Submitted to: Contest #303

Moment Sculptors

Written in response to: "Write a story with the line “I didn’t have a choice.” "

American Contemporary Friendship

Manyu stepped out of the yoga studio, the lingering scent of sandalwood and sweat clinging to his clothes. He tucked his yoga mat under one arm, the cool metal of his water bottle in the other. The familiar post-workout hunger gnawed at his stomach. As he walked toward his car, the bright, inviting storefront of Flower Child beckoned. Its facade, a blend of warm wood and large, sun-drenched windows, hinted at the vibrant, healthy fare within. He recalled the Buckhead location's reputation for fresh, locally sourced ingredients and decided a post-yoga meal was in order.

He shuffled forward in the line at Flower Child, the aroma of sprouted grains, roasted vegetables, and ginger root a calming presence. When he reached the counter, a young woman with a bright smile greeted him. "What can I tempt you with today?" she asked, her voice a warm, inviting melody. He hesitated, scanning the menu board. "What would you suggest?" he asked.

"Either the Mother Nature Bowl or the Forbidden Rice," she said, her finger tracing the options. "The Mother Nature has avocado, if you're a fan."

"Sounds good," Manyu replied. "The Mother Nature Bowl, please."

"Nice choice!" she chirped, her eyes wide with a childlike enthusiasm. "Name for the order, please?"

"Manyu," he said, bracing for the usual mangled pronunciation.

She repeated the name perfectly. He blinked, surprised. "You got it right," he said, a hint of disbelief in his voice. "I'm used to it sounding... different."

"Manyu. M-A-N-Y-U," she spelled, emphasizing each syllable. "It's a lovely name. I'm Jennison, by the way. Just got back from India. A friend's wedding – she's American, he's South Indian. Oh man, it was unlike anything I'd ever imagined – the vibrant sarees, the incredible colors, the joyful noise! I spelled more tongue-twisting names in those two weeks than in my entire life. I'm working here to save up some money and have a bit of quiet time. I like serving people, meeting new faces. Just trying to be myself, I guess."

Manyu took his order number and found a table near the window. As he waited for his Mother Nature Bowl, he looked around the bustling cafe. Two young women at a nearby table spoke in rapid, animated French, their laughter echoing through the space. He smiled at one of them, curious. "What language are you speaking?" he asked. "French," she replied, her eyes sparkling, before quickly returning to her animated conversation.

He turned his gaze around the cafe, taking in the atmosphere. On one wall, a poster asked, "Are you you?" On another, a cheerful script proclaimed, "Choose Happy." He remembered Jennison’s words: "Just trying to be myself."

A few minutes later, Jennison, now without her serving apron, came over and sat at the empty chair opposite Manyu. "My shift just ended," she said with a slightly weary smile. "Mind if I join you for a bit?"

"Not at all," Manyu replied warmly.

She sighed softly, the earlier brightness in her eyes now dimmed. "Oh, Manyu... it's complicated. You remember I said I was just working here to travel and meet people?"

Manyu nodded, taking a bite of his Mother Nature Bowl, which had just arrived.

"Well," she continued, leaning slightly closer, "my mom has a small restaurant back home. It's her whole life, you know? But she's not doing so well health-wise, and... well, I'm being forced to take it over. I like the place, it's got its own charm, but... I don't want to be tied down, you know? I want to see the world, experience different things. 'I have no choice, Manyu,' that's what it feels like."

Manyu's smile was gentle but firm. "Jennison," he said, his gaze steady, "everyone has a choice. Even the people in North Korea, the ones at Auschwitz... they might not have the choices we perceive as freedom, but the choice of how they respond, how they find meaning in anything and everything that always remains."

Jennison looked at him, a flicker of awe and surprise in her eyes.

Manyu continued, "You take anything life gives you and make it something you love. Better still, love it the way it is given to you, and let your energy transform it into the way you wanted it to be. Find ways to make that restaurant work for you, rather than feeling trapped by it."

A thoughtful silence hung between them as Jennison absorbed his words. Then, a spark ignited in her eyes. "How... how do I do that?"

Manyu leaned back slightly, a genuine enthusiasm building within him. "Well," he began, "what do you love about traveling? Meeting new people? How can you bring those elements into your mother's restaurant?"

They began to brainstorm. Jennison spoke of wanting to host themed nights celebrating different cultures' cuisines, inviting travelers passing through to share their stories and food. Manyu suggested she could partner with local travel bloggers or language exchange groups to bring in a diverse clientele. They discussed creating a vibrant, ever-changing menu inspired by her travels, and using social media to document her culinary adventures and connect with a wider audience.

As they talked, Jennison's initial despondency melted away, replaced by a growing excitement. She scribbled down ideas on a napkin, her eyes shining. "Manyu," she said, a genuine awe in her voice, "I... I never thought of it that way. You're right. This isn't a prison sentence; it's... it's an opportunity. This can be applied to everything in life, can't it?"

Manyu smiled, a deep sense of connection forming between them. "Exactly," he said. "The power lies not in the circumstances themselves, but in how we choose to perceive and interact with them. The frame of life might be there, the circumstances given, but every moment within that frame is ours to weave, to shape our way forward."

He finished his Mother Nature Bowl, a newfound lightness in his step. He said goodbye to Jennison, who was now buzzing with energy, already sketching out menu ideas on the napkin. He walked out of Flower Child, the questions from the posters now accompanied by a burgeoning sense of agency. He made his way to the train station.

He boarded the Transcontinental Express, the rhythmic clatter of the wheels a soothing counterpoint to his racing thoughts. He settled into a window seat, the landscape blurring into a green and gray watercolor. Jennison's words and their conversation echoed in his mind.

He realized that he had been living a life of quiet compromise, a life dictated by fear and the opinions of others. The fear of failure, the fear of judgment, had become his constant companions. He thought of his name, perpetually mispronounced, a symbol of his own quiet assimilation. He recalled his childhood passions, the intricate architectural drawings, the mathematical puzzles, the philosophical questions. A sense of profound emptiness had settled over him.

But now, something had shifted. Jennison's situation and their conversation had mirrored his own internal struggle. He too had felt confined by invisible walls. Yet, seeing her spark of hope had ignited something within him. The frame of life might be there, the circumstances given, but every moment within that frame is his to sculpt, to shape his way forward.

The train slowed, pulling into a small town station. A young man with a worn sketchbook and a set of charcoal pencils boarded, his eyes filled with a quiet intensity. Manyu felt a surge of recognition, a connection to a fellow traveler on the path of self-discovery.

The man sat across from him, and Manyu noticed a small, hand-drawn symbol on his wrist, a geometric pattern of interlocking triangles. "Interesting tattoo," Manyu said, breaking the silence.

"It's a reminder of the interconnectedness of all things," the man replied, his eyes sparkling. "A reminder that we are all part of something larger than ourselves."

They fell into conversation, sharing their stories, their dreams, their fears. The man, an artist named Marco, spoke with a soft Italian accent, of his struggles to find his artistic voice, his battles with self-doubt, his unwavering belief in the power of creativity. Manyu, in turn, shared his own journey of self-discovery and his inspiring encounter at Flower Child.

"It's like we build these invisible walls around ourselves," Marco said, sketching a series of interlocking triangles in his sketchbook, "walls of fear, of expectation. And then we wonder why we feel trapped."

Manyu nodded, his gaze fixed on the passing landscape. "Exactly. And sometimes, it takes a simple conversation or a shift in perspective to realize those walls are not as solid as we think. We learn to weave the given within whatever frame we find ourselves."

As the train continued its journey, Manyu and Marco found a shared understanding, a connection forged in the crucible of vulnerability and the shared pursuit of authentic living.

The train began its descent, winding its way through the mountain passes. The sun was setting, casting long shadows across the landscape. Manyu felt a deep sense of peace, a quiet confidence resonating within him.

As the train pulled into the final station, the city lights twinkled against the darkening sky. Manyu stood, a sense of quiet determination settling over him. He was ready to face whatever lay ahead, embracing his choices and the power to sculpt his own moments.

He stepped off the train, the city stretched before him. As he walked, he began to murmur, "Where the mind is without fear and the head is held high..."

"the world has not been broken into fragments," Marco chuckled, walking beside him.

"Tagore," Marco said with a smile. "We all feel those walls."

Manyu nodded. "But we also have the power to weave our way through them, carefully sculpting every moment on the way."

"Are we to be the moment sculptors, Manyu?"

"We can, can’t we?"

They walked together into the city.

Posted May 17, 2025
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KC Foster
00:51 Jun 01, 2025

Beautifully written. I enjoyed the depth and subtlety of the theme. The dialogue at the end absolutely had me hooked and I find myself reflecting on them.

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