Tears in the Darkness

Submitted into Contest #279 in response to: Write a story about a character who’s lost.... view prompt

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Fantasy Teens & Young Adult Drama

Huddled in the corner of a dank, stone cell, the young girl's shoulders quivered as sobs wracked her slight frame. The coarse fabric of her tattered dress clung to her skin, stained with the crimson that still trickled from a gash on her temple. Each breath was a struggle against despair, every exhale a whisper of dust from the floor beneath her.

The heavy footfalls outside her prison grew louder before coming to an abrupt stop at her door. There was a pause, the soft clinking of metal, and then the screech of a small slot opening at the base of the bars. A bowl emerged, shoved through carelessly, its contents sloshing over the rim. The soup, a murky concoction that bore too close a resemblance to the grime of her cell, exuded a faint, rancid odor that mingled with the mustiness of the dungeon.

The girl ceased her crying long enough to cast a wary glance at the offering. Her stomach clenched with hunger, but the sight of the meal did little to stir her appetite. Instead, it served as a bitter reminder of her reality, one where even the sustenance provided was laced with neglect and contempt.

The sudden scurry of claws on stone caused the girl to flinch, her tear-glazed eyes snapping open. Rats, emboldened by the scent of the foul broth, emerged from the shadows like specters, their beady eyes fixated on the unwelcome intrusion into their domain. As the bowl skidded to a halt in the center of the cell, the rodents hesitated, wary of the prisoner's presence.

With great effort, the girl pulled herself up from the cold embrace of the floor. Each movement was a testament to her deteriorating state, her joints creaking like the rusty hinges of a long-abandoned gate. The dim light from the high, narrow windows traced the outline of her gaunt figure, revealing the protruding bones beneath her pale, bruised skin.

She crawled towards the soup, her motions sluggish, as if she were dragging the weight of her despair along with her. Her hands, trembling and skeletal, reached out for the bowl with a strange mix of reluctance and desperation. Hunger gnawed at her insides, yet it was a dull ache compared to the sharp sting of her wounded dignity.

With a ghost of determination, the girl drew the bowl closer, resigned to the meager sustenance that would sustain her just enough to face another day in this forsaken place.

The world around her teetered on the edge of reality, a hazy tapestry woven from threads of confusion and despair. Her mind, once a fortress, now lay besieged by shadows that danced just beyond comprehension. The girl paused, her fingertips skimming the coarse surface of the bowl, and she squinted, trying to make sense of the blurred stone walls that seemed to close in on her. Was this a cell or a crypt? The thought flitted through her consciousness like a moth drawn to a flame, ephemeral and elusive.

She drew a shallow breath, a futile attempt to clear the fog that shrouded her thoughts. A memory teased at the edges of her awareness, a flicker of something she should grasp but couldn't quite reach. It was as if her mind had become a stranger to her, hiding secrets behind a veil she could not lift. Her gaze drifted across the dimly lit cell, seeking anchor points in the darkness, but finding none. She felt untethered, adrift in a sea of uncertainty.

With a quivering hand, she reached for the soup, its warmth a siren call to her chilled fingers. There was no spoon – a luxury unafforded to those condemned to rot within these walls. Resigned, she wrapped her hand around the bowl's edge, steeling herself for the meager comfort it promised.

But as she lifted the vessel, her strength betrayed her. Her grip faltered, and the bowl slipped from her feeble grasp, tumbling toward the unforgiving floor. It struck with a hollow sound, the impact sending a shockwave up her arm, and the contents splashed over her hand and seeped into the cracks between the stones.

Her heart sank as she watched the broth darken the dirt, a precious meal lost to the cell's insatiable hunger. The liquid heat against her skin was a cruel reminder of what she'd been denied. As she stared at her dampened hand, the droplets clinging to her pallid flesh were like tears for a life that had slipped through her fingers just as easily as the earthenware bowl.

Warmth spread beneath her, a stark contrast to the cold, unforgiving stone of her cell. For an instant, she was not caged but floating, buoyed by gentle currents that whispered secrets to her skin. The prisoner closed her eyes, breathing in the scent of fresh water and greenery. A momentary escape, a fleeting reprieve.

Her hair fanned out in a halo of fiery tendrils, swirling with the river's tender embrace. Sunlight danced upon the water's surface, filtering through her closed eyelids, painting the darkness in hues of crimson and gold. She could almost feel the sun on her face, the softness of the current nudging her along.

She opened her eyes to a world awash with clarity and color. Luscious red curls cascaded down her back, caressed by the loving hands of the river as if to reassure her unsettled spirit. Her heart twined itself around the serene beauty of this place, yet her mind was a blank canvas – no past, no name, just the presence of the river and its hypnotic song.

Then, the tranquility shattered. The underbrush rustled violently, betraying the approach of uninvited guests. Through the lattice of leaves and branches, figures emerged, their armor glinting with menace in the dappled light. Soldiers, their eyes locked onto her like hawks circling their prey.

She remained still, water lapping at her waist, a doe caught in the gaze of hunters. Their faces were masks of duty, their bodies tense with purpose. They charged towards her, boots splashing, sending ripples across the once peaceful river. Confusion furrowed her brow; their fervor was foreign to her, their intent unknown. Their advance was relentless, a storm breaking upon her world of calm.

As they neared, her heart drummed a frantic rhythm against her ribcage, the sound of it nearly drowning out the river's gentle murmur. She looked upon them not with fear, but with a puzzled curiosity that etched lines of bewilderment across her gaunt features. What could ignite such passion in these men? Why did they rush to her side with swords drawn, eyes blazing with an emotion she could not name?

The soldiers' grim determination stood in stark contrast to her own bewilderment, the two emotions clashing in the space between them, an invisible battle waged within her foggy mind.

The river's embrace grew treacherous, the smooth stones beneath her feet now slick with deceit. One misplaced step, a slide of skin against wet rock, and her balance betrayed her. With flailing arms, she sought salvation where none could be found. The world tilted, water and sky changing places in a dizzying dance.

A soldier, his face a mask of duty etched in stone, closed the distance in heartbeats. His hand, iron-clad and unyielding, latched onto her wrist, arresting her descent. Her head snapped backward, red curls splayed like spilled wine upon the water's surface, eyes wide to the canopy above.

But it was not the sky that greeted her when her gaze refocused. The stark ceiling of her cell bore down upon her, the stench of mildew and despair thick in the air. The dreamlike reverie shattered, replaced by the harsh rattle of keys and the scrape of metal on stone. Hostile guards loomed over her, their faces devoid of empathy, their eyes cold as the dungeon walls.

Her stomach churned, rebellion rising like bile in her throat. She knew this sound, this ritual of chains and locks. It signaled the march towards judgment, towards the throne where fate would be dispensed without mercy. A silent plea escaped her lips, a prayer to a nameless deity for remembrance, for understanding. But the depths of her mind remained shadowed, the past a locked chest to which she had no key.

As they unlocked her cell, the certainty of her predicament settled upon her shoulders like a leaden cloak. She would stand before the King, an enigma even to herself, her life hanging by the thread of a memory lost.

The clink of iron punctured the heavy silence as they fastened the chains around her wrists. The cold metal bit into her skin, a cruel reminder that she was no longer her own. She felt each link settle with a weight far greater than its physical heft. The soldiers gripped her arms tightly, their hands unyielding as they hoisted her to her feet. Her legs, weak from disuse and despair, trembled beneath her, but the soldiers' grasp allowed for no collapse.

She moved as though in a procession, a spectacle for unseen eyes that watched from the shadows of the dungeon. The air grew less stale as they ascended, the light more insistent. It filtered through the high windows, casting bars of gold upon the stone floor, an ironic mimicry of the prison she left behind.

The throne room doors swung open with a solemn groan, revealing the grandeur designed for the adjudication of lives. Tapestries hung along the walls, rich with the history and heraldry of the kingdom, all leading to the dais where judgment would be cast.

There, upon his throne, sat the King. His presence commanded the room, an unyielding force before which all must bow or break. He wore his power like a second skin, his eyes sharp as the crown upon his brow. The air seemed to thrum with anticipation, every breath waiting upon his word.

"Step forward," he commanded, his voice resonating against the marble.

The soldiers nudged her onward, and she complied, each step an echo in the vast chamber. As she drew closer, her gaze lifted, meeting those of the man who would decide her fate. The King's eyes held no warmth, only the cold calculation of a ruler long accustomed to weighing lives.

"You stand accused of murder," he stated, his words falling like stones into the well of silence. "How do you plead?"

Murder. The word hung in the air, a specter she could not grasp. She searched the recesses of her mind, clawing for any fragment of memory that would anchor her to reality. But there was nothing—no recollection of a crime, no flash of violence, no blood on her hands.

Her voice, when it came, was a whisper, a ghost of sound that barely carried. "I do not remember..." It was an admission of vulnerability, a plea for mercy where she expected none.

"Your name?" pressed the King, leaning forward ever so slightly, as if her answer might unlock the mystery she presented.

The question echoed in the cavern of her lost memories, bouncing off the walls, finding no purchase. She stood there, gazing at the arbiter of her fate, bereft even of the simplest thread of identity.

"I... I don't know," she confessed, the truth leaving her more exposed than her tattered garments ever could. Silence enveloped the room. She was adrift in a sea of forgotten faces and names, including her own, waiting for the tide to pull her under.

The clamor of the throne room buzzed in her ears, a swarm of indistinct murmurs that seemed both distant and oppressively close. She stood at the focal point of countless stares, yet within her own storm of confusion, she was utterly alone. The voices melded into a static hum, meaningless and without form, as if the world had receded into a foggy backdrop to the drama unfolding within her.

Amidst the white noise, a peculiar sensation arose, an inexplicable contrast of fire and frost coursing through her veins. It was as though her blood had split into two streams—one scalding, the other chilling—vying for dominance in her fragile frame. Her heart beat a frenetic rhythm, a caged bird fluttering against the bars of its prison, and with each pulse, the heat intensified, the cold deepened.

Curiosity piqued, she delved inward, seeking the source of this duality that wrestled beneath her skin. What was it? Who was she? Questions darted like fish in a dark pond, too swift to catch, too slippery to hold. But there was something there, some elusive truth that skittered just beyond her grasp.

As her focus narrowed, honing in on the bizarre warmth and its icy counterpart, her body trembled. A shiver ran down her spine, anticipation threaded with dread. She could feel it building, a crescendo of energy swelling within her chest, pressing against her ribs as if begging for release.

And then, all at once, it surged forth—a torrent of anguish that rent the air, tearing from her in a visceral wave. It was a soundless scream made manifest, a raw force that buckled her knees and arched her back. Light burst behind her closed eyelids, a supernova exploding in the void of her lost memories, while shadows coalesced in the periphery, tangible and terrifying.

It continued, a relentless expulsion of power that seemed to have no end, an exorcism of something unknown yet undeniably part of her. The energy wracked her body, pain and liberation intertwined in an excruciating dance. The ice and fire within her clashed in a final, desperate struggle before spilling outwards, leaving her hollow, gasping for breath amidst the maelstrom of her own making.

The dust settled around her like a shroud, each particle a silent witness to the carnage that lay strewn across the once regal throne room. The girl's breaths came in ragged gasps, the only sound amidst the deafening silence left by destruction. She rose unsteadily to her feet, her vision swimming as it took in the landscape of ruin. Marble pillars that had reached for the heavens lay fractured, their pieces scattered like broken bones across the mosaic floor. Tapestries, ablaze with history and artistry, now smoldered; their ashes drifted down like the saddest of snowflakes.

Her hands, once bound by unforgiving iron, now hung free at her sides. She glanced down, her gaze catching on the fabric that graced her form. No longer was she adorned in the tattered rags of imprisonment, but instead, in a dress of deep navy blue that shimmered even in the dim light filtering through the dust-choked air. The material moved against her skin, cool and ethereal, a stark contrast to the chaos that enveloped her.

"Did I do this again?" The question escaped from her lips, a whisper lost in the expanse of desolation. The words felt foreign, yet laden with a heavy sense of déjà vu. She sank to her knees, the chains that had once tethered her falling away, links broken as if they were nothing more than brittle twigs. Her mind clawed for memories, for any semblance of self, but found only void where there should have been identity.

A single tear trailed down her cheek, carving a path through the grime that caked her skin. It was a testament to her solitude, to the reality that she was utterly, terrifyingly lost. Not just lost in place, but lost in the essence of who she was. Her name, her past, the reasons for her incarceration—all remained cloaked in mystery, veiled by the amnesia that clung to her as tightly as the new fabric that clothed her.

The world around her stood still, a kingdom of shadows and whispers, waiting. And within that silence, the young girl with no name and no past faced the daunting truth: she was alone, with power she did not understand, amidst the ruins of what she might have once called home.

December 06, 2024 06:16

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Marty B
06:41 Dec 09, 2024

“We suffer more in our imagination more often than in reality.' Seneca said 2000+ years ago. Great vivid descriptions of a horror of a proscribed life, locked in by chains of silk and gold. .

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Viking Princess
03:01 Dec 09, 2024

And this is why we read. No movie could ever move my imagination the way your story just did.

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Rebecca Hurst
20:44 Dec 08, 2024

You have a wonderful writing style, Brittany. You stayed very close to plausible historic reality - no anachronisms, no jarring notes. This is very good indeed !

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