Begin your story with someone either being followed or following someone else.

Posted in Dramatic on Oct 18, 2024

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“Mistress of Doubt” by Daniel Rogers

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Darn it! The Old Hag is following me again! I just can't, not after yesterday. Another day like that, and I'm finished as a writer.Doubling my pace, I cut through allies and shops, but I could still hear her high heels clicking behind me. Five shops and three alleys later, the clicking finally stopped. I pretended to look back at a passing bus to confirm I lost her.Darn it! Still there! What have I done to deserve this? Unlike me, she wasn't even sweating. It was ridiculous! Instead of looking frazzled, she looked like she came from a glamou...

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“The Chase” by Ty Warmbrodt

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A bright light shines from overhead, nearly blinding me. I squint to see a man climbing the steps that lead from the marina to Front Street. He looks shady; black jeans over black boots, black hooded sweatshirt, hood pulled up over a ball cap. His pace is quick, not so fast that anyone with an untrained eye wouldn’t find suspicious, but I’m a cop, and these things stand out. I follow him at a distance down Front Street. He enters Belfast’s, an unsavory dive bar where things get so rough they only serve beer, and it’s served in cans. He takes...

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“The Book-Seller” by Kate Simkins

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“I know you’re there, Snicket.”The hobgoblin peeped around the old oak tree. “What? Hmm… what?”Hattie stopped walking and turned to look at him. “You may as well come out.”Snicket sidled out from his hiding place and looked around, feigning surprise. “Oh, Hattie. Didn’t see you there,” he said, pretending.Hattie raised her eyebrows and put her hand on her hip. “Really? You’ve been following me since the market.”Snicket looked down at the ground, kicking his feet in the dust.She sighed. “What is it you want this time?” Hattie put down her pil...

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“The Matchmakers ” by Robert Egan

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"So, have you ever tried following someone, you know, without them seeing you?" Theo asked to break the latest awkward silence."That's stalking…" Katie, the psych major seated across from him in the Cafe at the Loren let her silence hang, as if accusing him of some unspoken crime.Theo had thought her shy at first, but over the past 20 minutes bordering on infinity, he'd come to see that she reveled in these painful pauses. Like some self-satisfied boa constrictor, she'd squeezed the life out of every attempt at conversation while staring wor...

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“Cold To The Touch” by Katharine Widdows

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TRIGGER WARNING: StalkerWe both drove up the coast last night, walked barefoot on the beach as the sun set. You let Jasper chase a stick in the sea foam, then run along the sand as the sky streaked orange. Strictly speaking, dogs are not allowed on the beach, but you always bend the rules. I’m not the only person who knows this. Your Insta followers are well aware of what you let your Doberman get up to. But then you have him well trained from what I see.I checked your likes at dawn, a little lower than usual. And they’ll miss the details I ...

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“A Grander Mechanism” by Colin Wadeson

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I had read somewhere that when private detectives follow someone, they watch the feet rather than the back of the head, so the subject won't sense they are being watched. This is similarly taught in the SAS and in martial arts for when approaching an enemy from behind. So, I supposed I could at least rest assured it wasn’t a PI, special forces, or a kung-fu expert whose eyes had been burning a hole in my back since I left the restaurant.It was an early evening in late November, and the back streets of coastal Portsmouth were as grey and empt...

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“Shame” by Rebecca Hurst

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This story is based on recent, documented historical fact which some readers might find upsetting. Will is keeping his distance from an older woman who’s walking along Bishop Street, using shop fronts to keep from the rain where she can. A cathedral looms in the foreground, a mid-Victorian structure which lacks the grace of earlier temples by simply trying too hard. Everything is damp, grey, driving monochrome. He had been hoping to catch up with her when she left her home, but the flat Georgian frontage in a terraced, pastel street, of...

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“The Shadow Man” by B.R Wilson

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The mind can be a dark and twisted place where shadows can take on a life of their own. I was being followed by death, and death showed itself as shadows. On this particular night, those shadows stretched longer, slipping into cracks and crevices of bark and earth like a cockroach scuttling for refuge. Among the encroaching gloom and obscure shapes was a man waiting and watching, and though I couldn’t see him from the heavy dusk, I knew his eyes were glued to me, glued to my house. He had been following me for some time, and I knew he...

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“Heat ” by Sarah May

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A hint of sexuality‘Heat’She followed him home from the bar. You see, She had been in heat for a long time, and licking herself was no longer sufficient. She needed penetration, a mate to fill her desires. And so her hunt for a mate had begun.She roamed through mountain and valley, desert and forest, city and country, through all the elements, sniffing him out. Not just any mate could breed her. She wanted her bloodline as pure as possible. Her pack was so watered down with half-bloods, they were now more human-mutt. So far gone. What once w...

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“Shadow” by Jed Cope

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I saw her several days ago. Only I refused to accept what I was seeing. She was careful, but not so careful that I wouldn’t be afforded the sight of her. Some of that care added something to her steps. She was slowed by her caution. I didn’t have such a burden, and so I closed the distance between us over those days. That was when I had to do something about the sight of her. Think about what it was that I was seeing. She was older than me. Something in her gait spoke of those years and there was a weariness in every movement. I ...

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“The Stalker” by Dita Dow

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Suri pulled her coat tighter as she hurried down the dark, rain-slicked street. The chill October wind whipped through her hair, carrying the musty scent of wet leaves. Streetlights cast eerie yellow pools on the glistening sidewalk. Suri's heels clicked rapidly as she walked, echoing off the brick buildings lining the narrow street. She couldn't shake the feeling of being followed. Suri glanced over her shoulder for the hundredth time, seeing only shadows and empty storefronts. Still, the hairs on the back of her neck stood up. She quicken...

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“Goodbye” by Cara Murphy

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“Alex, come on. You promised me a date to the movies. I told you I didn’t want to do this again,” Silvia whined, tugging on my arm. She shivered. The chilly October night made her breath fog in front of her. “We will,” I assured her. “But first we do this.” I held up the Ouija board I had tucked inside my coat jacket. “You haven’t stopped complaining about it since we met, and who better to help you face your fears than your own boyfriend.” I smiled at her, taking her hand in mine. She gave me a look of hesitation in return, biting the tip o...

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“The New York Retreat Weekend” by Carol Busby

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Maggie looked behind her again. The sidewalk was empty. But she was sure she’d heard footsteps. The feeling had been with her since she got off the train at Penn Station for her annual theatre re-charge weekend in New York with her soul mate Iris. There are just a lot of people here, she told herself, compared to Eugene, Oregon. So, it makes sense that you’d feel someone behind you. The trouble with that was that no one was there. An empty sidewalk in New York was a strange thing, and most unusual. She stopped under one of the sad, dust-encr...

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“Doppelganger ” by Lee Kendrick

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DoppelgangerLee KendrickDetective Sergeant Inspector Cummings of Scotland Yard was assigned to follow the man fifty yards in front of him. The man wearing a grey Macintosh raincoat with a brown fedora hat was known to Interpol as a master criminal. But why he was in bombed-out East London puzzled both Interpol and Scotland Yard.The man crossed the road walking towards the ruins of what used to be a pub and some shops. He seemed to be in a hurry. He then climbed on the rubble of the bomb site. Fifty-five-year-old Cummings followed, climbing b...

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“Spicy” by Emily Miles

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Iris glanced around the room as she pulled on the nitrile gloves. Grabbing the side of the book drop with one hand, she reached in deep with the other, groaning trying to get further inside. Sam walked over cautiously, head cocked to the side.“Iris,” Sam said, with their hands folded politely in front of them. “How can I help you this morning?”Iris slowly retrieved her arm and stood upright, adjusting her stance, blowing a wisp of hair out of the way.“I accidentally returned a book with something important inside,” Iris explained matter of f...

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Begin your story with someone either being followed or following someone else.

Submissions are closed

✍️ 54 stories

“Mistress of Doubt” by Daniel Rogers

“The Chase” by Ty Warmbrodt

“The Book-Seller” by Kate Simkins

“The Matchmakers ” by Robert Egan

“Cold To The Touch” by Katharine Widdows

“A Grander Mechanism” by Colin Wadeson

“Shame” by Rebecca Hurst

“The Shadow Man” by B.R Wilson

“Heat ” by Sarah May

“Shadow” by Jed Cope

“The Stalker” by Dita Dow

“Goodbye” by Cara Murphy

“The New York Retreat Weekend” by Carol Busby

“Doppelganger ” by Lee Kendrick

“Spicy” by Emily Miles

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Write a story in the form of diary/journal entries about a secret or confession.

Write a story with the line “Don’t tell anyone.”

Your character is invited to a secret meeting. Who invited them, and what do they encounter?

Write a story that hides something from the reader until the end.

Contest #273

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