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Me and my family live in a two story house and there is 5 rooms however I have found a secret room it is in my closet under all my shoes there is something that almost looks like a door that needs a lock to open so I go and ask my family which is my grandpa and grandma and my cousin and his girlfriend and then my mom and her boyfriend if they have seen a sliver key because the door was silver so I was thinking the key was to. Everyone said no I have seen the door before just thought nothing about it until now. So then I searched my room and lucky enough found a small little silver key in the vent of my room so if course I tired it and it worked, however I was kinda scared to open the door but I finally worked up the strength to open it and it let to another secret room that had windows all around it like I was in a forest then there was a door that led out, of the room, the room was field with all kinds of stuff like shoes, clothes and all kinds of stuff almost liked someone liked there so I started to get scared because you know who could live there, so the next thing that I did was open the door to what looked like a forest. Once I did it smelled like flowers and sweets and it was warm it look totally different from the windows inside. There were fields and piano music I could hear so I followed the music, once I got close I saw someone I couldn’t tell who they were yet they were just standing in the field of flowers I got scared because the person looked just like my sister Kayla so I started running towards them and screaming kayla is that you!!!!! Once I got right next to them I realized it was my sister I asked why she was here then she asked me the same thing. I explained the whole story of me getting there then she told me she fell out of the hotel my dad and step mom and little brother were staying at so that means shes in heave, so why was I here then she said she could tell me just like how I told her how she die, she said when I was looking for the key tripped over the stairs way running and fell down. So that’s how I ended up here. So I went to look for a place we’re there was not flowers because they were annoying because I kept stepping on them so my sister went to look for like a building or something and I stayed up and a tree thinking and why I ran down the stairs case and what happen. She eventually came back and said there was something that looked like a house and a church so me and kayla went to the church and walked in and saw a bunch of people sitting down watching over there family I recognized some faces, so I did the same thing as everyone else I saw my mom and my dad and everyone else in my family some were doing the same thing and some we sad I couldn’t see what my family was going through so I got up and ran to the the house next door and I looked around and everything was the same from me remembering the stuff in my room and u checked the mail and it said Cadence Bighams mail like it was my mail it was kinda creepy so then my sister kayl came in and I told her about it so then we just stayed there for the night then we found are pets in the rooms we were thinking how they got there but I had a cat named jazzy and she had a cat named bubu so we hung out with them then all the sudden out of no were we heard what sounded like everyone yelling so we were scared then we heard pounding on are door so we run and open the door and then there was people that pulled us by the hand and drag us out the the field of the flowers of course we were really scared because we didn’t know what was going to on so we eventually got away and they talked to us they said that they need to do a potion on me to get in touch with your other family members so if course we wanted to get in touch with are other family members so we what had looked like a shot we had to get put into are arms it really hurts put in my opinion in the end I was worth it because I could get in touch with my family that came from all over the place and my family that I haven’t even got to meet because by the time I was born they were already here my sister kayla got to do the same things she got to also get in touch with her family but however for her it was very emotinal the people that I really missed at the momet was my mom and my dad and my step mom and my step dad and my brother Conner and my brother Morgan and my brother rylin but again I will see them again some day so it all the sudden it started raining and we couldn’t feel the water or anything we could still just feel the warm it was weird but again it’s still smell like flowers and sweet stuff so I went back to my house and kayla came up to me and told me she has some Business that needs to be down so that would mean she is leaving so I would be lonely but it’s ok I let her go and I told her that I will be waiting for her to return.

March 26, 2020 00:53

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Pierson Carlsen
22:50 Apr 01, 2020

Nice story! Great premise. :)

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