The Final Upload: A Tale of Courage and Sacrifice

Submitted into Contest #285 in response to: Write a story with a character or the narrator saying “I remember…”... view prompt

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Drama Fiction Suspense

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

The air was thick with tension inside the hidden safehouse. Abby, Marsha, Jacob, and Daniel sat around a dimly lit table; their faces illuminated by the glow of a laptop screen. The sound of distant gunfire and sirens had become a grim background symphony in their lives.

“I remember when all of this was different,” Abby said softly, her voice breaking the heavy silence. She glanced at Marsha, who nodded in agreement.

“Yeah,” Marsha added. “I remember when we were filming makeup tutorials and fashion hauls without a care in the world. It feels like a lifetime ago.”

Jacob leaned back in his chair, running a hand through his disheveled hair. “I remember...when the biggest thing we worried about was losing followers because of an algorithm change. Now we’re fighting for our lives.”

Daniel, ever the pragmatist, tapped a few keys on the laptop, bringing up footage they had recorded the previous night. “And yet, here we are. Documenting atrocities instead of unboxing gadgets. This,” he said, gesturing to the screen, “is what matters now.”

The video played silently. It showed brutal images of soldiers dragging people into the streets, punishing them for minor infractions. Torture, executions, disappearances — all captured through the lenses of their makeshift body cams. The GoPro’s strapped to their chests had become their lifeline, their only weapon against the regime.

“Do you think anyone will see this?” Marsha asked. Her voice wavered, but there was a flicker of hope in her eyes.

Daniel gave her a reassuring smile. “They will. I’ve fine-tuned the device to pick up Wi-Fi signals from miles away. Jacob’s masking it, so they won’t know where it’s coming from.”

Jacob interjected, “At least not immediately. We have a window, but it’s small. We’ll have to act fast.”

The conversation was interrupted by the sound of muffled sobs. The freed prisoners huddled together in the corner of the room, their faces etched with despair. One of them, a middle-aged man named Elias, spoke up.

“I remember...when the streets were filled with laughter and music,” he said, his voice trembling. “Now they’re filled with fear. My wife...my children...they’re gone. And I don’t even know if they’re alive.”

A young woman beside him, barely more than a teenager, wiped her tears. “I remember when I used to dance. Now I’m too afraid to even step outside.”

Abby reached out, placing a comforting hand on the girl’s shoulder. “We’ll make sure the world sees this. They need to know what’s happening here.”

The group spent the next few hours piecing together the video. They included interviews with the prisoners, footage of the brutal punishments, and a heartfelt plea for help. Each frame was a testament to the horrors they had witnessed and the courage it took to document them.

Finally, the video was ready. The four influencers gathered around Daniel’s device as he initiated the upload. The tension in the room was palpable as the progress bar inched forward.

“This is it,” Daniel said. “Once it’s out there, there’s no turning back.”

“Good,” Abby said firmly. “Enough is enough.”

The upload was completed, and the device powered down. For a moment, there was a collective sigh of relief. They had done it. Their message was out there.

But the relief was short-lived. The lights in the safehouse flickered and went out. The hum of the generators died, plunging the room into darkness.

“What just happened?” Marsha whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of her heart.

Daniel’s face was illuminated by the glow of his flashlight. “This isn’t a regular outage. It’s a cyber-attack. THEY KNOW.”

Moments later, the faint sound of helicopter blades filled the air. It grew louder, accompanied by the unmistakable rumble of heavy trucks and the clatter of marching boots. The influencers exchanged fearful glances as the reality of their situation set in.

“They’re here,” Jacob said grimly.

Through the cracks in the boarded-up windows, they saw them: soldiers in heavy tactical gear and gas masks with glowing red eyes. The masks were grotesque, resembling nightmarish creatures, and the glowing eyes pierced through the darkness like malevolent specters. Hundreds of them surrounded the safehouse, their eerie presence amplified by the oppressive silence.

A bright light flooded the room, followed by a booming voice.

“All occupants, come out with your hands up or face dire consequences.”

The freed prisoners exchanged terrified glances. Elias was the first to stand, his shoulders slumping in resignation. “There’s no hope,” he said. “We can’t fight them.”

One by one, the prisoners shuffled toward the door. The influencers tried to stop them, but their pleas fell on deaf ears. As the door creaked open, the sound of gunfire erupted. The prisoners were gunned down mercilessly, their bodies crumpling to the ground.

The safehouse was breached. Soldiers stormed in, their glowing eyes a harbinger of doom. Jacob and Marsha exchanged a glance, a silent understanding passing between them.

“We won’t be taken alive,” Jacob said, pulling a Molotov cocktail from his bag.

Marsha nodded, tears streaming down her face. “I love you.”

“I love you too,” Jacob replied.

They embraced one final time before Jacob smashed the Molotov onto the floor. Flames erupted, consuming them both as soldiers poured into the room. Abby and Daniel screamed, their cries drowned out by the roar of the fire.

The soldiers grabbed Abby and Daniel, dragging them outside. The couple was thrown onto their knees, their hands bound behind their backs. They were loaded into a truck and taken away, their fate uncertain.

Days turned into a blur of pain and humiliation. Abby and Daniel were beaten, starved, and flogged daily. They were paraded through the streets as a warning to others, their broken bodies a testament to the regime’s cruelty.

On the seventh day, they were brought to a public square. A platform had been erected, and the crowd gathered in eerie silence. Abby and Daniel were tied to stakes, their mouths gagged and their legs bound. They exchanged a final, tearful glance as the executioner approached.

The man drew a pistol, aiming it at Daniel. Abby closed her eyes, bracing for the inevitable.

A deafening crack shattered the silence. Abby’s eyes snapped open to see the executioner collapse, a bullet hole in his forehead. Chaos erupted as more soldiers fell, one by one. The crowd panicked, trampling each other in their desperate attempt to flee.

Masked figures descended from the surrounding buildings, armed to the teeth. They moved with precision, neutralizing the soldiers and freeing Abby and Daniel.

“Come on,” one of them said, pulling Abby to her feet. “There’s more work to be done.”

Abby and Daniel exchanged a look of disbelief, their pain momentarily forgotten. They had survived, but their fight was far from over. The world had seen their message. Now, it was time to finish what they had started.

January 16, 2025 22:53

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14 comments

Carolyn O'B
19:25 Jan 19, 2025

I thought this was well written, and the open ending seems to work. The only advice I would have, is to maybe add smell descriptions, such as the smell of the fire.

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DionTre Speller
14:18 Jan 20, 2025

Thank you, I should have described the smell. That would have been some great detail. Thanks for the tips and Happy writing.

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Mary Butler
23:23 Jan 18, 2025

Wow, what an intense and gripping story! I loved the line, “And yet, here we are. Documenting atrocities instead of unboxing gadgets. This...is what matters now.”—it perfectly captures the weight of their transformation from influencers to activists, and it’s so poignant in today’s world of fleeting online trends. The pacing kept me on the edge of my seat, and the ending delivered a mix of hope and tension that really landed. This was powerful and beautifully written—thank you for sharing such a vivid and thought-provoking piece!

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DionTre Speller
14:19 Jan 20, 2025

Thank you so much for reading. A animation for this story is in the works.

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Mary Butler
15:28 Jan 20, 2025

Please let me know when the animation is finished!! I would love to watch it. Do you have any recommendations for someone who is learning how to do animation for stories?

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DionTre Speller
19:34 Jan 20, 2025

Will do. Here are two YouTube videos from creators I like for animation. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN5oBhdqzKs https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1a8a_a5qORY Also, Fivver is a great place to help as well with many people who can help your animations, sounds, and more. Hope this helps.

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Mary Butler
22:28 Jan 20, 2025

Thank you for sharing! I have not ran across these content creators before and did not think of Fivver!!

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Charis Keith
22:04 Jan 18, 2025

This is really good! You captured the emotion very well. Needs a sequel!!

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DionTre Speller
23:53 Jan 18, 2025

Thank you for reading. I have more of the story written and I am working on a animation for it as well.

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Deborah Sanders
03:01 Jan 18, 2025

Your story is told in such a gripping way. I am left wanting to know what happens next.

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DionTre Speller
13:40 Jan 18, 2025

Thank you so much. I do have more of the story that I will be doing a animation on it.

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Deborah Sanders
18:22 Jan 18, 2025

That sounds really interesting. I hope you find ways to publish more of this story on here.

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JaTwan Speller
02:57 Jan 17, 2025

This is really good!

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DionTre Speller
13:33 Jan 17, 2025

Thank you

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