"The Sarcastic Pilgrimage of Jerry McBlunder to the Magical Land of Mullaguna"

Submitted into Contest #265 in response to: Write about someone who’s traveling to a place they’ve never been to meet someone they’ve never met.... view prompt

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Adventure Contemporary Inspirational

Jerry McBlunder had always been a bit of a cynic. Life had given him ample reasons to be, what with his job as a middle-management drone at a company that sold office supplies and his perpetually single status. He was the kind of guy who would roll his eyes at motivational posters and snicker at the idea of the universe having a plan for anyone. So, it came as a shock to everyone — including himself — when he decided to embark on a journey to a place he’d never been, to meet someone he’d never met.

He wasn’t even entirely sure why he was doing it. Maybe it was the last straw when his coworker, Linda, sent him a link to an online course about "Manifesting Your Best Life." Jerry had opened the link, intending to send her a sarcastic comment back, but instead, he found himself watching a cheesy video of a beaming guy with a ponytail saying, “The universe is waiting for you to take the first step!”

Maybe it was the guy’s ponytail that annoyed him so much that he decided to take that first step — just to prove that it was all nonsense. Or maybe, deep down, Jerry wanted to believe there was more to life than printer ink and paper clips.

And so, there he was, sitting on an old train headed to the remote village of Mullaguna, a place he had never heard of until last week when he’d decided to type "random destinations" into Google. The search engine had been very obliging, bringing up a list of strange and unheard-of places. Mullaguna stood out because, as fate would have it (if Jerry even believed in fate), it was rumored to have an ancient wise person living there who could tell you anything you wanted to know about your life — past, present, and future. Jerry had figured if he was going to go on a wild goose chase, he might as well make it a fun one.

The train rattled along the tracks, the scenery outside changing from city gray to a blur of greens and browns. Jerry, who wasn’t exactly used to travel, had packed the essentials: two pairs of socks, three packs of salted peanuts, and a copy of “Sarcasm: The Lost Art.” He had also brought along his natural skepticism and enough dry humor to make a cactus feel hydrated.

As the train jerked to a stop, Jerry glanced out the window to see a sign that read, “Welcome to Mullaguna. Population: 302... and growing?” He frowned at the question mark, thinking it a strange thing to add to a population count, but then again, everything about this trip was strange. Slinging his worn-out backpack over one shoulder, he stepped off the train and onto the dusty platform.

Mullaguna looked exactly like the kind of place where you’d expect to find an ancient wise person. There was a main street lined with quaint little shops, all selling various knick-knacks and what Jerry could only assume were souvenirs for a town that never got any tourists. The air was filled with the smell of freshly baked bread and a hint of something floral that Jerry couldn’t quite place. As he walked down the street, he noticed the locals giving him curious looks, which he returned with his best “don’t talk to me” face.

The instructions he had printed from a very dubious website about Mullaguna’s secrets said to find the old well in the center of town, then follow the cobblestone path to the left until he reached a large oak tree with a door. Sure enough, after a few minutes of walking and almost tripping over his own feet on the uneven stones, Jerry found the well. It was a moss-covered relic with a wooden bucket hanging from a rusty chain. He shrugged, not sure what he had expected, but it wasn’t this.

He turned left as instructed, and after a few more minutes of walking, he saw the oak tree. It was enormous, its branches stretching out like the arms of an overenthusiastic hugger. And there, just as the website had promised, was a door set into the trunk of the tree. Jerry blinked a few times, half-expecting it to be a trick of the light, but the door remained stubbornly real.

“Okay, Jerry,” he muttered to himself. “You’ve come this far. Might as well knock.”

He raised a hand and rapped his knuckles on the wood. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, to his surprise, the door creaked open, and a voice called out, “Enter, seeker of truth!”

Jerry rolled his eyes. “Yeah, right,” he mumbled, but he pushed the door open wider and stepped inside.

The interior of the tree was much larger than it had any right to be. Shelves lined the walls, filled with books, strange artifacts, and jars of things Jerry couldn’t identify — nor did he want to. In the center of the room sat an old woman in a rocking chair, knitting something that looked suspiciously like a sock. She glanced up as Jerry entered, her eyes twinkling with mischief.

“Ah, another lost soul,” she said with a grin that showed off her few remaining teeth. “Come to find your purpose, have you?”

Jerry snorted. “No, I’m just here to prove a point. All this ‘universe has a plan’ stuff? Yeah, not buying it.”

The old woman chuckled. “Oh, I like you. You remind me of myself when I was young and foolish.”

Jerry crossed his arms, leaning against the doorway. “Look, I don’t mean to be rude, but I’m not here for a lecture. Just tell me whatever mystical thing you’re supposed to tell me so I can go home and say I told you so to everyone.”

The woman set down her knitting and peered at Jerry closely. “Very well, if you’re so eager. But be warned, the truth is not always what we want to hear.”

Jerry rolled his eyes again, harder this time. “Yeah, yeah, bring it on.”

The old woman closed her eyes and took a deep breath. The room seemed to grow colder, and Jerry felt a shiver run down his spine. He told himself it was just a draft. After a long moment, the woman opened her eyes and said, “You, Jerry McBlunder, are destined for greatness.”

Jerry burst out laughing. “Yeah, sure. Greatness in what? Paper clip sales?”

The woman didn’t seem fazed by his sarcasm. “No, Jerry. Greatness in life. You have the power to change your destiny, to attract the things you truly desire. But first, you must believe in it.”

Jerry’s laughter died down as he realized she was serious. “You’re not messing with me, are you?”

She shook her head. “Not at all. The universe is a mirror, Jerry. It reflects back what you put out. You’ve spent so long being negative and skeptical that you’ve attracted nothing but the same. If you want something different, you have to start thinking differently.”

Jerry opened his mouth to retort but found he had no clever comeback. The woman’s words, as cliché as they sounded, struck a chord somewhere deep inside him. Could it be true? Could his sarcastic outlook on life really be holding him back?

He sighed. “Fine. Let’s say for a moment that I believe you. What do I do now?”

The woman smiled warmly. “Start by expecting good things, Jerry. Believe that you deserve them. And don’t be afraid to take a chance now and then. Life’s too short for anything else.”

Jerry nodded slowly, a strange feeling of hope blooming in his chest. “Okay, I’ll give it a try. But if I end up broke and disappointed, I’m coming back here for a refund.”

The old woman chuckled. “Deal.”

Jerry left the oak tree feeling a little lighter, as if a weight he hadn’t known he was carrying had been lifted from his shoulders. He made his way back to the train station, his mind whirling with thoughts. Could it really be that simple? Just think positively, and good things will come? It seemed too easy, but then again, maybe that was the point.

He boarded the train back home, watching the scenery pass by without really seeing it. His mind was elsewhere, contemplating all the things he wanted but had never dared to hope for: a fulfilling job, real friendships, maybe even love. He had always told himself those things were for other people, not for him. But what if he’d been wrong?

By the time he got home, Jerry had made a decision. He was going to put this whole “positive thinking” thing to the test. What did he have to lose? He started small, deciding to wake up the next day with a smile instead of a groan. It felt weird, but he did it. Then he decided to actually listen to his coworkers instead of tuning them out. He was surprised to find that some of them were actually pretty interesting once he gave them a chance.

Days turned into weeks, and Jerry kept at it. He started finding little things to be grateful for: a sunny day, a good cup of coffee, a kind word from a stranger. It wasn’t like his life suddenly turned perfect — far from it. But he noticed that things seemed to go his way more often than before. He got a promotion at work, not because he worked harder, but because he started believing he deserved it. He made new friends, real ones, who liked him for who he was, sarcasm and all. And, much to his own surprise, he even started dating someone — a barista named Alex who had a laugh that could light up a room.

One evening, as he sat with Alex at a cozy little café, Jerry couldn’t help but marvel at how much his life had changed in just a few short months. He was happier than he’d ever been, and for once, he wasn’t waiting for the other shoe to drop. He was just… content.

Alex looked at him curiously. “What’s that smile for?”

Jerry shrugged, feeling a warmth spread through him. “Just thinking about how weird life is sometimes. How things can change when you least expect it.”

Alex grinned. “Yeah, life’s funny like that.”

Jerry chuckled. “You have no idea.”

Months passed, and Jerry continued to embrace his new outlook on life. Sure, he was still sarcastic — some things never change — but now his sarcasm was lighter, less biting. He found joy in the little things and discovered that when you expect good things, they have a funny way of finding you.

One day, as he was walking through the park, enjoying the crisp autumn air, he saw a familiar face sitting on a bench. It was the old woman from Mullaguna. He blinked, thinking he must be seeing things, but there she was, knitting away as if she had always been there.

He approached her cautiously. “Hey… do you remember me?”

The old woman looked up and smiled. “Of course, Jerry. How’s that greatness working out for you?”

Jerry laughed. “Better than I expected, actually. Thanks for the advice.”

She winked. “The universe just needed you to believe in it, that’s all.”

Jerry nodded, his smile widening. “Yeah, I guess it did. Thanks for helping me see that.”

The old woman chuckled. “Don’t thank me. You did all the hard work yourself.”

Jerry shook his head, still smiling. “Maybe. But you gave me the push I needed. So, thanks anyway.”

With that, he turned and walked away, feeling lighter than ever. As he strolled through the park, he realized that maybe, just maybe, there was something to this whole “law of attraction” thing after all. And for the first time in his life, Jerry McBlunder was okay with that.

And so, Jerry’s journey to a place he’d never been, to meet someone he’d never met, had led him to a life he never imagined. A life filled with laughter, love, and a whole lot of sarcasm. Because in the end, it wasn’t about where he went or who he met — it was about what he chose to believe. And that made all the difference.

August 26, 2024 14:10

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