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Horror Suspense Thriller

Julian ran, his breath sharp and ragged, feet pounding the cracked earth of the desolate highway. The night sky loomed heavy above him, the moon swollen and dim behind a veil of clouds. His legs burned, but stopping was not an option. Not tonight. Not after what he'd seen.


It was chasing him.


He could hear it behind him, a faint rustling that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere all at once. It was a sound like dry leaves scraping across stone, except it wasn't leaves, and there were no stones. There was only the road, stretching endlessly ahead, and the dark woods to his right. The thing moved with a deliberate patience, as if it had all the time in the world to close the distance between them.


He didn't dare look back.


Ahead of him, through the haze of exhaustion and fear, he saw a flicker of light—a single, dim bulb hanging from a porch at the edge of the highway. A house. A place to hide. Julian surged forward, his body screaming in protest, lungs burning with every desperate gasp. His sneakers slapped the pavement as he veered toward the house, the old boards creaking under his weight as he threw himself onto the porch.


He fumbled for the doorknob, hands slick with sweat. The door groaned open, and Julian staggered inside, slamming it behind him with trembling hands. For a moment, everything was quiet—no rustling, no footsteps, just the sound of his own ragged breathing.


He backed away from the door, the small entryway lit by a single bulb overhead, flickering weakly. The house was old, the wood swollen and warped by years of neglect. The air was thick with the smell of damp rot and something else, something metallic, like blood. He wiped his forehead, his hand coming away sticky, though he hadn't realized he was sweating that much.


As his heart slowed, he listened. The thing outside—the one that had been following him since the gas station—was gone. Maybe it hadn't seen him come in. Maybe it was still out there, circling, waiting.


But it wouldn't come in here. It couldn't.


Julian took a deep breath and let his eyes adjust to the dim light. The house felt impossibly still, as if time had stopped the moment he stepped inside. His body ached, muscles twitching with the memory of running, but a cold dread still hung in the air, as if the danger wasn't entirely over. There was something about this place—a heaviness, an unnatural stillness.


The sound of footsteps echoed from upstairs.


Julian froze, his breath catching in his throat. He listened again. Slow, deliberate steps, the creak of old floorboards beneath a weight. Someone was up there.


His heart hammered against his ribs as he glanced toward the staircase at the end of the narrow hallway. He hadn't thought the house was occupied. There were no cars outside, no sign of life—except now, that faint, rhythmic creaking, growing louder with each step.


Maybe it was a resident. Maybe they'd seen him come in and were coming to check. He tried to shake off the panic clenching his chest. It was just a person, someone he could talk to, explain that he needed help. But the sound of the footsteps, slow and deliberate, didn't feel right.


"Hello?" Julian's voice cracked. He hated the way it sounded—small, frightened.


The footsteps paused, and for a moment, there was silence. He held his breath, waiting. Then, slowly, they resumed, coming down the stairs, each creak growing louder and louder. Julian stepped back toward the door, his hand brushing against the doorknob.


He should leave. Just run. But his body wouldn't move. He stared at the staircase, waiting for the figure to emerge from the darkness.


A figure appeared—tall, gaunt, its face pale and eyes black as pits. Its movements were jerky, unnatural, as if it hadn't used its limbs in years. It stood at the bottom of the staircase, staring at Julian with hollow eyes.


"You shouldn't have come here." The voice was a whisper, dry and raspy, like the rustling of dead leaves in the wind.


Julian's mouth went dry. "I—I didn't mean to. Something's chasing me. I just—"


"There's something worse here." The figure moved closer, the floorboards creaking with every stiff step. "It's always hungry."


Julian backed away, his hand tightening on the knob. He yanked the door open and stumbled backward into the night air, tripping over the rotting porch steps as he fled. He didn't care what was outside anymore—whatever waited in the dark was better than what was in that house.


He sprinted down the highway, his pulse a frantic drumbeat in his ears. The rustling returned, louder, more frantic, as if whatever had been chasing him could sense his terror. It was faster now, closer, the sound growing in intensity until it was deafening. Julian's lungs screamed for air, but his legs felt like lead. He couldn't outrun it.


Ahead of him, the woods loomed, dark and thick. He veered toward them, branches slapping his face as he plunged into the trees, hoping the dense forest would slow whatever was behind him. He didn't know where he was going, only that he couldn't stop.


The rustling was right behind him now, close enough that he could feel the cold, unnatural presence at his back. A sharp pain shot through his leg as he tripped over a root and crashed to the ground, the wind knocked from his lungs. He rolled onto his back, gasping, just in time to see the thing emerge from the shadows.


It wasn't human—not anymore. Its form was twisted, grotesque, a mass of sinew and bone that writhed and shifted as it moved. Its face was a gaping maw, too wide, filled with jagged teeth that clicked together in a rhythmic pattern. The sound—the rustling—came from it, a dry, scraping noise that never ceased.


Julian scrambled backward, his hands digging into the earth, but the thing was on him in an instant. It loomed over him, its breath cold and foul. The clicking of its teeth grew louder, more frantic, as it leaned in, its eyes—deep, endless voids—locked on his.


He opened his mouth to scream, but no sound came out. The thing's face was inches from his own now, its teeth chattering, mouth widening as it prepared to devour him.


And then, it stopped.


The forest went silent. The rustling ceased. The thing paused, tilting its head as if listening to something far away. Its eyes flicked to the side, and with a sharp, unnatural movement, it retreated into the darkness, disappearing as quickly as it had come.


Julian lay there, trembling, his body frozen with fear. He didn't dare move, didn't dare breathe. Whatever had scared it away was out there—something worse.


In the distance, from the direction of the house, came the sound of footsteps.


Slow. Deliberate.


Coming closer.


His eyes darted toward the darkness, scanning the treeline for any sign of movement. The night was too still now—oppressively so. Even the wind seemed to hold its breath, as if the very air knew something dreadful was coming.


Julian pushed himself up onto his elbows, his body shaking, covered in cold sweat. He couldn't stay here. He had to move, had to find a way out.


The sound of a twig snapping to his right made his heart seize.


He turned his head slowly, barely breathing. For a moment, there was nothing—only the stillness of the trees, their gnarled branches twisting toward the sky. But then he saw it, a figure just beyond the trees, standing unnaturally still. A man—or something that resembled one. It was tall and gaunt, just like the figure from the house, but it was... wrong. Its limbs were too long, the arms hanging too low, the head tilted at an odd, unnatural angle.


The figure stepped forward, its face partially obscured by the shadows. What little moonlight filtered through the trees revealed skin that was too pale, almost translucent. Julian's pulse thundered in his ears as he stumbled backward, trying to distance himself from the figure without making too much noise.


But then, the figure spoke.


"You're lost," it whispered, the voice a hollow, rasping sound that seemed to echo all around him. "You shouldn't have come here."


Julian's throat constricted. "What—what do you want?"


The figure tilted its head further, a grotesque mimicry of curiosity. "It's not about what I want. It's about what they want."


"They?" Julian's voice shook, though he didn't want to hear the answer.


The figure pointed, one long, bony finger reaching toward the darkness behind him. Julian's heart sank as he turned, following the direction of the gesture. The forest, once still, was now alive with movement. Dark shapes shifted among the trees, their forms barely distinguishable, but their intent clear. There were dozens of them, creeping silently, their eyes glinting in the faint light.


Julian's breath caught in his throat. These things—whatever they were—had been waiting. Watching. And now, they were closing in.


He spun back toward the figure, his voice trembling with fear. "Please, I don't—I don't know what's happening. I just need help."


The figure remained still, its face unreadable, eyes dark and empty. "There's no help here. Not for you."


Julian's mind raced, his thoughts frantic. He needed to run again, but his legs felt like they were filled with lead. The forest was too dense, too dark. He wouldn't make it far before—


The figure moved suddenly, a jerking, stilted motion, and for a moment, Julian thought it was going to attack him. But instead, it stopped a few feet away and bent down, its long fingers digging into the earth. Julian watched, frozen, as it began to pull at something—something buried just beneath the surface. The ground gave way, and with a sickening crack, the figure pulled free what looked like an old, decayed bone.


The figure held it up, examining it as if it were a precious artifact. Then it turned to Julian, its hollow eyes locking onto his. "This place was never meant to be found," it whispered, its voice barely audible above the eerie silence. "And those who wander here... never leave."


Julian staggered backward, his stomach churning. "I didn't mean to come here. I—I just... I just wanted to get away."


The figure stood, its spine cracking audibly as it straightened. "You can't run from what's inside you," it said. "No matter how far you go."


Julian shook his head, panic clawing at his chest. He took a step back, and then another, but the figure didn't follow. It merely watched, its lips twisting into a grotesque grin that didn't reach its eyes.


"Go," it said softly. "Run if you think it will save you."


Without another word, Julian turned and bolted into the forest, branches tearing at his clothes and skin as he pushed through the dense underbrush. His breath came in ragged gasps, his legs pumping furiously as he dodged trees and stumbled over roots. The rustling sound was back, louder now, surrounding him on all sides. They were closing in.


He could hear them—whispers, faint and indistinct, carried on the wind. They never leave... They never leave...


His pulse roared in his ears as he pushed harder, the forest a blur of shadows and gnarled branches. He didn't know where he was going, only that he had to keep moving. The town couldn't be far. If he could just reach it, maybe—


A cold hand clamped around his ankle, yanking him to the ground.


Julian hit the dirt hard, the wind knocked from his lungs as the sharp, skeletal fingers tightened around his leg. He kicked out desperately, his heel connecting with something solid, and the grip loosened just enough for him to scramble free.


He pulled himself up and staggered forward, but the rustling sound was deafening now, the whispers growing louder, more frantic. You can't escape... You can't escape...


His vision blurred, his body screaming in protest as he forced himself to keep running. The town—he could see the faint outline of buildings through the trees. He was almost there. Almost—


A sudden cold washed over him, freezing his limbs mid-step. His body seized up, and he collapsed to the ground, his legs numb, his arms heavy as lead. He tried to scream, but no sound came out. His body was no longer his own.


The rustling stopped.


The forest was silent once more, save for the faint sound of footsteps—slow, deliberate. Julian lay on the cold ground, his body frozen, his eyes wide with terror as the figure from the house stepped into view.


It knelt beside him, its long, bony fingers tracing the outline of his face.


"You shouldn't have come here," it whispered again, its voice almost tender. "You belong to them now."


Julian's vision darkened as the figure leaned closer, its hollow eyes the last thing he saw before the world went black.


And the forest, as it always did, swallowed him whole.

October 12, 2024 12:56

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Carmen Friesen
11:24 Oct 20, 2024

Very scary! Had me on the edge of my seat.

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TJames T
23:51 Oct 19, 2024

Gripping! Some great advice I just received on my first manuscript. Simplify your sentences. ex. The night sky loomed heavy (above him)...the reader knows the sky is above.

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