Trigger warning: this story contains death and suicide.
Gloria has eyes that follow you anywhere in the room. Posed with her hands folded in front of her slender body. She sits with quiet patience with a hint of a smile on her youthful face. She wears clothes from an era long gone, elbow-length satin gloves, a large pearl necklace, and a red fedora. She is my husband's great, great grandmother.
Gloria is my new companion in the drawing room. She sits above the mantel on her ancient canvas and watches in silence as I pour through the papers on the table. I hate Gloria with her tracking eyes, and I pity her. Born in 1907, she became the heiress of her family’s industrial fortune in 1925. She was the first woman from her family to attend college, Vassar. She was the driving force that grew the family’s fortune to new heights in those early years. She was a bright shining star that burnt out well before her time.
As the family lore goes, she met Nikolai Volkov while she attended Vassar. He was tall and handsome. He was often quiet, and when he did speak. He had an indistinct accent rumored to come from the Russian aristocracy. He and his brother owned an architectural business. Nikolai was the businessman, and his brother Alexei was the artist.
As the story goes, when Gloria met Nikolai, the world stopped. They married two months later. Alexei painted Gloria’s portrait as a wedding present, and it has hung in the drawing room of the Volkovs ever since. A constant reminder of the original Madam. Alexei disappeared after the wedding. Many think his brother forced him away. Gloria and Alexei had spent many sittings together in private.
Gloria and Nikolai had a passionate marriage that resulted in a single child, Thomas. Thomas never knew his mother. She died during the delivery. An unfortunate reality of that time. His only image of his mother was her portrait that hung on the mantel with a cool smile and knowing blue eyes. His journal had large sections dedicated to the subject of wanting a mother. I cried as I read them.
Thomas grew up with the luxuries of an industrial prince. He never wanted for anything. With his immense wealth and impressive figure, he took on the world and served in the army. When many were joining out of patriotism or necessity, he joined out of boredom. After 12 years and a world war, Thomas returned to a company that was all but dead. The war effort had sucked the life out of the business. To his good fortune he met Candice.
She was the sole heiress of an oil titan. She had curly brown hair and a full figure, to say the least. She looked out of place, short and stout, next to Thomas' tall, lean, broad-shouldered figure. They married soon after they met. Their son Theodore came so fast after that many said he was the reason for the accelerated wedding. Gloria took her place in their home.
Still an adventurer, Thomas took his wife for a hot air balloon ride. The newspaper said it was to celebrate their fifth wedding anniversary. It was only a coincidence that her father had died a month earlier. He left everything to his only daughter. The wind was fierce that day. Thomas had the heart of an adventure but lacked the skill to control the balloon. They crashed into a cliff. Thomas broke his arm. Candice had her neck broken.
Theodore has told me he doesn’t remember much of his mother. He recalled that she was full of life and fun. She was always up for an adventure and never one to say no to dessert. She loved and trusted his father with all her heart, right up to the very end.
By his own account, Theodore grew up motherless and feral. His father had little time for anything that involved a child. Thomas was always away, and it was rarely on business. For all their wealth, the Volkovs seem to be terrible at business. Theodor didn’t have a genuine conversation with his father until he left for college. Thomas shared his sage wisdom with Theodore, who then passed it on to Mikail, my husband.
The wisdom amounted to the importance of marrying the right woman. As Mikail’s wife I find this a flattering lie, especially from a widower. Theodore’s wife passed when Mikail was five. Mikael thinks it was a heart attack, Theodore told me the truth. It was a drug overdose. It was a death no one had expected for her. No one had ever seen her drink, let alone do any sort of drug.
Of course that doesn’t mean anything. The more money we have, the better we hide our secrets. My own family has had its scandals with the death of my brother and the mental breakdown of my mother. This left me an orphan. With my elderly father, thirty years older than my mother, he was more of a grandfather to me in my formative years.
One day, my mother found a short piece of rope and left this world. My father’s heart broke shortly after leaving me alone with the lawyers. I hate lawyers, they never want you to live your life. When I first met Mikhail, I knew I was in love and in the whirlwind of passion we married the summer after college. The lawyers told me to get a prenup. I told them they work for me and that I tell them what to do, not the other way around.
Now I am in the drawing room of my late father’s house, where my husband is away on business. I can feel the kicks of our soon-to-be baby boy as I pour over the family history for his baby book. I’m in heaven as I lean back on the couch, looking up at Gloria’s knowing eyes and subtle smile. I don’t know if she is happy for me, or if she pities me.
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Awesome story, I really enjoyed it! You managed to lace tension into a story spanning several generations, leaving a nice aftertaste of anticipation—whether the narrator will share the destiny of the previous women in the family or not.
One of the things that I'd like to recommend is searching for rarer foreign names to avoid picking such common ones as Nikolai and Alexei Volkov. While, on the one hand, they might be just common enough to convey the idea of the nationality, at the same time, their excessive commonness dims the atmosphere a bit, making it feel as if random names were chosen, which somewhat diminishes the importance of the characters.
I always search for names and their meanings in particular countries, then read the list and when I see a name that I like the sound of, I assess its meaning and if both fit, pick it. However, that's definitely my personal approach—just sharing it, without any intention to sound educative, of course.
Also, I'd appreciate a hint about the narrator's destiny—was she going to end up like her predecessors or not? This question alone proves how engaging this story is actually :)
Overall, again, the story is awesome and fairly easy to read! I'd be happy to read the continuation if it's ever published here.
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Nik this is Awesome feed back and I really appreciate you taking the time to give it.
For the names I was intentional with the last name Volkov which translates to Wolf. It was intended to show their predatory nature and the names Nikolai and Alexei were the most common names in 1800 Russia.
I'm glad you picked up on narrators fate and found the story engaging. I'll be reading your work and giving some constructive criticism over the weekend thanks again for reaching out and please feel free to follow and comment on my other work!
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My pleasure 👍 Got it! Awesome, thanks a ton 👍👍
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I like how the beginning leads to the same scene as the ending---a complete circle---"As the family lore goes," starts the 3rd paragraph and "As the story goes," starts the fourth paragraph---you might want to change on of these openings or move them further apart-----a good story packed with a great deal of information about many generations----my only advice is maybe a little less facts (it tends to overwhelm the reader)---sometimes less is more--I did like the cyclical nature of the story---well done
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Awesome feed back thank you. I have to add fluff some times to meet the minimum word count but I understand what you mean. Was it clear how the family was staying rich generation to generation?
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Yes it was clear about staying rich----I understand about the fluff to meet the minimum---the latest contest wants flash fiction---my specialty ---LOL
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