The table is decorated with roses. Just a dreamy cascade !!! Shimmering the eternal fragrances. Darkness at outside is smirking....so many tiny candles ignite their hearts. Wow!!!! It's an amazing plot. Raindrops are dancing.... a romantic poem is recited by heart---
"Candle light dinner !!!"
Flitter- glitter sound of rains
Create a dramatic change
Excited mind for a moment
A magic splash to give a dreamy sight
Candle light dinner----------
Very busy our routine lives
How can make the lovely time
With the dearest one
Now dear heart- look what a mighty attack!!!
Raindrops act as magic pearls-----------
Don't you feel rhythmic change
Don't you feel a new tune
Try to awake thy lovely part
Which is dried in desert
It's a golden chance to rise up------------
Dance in the rain sweetheart
Make this moment a memorable one
Each candle wishes thy lovely life
Passionately hold the sail in ocean
Candle light dinner with dear love---------
May be a rift is created
Due to the robotic life
Now nature creates this orchestra
You should enjoy lively opera
Hold thy hands of love----------
Cherish the moment heartfully
Every flame spreads lovely essence
Cool breeze with amazing ambience
Help to restore all lovely images
Candle light dinner as divinely part of life-------
Will you be my dear love?????? Raj urges and again says---
"I miss you !!!"
What an unfathomable condition
Every time you come in my imagination
I can't close my eyes
You fairy lady empower my heart
You're my sunshine
You're my dreamy realm
You're my heart
You're such an angelic art
I (Mira) accept the heart’s urge and we cuddle each other .The initiation of a love story such a dreamy way------
Mira stands up and slowly walks at sea shorelines. The oceanic wavers touch her barefoot. Such a chilly cold hug makes a wonderful mark in heart .What a pleasant time is that!!!! I love Raj and never think to move without him. My first and last love !!!!
Mira is a service holder. After completed graduation, she joined in a bank. Here, first met with Raj- a handsome man. A vibrant vibe can touch love's mountain. A good relationship is developed. They are colleagues and good friends. Mira lives in a hostel. She has no one in this earth. Suddenly a windy touch of love , makes a new turn in life.
She can't express feelings. An unwanted fear attacks her mind. Raj also likes her. A golden chance for Raj , to go abroad for career purpose. It will take long time. Mira thinks- if I can't express my feelings still now, then it would be so late. But how can it possible?
I can't do that.
Luck favors her this segment. One rainy evening, Raj calls Mira to
a coffee house and a surprise event to propose, to express his feelings towards... Raj, I want to tell you something-Mira; I love you so much. Mira smirks and says what a lovely step! Thanks dear. I also love you. Ok. dear listen- Now, I'm going to abroad. Plz wait for me. Ok. Raj, I 'd be here until my last breathe. Time goes so fast.
Love is such a touch, which can make eternity in earth. Mind is ready to accept any challenge without fear. All hidden dreams come as lovely weaver. Day or night nothing is concern. 5 years are passed. I'm waiting as a lonely bird. Is my love not true? I'm waiting here for you .The sky is smirking as a new bride. Sanguine sun acts as magical beam, to throw out all dark shades. Chilly cold breeze touches my heart. I'm walking slowly at seashore lines. Lovely wavers kiss my barefoot. When will you come dear love? An unwanted fear peeps in mind. Are you ok, dear? Can't you feel my urge? I'm still waiting, when autumn welcoming tune will touch my life?????
Suddenly an echo ...........
Mira!!!!!!!!!!Someone call me by name. Raj..........
Isn't that? I hold my breathe and then a big surprise for me. How are you dear? My heart beats harshly. I can't tell anything. When I'm cuddling him, suddenly a sound--- how are you, Mira ? A sweet voice from a smiley face. I'm shocked. Raj tells me--- I was stucked in a very big problem, then Tina helps me a lot. I'm grateful to her. Believe me. I never cheat you. Tina hugs me and tells-Listen, Raj is a good guy. He told me about you. I'm so happy to see you. But Mira, I envy you . I have been suffering from blood cancer. Only 6 months are in my hand .Then, I decided to spend some lovely moments with both of you . I want to be a witness of your marriage. Though it hurts me a lot but I feel proud to get you in my life. Love is such a magic-acts as a panacea, such a powerful sword can conquer all. Nothing can hamper, whether a demon or Halloween attire. Palatial touch of love can make peaceful earth. Love blooms as celestial flower......
Sparkling all times, alluring all in its core-as a magnet, Epitome of God. Crown of love for all lives, for a gleeful lovely life.
I know, I can't win my love but I'm not a loser. My death is near and I get such an awesome part of life before the terrible death. I'm happy and a winner for all times. My love is pure and spread the essence within your life.
Then Tina runs. We can't hold her. She needs to go back in her stage of dreams. Raj, I miss you so much. I thought that how can my love never return? We make soulful promise to lead a married life with precious bonding. Now it's time. Let's dear to our dreamy realm....
“Rhythms of life is restored
With the bonding of two souls
Make the eternity on earth
The life is such a wonderful one.”
They got married. Their hearts are shackled within love cage .They weave the song of life....
"Sparks !!!"
Hold my heart
Let us fly
A spark a sound ---- a new verse
Sweet fragrances exceptional waver
An exciting mind soulful promise
Be my valentine
Sparks from heart
Amorous love
embrace heart
Share all feelings
show my earth
pick lively essence for life
Let me give a hug
Let me take a sweet nap
Let me spread my love
Let me hold thy lovely soul
Let me tell the dreamy cascade
Let me express the destined mirth
Let me fly as butterfly
Let me tell you how much I love
Snapshot of the precious bonding-marriage----is reserved as a treasure. A lovely abode is build by palatial touch. Time can’t hold. One (01) years is passed. At the 1st wedding anniversary- they take a cozy ride. What a blissful life in this universe!!! They are laughing to see their image as a lovely caged birds.
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Hi, I was sent this to review as part of the Critique circle. Apologies up front, but I could not understand the story. Also, I understand that being a romantic story, you are shifting between prose and poetry (like in Urdu?), but the transition in structure and form here is a little difficult. Maybe I'm missing something...
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Hi, i was sent this to review in the Critique circle. I'm sorry but I couldn't make much sense of it. I'm guessing that English is not your first language, in which case I applaud your courage in submitting this. If I'm wrong about that, then I apologise.
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