Vengeance for the Dead

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Adventure Drama Fiction

Vengeance for the Dead

Tom Jacobs was an ordinary man living an ordinary life. He had a wife, Sarah, and two children, Emma and Jake, both in high school. Every day, Tom woke up at 6:00 am, had breakfast with his family, and then left for his 9 to 5 job selling family burial plots. It wasn’t glamorous work, but it paid the bills and allowed him to provide a comfortable life for his loved ones.

One Monday morning, Tom received an email from his boss about a week-long conference in a neighboring city. The conference was mandatory, and although Tom wasn’t thrilled about being away from his family, he knew it was part of his job. He kissed Sarah goodbye, ruffled Jake’s hair, and gave Emma a hug before setting off, promising to call every evening.

The conference was a blur of seminars, workshops, and networking events. Every night, Tom called home to hear about Emma’s soccer practice, Jake’s upcoming science fair, and Sarah’s latest book club meeting. These calls were the highlight of his days, grounding him amidst the monotony of the conference.

On Thursday evening, Tom couldn’t reach his family. He assumed they were busy and left a voicemail, promising to try again later. But Friday morning, he still hadn’t heard back. His worry grew, but he pushed it aside, focusing on the last day of the conference.

That evening, Tom drove home, eager to see his family and share stories from the week. As he turned onto his street, he noticed police cars parked in front of his house. His heart began to race. Something was wrong.

Tom parked his car haphazardly and ran towards his house, his mind racing with possibilities. He was met by a police officer who gently stopped him at the front door. The look in the officer’s eyes told Tom everything before the words were even spoken.

“I’m sorry, sir. There was a home invasion. Your wife and children…” The officer’s voice broke off, unable to finish the sentence. “They didn’t make it.”

Tom’s world shattered. He felt as if the ground had been pulled out from under him, leaving him to fall into a bottomless pit of despair. He stumbled, the officer catching him before he hit the ground. Tears blurred his vision as he struggled to comprehend the nightmare unfolding before him.

The next few days were a haze. Friends and family came to offer their condolences, but Tom barely registered their presence. He went through the motions of planning funerals for the very people he sold burial plots to protect. The irony was not lost on him, but it did little to alleviate the overwhelming pain.

At the funeral, Tom stood by the graves of Sarah, Emma, and Jake, feeling utterly lost. The ceremony was a blur of kind words, comforting touches, and the muted sobs of mourners. Tom’s heart ached as he watched the coffins being lowered into the ground, each one taking a piece of him with it.

In the weeks that followed, Tom tried to return to some semblance of normalcy. He went back to work, but selling burial plots now felt like a cruel joke. His home, once filled with laughter and love, was now a silent tomb of memories.

Nights were the hardest. Tom would lie in bed, staring at the ceiling, haunted by what-ifs and could-have-beens. He often found himself wandering the house, stopping in front of Emma’s bedroom to remember her infectious laughter, or in Jake’s room, imagining the sound of him playing video games. He’d sit in the living room, clutching one of Sarah’s favorite novels, longing for the warmth of her presence.

One night, unable to sleep, Tom went into the basement where he kept boxes of old family photos. He spent hours sifting through them, reliving happier times. There were pictures of Emma’s first soccer game, Jake’s birthday parties, vacations, and family gatherings. Each photograph was a dagger to his heart, but also a reminder of the love they shared.

He turned to look at the locked door to his workshop and decided to go in and look for something to do. As he walked in and turned the light on, he looked around at some of his creations. Then his eyes fell on the pile of material that he created, in that moment in the quiet, dark hours of the night, a plan began to form. Tom had always been an inventor, tinkering in his basement with various gadgets and materials. Before his family’s death, his latest creation was a remarkable material that was bulletproof and could increase the strength of its wearer. It had been a hobby, a distraction from the monotony of his job. Now, it was a lifeline.

The police had no suspects in the brutal murder of his wife and children, but Tom refused to let that stop him. He poured over the details of the case, looking for anything the investigators might have missed. In the process, he discovered a trail—small, almost imperceptible—that led to a group of criminals operating in the shadows of the city.

Determined to bring his own brand of justice to those who had shattered his life, Tom dedicated every waking moment to preparing for his mission. He fashioned a suit from bulletproof material, integrating enhancements that would amplify his strength and agility. He worked tirelessly, perfecting the design and testing it until it became an extension of himself.

Tom’s grief-fueled rage drove him forward, turning his basement into a makeshift lair. He crafted weapons and gadgets, each with a singular purpose: to hunt down the killers and make them pay. Weeks of preparation honed his skills and sharpened his resolve.

Finally, he was ready.

Dressed in his new costume, a dark, imposing figure that moved with silent precision, Tom stepped out into the night. He had adopted a new identity, one that would strike fear into the hearts of those who preyed on the innocent. He was no longer Tom Jacobs, the grieving husband and father. He was a force of vengeance.

His first target was a small-time thug named Marcus who had ties to the group responsible for his family’s murder. Tom tracked him to a dingy bar on the outskirts of town. As he entered, the patrons turned to look at the stranger in the dark suit, their eyes widening in surprise and fear.

Tom moved with purpose, crossing the room in a few swift strides. He grabbed Marcus by the collar and slammed him against the wall, the enhanced strength of his suit making the act effortless.

“Who sent you?” Tom demanded, his voice a low, menacing growl.

Marcus sputtered, trying to break free, but Tom’s grip was unyielding. “I don’t know what you’re talking about!” he stammered.

Without a word, Tom lifted Marcus higher and threw him across the room, sending him crashing into a table. The bar fell silent, all eyes on the unfolding scene.

Tom approached slowly, the heavy footsteps echoing ominously. He knelt beside Marcus, who was groaning in pain, and leaned in close. “Tell me who killed my family,” he said, each word dripping with icy determination.

Terror etched across his face, Marcus finally broke. “It was Johnny Vega! He runs the crew that did it. I swear, I had nothing to do with it. Please, don’t kill me!”

Satisfied with the information, Tom stood and left the bar, ignoring the murmurs that followed in his wake. Johnny Vega was his next target.

Tom spent the next several nights systematically dismantling Vega’s operations, one thug at a time. He moved like a shadow, striking with precision and leaving no trace behind. The criminals began to whisper of a vengeful spirit, a ghost who could not be stopped.

Finally, Tom tracked Vega to an abandoned warehouse on the outskirts of the city. The place was heavily guarded, but Tom’s suit gave him the confidence to take them head-on. He dispatched the guards with brutal efficiency, his rage fueling each strike.

Inside the warehouse, Johnny Vega waited, flanked by his remaining henchmen. He sneered as Tom entered, but there was a flicker of fear in his eyes. “So, you’re the ghost everyone’s talking about,” Vega said. “What do you want?”

Tom’s eyes burned with a cold fury. “Justice,” he replied.

The fight was swift and merciless. Tom’s suit absorbed the blows and gunshots, his enhanced strength making short work of the henchmen. Finally, he stood face-to-face with Vega.

“Why?” Tom demanded, his voice shaking with suppressed rage. “Why did you kill them?”

Vega laughed, a hollow sound. “It was just business. Wrong place, wrong time. You’re nothing special.”

Tom’s vision blurred with rage. “They were everything to me,” he whispered, and with a final, devastating blow, he ended Vega’s life.

As he stood over the lifeless body of the man who had taken everything from him, Tom felt a hollow emptiness. He had avenged his family, but the victory was bittersweet. Nothing could bring them back.

In the following days, Tom continued his crusade, targeting those who preyed on the innocent. He became a silent guardian, a dark avenger in a world that had taken everything from him. And though the pain of his loss would never fade, he found purpose in his quest for justice, becoming a beacon of hope for those who had none.

A few months later, Tom stood at the edge of his family’s graves, a bouquet of flowers in hand. He had aged in that short time, lines of sorrow etched into his face, but there was also a hint of peace in his eyes. He placed flowers on each grave, whispering words of love and remembrance.

“I miss you all so much,” he said softly. “But I’m trying to live the way you would have wanted me to. I’m finding a way to move forward, even if it’s just one step at a time.”

As he walked away, Tom felt a gentle breeze brush his face, and for a moment, he could almost feel Sarah’s hand in his, Emma’s laughter in the air, and Jake’s presence beside him. He smiled through his tears, knowing that while his family was gone, their love would always be a part of him.

Tom’s journey was far from over, he had found a way to honor his family’s memory and help others that were in a similar situation. Through his creations and connections, he hunted down those that would use violence and take from others while serving justice to those that needed it. In that, he discovered a glimmer of hope amidst the darkness, a testament to the enduring power of love and resilience.

June 29, 2024 21:57

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Cameron Hagerty
05:42 Jul 12, 2024

Good job! I enjoyed how you wrote about him looking through the box of old knickknacks left by his family

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