Flint looked up in shock.
โC-Coming...with you guys?โ
Fawn squealed.
โPlease, please please can we go with them? There hasnโt been anyone here in ages!โ
Flint started shaking his head.
โFawn, I donโt know about this-โ
โIโm fine, Iโm fine! Donโt worry about me! Please, please pleaseeee?โ
She started tugging her brotherโs sleeve and trying to make the best kitten eyes she could muster.
Nela let out a groan.
โWeโre wastinโ time, hurry up and decide already.โ
Gale butted in.
โFlint, cโmon, your sis looks like she wants to come!โ
Fawn nodded.
Mumbling some words that Gale couldnโt hear, Flint reluctantly nodded.
โYAY!โ
Fawn immediately grabbed her sack of stuff and shot up.
Nela started walking into the forest, Fawn speeding after her. Flint lagged behind with Gale.
โSo, youโre an Elemental?โ
โYeah.โ
โHmpf. Some team you are though.โ
โWhatโd you mean?โ
โDuh.โ
Gale, alarmed, stared into his strange reddish-gold eyes.
โW-what?โ
Flint let out a strangled laugh.
โYou didnโt hear?โ
Gale could feel the wind picking up, but he didnโt really care.
โHear about- What is it? Is there something wrong?โ
Flint looked away.
Fawn sprinted back to them.
โGuys, hurry up!โ
โOkay, okay.โ Flint said in the same tone he was using with Gale.
Fawn studied both of them.
โDid...Something happen?โ
โNo.โ
Gale flinched and glared at Flint.
โTell me.โ
Nela walked back too, interested.
โWhatโs wrong and why is it delaying us?โ
Flint took a deep breath.
โDid you guys hear about R.O.O.T.?โ
Nela rolled her eyes.
โOkay, Mr. I-worry-too-much, Root hasnโt been active for a MONTH, so whatโs wrong?โ
Fawn gasped.
โWas it the article that they gave us-โ
โYES. It was.โ
Fawn slowly put her hands to her mouth. In a quiet voice, she asked Gale:
โYou didnโt hear?โ
The wind blew harder. Leaves were falling from the trees like snow, and everyoneโs clothes were blowing left and right.
โNo, I didnโt. HURRY UP AND TELL ME WHATโS WRONG!โ
Nela, shocked by this, backed away a little.
Flint started.
โWell, R.O.O.T. had just acted, and killed Phoenix Soarkai and Cascade Aria Flutter-Pixie. Oh, and with the disappearance and resurface of the former Elemental Aster Jadelit.โ
Fawn cleared her throat.
โA-and...Aster was actually disguised as a girl, the leader of R.O.O.T. and like-their queen? I donโt know, but she goes by the surname Diqiu.โ
Gale turned away, digesting what he had heard.
He had always liked Cascade, treating her like a younger sister. Phoenix- well Phoenix was like the sensible one.
And now they're gone forever.
And Aster...Disguised as a girl?
He didnโt know why, or how he-SHE pulled it off.
It was kind of surprising to Gale, replaying everything Aster did, everything he saidโฆ
There was no clue about him being a girl.
And the leader of R.O.O.T.
Suddenly, he realized that they had just walked into Rootโs trap.
At the same time, screams erupted behind him.
Gale saw Nela falling into a pit.ย
Fawn looked back with big round eyes, and was about to run over to Gale when-
A mutated vine stabbed her from behind.
***
Booming laughter came from above, shocking everyone.
A girl, with black and white hair, floated down. She had light caramel skin, and was wearing a robe decorated with thorns.
โHello thereee.โ She giggled, just above everyoneโs reach.
Flint glared at her.
โTAKE YOUR DISGUSTING VINE OUT OF MY SISTER!โ
โMmm, so impatient. Wait your turn!โ
Twisting the vine around Fawn, she slowly lifted her up, and grinned. The vines tightened, and started choking Fawn. Blood dripped from her mouth, and she made what was possibly the worst sound in the world, Gale thought.
Then Flint screamed and he realized THAT was probably the worst sound in the word.
Lifting Fawn up, the strange girl smiled sadistically.
โOoh, I've caught a pretty one, too bad this little fishie ainโt going home anytime soon!โ
Flintโs hand caught on fire. Gale jumped and moved away.
โGive my sister back. This is your only warning.โ
โOh, that sounds like the threat my dear friend received from the Elementals. And since she was VERY angry about it, I guess Iโllย have to get revenge!โ
โYou-โ
โMhmhmhm! And I canโt have you call me โherโ or โthat personโ so Iโll tell you my name. Iโm Myriea, but thatโs probably the last name youโll ever hear.โ
She jumped from her perch, landing softly on the ground. Flint went to punch her, but she twisted her body and flew over him. Then she gracefully swept him off his feet, Flint landing with a dull crunch on the floor. He quickly got up, however, and sent a flurry of fireballs at Myriea. She sidestepped all of them and jabbed her sharp fingernails into Flintโs eyes, sending him a vision.
Flint was stuck in a chair, and a masked person was standing above him. Whenever he tried to move, his fingers were slammed with a hammer, then he was zapped with lightning. It was horrible, but he couldnโt scream because then the figure would add a band of red-hot metal to his fingers.
Flint gasped and fell backwards, tears streaming down his face. Myriad was watching him, bored.
โWell that was boring. Now, I would looove to play with you,โ She laughed, pointing her magic infused fingers at Gale, โBut I have an important mission to carry out for my family, and some random kids arenโt stopping me. Tata!โ
She vanished.
And all that was left was Gale, shocked.
Nelaโs gone.
Fawn has been taken.
Flintโs unconscious.
โฆ
What do I do now?
He looked up, into the sky.
What in Soulle-no, what in CHIKYU do I do now?
***
โHey there.โ
Hello, Myriad. Youโre late though, what happened?
ย โAww, donโt call me that! And no punishment either? You must really like me, hmm?โ
Well-Just get on with it. What happened?
โOh, just some kids. I dealt with them though, donโt worry.โ
Good.
โOh, and I brought one of the girls here.โ
Why?
โOh, donโt worry, sheโs probably-โ
So weโre experimenting on a live girl? You know we canโt.
โI was getting to that! Sheโs dead.โ
Myriea shook the bag, and Fawnโs dead body tumbled out.
OHOHOHO, Abi, you brought this upon our dear readers yourself, hehehee.
Thanks to Starry for Nela, Abi for Fawn(HEHEE) and Flint, and Mira for Myriea. As for the โfriend', you know >:)
Em, youโll be here soon hehe!
Peace, yโall!
<3
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PLSPLSPLS THE SUSPENSEEEEEE
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MWEHEHEHEHEHHEE
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OwO more plot is forming and wow so darn vivid lol grrrrrrrreat job :D
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IKR XD TY!!!
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YeP nP lol
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xD
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Also, if you need to change *cough* my characterโs name *cough* you can to make it fit the story better :)
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HEHEHEHHE MAYBE I WILLL
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Cough , is it a character name , thanks you told I never guess it is a character
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damn okay r.i.p fawn
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HELPAHSHWSAHAS
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DID YOU SERIOUSLY JUST KILL FAWN LIKE THAT T_T CELESTE!!! HOW COULD YOU
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>:D >:DDDDDDDD
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Myriea's black and white hair reminds me of Monokuma!! Was that on purpose or just a coincidence?
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conkydink lmao hehe
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ahh gotcha
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xD
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Comment my story please your kind criticism would help me to improve writing
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ofc!
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Rain was streaming down the roof, the first rain of the season, woooowww I like rain imagery alot. But I like the most peaceful stories. I usually see horror dreams about crocodiles so I got muchhhhh afraid so the element of fear bother me alot. But your story, choice of metaphor, imagery , were excellent, goooood work well done keep writing
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thank you sooooo much!
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omg POOR FLINT POOR FAWN wait AM I DEAD- if so falling into a pit of who knows what is a tHrIlLiNg dEaTh >:)) Anyways, loved this part! So much SUSPENSE SUSPENSE SUSPENSE Cant wait to see what happens next! (and to see if I'm dead or not cOuGH)
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LOL maybe >:)))) TYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY hehehe you might see it in a w e e k (>;) )
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LOL- >;o YWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YESSSS >:DD
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XD ;) :DDDDDDDD EHHEHEHEHEE
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HEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEISKSNRJKSKSKSNDJUF
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CheCk Le BiO
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OKKKK
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OMG SO GOOD STSYLSFYKSRUSOGUPGS
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PUBLISH SOOOOOOOON AND LET ME KNOW TOO x3
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MWEHEHEHHEEHHEE Sorry that Galen aint here lol what is his sexuality? just askin lol
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okie! random question: do you like boats?
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Same lmfao
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LMFAO IM SORREH FLINTY MA BOI i had to revise lol
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MMMMMM I LOVE ME SOME DELICOUS T O R T U R E XDDD IKRRR
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LOL
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BrUh dw i have deaths planned for most of the others
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yEs
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also nela's death/possession is coming dw
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hehheeehehehe technically fawn got stabbed and strangled but okie
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