Submitted to: Contest #318

The Bodyguard's Encore

Written in response to: "Write a story where a background character steals the spotlight."

Drama Fiction Suspense

Arthur stood in the wings, a mountain in a tailored black suit, his presence as solid and unobtrusive as a piece of the architecture. From his vantage point, he had a perfect view of the grand ballroom, a glittering galaxy of chandeliers, champagne flutes, and the city’s wealthiest patrons. His eyes, however, were not on the spectacle. They were on one man: Robert.

Robert was the center of this universe. A pop star whose fame had recently exploded, he moved through the crowd like a shark, all teeth and charm, feeding on the adoration. Arthur’s job was to be the invisible fence around him, a silent deterrent to any overzealous fan or potential threat. For seven years, he had been a shadow to the famous, a career built on blending in, on being the person no one ever noticed. He was the background character in every photo.

Tonight’s charity gala was Robert’s crowning moment. He was the headline performer, the guest of honor, the benevolent king gracing the commoners with his presence. Arthur had overseen the security sweep himself. Every waiter had been vetted, every entry point secured. It was a standard high-profile event, predictable in its opulence. Yet, Arthur felt a low-frequency hum of unease, a discordant note in the symphony of the evening.

It was the little things. A waiter near the main bar, whose uniform was a size too tight, his gaze constantly flitting towards the stage entrance. A man in a Brioni suit by the French doors who hadn’t touched his drink, his hand straying unconsciously to the inside of his jacket every few minutes. Arthur logged them, filed them away. He mentioned his concerns to Robert’s manager, a harried man named Mitch.

“He’s just nervous, Arthur,” Mitch had snapped, wiping sweat from his brow. “It’s his first big event. And the other guy is probably just a social climber trying to look important. Keep your eyes on Robert. That’s all that matters.”

Arthur nodded, his expression unchanging. He was paid to protect, not to argue. He returned to his post, the feeling of wrongness settling deeper in his gut.

Finally, the moment arrived. The house lights dimmed, a hush falling over the crowd as a single, brilliant spotlight found Robert on stage. The applause was deafening. Robert soaked it in, raising his hands as if to bless his adoring public. He launched into his first number, a bombastic pop anthem with a thudding bass that vibrated through the floor.

That’s when the lights went out.

Not just the stage lights, but all of them. The chandeliers, the wall sconces, everything. A collective gasp, followed by a wave of nervous murmurs, rippled through the ballroom. The only illumination came from the faint emergency exit signs and the dozens of cell phones that immediately lit up, their screens tiny islands in a sea of darkness.

Then, a single, sharp crackle. A generator sputtered, and a few emergency spotlights flickered on, their beams cutting erratically through the gloom. On stage, Robert was frozen, a silhouette of terror. The thumping bass track had died, leaving a heavy, ringing silence.

Arthur’s training slammed into place, overriding any flicker of panic. His singular objective: get Robert. He started moving, his big frame parting the confused crowd. But in the chaos, the path to the stage was a logjam of stumbling guests.

He saw the waiter again, the one with the ill-fitting uniform. He was no longer by the bar. He was moving with a purpose that was terrifyingly out of place, making a direct line for the stage steps. At the same time, the man in the Brioni suit was also moving, converging from the opposite side. This wasn't a random power failure. This was coordinated.

They weren't close enough to be an immediate physical threat, but they were closing the gap. Arthur knew he couldn’t just barrel through and drag a screaming Robert off stage; it would turn the growing panic into a full-blown stampede. He needed a circuit breaker. A distraction so profound it would stop everyone in their tracks.

His eyes scanned the stage. The emergency beams swept past Robert, past the drum kit and microphone stand, and landed on it: a magnificent Steinway grand piano, polished to a mirror shine, sitting silently on the far side of the stage. It had been rolled out for the classical trio scheduled to play after Robert’s set.

In that split second, Arthur made a decision that defied every protocol in his seven-year career. He changed course. Ignoring Robert, he vaulted onto the side of the stage in a single, fluid movement. He strode past the petrified pop star, his heavy footsteps echoing in the tense silence. He didn't look at the crowd. He didn't look at the converging threats. He walked to the piano.

He sat down on the bench, adjusted it slightly out of habit, and placed his large, scarred hands on the keys.

The first notes of Claude Debussy’s “Clair de Lune” filled the hall.

The melody was perfect, impossibly gentle and clear. It was a sound so completely at odds with the preceding pop music and the subsequent panic that it seemed to bend reality. The effect was instantaneous and absolute.

The nervous murmuring stopped. The frantic shuffling of feet ceased. The two men who had been moving with such intent froze, their heads whipping towards the source of the music. Every cell phone screen, which had been waving around wildly, now turned to point at the piano.

Bathed in the unsteady glow of a single spotlight, the hulking, anonymous bodyguard was playing. Not just playing, but performing. His eyes were closed, his body swaying slightly with the music as his fingers danced over the keys, coaxing a story of moonlight and melancholy from the strings. The music was a calming balm, a wave of pure, unexpected beauty that washed over the chaos and silenced it.

That moment of stunned stillness was all the other security team members needed. They moved in silently, flanking the waiter and the man in the suit, escorting them away with a professional efficiency that went almost unnoticed. The immediate threat was neutralized before anyone in the audience even understood there had been one.

On the other side of the stage, another guard finally managed to un-freeze Robert, grabbing his arm and pulling him into the safety of the wings.

Arthur didn’t seem to notice any of it. He continued to play, lost in the world of the music. He held the entire room of a thousand people completely captive, not with flashing lights or a pounding bassline, but with a century-old melody. He reached the final, ethereal chords, letting the last note hang in the air for a perfect, breathless moment before it faded into silence.

For a full five seconds, the ballroom was utterly still. Then, it exploded. The applause was a tidal wave, a roar of genuine, thunderous appreciation that dwarfed the earlier reception for Robert. People were on their feet, their faces a mixture of astonishment and awe.

The main lights flickered back on. The magic was broken. Arthur blinked, as if coming out of a trance. He stood up from the piano bench, gave a slight, almost imperceptible nod to the cheering crowd, and walked calmly back to his position in the wings, straightening his tie as he went. He resumed his duty, his eyes once again scanning, his posture once again that of a man who belonged in the shadows.

By the next morning, Robert’s disastrous, aborted performance was a footnote. Every news outlet, every social media platform, was telling the story of the “Piano Man Bodyguard.” Grainy cell phone footage of his performance was everywhere. The background character had not only stolen the spotlight; he had become it.

In a sterile hotel suite, Mitch, the manager, was ecstatic. “This is gold, Robert! Pure gold! We’ll say he plays to calm his nerves. We can call the next tour ‘The Bodyguard Tour’! We’ll have a piano on stage!”

Robert, fuming, threw a remote control at the wall. He had been upstaged, rendered irrelevant at his own coronation, by his own hired help.

That evening, at another stuffy industry event, Arthur stood by the door, impassive as ever. But something had changed. People didn't look through him anymore. They looked at him. He heard the whispers as guests walked past.

“Is that him?” “That’s the guy! The piano player!” “Can you believe it? He was amazing.”

A young woman, bolder than the rest, approached him, a notebook in her hand. “Excuse me,” she said, her voice trembling slightly. “I know you’re working, but… would you mind? Could I have your autograph?”

Arthur looked down at her, his stoic expression unwavering. For the first time in his career, he was no longer invisible. He was the main attraction. He gave a slow, tired sigh and took the pen

Posted Aug 29, 2025
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Daniel Sheley
06:21 Sep 14, 2025

The prose is smooth, and the pacing is strong, but I felt the story didn’t fully land the “stealing the spotlight” idea. Arthur gets a moment, but it comes from abandoning his role in a way that undercuts the tension and leaves him unchanged. Personally, I would have loved to see him steal the spotlight through his skills as a bodyguard, maybe handling the attackers in front of everyone and drawing the media’s attention that way.

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Pamela Beach
22:45 Sep 14, 2025

Hey, thanks so much for reading and for sharing such thoughtful and constructive feedback! This is exactly the kind of insight that's so helpful to hear.
You've really hit on the central creative choice of the story, and I can completely see why it didn't fully land for you. Your point is totally valid: from a certain perspective, he does abandon his primary duty to do something completely different, which could feel like it undercuts the established tension of the bodyguard-protecting-the-client scenario.
My intention was to play with the idea of subverting expectations. I wanted the solution to the problem not to be more violence or tactical prowess, but its polar opposite: a moment of unexpected, disarming beauty. The idea was that Arthur's greatest skill wasn't his physical presence, but this hidden, soulful part of himself that he's kept completely separate from his professional life. In that moment, he uses that hidden part of himself as the most effective tool he has—not just to neutralize the threat, but to control the entire room's emotional state, preventing a much larger panic.
That said, I absolutely love your suggestion for an alternate path! Having him steal the spotlight by being an incredibly effective, even spectacular, bodyguard is a fantastic idea. I can just picture a scene where he handles the two threats with a kind of brutal, balletic efficiency in full view of everyone. It would be a different kind of story—more of a grounded, intense thriller—and the media attention would come from his sheer competence and public display of skill. That would be an awesome way to explore the theme, and it might even create a more satisfying arc where his professional excellence, not a hidden talent, is what brings him unwanted fame.
You've given me a lot to think about! It's always so interesting to see the story through another reader's eyes. Thanks again for the great feedback!

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