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“Hey Betty Jo, check out the snow falling outside!” Jeremiah exclaimed, excitement in his eyes.

Betty Jo turned to him, a spark of wonder in her eyes. “Wow, Jeremiah! It’s the first snow of the season. It’s beautiful, like something from a great storybook.”

Jeremiah grinned, unable to hold back. “You know what? I’m gonna write a story about this snow.”

Playfully rolling her eyes, Betty Jo responded, “Of course, you are! You turn everything into a story.”

Jeremiah nodded eagerly. “You bet! I can feel the creative juices flowing. I’m heading to my office to work on it.”

As he went to the kitchen, Jeremiah brewed a hot cup of coffee, savoring its warmth. He leaned in, giving his wife a tender kiss on the forehead. “I’ll be in my office for a few hours,” he said.

Betty Jo grinned, offering her support. “Make it a good one!”

Jeremiah, mischief in his eyes, replied with a wink and a smile, “Oh, it will be. I’ve got a feeling about this one.” Energized by the comforting warmth of the coffee and inspired by the enchanting snowfall, he headed to his office, ready to weave an unforgettable tale.

Jeremiah settled into his seat, ready to roll. He powered up his computer, punched in his credentials to log into his writing app, and swiftly opened the short story template he’d whipped up earlier. After breezing through all the questions, he leaned back in his chair, taking a moment to peruse the words he’d just poured onto the virtual page.

With a satisfied smile stretching across his face, he couldn’t resist the urge to dive right into the next phase. His fingers danced on the keyboard: clickety clack clickety clack clickety clack. The initial rhythm of the keys gradually faded away, giving room for the story to unfurl, line by line, as Jeremiah immersed himself in the creative dance of words.

***

I sat up in bed, the darkness of the room enveloping me as I glanced at the clock that softly ticked away the early hours of the morning. The red numerals on the digital display declared it to be 2 a.m., an hour when the world outside seemed to be in a deep slumber. Despite the hour, an inexplicable wakefulness gripped me, casting a spotlight on the silent moments of the night.

Beside me, my wife lay peacefully, untouched by the restlessness that had claimed my sleep. The ambient glow from the alarm clock traced the contours of her serene face as she remained oblivious to the quiet drama unfolding within me. The room itself held a tranquil ambiance, a sanctuary of stillness disrupted only by the occasional hum of distant nocturnal sounds.

Turning my attention to the foot of the bed, I observed my golden retriever, a loyal companion in the journey of sleep. She lay on her bed, a picture of canine tranquility. Her eyes, adorned with the remnants of dreams, remained tightly shut. The rise and fall of her chest mirrored the rhythmic dance of slumber, inhaling deeply and exhaling in gentle whispers. As I focused on her, a sense of wonder settled upon me, contemplating the mysteries of a dog’s dreamworld.

Her paws twitched intermittently, a subtle symphony of movement betraying the vivid adventures unfurling in her subconscious. In the theater of her mind, she seemed to be chasing rabbits through sunlit meadows or sprinting along sandy shores. I marveled at the enigma of what dreams may occupy her thoughts, a silent narrative playing out in the secret corners of her canine imagination.

A smile tugged at the corners of my lips as I pondered the whimsical notion of a golden retriever’s midnight reverie. Perhaps in her dreams, she was the valiant guardian of our home, warding off unseen threats with a gallant bark and boundless enthusiasm. The night, with its silent whispers and dream-laden hours, unfolded a canvas of possibilities for my faithful companion.

As I sat there, enveloped in the cocoon of the night’s silence, a sense of reverence washed over me, prompting a deep appreciation for these rare moments of self-reflection. The clock, an unyielding witness to the passage of time, continued its rhythmic progression, marking the seconds that slipped away into the tapestry of the night. Yet, within this tranquil interlude between consciousness and slumber, a lingering question stirred within me: What had stirred me from the embrace of sleep?

The room, ordinarily a haven of warmth and familiarity, now seemed to hold a subtle chill in its air. I pondered whether the cold tendrils of the night had stealthily invaded the sanctuary of my dreams, rousing me from the depths of my subconscious. Could it be that the ambient temperature, like a gentle nudge, had conspired with the quietude to pry open my eyes?

A silent exploration of my thoughts led me to a revelation. It wasn’t an external disturbance that had disrupted my repose; rather, it was the remnants of a dream lingering in the recesses of my mind. As the contours of the dream began to crystallize, I found myself standing on the precipice of wakefulness, the dream’s ethereal tendrils gradually pulling me into the realm of the fully conscious.

I rose from the bed, the gravity of wakefulness settling upon my shoulders. The realization that I was now wide awake dawned upon me, accompanied by the acceptance that the gentle lull of sleep would be elusive for the time being. My mind, once tethered to the whims of a dreamworld, was now fully engaged in the quietude of the night.

A peculiar thought echoed through the corridors of my mind: the allure of a cup of hot chocolate. It beckoned to me like a comforting ritual, a sensory indulgence that held the promise of warmth and solace in the quiet hours before dawn. With a decisive nod, I resolved to embark on this nocturnal journey, a quest for both sustenance and respite.

As I navigated the dimly lit corridors of my home, the remnants of the dream continued to dance in the recesses of my thoughts. Each step brought me further from the ephemeral realm of sleep and closer to the tangible comforts of waking life. The clock, now a distant hum, served as a constant companion in the stillness, bearing witness to the quiet introspection that unfolded in the wake of a dream.

With a gentle cascade, I poured the milk into my cherished cup, the ceramic vessel bearing the patina of countless shared moments. A generous swirl of Hershey’s chocolate syrup followed, a rich elixir that promised to transform the ordinary into a comforting indulgence. Placing the cup into the microwave, I watched as the liquid concoction danced and melded, the sweet aroma of chocolate permeating the air.

As the seconds passed, the anticipation of the warm beverage intensified. The hum of the microwave became a soothing melody, heralding the creation of a concoction that would serve as both balm and companion in the stillness of the night. Finally, with a soft beep, the microwave signaled the completion of its task, and I retrieved the cup, now cradling a steaming blend of chocolate and warmth.

Cup in hand, I gravitated towards the patio door, drawn by the allure of the moonlit canvas outside. The night unfolded before me, bathed in the silvery glow of the moon. The grass of my backyard, an ethereal sea of green, sparkled under the celestial spotlight, a tranquil expanse that seemed to stretch into infinity.

Leaning against the doorframe, I took a deliberate sip of the hot brew, feeling the comforting warmth cascade down my throat. The chocolatey elixir provided a sensory sanctuary, a momentary respite from the enigma of the night. The quietude of the moonlit scene invited contemplation, a silent communion with the world beyond the glass.

In the midst of this solitary reverie, a subtle nudge interrupted my thoughts. Turning my gaze downward, I discovered the source of the interruption—my golden retriever, a silent sentinel, had positioned herself beside me. Her head pressed gently against my leg, a silent gesture that spoke volumes of companionship and affection. The warmth of her presence, both physical and emotional, added an extra layer of comfort to the moment.

As we stood together, bathed in the moon’s silver glow, a silent understanding passed between us. The shared solitude of the night, the comforting ritual of hot chocolate, and the silent companionship of my golden retriever converged into a tableau of serenity. In that quiet moment, I found solace in the simple pleasures, each sip of the brew a reminder of the delicate threads that weave the tapestry of our lives.

I shifted my gaze back to the backyard, and there, against the velvety darkness of the night, I discerned the first ethereal hints of winter. Snowflakes, delicate and weightless, began their descent from the heavens. It was a subtle ballet, each flake pirouetting gracefully in the night air. Their initial descent was almost imperceptible, a gentle cascade that mirrored nature’s careful brushstrokes on the canvas of the night.

As moments unfolded, the tempo of the snowfall changed. What began as a languid descent gradually quickened, the flakes now falling with purpose and determination. In the quiet theater of the night, the metamorphosis from a gentle fall to a full-fledged snowstorm unfolded before my eyes.

The memory of my dream resurfaced, carried on the wings of the snowflakes. In the dream, a nostalgic journey with my beloved Black Lab played out. She, a loyal companion now dwelling beyond the rainbow bridge, manifested in the realm of dreams. The scene unfolded in a familiar park, a place where we had shared countless moments of joy.

The dream embraced me like a warm blanket as the snowfall intensified outside. In this dreamt landscape, my Black Lab, a paragon of canine exuberance, materialized beside me. The dream-park transformed into a winter wonderland, and as the first snowflakes adorned her ebony fur, a spark of joy illuminated her eyes.

In the dream’s silent choreography, she leaped and bounded through the pristine blanket of snow. Her movements were a symphony of nostalgia and unrestrained delight, a canine ballet that echoed the joyful romps of winters past. I could almost hear the phantom echoes of her barks and see the shimmering droplets of melted snow on her fur.

As the real-time snowfall mirrored the dream’s enchantment, I stood there, a silent spectator to the convergence of two worlds. The dream and reality intertwined in the dance of falling snowflakes, each one carrying the whispers of canine joy and the enduring magic of shared memories. In the quiet of the night, I marveled at the alchemy of dreams, snow, and the timeless imprint of a Black Lab’s spirit in the recesses of my mind.

With the remnants of warmth lingering in the porcelain cup, I surveyed the scene before me, and there, at my feet, was Piper, the embodiment of canine cheerfulness. Her golden coat glistened under the moonlight, and her expressive eyes met mine with an undeniable spark of curiosity. The corners of her mouth curled into that quintessential Golden Retriever grin, a gesture that spoke volumes without uttering a single word.

In the silent exchange between human and dog, it was almost as if Piper was posing a question with her radiant gaze. Her demeanor seemed to inquire, “Are you retreating to the embrace of sleep, or shall we revel in the mysteries of the night together?” It was a canine invitation, a subtle query that resonated with the timeless connection between a pet and its owner.

The empty cup found its place in the sink, a quiet punctuation mark to the ritual of hot chocolate and moonlit contemplation. Breaking the stillness, I verbalized my decision, half to myself and half to Piper, “Let’s go back to bed, little pup!” Her tail wagged in agreement, and with a graceful trot, she led the way back to her cozy resting spot, a loyal sentinel returning to her post.

Returning to the comfort of the bed, I found solace in the familiar contours of my sleeping quarters. As I settled in, the muted voice of my wife emerged from the cocoon of sleep, her inquiry draped in drowsy curiosity, “What are you doing up?” In response, I shared the nocturnal revelation, “It’s snowing.” Her half-awake retort, accompanied by an eye roll, carried an unspoken directive, “Go back to sleep.” And so, with a smile playing on my lips, I acquiesced to the wisdom of rest.

As the room once again succumbed to the quietude of the night, I whispered a gentle “Goodnight” to the slumbering world around me. Piper nestled in her bed, dreams of snowflakes and playful escapades dancing in her canine imagination. The allure of sleep reclaimed its hold, and with a contented sigh, I closed my eyes, leaving the snow-kissed night to its own enchantments.


 ©12/04/2023, R. L. Whitmire, All Rights Reserved 

December 04, 2023 17:32

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J. D. Lair
04:30 Dec 10, 2023

Such a detailed and enchanting tale of the first night of snow! Welcome to Reedsy Rick. :)

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