EUTW: A Vile Villainess(Part 4th >:))

Written in response to: Write about a child who carries on their parentโ€™s work or legacy in some form.... view prompt

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Flint looked up in shock.

โ€œC-Coming...with you guys?โ€

Fawn squealed.

โ€œPlease, please please can we go with them? There hasnโ€™t been anyone here in ages!โ€

Flint started shaking his head.

โ€œFawn, I donโ€™t know about this-โ€

โ€œIโ€™m fine, Iโ€™m fine! Donโ€™t worry about me! Please, please pleaseeee?โ€

She started tugging her brotherโ€™s sleeve and trying to make the best kitten eyes she could muster.

Nela let out a groan.

โ€œWeโ€™re wastinโ€™ time, hurry up and decide already.โ€

Gale butted in.

โ€œFlint, cโ€™mon, your sis looks like she wants to come!โ€

Fawn nodded.

Mumbling some words that Gale couldnโ€™t hear, Flint reluctantly nodded.

โ€œYAY!โ€

Fawn immediately grabbed her sack of stuff and shot up.

Nela started walking into the forest, Fawn speeding after her. Flint lagged behind with Gale.

โ€œSo, youโ€™re an Elemental?โ€

โ€œYeah.โ€

โ€œHmpf. Some team you are though.โ€

โ€œWhatโ€™d you mean?โ€

โ€œDuh.โ€

Gale, alarmed, stared into his strange reddish-gold eyes.

โ€œW-what?โ€

Flint let out a strangled laugh.

โ€œYou didnโ€™t hear?โ€

Gale could feel the wind picking up, but he didnโ€™t really care.

โ€œHear about- What is it? Is there something wrong?โ€

Flint looked away.

Fawn sprinted back to them.

โ€œGuys, hurry up!โ€

โ€œOkay, okay.โ€ Flint said in the same tone he was using with Gale.

Fawn studied both of them.

โ€œDid...Something happen?โ€

โ€œNo.โ€

Gale flinched and glared at Flint.

โ€œTell me.โ€

Nela walked back too, interested.

โ€œWhatโ€™s wrong and why is it delaying us?โ€

Flint took a deep breath.

โ€œDid you guys hear about R.O.O.T.?โ€

Nela rolled her eyes.

โ€œOkay, Mr. I-worry-too-much, Root hasnโ€™t been active for a MONTH, so whatโ€™s wrong?โ€

Fawn gasped.

โ€œWas it the article that they gave us-โ€

โ€œYES. It was.โ€

Fawn slowly put her hands to her mouth. In a quiet voice, she asked Gale:

โ€œYou didnโ€™t hear?โ€

The wind blew harder. Leaves were falling from the trees like snow, and everyoneโ€™s clothes were blowing left and right.

โ€œNo, I didnโ€™t. HURRY UP AND TELL ME WHATโ€™S WRONG!โ€

Nela, shocked by this, backed away a little.

Flint started.

โ€œWell, R.O.O.T. had just acted, and killed Phoenix Soarkai and Cascade Aria Flutter-Pixie. Oh, and with the disappearance and resurface of the former Elemental Aster Jadelit.โ€

Fawn cleared her throat.

โ€œA-and...Aster was actually disguised as a girl, the leader of R.O.O.T. and like-their queen? I donโ€™t know, but she goes by the surname Diqiu.โ€

Gale turned away, digesting what he had heard.

He had always liked Cascade, treating her like a younger sister. Phoenix- well Phoenix was like the sensible one.

And now they're gone forever.

And Aster...Disguised as a girl?

He didnโ€™t know why, or how he-SHE pulled it off.

It was kind of surprising to Gale, replaying everything Aster did, everything he saidโ€ฆ

There was no clue about him being a girl.

And the leader of R.O.O.T.

Suddenly, he realized that they had just walked into Rootโ€™s trap.

At the same time, screams erupted behind him.

Gale saw Nela falling into a pit.ย 

Fawn looked back with big round eyes, and was about to run over to Gale when-

A mutated vine stabbed her from behind.

***

Booming laughter came from above, shocking everyone.

A girl, with black and white hair, floated down. She had light caramel skin, and was wearing a robe decorated with thorns.

โ€œHello thereee.โ€ She giggled, just above everyoneโ€™s reach.

Flint glared at her.

โ€œTAKE YOUR DISGUSTING VINE OUT OF MY SISTER!โ€

โ€œMmm, so impatient. Wait your turn!โ€

Twisting the vine around Fawn, she slowly lifted her up, and grinned. The vines tightened, and started choking Fawn. Blood dripped from her mouth, and she made what was possibly the worst sound in the world, Gale thought.

Then Flint screamed and he realized THAT was probably the worst sound in the word.

Lifting Fawn up, the strange girl smiled sadistically.

โ€œOoh, I've caught a pretty one, too bad this little fishie ainโ€™t going home anytime soon!โ€

Flintโ€™s hand caught on fire. Gale jumped and moved away.

โ€œGive my sister back. This is your only warning.โ€

โ€œOh, that sounds like the threat my dear friend received from the Elementals. And since she was VERY angry about it, I guess Iโ€™llย  have to get revenge!โ€

โ€œYou-โ€

โ€œMhmhmhm! And I canโ€™t have you call me โ€˜herโ€™ or โ€˜that personโ€™ so Iโ€™ll tell you my name. Iโ€™m Myriea, but thatโ€™s probably the last name youโ€™ll ever hear.โ€

She jumped from her perch, landing softly on the ground. Flint went to punch her, but she twisted her body and flew over him. Then she gracefully swept him off his feet, Flint landing with a dull crunch on the floor. He quickly got up, however, and sent a flurry of fireballs at Myriea. She sidestepped all of them and jabbed her sharp fingernails into Flintโ€™s eyes, sending him a vision.

Flint was stuck in a chair, and a masked person was standing above him. Whenever he tried to move, his fingers were slammed with a hammer, then he was zapped with lightning. It was horrible, but he couldnโ€™t scream because then the figure would add a band of red-hot metal to his fingers.

Flint gasped and fell backwards, tears streaming down his face. Myriad was watching him, bored.

โ€œWell that was boring. Now, I would looove to play with you,โ€ She laughed, pointing her magic infused fingers at Gale, โ€œBut I have an important mission to carry out for my family, and some random kids arenโ€™t stopping me. Tata!โ€

She vanished.

And all that was left was Gale, shocked.

Nelaโ€™s gone.

Fawn has been taken.

Flintโ€™s unconscious.

โ€ฆ

What do I do now?

He looked up, into the sky.

What in Soulle-no, what in CHIKYU do I do now?

***

โ€œHey there.โ€

Hello, Myriad. Youโ€™re late though, what happened?

ย โ€œAww, donโ€™t call me that! And no punishment either? You must really like me, hmm?โ€

Well-Just get on with it. What happened?

โ€œOh, just some kids. I dealt with them though, donโ€™t worry.โ€

Good.

โ€œOh, and I brought one of the girls here.โ€

Why?

โ€œOh, donโ€™t worry, sheโ€™s probably-โ€

So weโ€™re experimenting on a live girl? You know we canโ€™t.

โ€œI was getting to that! Sheโ€™s dead.โ€

Myriea shook the bag, and Fawnโ€™s dead body tumbled out.

OHOHOHO, Abi, you brought this upon our dear readers yourself, hehehee.

Thanks to Starry for Nela, Abi for Fawn(HEHEE) and Flint, and Mira for Myriea. As for the โ€˜friend', you know >:)

Em, youโ€™ll be here soon hehe!

Peace, yโ€™all!

<3

September 15, 2021 20:29

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TJ Squared
23:00 Sep 15, 2021

OwO more plot is forming and wow so darn vivid lol grrrrrrrreat job :D

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TJ Squared
23:02 Sep 15, 2021

YeP nP lol

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TJ Squared
23:07 Sep 15, 2021

Also, if you need to change *cough* my characterโ€™s name *cough* you can to make it fit the story better :)

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Angel {Readsy}
20:19 Oct 21, 2021

Cough , is it a character name , thanks you told I never guess it is a character

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Lilliane Wei
18:47 Apr 06, 2022

DID YOU SERIOUSLY JUST KILL FAWN LIKE THAT T_T CELESTE!!! HOW COULD YOU

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Dia โœจ
18:54 Dec 21, 2021

Myriea's black and white hair reminds me of Monokuma!! Was that on purpose or just a coincidence?

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Angel {Readsy}
20:18 Oct 21, 2021

Comment my story please your kind criticism would help me to improve writing

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Angel {Readsy}
20:17 Oct 21, 2021

Rain was streaming down the roof, the first rain of the season, woooowww I like rain imagery alot. But I like the most peaceful stories. I usually see horror dreams about crocodiles so I got muchhhhh afraid so the element of fear bother me alot. But your story, choice of metaphor, imagery , were excellent, goooood work well done keep writing

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omg POOR FLINT POOR FAWN wait AM I DEAD- if so falling into a pit of who knows what is a tHrIlLiNg dEaTh >:)) Anyways, loved this part! So much SUSPENSE SUSPENSE SUSPENSE Cant wait to see what happens next! (and to see if I'm dead or not cOuGH)

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LOL maybe >:)))) TYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY hehehe you might see it in a w e e k (>;) )

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