The dream between a men from Mars,women from venus...

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Happy Romance Teens & Young Adult

"Love, Love and Love only...❤️"

It was a pleasant Monday morning.. The cycle of nature continues as everyday . It won't stop for me or you. Our world see lot of birth, death, success, failure, blissful moment, sad moment and love. The word "love", really a magical one.

In that magic, a man from Mars and a woman from venus are getting together. They both make a new world that was filled only by love. No one can change this. When a nature decided to make a pair, definitely it will happen. It won't stop for anyone. Like that, in the same way the nature decides to make a pair. But, it was totally different. Whenever I imagine about this.. it gives me a butterfly effect. Lot of magical tricks are in their love story

 This girl live a life totally in a dream.. her dream wasn't about a luxury lifestyle, ornaments, powerful job.. She always dreams to live a life independently.. she was bored to live a life surrounded by a circle created by a society... In that circle this girl don't have basic freedom in her life... The circle was almost made by her family's men only.

  Her dream was all about very small things in her life. Peaceful morning without her parents shouting. She wanted the day to starts with birds crippling, simple breakfast but heavy's mom love, doing job with active mind, that job give enough money for live, spending time with friends and family... She always dream about a satisfaction in her life.. not about success or happiness

 In other hand.. The boy who is going to be her partner lives a different life. He get all things before know he need it. He was totally different from ordinary people. He always expect unique and magic in his life. He loves to do adventure and risk in his life. Generally, he was a handsome guy moreover good soul. But, he often lost his patience. Even, he don't know why he did like this.

  Whenever he lost patience, he changes into a different man, this is the one drawback he had in his life . He have a understanding family members and joyful friends, now his heart search for a girl. He need a girl who make a each and every day special, who make him to see him in different way, who make him to shower in the rain of magical love

  When both were together, he wants to fall in love on her again and again. 

When his life gone success he need her to say it wasn't a permanent one. when he getting hard in his life he need her to say it was temporary one. But, he hate a day live with alone before her death.

  When both were together, he wants to fall in love on her again and again. 

When his life gone success he need her to say it wasn't a permanent one. when he getting hard in his life he need her to say it was temporary one. But, he hate a day, without her...

  Simply he dreamt about a girl who make him strong with her love, even in her absence. She only engaged in his mind.

  It was view point of his dream girl. He mostly get this type of imagination by seeing his parents. They are most romantic couple. So, he also getting dream like that. But, she was totally hate the life after marriage, because of her parents only, they always fought eachother. She was tired by seeing this.

  Now, they both search a institutions for higher studies. This situation was used by the god to make them a sweet pair. Asusal they both joined in a same institution for their higher education.

 Oops! I forgot to mention their names... Now, I introduce hero and heroine of this story, David and Mansha. Now we continue, their first meet was in the heavy crowd.

Because it was a first day right, so lot of students are in that place. Our hero David was looking so smart and charming in that day. Most of the girl eyes are on him. But his eye on a book, that was missed by one of the students on that place. He open a book to know whose book it was. He was stunned!. His heartbeat gone high. He just look at his arm it was goosebumps. He can't get his eye from that page. He visually see a him dream girl in that book. He asked him several times, "it was true, it was true"... That was a pencil sketch and it was done by someone who name start with a letter "M". He prayed a god the person in that art was a imaginary one, because he knows well, when a girl is a real one, he definitely go for her.

He lost himself, he don't know what after he do when he find her.

 So, prayed well. Then, he search for his class. He reached his class, all goes well. They give a break to their class. He get a time know about their classmates. That time he like to see the art. So, he starred at the art. That time, he hear a voice "Excuse me, shall I see this"... He turned his head, that's solve he fainted in the desk. Because, that was his dream girl... He confused and fainted. Mansha scared and try to wake him up. But nothing works... This was their first meet. David totally astonished about that day. He scolds and thank a god repeatedly for giving her in his life and scolds for he fainted infront of her.

 All these magical things happened only on the first day. After that nothing happened.. they both don't have a time for meet eachother. But, this gap between them gives a next meeting more efficient.

 Recently I met them , they are played with their grandchildren... "Yes, they get married". But I don't know how they get together. In that meet only I know about it.

 Their next meeting wasn't all fix by the god. Our hero David, play some tricks to meet her. He miss his notebook in home to share her notes in classes, make his friend to take his bike to spend some extra time in bus stop, sometimes he attend the extra classes, only for her.

 Now we think, there is no feeling on her side... When we think like that, we are "absolutely right". She don't have any feeling on him.

 But, he didn't want to hide his feeling on her, he never wants to wait to hold her hands... He is now getting ready to say his love on her. She was in park, thinking about something. He goes near to with lot of confidence on his love. He starts conversation with "what are thinking"?, She told about a guy propose to her. Now he know about her past and her unwilling in the getting together... He think alot, but in that time she had another problem. Mansha have some feeling on David.

But, she hide it. David, don't have any option on that day.. In that situation he hide his all feeling on her. He scared, about losing of her. But, he have a hope on his love. That hope only make them as pair. After her graduation, her family decided to marry her. But, she don't know about it. When she getting know about this, really brokened. She don't know what to do??

  The day of her bridal arrived. Her family emotionally forced her to getting married... She was in the stage that, She don't have any hope, love in that marriage. She describes that day as black day. She that time realise, suppose she getting together with David, her life is filled with lot of love.

She closed her eyes heavy, and pray a god, please engaged herself with David. When she opens her eyes, David stand besides her as her husband. Yes, David was her fiancee.. Everyone's know about it except mansha, in that occasion he proposed her, the gap between David and Mansha.. totally filled with "love, love and love only".

David ask her parents to maintain secret tht he was a fiancee, and he only make his parents to talk her parents about their marriage... In that marriage time, she realised, tha love of David and also her parents love on each other. David give her full independent.. now, she lived with her real life which was she expected... David also get a each and every day as special because of mansha....

"When you love someone truely, the god make a way to tie you both.... So, believe in God, the name of that God is "Love"...

February 19, 2021 18:40

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