The rain pelted against the windows of Harker Veterinary Clinic with the persistence of a neglected house pet. Dr. Adrian Harker glanced outside, watching rivulets of water compete in their journey down the glass, a race with no winner. Just like his career.
"Dr. Harker, Mrs. Pemberton is here with Muffin. Again." Jenny, his receptionist, emphasized the last word with the exasperation of someone who had seen this scenario play out weekly.
"Muffin," Adrian muttered, rubbing his temples. "Let me guess—breathing problems?"
"She says he's been making 'concerning noises.'"
When Mrs. Pemberton entered, Muffin—a plump Pomeranian with enough fur to stuff three pillows—looked as distressed as a lottery winner.
"Doctor, he's been making these terrible wheezing sounds all night." Mrs. Pemberton cradled Muffin like a newborn. "I just know something's terribly wrong."
Adrian took Muffin, placing him on the examination table. The dog immediately perked up, tail wagging.
"Mrs. Pemberton," Adrian began, his tone clinical, "Muffin has what we in the profession call... obesity. This remarkable condition occurs when an animal consumes more calories than it expends."
"But the noises—"
"Are the sound of a dog struggling to breathe under a layer of fat that would make a seal blush." Adrian ran practiced hands over Muffin. "Your dog isn't dying. He's just living the American dream—excessive consumption with minimal effort."
After Mrs. Pemberton huffed out, Jenny appeared with coffee.
"You know," she said, leaning against the doorframe, "for someone who claims to hate animals, you're remarkably good at keeping them alive."
"The puzzle is the thing," Adrian replied, sipping the bitter liquid. "The animal is just the delivery system for the medical mystery."
Jenny handed him a note. "Call came in while you were insulting Mrs. Pemberton. Dead dog at 47 Mapleton Drive. House-sitter found it this morning."
"Call the crematorium."
"They asked specifically for you. Something about the circumstances being 'unusual.' Said you'd find it... interesting."
Adrian's cup paused halfway to his lips. "Interesting how?"
"They wouldn't say. Just that it was a Shih Tzu, and you should come yourself."
Adrian set his cup down. "Cancel my afternoon."
"Already did," Jenny replied with a knowing smile. "Watson anticipated Holmes."
Mapleton Drive was a street of tasteful wealth—the kind that had enough money to avoid ostentation. Number 47 was a Victorian with meticulous landscaping and a blue Tesla in the driveway.
A woman in yoga pants and an oversized sweatshirt opened the door before Adrian could knock. Her eyes were red-rimmed, but her face was oddly composed.
"Dr. Harker? I'm Zoe Lawson. I'm house-sitting for the Palmers. Thank you for coming so quickly. It's... in the living room."
In the living room, on an expensive-looking rug, lay a small, still form. A Shih Tzu with the distinctive pushed-in face and flowing coat characteristic of the breed, though now matted with what appeared to be vomit.
Adrian knelt, pulling on latex gloves from his bag. "When did you find it?"
"This morning. Around seven. I came down to feed him and..."
"Where were you last night?"
Zoe blinked. "Excuse me?"
"Last night. Where were you when the dog was presumably dying?"
"I was here. Upstairs. I took a sleeping pill. I didn't hear anything."
Adrian examined the dog without touching it. "The Palmers are where?"
"Amalfi Coast. Two-week vacation."
"And you've been staying here how long?"
"Five days. Look, Dr. Harker, I know this looks bad, but Pookie was fine yesterday. Eating, playing, normal."
Adrian raised an eyebrow. "Pookie?"
"That's his name. Pookie Palmer. It's on his collar tag."
Adrian touched the dog, lifting the collar. The tag read "Pookie Palmer" with the address and a phone number.
"What did he eat yesterday?"
"His regular food. The Palmers left detailed instructions. Royal Canin, specific for Shih Tzus. I measure it exactly."
Adrian opened the dog's mouth, sniffed, then felt along its abdomen. He pulled out his phone and took several photos.
"Did you move the body?"
"No! I found him just like this. Why would I move him?"
"People often reposition their dead, as if a more dignified pose might retroactively provide a more dignified death." Adrian stood. "I'll need to take the body for examination."
As Adrian turned to leave, the front door opened, and a uniformed police officer entered. She was compact and athletic, with intelligent eyes that quickly assessed the room.
"Ms. Lawson? Officer Mira Sanchez. We got a call about a disturbance—" She stopped when she saw Adrian. "Dr. Harker. Should have known you'd be involved when dispatch mentioned a dead animal."
"Officer Sanchez. Fascinating timing. Who reported a disturbance?"
"Neighbor said they heard shouting." Mira glanced at the bag in Adrian's hand. "That the disturbance?"
"Unless Ms. Lawson has another dead body tucked away, yes."
Outside, Adrian placed the bag carefully in his vehicle.
"So," Mira leaned against his car, "what's your actual interest in a dead lap dog?"
"Whatever makes you think I have an interest beyond professional duty?"
"Because Adrian Harker doesn't make house calls for routine deaths. Which means you think this isn't routine."
Adrian studied her for a moment. "The dog's condition doesn't match the timeline. Rigor mortis suggests death occurred approximately 36 hours ago, yet the house-sitter claims it was alive yesterday evening."
"Maybe she's mistaken."
"Or lying." Adrian closed his trunk. "Either way, not my concern. I'm just the animal disposal service."
"Right," Mira said dryly. "And I'm just responding to a noise complaint."
"Glad we understand each other." Adrian opened his car door. "By the way, there was no shouting. Someone wanted you here when I arrived."
"Paranoid much?"
"It's not paranoia when they're actually watching," Adrian said, nodding toward a house across the street where curtains quickly closed.
Mira straightened. "I'll look into it. Just... try not to accuse anyone of murder before you have proof, okay? Chief's still mad about the iguana incident."
"That was clearly foul play. The stomach contents proved it."
"It ate a Christmas ornament, Adrian. That's not murder, it's poor pet supervision."
Back at his clinic, Adrian performed a thorough examination of the dog. The cause of death appeared to be poisoning—probably antifreeze, given the crystalline residue in the mouth and kidney damage. But something else caught his attention.
The dog's teeth showed signs of different care than would be expected from the Palmer household. The expensive collar and well-maintained coat suggested owners who spared no expense, yet the dental work was minimal—a less costly approach.
He compared his photos with photos visible in the Palmers' home. The markings around the eyes were subtly different. Similar, but not identical.
Adrian called the number from the dog's tag.
"Palmer residence," a woman's voice answered.
"This is Dr. Adrian Harker, veterinarian. I'm calling about your dog."
"Pookie? Is something wrong? We've been checking in with Zoe daily, and she says he's been fine."
"When did you last actually see Pookie? Via video, perhaps?"
"Hmm, Zoe sent photos two days ago, but her last video was... four days ago, I believe. Why?"
"No particular reason. Routine follow-up. Enjoy the Amalfi Coast."
Adrian hung up and dialed another number.
"Officer Sanchez."
"I need access to the HomeCare app database. Specifically, Zoe Lawson's history."
"Hello to you too, Adrian. And no, I can't just hack into private company data because you're curious."
"The dog that died isn't the Palmers' dog."
A pause. "You sure?"
"Different dental pattern, slight variation in facial markings. The dead dog is a Shih Tzu, but not Pookie Palmer."
"That's... weird. But not necessarily criminal."
"Someone replaced the Palmers' dog with a similar-looking dead one. That's not weird, Mira. That's premeditated."
"Fine. Come to the station. We'll talk."
"So," Mira said, spreading photos on her desk, "you think someone stole the real Pookie and planted a dead lookalike."
"I don't think, I know. The dental patterns are distinctive. Shih Tzus are prone to dental overcrowding due to their brachycephalic skull structure—their faces are essentially deformed by selective breeding to achieve that 'cute' pushed-in look. The real Pookie had extensive dental work. This dog had minimal care."
"Motive?"
"That's your department."
Mira leaned back. "You know, normal vets don't investigate. They console, they cremate, they send a sympathy card."
"Normal is vastly overrated. As is consolation."
"Something personal about this case?"
Adrian's face hardened momentarily. "Simply professional curiosity."
Mira ran a property check on 47 Mapleton Drive.
"Owner is listed as Palmer Family Trust. Purchased three years ago. Everything looks legitimate."
"Check for recent activity. Sales listings, refinancing."
Mira typed, then stopped. "Weird. The house was listed for sale last month, then suddenly pulled from the market."
"Check for other properties owned by the Palmer Family Trust."
More typing. "Nothing local. Wait—there's an LLC connection. Palmer Family Trust is managed by Westview Property Management, which is owned by... BestLife Retirement Communities."
"A retirement home company owns a residential property management firm that created a family trust to buy an upscale home?" Adrian's eyes narrowed. "Doesn't that strike you as excessively complicated?"
"It's not illegal to have a convoluted business structure."
"No, but it's perfect for hiding assets or laundering money."
Mira searched further. "BestLife has had multiple investigations for fraud, elder abuse, and financial mismanagement. No convictions, but they've settled several lawsuits."
"And now they're branching into residential properties. How convenient."
"Still doesn't explain the dog switch."
"We're missing something. This isn't just about a dog or a house. It's larger."
"Maybe we should talk to the real homeowners? The deed record shows the house was sold to the Palmer Trust by a couple named Montgomery."
Eleanor Montgomery was in her seventies, with sharp eyes and sharper wit. Her assisted living apartment was modest but comfortable.
"Of course I remember Pookie," she said, offering them tea. "My husband Arthur bred Shih Tzus for thirty years. Pookie was special—his bloodline goes back to the original Chinese imperial dogs. Arthur refused to sell him, even after we had to downsize."
"So what happened to Pookie?" Mira asked gently.
"When we moved here, pets weren't allowed. Arthur found a lovely family to take him—the Garcias. They promised to continue his breeding program. Arthur passed last year, but knowing Pookie was carrying on his legacy was a comfort."
"Mrs. Montgomery," Adrian said, "the Garcias—do they live at 47 Mapleton Drive?"
"Goodness, no. They're in Westlake. Why?"
"And you sold your house to the Palmer Family Trust?"
"Palmer? No, dear. We sold to BestLife. It was part of the deal for moving here—they bought our house at market value to secure our place in this facility. Said they'd resell it."
On the drive back, Mira processed this information. "So BestLife bought the house but never resold it. Instead, they created a fake family to live there. But why?"
"Because Pookie is valuable—not just as a pet, but as breeding stock. A dog with his pedigree could produce puppies worth thousands each."
"Still seems like a lot of trouble for dog breeding."
"It's not about the dog specifically," Adrian said. "It's about the pattern. BestLife buys properties from elderly clients moving into their facilities, then uses those properties for other purposes while claiming they've been sold."
They were so engrossed in conversation that neither noticed the black SUV following them until it accelerated suddenly, ramming their rear bumper. Mira fought for control as their car swerved.
The impact sent them spinning toward a ditch. Adrian braced himself as the car left the road, sliding down an embankment before crashing into bushes.
Through the powder and confusion, Adrian saw the SUV pause briefly at the roadside before speeding away.
"Mira?" He turned to find her slumped against her seatbelt, a trickle of blood on her forehead. "Mira!"
She groaned. "I'm okay. Just... dizzy."
"That was no accident." Adrian supported her weight as they climbed the embankment. "Someone doesn't want us asking questions about Pookie or the Palmers."
With Mira under observation at the hospital, Adrian visited the Garcia home in Westlake.
"Mrs. Garcia? I'm Dr. Adrian Harker. I believe you adopted a Shih Tzu named Pookie from Arthur Montgomery."
Her face clouded. "Yes, but we don't have him anymore. There was an accident last week. Pookie got out and was hit by a car."
"I'm sorry to hear that. Which vet handled the remains?"
"Lakeside Animal Hospital. Dr. Brenner."
"And had anyone shown interest in Pookie before the accident? Perhaps offered to buy him?"
Mrs. Garcia frowned. "Actually, yes. A woman came by about a month ago. Said she represented a buyer interested in his bloodline. Offered twenty thousand dollars."
"Did you get her name?"
"Lisa Palmer. She left a card..." Mrs. Garcia disappeared briefly, returning with a business card. "Here."
The card read "Lisa Palmer, Exclusive Breeding Rights Acquisitions" with a phone number.
At Lakeside Animal Hospital, Dr. Brenner confirmed Pookie had died the previous Wednesday from a hit-and-run. He mentioned the dog had a heart murmur and unusual dentition, supporting Adrian's theory that the real Pookie and the dead dog found at the Palmer residence were different animals.
Adrian called Mira at the hospital.
"I found the real Pookie. He's dead—hit-and-run last week."
"So our theory was wrong?"
"Only partially. BestLife did want Pookie for breeding, but he died before they could acquire him. So they staged his death at the fake Palmer house—probably for insurance fraud."
"But that doesn't explain why someone tried to kill us."
"Exactly. The dog case was a thread that, when pulled, revealed a much larger tapestry of fraud. BestLife isn't just running a pet scam—they're systematically defrauding seniors."
Later, Adrian received a call from Eleanor Montgomery.
"Dr. Harker? It's Eleanor Montgomery. I just wanted to thank you for asking about Pookie. It made me realize I haven't seen photos of him in ages, so I called the Garcias. They told me what happened."
"Yes, I'm sorry for your loss."
"Arthur would have been devastated. Pookie was the last of his special breeding line."
Adrian frowned. "The last? I thought the point was to continue the breeding program."
"Oh, that was the plan, but Pookie had a heart condition. The Garcias had him neutered on the vet's recommendation. His bloodline ended with him."
Adrian sat up straight. "He was neutered? You're certain?"
"Yes, shortly after they got him. Why?"
If Pookie was neutered, he had no breeding value. The entire premise of their theory collapsed.
He dialed Mira again.
"We've been looking at this all wrong. Pookie wasn't valuable for breeding—he was neutered years ago. This was never about the dog."
"Then what was it about?"
"I think the Palmers needed a reason to have someone in that house. A house-sitter for a beloved pet provides the perfect cover for someone to occupy the property temporarily without raising suspicions."
"But occupy it for what purpose?"
Adrian stared at the address. "47 Mapleton Drive. What's nearby?"
"Residential area... wait, it backs up to the hillside overlooking Ridgemont Bank's main branch."
"A bank. Of course. They're planning a heist. The house provides the perfect vantage point for surveillance, and a legitimate reason for someone to be there around the clock."
"That's... actually plausible. I'll call Thompson immediately."
Two days later, Mira entered Adrian's examination room, a small bandage still on her forehead.
"You were right," she said. "Thompson had the fraud unit watch the house. Last night they caught four people using it as a base for a bank robbery—they'd been tunneling from the basement toward the bank's vault. BestLife is being investigated for multiple counts of fraud, and Zoe Lawson is cooperating in exchange for immunity."
"Fascinating," Adrian said, continuing his examination of a tabby cat.
"That's it? 'Fascinating'? You helped stop a major bank robbery and expose elder fraud."
"I identified a deceased canine correctly. The rest was incidental."
Mira leaned against the examination table. "You know, for someone who claims to hate animals, you went to extraordinary lengths over one dead dog."
"The puzzle—"
"Was the thing. Yeah, I've heard that line." Mira studied him. "Or maybe you actually care."
Adrian said nothing, focusing intently on the cat.
"Anyway," Mira continued, "I thought you'd like to know they found receipts for the purchase of multiple Shih Tzus. They've pulled this scam before with different houses, different banks. The fake Pookie's death was planned from the beginning—a reason to end the house-sitting job once the tunnel was complete."
After the cat's owner left, Mira said, "Would you like to get dinner sometime? When we're not investigating dead dogs or getting run off roads?"
Adrian looked genuinely surprised. "Why?"
"Because despite your best efforts to be unlikable, you're actually not. Plus, I find your deductive reasoning oddly attractive."
"That's..." Adrian searched for words. "...unexpected."
"Think about it." Mira headed for the door. "Oh, and the Montgomerys asked if you'd consider taking their next Shih Tzu as a patient. Apparently they're getting another puppy—the facility changed its pet policy after the BestLife scandal broke."
Later, Adrian's phone buzzed with a text from Mira: "Dinner? Friday? I promise no one will try to kill us."
For the first time in longer than he could remember, Adrian Harker smiled—a real smile, not the clinical approximation he usually offered patients' owners.
"Jenny," he called through the intercom, "reschedule Friday evening's appointments."
The rain pelted against the windows of Harker Veterinary Clinic with the persistence of a neglected house pet. But somehow, it seemed less like a race with no winner and more like the steady rhythm of possibilities.
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Clever and well thought out.
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Thanks so much, Carolyn! 😊 I had a blast crafting all those little misdirections while keeping Dr. Harker's sharp edges intact. There's something delightful about a protagonist who's prickly on the surface but can't quite hide his true nature. Wonder what childhood experience with a pet shaped him this way? That's a mystery for another day... 🤔 Really appreciate you taking the time to read!
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Logic has been the downfall of a few of my submissions and I think you hit all the logic in this piece.
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I loved this, it made me think of a very clever cross between Sherlock Holmes, Dr house and Ace Ventura! As complex as you would expect, it was a compelling mystery that unravelled at the perfect pace for the word count.
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James, you absolutely read my mind! 🤗 Those three were exactly the inspiration cocktail for Dr. Harker. I've loved Holmes since childhood, and when House appeared on television, I felt that curious mix of delight and "now why didn't I write that first" that fellow storytellers understand.
The way you picked up on those influences without me spelling them out - that's the kind of reader connection that makes this whole writing journey worthwhile. There's something quietly satisfying about someone seeing exactly what you were aiming for. 💫
I'm curious to see where Dr. Harker might go next - that dinner with Officer Sanchez could lead anywhere, and there's no shortage of medical mysteries waiting at his clinic door. If readers are intrigued by his particular brand of abrasive brilliance, who knows what cases might find their way to him... 😊
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