Rebecca DuMontelle

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“My Green Eyes See More Than First Impressions” by Rebecca DuMontelle

Submitted to Contest #44

When I look at the man sitting across from me on the phone in the coffee shop, my green eyes detect more than first impressions. I cannot smell the fancy and expensive espresso lingering above his top lip, clean shaven of course, but I can smell his thoroughly applied high quality cologne, thick and robust, a truly sexy scent. Through smiling white teeth, he speaks in a hushed tone, flicking a solid silver pen back and forth over a blank notepad with a consistent ba-dap ba-dap ba-dap as little ink dots appear on the page. He is r...

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I'm a high school student sick of writing essays. I much prefer narrative writing, but never get the chance. While writing is not what I want to do in life, I think it is very important to get feedback and improve myself as much as I can :)