Sarah, Alex, and the Kite

Submitted into Contest #194 in response to: Write a story inspired by the phrase “It’s hardly brain surgery.”... view prompt

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Kids Friendship Fiction

Sarah had always been an adventurous spirit, and she loved to explore the outdoors. She had many fond memories of flying kites with her dad when she was younger, and she was excited to share that experience with Alex.

As summer vacation began, Alex and Sarah had big plans for all the fun they were going to have. They had made a list of activities they wanted to do, and they were determined to check off each one.

Their first adventure was a camping trip in the nearby woods. They packed their backpacks with all the essentials and set out early in the morning. They spent the day hiking through the trails, swimming in the river, and roasting marshmallows over the campfire at night. Alex loved the feeling of being surrounded by nature, and Sarah loved the chance to unplug and unwind.

The following week, they went to a local water park. They rode the water slides, played in the wave pool, and floated along the lazy river. They even challenged each other to a race down the slides, and Sarah won by just a hair. Alex didn't mind, though. He was just happy to be spending time with his best friend.

As they walked to the park, Sarah carefully unwrapped the kite they had bought the day before. It was a beautiful blue and green diamond-shaped kite with a long, flowing tail. The colors were incredible. Sarah remarked at how proud she was of the rainbow across the top of her kite.

“My dad got this for me when I turned 9, it is one of my favorites”

She handed it to Alex, and he looked at it nervously.

"Okay, Alex," she said, holding up the kite. "First, we need to make sure the wind is blowing in the right direction. Then we'll let out some of the string and start running to get the kite up in the air."

Alex looked at her skeptically. "Are you sure this is going to work?" he asked. "It seems kind of complicated."

Sarah laughed. "Don't worry, it's hardly brain surgery. It just takes a little patience and practice."

They found a wide open space in the park and waited for a gust of wind to pick up. Finally, they felt a strong breeze, and Sarah started letting out some of the string. She handed the kite to Alex and told him to run.

At first, the kite didn't seem to want to cooperate. It kept dipping and diving, and Alex struggled to keep it in the air. But Sarah encouraged him to keep trying, and after a few more attempts, they finally got the kite to soar into the sky.

They both looked up in amazement as the kite danced and twirled in the wind. It was a beautiful sight, and they couldn't help but feel a sense of pride and accomplishment.

As they continued to fly the kite, Sarah and Alex started to relax and enjoy the moment. They talked and laughed, enjoying each other's company and the simple joy of flying a kite.

After a while, they grew tired and decided to take a break. They sat down in the grass and talked about their interests and hobbies. Alex told Sarah about his love for puzzles and how he spent hours putting them together. Sarah shared her passion for music and how she played the guitar.

Suddenly, they heard the sound of ice cream truck music in the distance. Sarah jumped up excitedly and suggested they run to the front of the house to catch the ice cream truck. Alex was a bit hesitant at first, but Sarah's enthusiasm was infectious, and he couldn't resist.

They made their way to the front of the house, and sure enough, the ice cream truck was parked on the street. Sarah and Alex browsed through the selection of ice cream bars, popsicles, and cones. Sarah chose a chocolate-dipped ice cream bar, and Alex picked a strawberry popsicle.

They sat on the front porch, enjoying their frozen treats and chatting about their plans for the summer. Sarah talked about her family's upcoming beach vacation, and Alex shared his excitement for his upcoming camping trip.

As the sun began to set, Sarah suggested they play a game of hide-and-seek in the backyard. Alex was a bit nervous, but Sarah assured him it would be fun.

They took turns hiding and seeking, giggling and laughing as they tried to find each other. When it was finally dark outside, they decided it was time to call it a night.

As the weeks went by, they continued to check things off their list. They went to the movies, visited a local museum, and tried a new restaurant. They even took a cooking class together, learning how to make homemade pizza and pasta from scratch.

As summer vacation drew to a close, Alex and Sarah reflected on all the fun they had and the memories they had created. They knew they would miss spending all their days together, but they were excited for the new school year and all the adventures that awaited them.

Sarah looked the rainbow kite sitting in her room, and reflected on the beginning of the summer. All the potential and possibilities they had then. She laughed at how nervous her friend Alex was at flying the kite originally. “It’s hardly brain surgery,” she told Alex, which seemed to calm her down.

She lay down to bed that night with a smile on her face. The summer was at it’s end, and 5th grade would be starting soon. She was eager to make new friends and see old ones. She wondered whom her new teacher was going to me. I hope it’s Mrs. Wrigley she thought before laying her head on her pillow.

Alex and Sarah were grateful for each other and their special bond. They knew that no matter what, they would always be there for each other, creating new memories and having fun along the way.

April 20, 2023 14:08

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Alexander Corby
23:53 Apr 26, 2023

Wow! This was a very touching story. I loved how you kept the characters' specifics as vague as you did. It made me wonder throughout the entire story whether I was reading about a parent and child, carefree lovers, or something in between. I'm still left a little in doubt at the end, wondering if Sarah has a summertime friend or an imaginary one. The storytelling itself is very tight and flows naturally. I honestly can't suggest any improvements aside from considering if you meant it to be as open to speculation as it is. I personally enjoy...

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