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Romance

The table is decorated with roses. Just a dreamy cascade !!! Shimmering the eternal fragrances. Darkness at outside is smirking....so many tiny candles ignite their hearts. Wow!!!! It's an amazing plot. Raindrops are dancing.... a romantic poem is recited by heart---

"Candle light dinner !!!"

 Flitter- glitter sound of rains

Create a dramatic change

Excited mind for a moment

A magic splash to give a dreamy sight

Candle light dinner----------

Very busy our routine lives

How can make the lovely time

With the dearest one

Now dear heart- look what a mighty attack!!!

Raindrops act as magic pearls-----------

Don't you feel rhythmic change

Don't you feel a new tune

Try to awake thy lovely part

Which is dried in desert

It's a golden chance to rise up------------

Dance in the rain sweetheart

Make this moment a memorable one

Each candle wishes thy lovely life

Passionately hold the sail in ocean

Candle light dinner with dear love---------

May be a rift is created

Due to the robotic life

Now nature creates this orchestra

You should enjoy lively opera

Hold thy hands of love----------

Cherish the moment heartfully

Every flame spreads lovely essence

Cool breeze with amazing ambience

Help to restore all lovely images

Candle light dinner as divinely part of life-------

Will you be my dear love?????? Raj urges and again says---

"I miss you !!!"

 What an unfathomable condition

Every time you come in my imagination

I can't close my eyes

You fairy lady empower my heart

You're my sunshine

You're my dreamy realm

You're my heart

You're such an angelic art

I (Mira) accept the heart’s urge and we cuddle each other .The initiation of a love story such a dreamy way------

Mira stands up and slowly walks at sea shorelines. The oceanic wavers touch her barefoot. Such a chilly cold hug makes a wonderful mark in heart .What a pleasant time is that!!!! I love Raj and never think to move without him. My first and last love !!!!

Mira is a service holder. After completed graduation, she joined in a bank. Here, first met with Raj- a handsome man. A vibrant vibe can touch love's mountain. A good relationship is developed. They are colleagues and good friends. Mira lives in a hostel. She has no one in this earth. Suddenly a windy touch of love , makes a new turn in life.

She can't express feelings. An unwanted fear attacks her mind. Raj also likes her. A golden chance for Raj , to go abroad for career purpose. It will take long time. Mira thinks- if I can't express my feelings still now, then it would be so late. But how can it possible?

I can't do that.

Luck favors her this segment. One rainy evening, Raj calls Mira to

a coffee house and a surprise event to propose, to express his feelings towards... Raj, I want to tell you something-Mira; I love you so much. Mira smirks and says what a lovely step! Thanks dear. I also love you. Ok. dear listen- Now, I'm going to abroad. Plz wait for me. Ok. Raj, I 'd be here until my last breathe. Time goes so fast.

Love is such a touch, which can make eternity in earth. Mind is ready to accept any challenge without fear. All hidden dreams come as lovely weaver. Day or night nothing is concern. 5 years are passed. I'm waiting as a lonely bird. Is my love not true? I'm waiting here for you .The sky is smirking as a new bride. Sanguine sun acts as magical beam, to throw out all dark shades. Chilly cold breeze touches my heart. I'm walking slowly at seashore lines. Lovely wavers kiss my barefoot. When will you come dear love? An unwanted fear peeps in mind. Are you ok, dear? Can't you feel my urge? I'm still waiting, when autumn welcoming tune will touch my life?????

Suddenly an echo ...........

Mira!!!!!!!!!!Someone call me by name. Raj..........

Isn't that? I hold my breathe and then a big surprise for me. How are you dear? My heart beats harshly. I can't tell anything. When I'm cuddling him, suddenly a sound--- how are you, Mira ? A sweet voice from a smiley face. I'm shocked. Raj tells me--- I was stucked in a very big problem, then Tina helps me a lot. I'm grateful to her. Believe me. I never cheat you. Tina hugs me and tells-Listen, Raj is a good guy. He told me about you. I'm so happy to see you. But Mira, I envy you . I have been suffering from blood cancer. Only 6 months are in my hand .Then, I decided to spend some lovely moments with both of you . I want to be a witness of your marriage. Though it hurts me a lot but I feel proud to get you in my life. Love is such a magic-acts as a panacea, such a powerful sword can conquer all. Nothing can hamper, whether a demon or Halloween attire. Palatial touch of love can make peaceful earth. Love blooms as celestial flower......

Sparkling all times, alluring all in its core-as a magnet, Epitome of God. Crown of love for all lives, for a gleeful lovely life.

I know, I can't win my love but I'm not a loser. My death is near and I get such an awesome part of life before the terrible death. I'm happy and a winner for all times. My love is pure and spread the essence within your life.

Then Tina runs. We can't hold her. She needs to go back in her stage of dreams. Raj, I miss you so much. I thought that how can my love never return? We make soulful promise to lead a married life with precious bonding. Now it's time. Let's dear to our dreamy realm....

“Rhythms of life is restored

With the bonding of two souls

Make the eternity on earth

The life is such a wonderful one.”

They got married. Their hearts are shackled within love cage .They weave the song of life....

"Sparks !!!"

 Hold my heart

Let us fly

A spark  a sound ---- a new verse

Sweet fragrances  exceptional waver

An exciting mind   soulful promise

Be my valentine    

              Sparks from heart

Amorous love

                embrace heart

Share all feelings

                show my earth

  pick lively essence for life

Let me give a hug

Let me take a sweet nap

Let me spread my love

Let me hold thy lovely soul

Let me tell the dreamy cascade

Let me express the destined mirth

Let me fly as butterfly

Let me tell you how much I love

Snapshot of the precious bonding-marriage----is reserved as a treasure. A lovely abode is build by palatial touch. Time can’t hold. One (01) years is passed. At the 1st wedding anniversary- they take a cozy ride. What a blissful life in this universe!!! They are laughing to see their image as a lovely caged birds.

February 18, 2021 11:37

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Ananya Filbert
08:51 Feb 25, 2021

Hi, I was sent this to review as part of the Critique circle. Apologies up front, but I could not understand the story. Also, I understand that being a romantic story, you are shifting between prose and poetry (like in Urdu?), but the transition in structure and form here is a little difficult. Maybe I'm missing something...

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Devora Jackson
21:54 Feb 24, 2021

Hi, i was sent this to review in the Critique circle. I'm sorry but I couldn't make much sense of it. I'm guessing that English is not your first language, in which case I applaud your courage in submitting this. If I'm wrong about that, then I apologise.

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