously pressed his finger harder against his thigh, as if to anchor himself against the intensity of those eyes. After a brief silence, Mr. Cameron's attention turned to the folder on the desk.

"Mr. Hunter, I apologize for the abrupt change. Since Ms. Skora arranged this meeting, I'll need you to brief me on the agenda. This isn’t a performance review, is it?"

Elmer cleared his throat, a bit unnerved. “No, it’s not. Ms. Skora had scheduled this meeting to discuss the upcoming B&B project—”

"Excellent. I've just spoken with Mr. Brewer about it. We'll need to extend the deadline by a week to incorporate additional objectives," Mr. Cameron interjected, placing emphasis on the new plan.

“Oh, I... wasn't aware of that change.”

“The deadline extension is non-negotiable, Mr. Hunter,” Mr. Cameron cut in once more. “It's crucial for enhancing the project's return by 25% with our current technology. Focus on the revised goals and delegate routine tasks to our new project intermediary, Mrs. Rihan. Your original plans, I'm afraid, are now insufficient.”

He nodded towards the folder on the desk, his gesture dismissive.

Elmer felt a surge of panic. “Yes, I understand. I’ll need to rework the entire project. Could you elaborate on how we’re supposed to achieve these new objectives?” His voice trailed off, betraying his uncertainty.

Mr. Cameron's expression, sharp and calculating, didn't waver. He brushed his chin thoughtfully, contemplating his next words.

The situation was overwhelming for Elmer. His usually casual attire, an unironed shirt included, now seemed a poor choice against Mr. Cameron's polished demeanor. With Ms. Skora, his casual approach had sufficed due to her lack of insight into their operations. Elmer sensed, however, that Mr. Cameron was already several steps ahead.

Leaning forward, Mr. Cameron clasped his hands on the desk, capturing Elmer’s full attention.

“Mr. Hunter, these new objectives demand your immediate focus. You have the rest of today to devise a plan. I expect a detailed briefing by 8 AM tomorrow. It should be concise and comprehensive, leaving no room for doubts about your competence or commitment. I trust Mrs. Skora’s judgment in selecting you for this role,” Mr. Cameron stated, his smile sharp but not reaching his eyes, a clear challenge laid out before Elmer.

Elmer’s head pounded, his thoughts clouded by stress. Feeling cornered and more constrained than ever, he blurted out, “Mr. Cameron, this isn’t what I anticipated. With the constraints set by Mrs. Skora, adding further objectives seems unfeasible. There's no leeway in our initial plan, and a one-week extension is hardly sufficient.”

Mr. Cameron's response was calm but firm. “Mr. Hunter, remember that freedom is always relative. Today, your choice might be coffee; tomorrow, it could be limited to tea or water. Similarly, your physical freedom is bound by natural limitations. You can choose to lift one leg, but not both simultaneously.”

He paused, allowing his analogy to sink in. Elmer could only stare, struggling to grasp the implications.

“Consider this: I've added objectives, extended your deadline, and provided additional support. I've equipped you to navigate these constraints. Your task is to balance these limitations with the freedom you possess.”

Elmer gripped his chair, contemplating Mr. Cameron’s words. The idea of resigning had seemed like a gateway to freedom, but now he realized it was just a trade-off for a different set of constraints.

“Finding balance is the essence of freedom, Mr. Hunter. So, discard that poorly drafted resignation letter you accidentally printed twice and left at the printer downstairs. True freedom is earned, not simply claimed,” Mr. Cameron concluded his words with a final verdict as he dismissed Elmer.

Exiting the dusty office, folder in hand, Elmer adjusted his crumpled collar. This day, he knew, would be unforgettable.

Before stepping out the door, he revised his quote at the start of the day. Only in the flight of challenge do we unfold our true wings of freedom.

December 24, 2023 14:44

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Kevin Marlow
03:02 Jan 04, 2024

The level of description is quite good. I never felt it funny though. I identified with the Protag, Elmer Hunter, and his skyrocketing stress. I like the scene, mono a mono is intimate and elevates the drama for me.

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Sue Bozkus
18:07 May 15, 2024

I just returned to this story and you know what Kevin. I think it's because the conclusion feels off. It is not what we want to hear. Even Mr Cameron has a weak spot. I am going to expose him. And Elmer is going to win. This is how it should be. I promise.

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Debbie Archibald
15:52 Dec 31, 2023

There are many Mr. Camerons in the world and this one left me as anxious as Elmer must have been. And to leave a second copy behind would be my fear. Elmer was right. His day sure turned out differently than planned.

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