The words still rang in Alex’s ears as the front door slammed shut behind them.
“You never listen. You never think.”
The voice — their father’s, sharp with disappointment burned like a fire, even out here in the cool night air.
Alex didn’t answer. Not anymore. The fight had burned through every reply, every justification. They were trembling, not from fear but from fury — the kind that made your chest feel too tight, like your ribs can’t hold the heart.
The car sat waiting in the driveway, an old sedan that had seen better days. Alex yanked the door open and dropped into the seat, fingers fumbling for the keys. The leather was cracked beneath their grip, the engine coughing awake as though reluctant to be dragged into this storm.
They shoved the car into gear and tore down the street, tires squealing against the pavement.
The neighborhood lights blurred past. Houses with their neat hedges and glowing windows mocked them. Inside, families sat warm, calm, whole. Not screaming. Not shattering. Not like theirs. Alex pressed harder on the pedal.
I’ll show him. I don’t need him. I don’t need anyone.
The two-lane road cut into the woods, swallowing the car in darkness. The headlights swept over tree trunks and road signs, shadows stretching tall across the asphalt. Alex barely noticed. The hum of the tires, the rattle of the dashboard, the rhythm of their own pounding heart drowned out everything else.
They replayed the fight in fragments.
“You’re reckless—”
“Stop treating me like a child—”
“Someday you’ll go too far—”
“Better than wasting my life being afraid!”
The last slam of words had been Alex’s, and they had meant it. At least, in the heat of that moment, they had.
Branches whipped above as the road twisted deeper into the forest. Alex’s grip tightened on the wheel. Their vision tunneled forward, chasing speed, chasing escape.
A song flickered on the radio, but the notes were hollow, ungraspable. They switched it off and let silence claim the car. Silence, except for the engine’s growl and the rush of wind pushing against the frame.
For a moment, Alex almost felt free. The anger morphed into exhilaration. They rolled down the window, letting the night air bite at their face and carry their hair.
The forest pressed in tighter around the road. Pines rose in black columns, crowding the edges of the headlights. Somewhere in the distance, an owl called. The sound seemed impossibly lonely, impossibly far away.
Alex drove faster.
Every curve demanded more of their focus, yet they welcomed it. Here, no voices could reach them. No judgment. No disappointment. Only the road, the woods, and the fever of their own defiance.
And then for just a second something shimmered in the corner of their vision.
Not headlights. Not the reflection of their own beams on metal. Something softer, paler. Almost like a glow threaded through the trees.
They blinked hard, jaw tightening, refusing to admit curiosity. It was nothing. Just the woods playing tricks.
But as the car surged around the next bend, the glow returned, brighter this time — nestled deep in the dark like a secret waiting to be found.
Alex’s hands tightened on the steering wheel, knuckles pale in the dim light of the dashboard. They tried to focus on the road, but their gaze kept snagging on the shimmer threading between the trunks. The glow pulsed faintly, as though the forest itself were breathing.
Keep driving, they told themselves. It’s nothing. Just headlights from some other road. Just your imagination.
But there was no other road. Alex knew these woods. They’d driven this stretch dozens of times — long, narrow, and empty, lined by pines that towered like ancient guards. No cross streets, no cabins, no neon signs.
The glow shouldn’t be there.
The wheel trembled slightly beneath their grip as the tires hit a bump. They swore under their breath, shook their head hard, and leaned closer to the windshield. The world outside felt sharper, almost too sharp, as though every branch was etched in glass.
Their heart wouldn’t calm.
The glow drifted again into view, this time pooling low against the forest floor, a silvery wash across leaves and moss. It shifted, like moonlight caught on rippling water — except there was no water. Just endless woods.
The road curved sharply left. Alex slowed without thinking. The glow flickered again, right at the bend, as though waiting.
Curiosity, that ancient enemy of caution, gnawed at them. The same curiosity that had fueled every fight with their father. You never listen. You never think. Maybe he was right. But what if, this time, not listening led them to something real?
The engine hummed low as Alex eased the car onto the shoulder. Gravel crunched beneath the tires. The sudden stillness felt startling. They sat in silence, headlights stretching long shadows into the trees. The glow pulsed just beyond that reach, soft and insistent.
Alex killed the engine.
The woods surged into focus. No crickets, no rustling leaves. Just the faint hush of wind, the faintest echo of their own breath.
For a long moment, they stayed frozen behind the wheel, caught between instinct and wonder. Then, almost against their own will, they shoved the door open and stepped into the night.
The air was cool and damp, tinged with the sharpness of pine. Gravel shifted under their shoes as they crossed the narrow shoulder, the car’s metal frame creaking behind them like a final protest.
Branches tangled overhead, blotting out most of the stars. But ahead, between two leaning trunks, the glow thickened — an otherworldly shimmer marking out a hidden path.
Alex’s pulse slowed strangely, replaced not by calm, but by a strange weightlessness. The anger, the fight, the whole night — it dimmed, as though left behind with the running engine and cracked leather seats.
They took a step forward. The glow brightened, painting pale light across bark and needles. The path seemed to stretch wider, welcoming, as if it had been waiting only for them.
Behind them, the car rumbled on the roadside. The woods pressed close, swallowing the sound of the world.
And Alex walked deeper into the glow.
The path curved inward, winding between trunks that seemed to lean together, forming archways overhead. Each step Alex took set off a shimmer beneath their feet, as though the needles and moss remembered moonlight and wanted to release it back into the night.
Their breath quickened. This wasn’t headlights. This wasn’t imagination. The glow was real — impossibly, undeniably real.
The deeper they went, the more the forest changed. What had been ordinary pine and oak now looked impossibly tall, impossibly graceful, their bark etched with lines like veins of silver. Leaves quivered though no wind stirred, and every now and then, Alex swore the trees were watching, bending slightly toward them in silent approval.
“Hello?” Their voice slipped out before they thought better of it.
It didn’t echo. Instead, it seemed to be absorbed, carried, and whispered back a moment later. The sound returned softer, like someone else speaking from further down the path.
Alex froze. Goosebumps rose along their arms.
But the glow beckoned, washing them in pale warmth, and curiosity tugged stronger than fear.
The woods opened suddenly into a clearing. Alex staggered a step as the sight unfurled before them.
It was a circle of open ground, bordered by towering trees whose crowns tangled so high they seemed to brush the stars themselves. But it wasn’t dark — the ground itself glowed, patches of moss emitting a soft silver light. Flowers bloomed even in the cold night, their petals translucent, pulsing faintly as though lit from within.
In the center stood a pool, shallow and perfectly still, mirroring the sky. Stars shimmered on its surface — too many, far more than the sky overhead actually held. The pool’s reflection was brighter, sharper, as though it were a window into another sky, another world.
Alex felt their chest loosen once again. The rage and bitterness from earlier seemed ridiculous now, as faint as a memory of someone else’s fight. This place didn’t care about their father’s disappointment or their stubborn defiance. This place asked nothing except that they look, that they breathe, that they feel.
They moved closer to the pool, shoes crunching softly against glowing moss. Their reflection bent across the water’s surface, but it looked strange — taller, sharper, like someone older and freer than the person who had stormed out of that house.
For a moment, Alex imagined stepping forward, sliding into the pool as if it were a door. They would fall upward, not downward, into that brighter sky. They would belong to it.
But then something flickered across the surface.
Red.
The shimmer of the stars fractured, interrupted by a smear of crimson light. Alex blinked, heart jarring. The glow of the clearing remained calm, but the reflection rippled as though disturbed by something far away.
And faintly, too faintly to be real, they thought they heard another sound beyond the silence — not the echo of their voice this time, but something harsher. A metallic groan. A low hiss, almost like steam escaping.
Alex shook their head hard. The sound vanished. The pool calmed. The stars returned.
Yet unease threaded into the wonder now, a reminder that not all glows are gentle, not all doors lead where you expect.
Alex crouched at the pool’s edge, staring into the reflection until their knees ached. The stars within it shimmered brighter than any sky above them. The clearing pulsed faintly, like the heartbeat of some vast hidden world.
They dipped their fingers into the water.
It was cool — not just cool, but clean in a way water never was, as if it had never touched dirt or air. The ripples spread outward, and for the first time Alex noticed shapes moving within them. Not fish. Not shadows. Something like fragments of light, darting quick as minnows before dissolving again.
A laugh — soft, startled — slipped from their throat. They couldn’t remember the last time wonder had felt so pure.
Behind them, the path seemed to close in. The arching branches they’d walked under now knotted together more tightly, as though discouraging retreat. The only way forward was here, through the silver-lit clearing and whatever lay beyond it.
Alex stood. Their reflection in the pool steadied, but it was different again. They looked calmer, unburdened, even noble — as though this world showed them not who they were, but who they could be.
The glow at the far end of the clearing brightened, outlining a corridor between the trees. The branches there bowed inward, weaving into a tunnel. Light bled from it like dawn spilling through shutters.
Every instinct told them to follow.
They stepped carefully across the moss. Each footfall made the ground shimmer, light blooming under their weight and fading once they passed. The flowers turned slightly as they moved, angling their glowing petals toward Alex as if in greeting.
The air shifted, too. It no longer smelled of pine and earth but of something faintly sweet, like blossoms they couldn’t name. Yet beneath it ran another thread — something sharp, metallic, bitter.
Alex frowned and lifted their head.
The clearing was silent, save for the whisper of leaves. But the air burned faintly in their lungs, an odd weight pressing in. For a split second, it smelled like smoke.
A sound carried faintly from beyond the tunnel — high and wavering. Not birdsong. Not wind. Something shriller, mechanical, keening.
Sirens.
Alex froze. Their heart knocked against their ribs, too fast, too hard. But the light ahead flared again, washing the doubt from their mind. The tunnel glowed brighter, promising peace, promising escape.
“Keep going,” Alex whispered to themselves, though their voice shook.
They entered the tunnel.
The branches arched overhead, bending low enough that they had to duck, and each one glowed faintly at the edges, veins of light running beneath bark. As they brushed against the wood, it felt warm, alive.
The tunnel opened into another clearing, larger than the last. At its heart rose an arch of stone and branches twisted together, crowned with glowing flowers. Beyond the arch was only brilliance — a curtain of white-gold light so strong Alex could barely look at it.
Their breath caught.
It wasn’t fear this time. It was longing.
They stepped closer.
But as they did, the ground trembled. The brilliance ahead wavered, flickering like a faulty bulb. And in the flicker, Alex thought they saw something else — twisted metal gleaming, shards of glass catching firelight, smoke curling upward.
The vision vanished as quickly as it came. The arch pulsed steady again, waiting.
Alex’s chest heaved. Wonder warred with dread. Still, their feet carried them forward.
The arch loomed before Alex, every curve of stone and branch humming with light. The brilliance beyond it quivered faintly, like curtains in a draft, tugging at them with silent urgency. Their chest tightened.
They paused just short of the threshold. For a moment the glow dimmed, as if waiting, holding its breath with them.
Memory surged, unbidden.
The fight hadn’t started small — it had exploded. The way things always did between them. Their father, standing rigid in the kitchen, his voice rising like a storm.
“You’re throwing your life away.”
Alex had slammed a fist on the counter. “It’s my life to throw. I don’t want your path, I don’t want your plans. I’m done living in your shadow.”
“You have no idea what you’re doing,” his voice cracked with something sharper than anger — fear. “You’re not ready. You think you can just move out, raise a child, chase some dream of your own? You’ll regret it.”
The words cut deeper than intended, Alex knew. Because they weren’t just about moving out. They weren’t just about school or jobs. They were about the announcement Alex had made, trembling but proud — that they were going to be a parent.
“I won’t regret it,” Alex had whispered then, though their throat burned. “I want to live my life, not yours. I want to do this — for me, for them. And if you can’t see that…”
The memory stung as much as it soothed. The glow of the arch seemed to pulse in time with their heartbeat, reflecting the raw ache of wanting to be believed, to be free.
Alex raised their hand, brushing the edge of the stone. It thrummed beneath their palm, warm and steady, like a promise.
The light beyond the arch rippled again, and the fantasy faltered. For one breathless second, the brilliance fractured, showing jagged metal, a crumpled hood pressed against a tree, glass like diamonds scattered across asphalt. Smoke curled through it all, acrid and suffocating.
Alex staggered back, gasping.
But then the glow flared stronger, erasing the image. Flowers at the crown of the arch burst into brighter bloom, petals unfolding in cascades of silver and white. The air smelled sweet again, like spring rain.
Their anger was gone now, drained from their veins. In its place was something softer: the fragile weight of hope, of wanting a future that felt like theirs, not borrowed. A future they’d fought to claim in that brutal argument.
They thought of the child — not yet born, still a possibility, still fragile — and felt a warmth rise in their chest, chasing back the smoke, the sirens, the ruin.
Alex stepped forward.
The arch trembled with light. Beyond it, the brilliance opened like dawn breaking across a horizon.
For the first time that night, Alex didn’t feel lost. They felt found.
They lifted their foot, crossed the final inch of moss, and stepped into the glow.
Alex stood before the arch, bathed in radiance. The air was sweet, the glow soft against their skin, every hurt and every word from the fight dissolving like smoke on the wind.
They thought of the child, of the life waiting to be lived — not the one mapped out by their father, but the one they had chosen. Here, in this impossible clearing, that future didn’t feel so far away.
They stepped into the light.
Warmth embraced them, gentle as a hand on their cheek. Their chest filled once more, and then, with a trembling exhale, Alex released their breath — not in anger, not in defiance, but in peace.
The glow swallowed them whole.
On the roadside, the car was a ruin of metal and glass, its frame twisted around a shattered tree. Smoke coiled into the night sky, orange embers blinking in the dark.
Behind the fractured windshield, Alex’s body sat slumped and still, eyes half-closed, lips parted around the last breath they would never take back.
The woods were silent again, save for the low hiss of fire eating away at what remained.
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A beautifully written piece that invites us into a liminal, dreamlike space — but it risks leaving readers behind due to underdeveloped emotional stakes and a middle section that prioritises atmosphere over storytelling. The imagery is striking, yet I struggled to stay engaged because the story’s purpose and emotional depth never quite crystallised. Ultimately, it left me admiring the craft more than caring about the characters
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Thank you for in review, i always love to see what i can do better
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