Elementals Under The World (Part 1)

Written in response to: Write about a person or object vanishing into thin air.... view prompt

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Adventure Friendship

In three seconds, he had disappeared.

Phoenix gasped as Asterโ€™s face melted from the world. Cascade lunged forward, as if to grab him, but failed. Gale was already halfway done drawing a Gripping Spell. Only Hunter looked unconcerned and bored, like always.

โ€œAster!โ€

Gale quit drawing and ran over to the spot where Aster was standing. Cascade was already on the ground, looking for clues.

โ€œHe was right here. You canโ€™t just-yโ€™know, magically vanish!โ€

โ€œYeah, but then where did he go?โ€

โ€œWhat other explanation is there?โ€

Cascade jumped as Hunter spoke. Gale stared at him.

โ€œI'm afraid i donโ€™t get what you mean.โ€

โ€œI mean, what else can be the explanation? How dim can you get?โ€

Gale shook his head.

โ€œExplain, please. Apparently this dim-witted fool doesnโ€™t get it.โ€

Hunter snorted.

โ€œAster vanished. There, I explained it.โ€

โ€œWow, so detailed.โ€

Hunter had just opened his mouth when the ground collapsed. The last thing that they both heard was Phoenixโ€™s scream.

***

โ€œWake up.โ€

Gale gasped and forced his eyes open. He was in a room, and as his brain slowly turned on, he became painfully aware that he was bleeding, in many different places.

He tried to talk.

โ€œUrghablrughhheeugh.โ€

Nuts.

His eyes adjusted to the room, and Gale saw a cloaked figure, standing up and looking somewhere.

Suddenly high on edge, he stood up and walked closer to the figure, trying to see itโ€™s face.

Then they turned around.

All the air was knocked out of him as Gale clutched at an invisible lifeline, desperate to save himself from slowly choking to death. Then he remembered that he was a freaking elemental.

He drew a Hurricane Spell.

The figure stumbled off him and cursed in what seemed to be German, Russian, and Italian, all in one sentence.

โ€œW-w-w-ho ar-r-e y-ou?โ€

So he still couldnโ€™t talk. Great.

โ€œYou really are curious, hmm?โ€

They sounded angry.

Gale decided to trust his gut.

โ€œIโ€™m Gale Windsong. Who are you?โ€

***

Hunter landed on his feet, feeling something break, and falling onto his face.

โ€œOw!โ€

He had landed inโ€ฆ

โ€œGreat, a maze. WITH A DANG BROKEN FOOT!โ€

He made himself breath, then stood up.

Bad idea.

โ€œOuch ouch ouch ouch ouch!โ€

Hunter decided that he would stay on the ground.

He raised his hand, and sucked in some of the darkness around him. Immediately, he could see much better.ย 

โ€œAre you okay?โ€

โ€œYes, Soul.โ€

A tiny ghost had popped into the air beside him, hovering above him in concern.

โ€œYou have a scar on your face, you seem to have broken your ankle, and have a mild concussion. I would not call that fine.โ€

โ€œShut up, Iโ€™m fine.โ€

โ€œHmpf, if you say so.โ€

Hunter wrapped the darkness around his ankle, and stood up. He managed to walk around the long, damp, and moldy maze for about five minutes. Then the dizziness started taking its toll.

โ€œU-ugh- why is the world- spinningโ€ฆ?โ€

He slumped against the wall for five minutes, then pushed himself to get up.

Walking along the maze, he couldnโ€™t really see where he was going as pain was hitting him left and right. It burned like fire, gripping him and rendering him immovable.

Worse of all, his ankle gave up on him.

Collapsing to the disgusting floor, Hunter saw the world spin, then felt spiders crawling all over him, which then turned into snakes, then to millions of tiny lasers.ย 

Then the lasers all blasted him.

A girl in the maze clutched her ears as Hunterโ€™s piercing screech filled the cavern.ย 

An avalanche of rocks rushed towards her.

She drew something in the air, then started running towards the rocks. A pair of heartbeats later, the rocks exploded, and the girl rushed into the other direction, where she heard the scream.

โ€œFinally, someone.โ€

She grinned, and the wall exploded.

***

Water, water, waterโ€ฆ

Cascade was seven again, playing in the pool that her mom and dad made for her, splashing in the cool water.

โ€œMrs. Unicorn, you canโ€™t defeat me!โ€

โ€œYes I can, with the power of friendship and water!โ€

Cascade threw the action figure into the water, and laughed happily as she moved Mrs. Unicorn to her friends, and they all celebrated. The water seemed to be celebrating too, jumping up and down in the most peculiar pattern, weaving itself into unique shapes and bursting like fireworks.

โ€œLa la la~โ€

Cascade giggled as she made the water carry her out of the tub and into the house. Once she got in though, her parents were not downstairs, for some reason.

โ€œMama? Papa? I have a surprise!โ€

โ€œHello?โ€

Concerned, she ran upstairs, and-

โ€œRUN! CAS, RUN!โ€

Her mama and papa were in an evil stranger's hands!

Cascade could only scream as the people she loved the most got taken away.

โ€œAH! MAMA!โ€

The glass broke, and silence fell.

Then Cascadeโ€™s eyes started glowing, and the vase next to her broke. Then water started rising and engulfed her, raising her up and into the sky. She murmured some words:

โ€œIโ€™ll get you back, mama.โ€

Then Cascade jolted up from her position on the floor.

She was still twelve, still had her bead chain, still confused about where she was, and desperate to find her friends.

And apparently the worldโ€™s prettiest boy- or girl, she couldn't tell, was standing beside her, dozing.

โ€œHello? Will you mind telling me where we are?โ€

They made no reply.

Cascade rolled her neck and turned on her side, falling asleep too.

That seems like a *yawn* good ideaโ€ฆ

***

Meanwhile, a red-haired girl(Phoenix) was getting tortured.

โ€œAAH! STOP, PLEASE, THE PAIN, THE AGONY!โ€

โ€œTell us where the boy went.โ€

โ€œASTER? I DONโ€™T KNOW! PLEASE, I SWEAR! LET ME GO!โ€

โ€œGive her more.โ€

Bloodcurdling screams were the reply.

Cast:ย 

Air: Gale Windsong

Fire: Phoenix Soarkai

Water: Cascade Aira Flutter-Pixieย 

Earth: Aster Jadelit

Darkness: Hunter Goldenglowย 

Light: TBA

Healing: TBA

Electric: Hehehehehe

Any other element: TBA

Comment if you want a role in this story!

lol this is a kinda sorta reedsycast lmao dont judge meeeee

August 25, 2021 08:55

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66 comments

Lilliane Wei
17:31 Oct 13, 2021

Yessss, another Reedsy cast, I love these! This was so intriguing right from the start, you painted the story so well, showing so many different angles of the story. Can't wait to read the next! Liv

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Jasey Lovegood
08:25 Sep 16, 2021

Omggggggg I'm excited to see where this goes!! Can I pls have a character? :)

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Jasey Lovegood
09:20 Sep 18, 2021

OMG YESSSSS Name: Tokyo Ankara (like the cities, yes) Gender: Genderfluid (pronouns: they/them) Age: Erm wtv suits the story :) Appearance: Tall-ish, tanned skin, pixie cut with a nape undercut, chestnut brown hair with brownish-orange tips, hazel eyes, double pierced ears Image for hairstyle: https://i0.wp.com/www.hadviser.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/11/9-balayaged-undercut-pixie.jpg?resize=940%2C1036&ssl=1 Personality: Highkey sarcastic and dry humoured but fun to be around, big ambivert vibes and sEcReTivE Power: Manipulation? So basicall...

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AHHHHHH A GENDERFLUID CHARACTER YESSSSSSSSS I love ur character! they m i g h t be coming in like five minutes lol NPPPPP<3

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also i might use she/they if thats okie also their bestie is a nonbinary he/they if thats okay too :D

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Whoaa this was amazing! the sUsPeNsE the mYsTeRY and the magical aBiLiTiEs Definitely my kind of story lol. Btw, if there are other roles left, could I have a part please? :D (unless they're all taken up by now ik im late lmao)

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sUsPenSe lol ty! <3 andddd ofc you can have one! (actually, im killing off characters in the next one so you can get spotlight >:D *but you wont die, someone else will*)

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Creed .
15:18 Aug 25, 2021

Can I have a part? https://c.tenor.com/YgJ3yAISatkAAAAM/happy-pretty-please.gif

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Creed .
21:01 Aug 25, 2021

What are the power options? And do you need a character name and description, or are you making the character?

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Creed .
21:28 Aug 25, 2021

Does it have to be an element? Character description: Name: Galen Alarick. Gender: Male. Age: Whatever works for you. ;) He is short of stature and muscular, with white-blond hair and silver eyes. Tanned skin and a hard personality. He's a strong fighter, with a healthy dislike for pretty much everyone. I think that should be all.

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Lilliane Wei
18:39 Apr 06, 2022

When one of your favorite Reedsy casts come out with another chapter: GOTTA REREAD EVERYTHING SO I CAN FULLY EXPERIENCE THE BEAUTY

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Dia โœจ
18:38 Dec 21, 2021

Whoa cool :0 I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of this

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02:08 Sep 21, 2021

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
21:24 Aug 25, 2021

oh festive. are you planning on another series? i can't wait to read it!

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
10:18 Aug 27, 2021

Uh sure! And donโ€™t mind the festive part. I just say it when I find something interesting? Whatโ€™s your plan for the series overall Iโ€™m curious?

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
17:36 Aug 29, 2021

UH SURE?! WHY NOT I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO DO LMAO

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Akshara P
19:07 Aug 25, 2021

Imao, no judging here! ๐Ÿ˜

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