Left at the Turnoff

Written in response to: "Write a story about someone who trusts or follows the wrong person."

Crime

Cam didn’t ask questions until the truck was already three towns past where he meant to get off.

He’d been scraping grease from under his fingernails for weeks, trying to save enough to leave the county. He had two hundred and sixteen dollars in a coffee tin back at his mom’s trailer and a Nokia so old it only had Snake and three saved contacts—two of them disconnected.

Then Reese pulled up in the F-150, engine coughing like it had secrets, window down, smile thin.

“You still trying to get outta here?” Reese asked.

Cam didn’t hesitate. Slid in like it was already his seat.

Reese talked the whole way. Stories about oil fields and crooked bosses, women with nicknames like “Razor” and “Trouble,” places he’d been, fights he hadn’t started but had always finished.

It felt easy. Cam hadn’t felt easy in months.

Reese didn’t ask questions about Cam’s life, which was maybe why Cam talked. Told him about Kevin—the man who lived with his mother, screamed during football, kicked holes in the drywall, made promises and threats with the same breath.

Cam said he wanted to be a mechanic. Reese said he already was. That was the kind of thing Reese did—handed out confidence like it was on clearance.

Somewhere past Dunning, Reese said he had a job lined up.

“Nothing nasty. No weapons. Just need a second set of eyes and a warm engine.”

Cam hesitated.

“It’s hands-off,” Reese said. “You just sit in the truck. No drama. Like being a lamp in the corner.”

Cam laughed. “Lamps don’t get arrested.”

Reese grinned. “Only if they’re plugged into the wrong wall.”

They hit the motel just after midnight. One of those sagging roadside joints that clings to the edge of a town no one wants to claim. The neon sign said VACANCY but the 'A' flickered like it was trying to warn someone.

Reese parked under a busted security light and peeled off his hoodie. Black shirt. Black jeans. No logos, no patterns. He moved with the kind of calm that made Cam nervous.

Reese handed him a flip phone held together with a rubber band.

“Only answer if it rings once, then twice. That’s me.”

“What’s in the room?” Cam asked.

Reese didn’t look up. “A correction.”

He walked off toward the row of doors. Didn’t look back once.

Cam stayed in the cab, hands loose on the wheel, engine humming under him like a nervous animal. His foot tapped. He didn’t remember telling it to.

There were no clocks, but time crawled. His eyes kept drifting to the motel door. His thumb hovered over the ignition key. He thought about just leaving. Thought about his little sister Layla, who used to sleep on the floor of his room when Kevin got mean.

He remembered one night Kevin had thrown a bowl across the kitchen. It missed their mom and shattered on the fridge. Cam didn’t move. Layla did. She stood between them like a bodyguard in a cartoon nightgown.

He didn’t know why that memory came now.

Seventeen minutes in, the sirens started. Far off. Then closer. A single burst of red and blue skimmed across the parking lot.

The door opened. Reese burst out, pillowcase in hand, blood soaking the bottom.

“Drive,” he said, jumping into the truck bed.

Cam didn’t think. He hit the gas.

They tore through the county like it didn’t exist. Reese didn’t speak. Just slammed the bed of the truck twice to signal turns.

At mile marker 211, Reese hit the roof again.

“Pull off here,” he shouted.

Cam turned onto a gravel shoulder, tires coughing dust. A forgotten rest stop—just a warped bench, a porta-john leaning at an angle, and the outline of woods that looked too thin to hide anything.

Reese climbed out, hand pressed to his ribs. He staggered once, dropped to his knees, dry-heaved, then stood.

“I’ll be back,” he said. “Just need a minute.”

He vanished into the trees with the pillowcase.

Cam left the engine running.

He waited.

Twenty minutes.

Then an hour.

No Reese.

Cam got out. Popped the hood. Engine fine. Battery light flickering, but not dead.

He paced. Drank the last of a warm soda from under the seat. Picked at the frayed hem of his shirt. Looked at the tree line.

Still no Reese.

The bag was in the truck bed.

Cam stared at it. Then grabbed it. The pillowcase felt damp in places and stiff in others. Blood crusted the edges.

He opened it.

Bundles of cash. Neatly rubber-banded stacks of twenties, fifties, a few hundreds. Maybe five grand total. Maybe more.

Underneath, something heavier: a broken flip phone with a cracked screen.

And below that, a photo.

A kid. Four or five. Shirtless. Dirt on his face. Grinning like nothing bad had ever happened. Holding a red toy firetruck.

The photo wasn’t old. The gloss hadn’t even faded.

Cam looked closer.

The kid’s face…

It looked like Layla.

Not really. But enough. Same cheekbones. Same half-tooth smile.

Cam folded the picture in half. Put it back. Reached for the cash. Then stopped.

He could run.

He thought about it. Every step. Ditch the truck. Cut east. Call in a fake report. Say the truck was stolen. Get a bus out of state. Start fresh.

But what if Reese wasn’t coming back because someone made sure he wouldn’t?

What if this wasn’t a correction?

What if this was a setup?

The battery died just before sunrise.

Cam had let the heater run too long. The ignition clicked. No turn. He cursed, kicked the tire, then sat on the bumper with his head in his hands.

The cruiser rolled in quiet. No lights. No siren.

Sheriff’s deputy. Late thirties. No nonsense in her posture. She parked with the ease of someone who’d done this dance before.

Cam stood as she stepped out. Arms loose. No sudden moves.

“You alright?” she asked.

Cam nodded. Then shook his head.

“I’ve got a story for you,” he said, and held up the pillowcase.

“But you won’t believe the ending.”

Posted May 05, 2025
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