Submitted to: Contest #296

Assembly Line

Written in response to: "Situate your character in a hostile or dangerous environment."

Fiction

Ajit Sharma eyed the row of tiny shoes lined up like sentries outside the assembly hall and sighed. Seventy-two years old, and here he was, removing his oxfords in a primary school corridor that smelled of disinfectant and cheese sandwiches.

"Shoes, Dada," Amara reminded him, already slipping her own feet free. "Ms. Patel says it's respectful."

"Respectful," Ajit muttered, "or a clever way to prevent parents leaving early."

A bell shrieked overhead. Ajit winced. His granddaughter seemed not to notice, accustomed as she was to the auditory assault of British education.

"Daddy usually sits by the window," Amara instructed, pulling him through the doors where rows of uncomfortably small chairs awaited.

"Your father has more pressing matters today." Ajit checked his phone again. No messages from the hospital.

"Is Mummy coming home?" Arun appeared beside them, voice small.

"Not today," Ajit said, conscious of how his words landed. "But soon."

Inside, the assembly hall had transformed into an elaborate social chessboard. The PTA executive committee commanded the center, their matching tote bags territorial markers. Working parents huddled by exits, briefcases clutched like shields. A cluster of women Ajit mentally labeled "The Fundraisers" surveyed the room with predatory efficiency.

"Mr. Sharma!" The voice sliced through the pre-assembly chatter. "How delightful."

Deputy Headmaster Philip Chambers approached, clipboard in hand, designer glasses perched on his nose. His smile arrived precisely three seconds before his eyes joined the effort.

"I expected Mr. Okello today," Chambers said, pronouncing the surname with exaggerated care. "For our careers presentation."

"Hospital," Ajit replied. He'd spent forty years in boardrooms perfecting the art of revealing nothing.

"Ah yes. The pregnancy situation." Chambers nodded sympathetically. "Well, all hands on deck, as they say. Perhaps you might participate instead? We're showcasing professional journeys. I understand you had quite the corporate ascension."

The trap was elegantly laid. Refuse, and appear ungracious. Accept, and perform as expected. Ajit had spotted such maneuvers across negotiating tables from Delhi to Hong Kong.

"I'm retired," he said, calculating his escape routes.

"Perfect! A success story with perspective." Chambers made a note on his clipboard. "Third speaker, after Sergeant Miller. The children do love a man in uniform."

Before Ajit could protest, Chambers was gone, navigating the parent minefield with practiced ease.

"You're going to talk, Dada?" Amara's eyes widened. "About the machines and the factories and everything?"

"Apparently so."

"Will you tell them about the jail?" Arun asked.

Ajit stiffened. "Who told you about that?"

"Daddy. He said you were very brave."

A curious sensation bloomed in Ajit's chest—something between indignation and surprise. What else did his son-in-law say about him when he wasn't there?

"Find your classes," Ajit instructed, spotting an empty chair beside a woman in a dress that appeared to be battling a garden and losing. "I'll sit there."

As the children dispersed, Ajit settled beside Floral Dress, who shifted minutely away, creating a precise half-inch of additional space between them.

"First assembly?" she asked with the forced brightness of someone making reluctant conversation.

"Not my first. Perhaps my last."

She tittered nervously. "You must be... Amara's grandfather? The one from..." She gestured vaguely eastward.

"Hounslow," Ajit supplied.

"Oh! I meant—"

"I know what you meant."

The conversation withered. Ajit scanned the room, cataloging details with the precision of someone who had learned early that observation was a survival skill. A uniformed police officer stood near the stage, collar tight against his neck, watching a boy in the front row with uncomfortable intensity. The boy—presumably his son—slumped lower in his seat, as if trying to disappear.

"That's Sergeant Miller," said a voice to Ajit's left. "Only shows up when there's an audience."

Ajit turned to find a young woman with practical shoes and knowing eyes. Her staff lanyard identified her as Ms. Patel.

"I'm Amara's teacher," she explained, taking the seat Floral Dress had left conspicuously empty. "And you're her grandfather? The one Damien mentions in his emails?"

"What does he say?" Ajit asked, curiosity overriding caution.

Ms. Patel's smile was diplomatic. "That you're a man of principle."

"A polite way of saying stubborn."

"I'm South Asian too, Mr. Sharma. I know all the euphemisms."

The headteacher's arrival prevented further conversation. A woman with the harried efficiency of someone perpetually managing chaos, she launched into announcements about upcoming events and fundraisers. Ajit half-listened, his attention split between the stage and his silent phone.

"And now," her voice shifted to the practiced brightness of someone introducing a special treat, "Mr. Chambers has organized a careers presentation."

Chambers stepped forward, beaming. "Today we're learning about important community roles. First, we have Sergeant Miller from our local police force."

Miller took the stage with the stiff demeanor of someone who has rehearsed but still feels unprepared. He spoke about helping people, about being brave, his gestures mechanical. His son stared resolutely at the floor.

"Who else has a parent with an interesting job?" Chambers asked when Miller finished. Several hands shot up. "Amara! Your father has an exciting job, doesn't he?"

Amara looked confused. "My dad's at home. He makes pancakes and helps with my spelling."

A ripple of uncomfortable laughter moved through the parent section.

"No, no," Chambers smiled with exaggerated patience. "I meant your grandfather, who's here today. Mr. Sharma ran quite a successful business before retirement, didn't you, sir?"

Every eye in the room turned to Ajit. The morning's irritations crystallized into something sharper. This wasn't random selection. This was calculated theater.

"Perhaps you'd like to tell the children about your work? Show them what success looks like?" Chambers gestured toward the stage.

Ajit rose, aware of Amara's expectant face, of Arun's sudden attention. Years of negotiation had taught him to recognize when someone was selling a narrative that served their interests, not his.

"Thank you, Mr. Chambers," he said, mounting the steps to the stage. His accent, usually moderated after decades in Britain, slipped back with deliberate precision. He could play this game too.

"My name is Ajit Sharma," he began, scanning the sea of small faces. "I worked with agricultural equipment. Tractors. Irrigation systems." He paused, noting the children's immediate boredom. "Very dull stuff. Much less exciting than chasing criminals."

Sergeant Miller shifted uncomfortably.

"But perhaps you'd like to hear a story instead?" Ajit suggested. The children perked up immediately. "When I was a small boy, about your age, a powerful man decided that people who looked like me should leave the country we called home."

He could see Chambers stiffen. This wasn't the immigrant success story he'd been scripting.

"Ninety days, he gave us. Ninety days to leave everything—our home, our business, the graves of our ancestors. We arrived in London with two suitcases and nowhere to live."

The hall had fallen silent. Even the fidgeting children seemed to sense the shift in atmosphere.

"My father had been important in our old country. In London, he cleaned office buildings at night." Ajit could still see his father's hands, once soft with privilege, cracked and raw from chemicals. "I was sent to a school not unlike this one."

He paused, letting the weight of memory settle. "On my first day, the teacher asked if I'd ever seen a television before, if we had lived in mud huts. The children wanted to know if I'd ridden elephants to school."

A few nervous giggles rippled through the audience.

"I told them yes," Ajit admitted, a glint appearing in his eye. "I said the elephants were much better behaved than London buses."

More laughter now, genuine.

"Children," Ajit continued, "are very clever at spotting when adults are being ridiculous. It's a talent you should never lose."

Chambers stepped forward. "Perhaps we should focus more on your business achievements—"

"But this is my business achievement," Ajit countered. "Learning to navigate places where you aren't welcome."

A murmur ran through the parents.

"My family thought success meant becoming so British that no one would notice we weren't. My father changed his accent. My mother changed her name. I changed how I dressed, how I spoke, what I ate."

Ajit glanced at his grandchildren. Amara was watching him with rapt attention. Arun's eyes were wide.

"We were wrong," he said simply. "Success isn't changing who you are to fit in. It's finding people who value you as you are."

Behind Chambers, Ms. Patel's expression had softened.

Ajit's gaze moved to Miller and his son. "Sometimes the most important work isn't the kind that earns awards or promotions. Sometimes it's making pancakes. Helping with spelling. Showing up when it matters."

The words hung in the air, heavier than he'd intended. He thought of Damien at the hospital, of his daughter confined to a bed for weeks. Of his own rigid expectations.

"That's the business lesson they don't teach in boardrooms," Ajit concluded. "Thank you for your attention."

As he returned to his seat, the applause was scattered, uncertain. Chambers quickly called up a mother who designed websites, steering the assembly back to safer waters.

During the final song, Ajit's phone vibrated. A text from Damien: False alarm. Priya stable. Coming home soon. Thank you.

The relief was immediate, followed by something else—the uncomfortable sensation of reconsidering long-held positions.

As parents filed out after the assembly, Sergeant Miller approached, his son trailing behind him.

"Mr. Sharma," he said, extending his hand. "That was... unexpected."

Ajit shook the offered hand, noting the firm grip, the direct gaze.

"Ben wanted to ask you something," Miller said, nudging his son forward.

The boy looked up, his face serious. "Is it true what happened to you? Being forced to leave?"

Miller winced. "Ben—"

"It's alright," Ajit said. "Yes, it's true."

"But that's not fair," Ben insisted.

"No," Ajit agreed. "It wasn't."

"Dad says laws protect people."

Miller crouched beside his son. "They're supposed to, Ben. But Mr. Sharma is right—sometimes the system fails. That's why people need to look out for each other, not just follow rules."

Ajit studied the officer, seeing something he hadn't expected—a man trying, however imperfectly, to be honest with his child.

"Dada!" Amara rushed over, dragging her brother behind her. "You were brilliant! Ms. Patel said you 'completely blindsided Mr. Chambers'!"

Arun, quieter than his sister, studied Ben with curious eyes. "Do you like Minecraft?"

As the children fell into conversation, Chambers approached, his composure restored. "Mr. Sharma, a word?"

Miller stepped aside, giving Ajit a nod that communicated unexpected solidarity.

"I feel there may have been a misunderstanding," Chambers began, voice low. "I invited you to speak because I thought we might find common ground."

"Did you?"

"Well, yes. My mother's family is originally from Mumbai. Three generations back." He straightened his already impeccable tie. "I thought you'd appreciate the opportunity to highlight your achievements."

"How thoughtful," Ajit said, the politeness of his tone belied by the hardness in his eyes. "And how convenient for your diversity metrics."

Chambers' smile slipped. "That's unfair. I was trying to be inclusive."

"No," Ajit corrected. "You were trying to be seen as inclusive. There's a difference."

"Mr. Chambers!" Ms. Patel called from across the hall. "The head wants to see you about the assembly feedback. Immediately."

Chambers hesitated, then nodded stiffly to Ajit. "We'll have to continue this another time."

As he walked away, Amara tugged at Ajit's hand. "Dada, can Ben come over after school? His dad says it's okay if you say yes."

Ajit looked over at Miller, who shrugged with a half-smile. "If it's not an imposition."

"Not at all," Ajit said, surprising himself. "We would be delighted."

As they left the school, Ajit's phone chimed with a message from Damien: On way home. How was assembly? Priya wants full report.

Ajit hesitated, thumb hovering over the keyboard. What could he say? That he'd spent decades resenting a country that had rejected his family, only to find himself rejecting his daughter's choice of husband for similar reasons? That today, in a primary school assembly, he'd finally seen the pattern?

Interesting, he typed finally. We have guests for tea. Amara made a new friend.

Three dots appeared, disappeared, reappeared: A social breakthrough at a school assembly? There's a story here...

For the first time that day, Ajit smiled properly. Perhaps his son-in-law knew more than he gave him credit for.

As they walked toward the car park, Ms. Patel hurried after them. "Mr. Sharma! The head would like a word, when you have time. About joining our parent-governor board."

Ajit raised an eyebrow. "Me? I'm merely a grandparent."

"That's what I said," Ms. Patel replied, eyes gleaming with suppressed amusement. "She said, and I quote, 'After that speech? Grab him before the other schools do.'"

"I'm retired," Ajit reminded her. "From business and from battles."

"Are you?" she asked, glancing meaningfully at the children, at Miller, at the school behind them. "Seems to me you're just getting started."

As Ms. Patel walked away, Miller chuckled. "I think you've been drafted, Mr. Sharma."

Ajit watched as the children raced ahead, inventing some complicated game involving the pavement cracks. "The most dangerous battlefields," he said quietly, "are the ones you don't recognize until you're already fighting."

"Is that an Eastern proverb?" Miller asked.

"No," Ajit admitted. "Just the observation of an old man who thought his war was over."

His phone buzzed one final time. A message from Priya with a grainy hospital scan attached: They're girls, Papa. Both of them. We'll need you more than ever.

Ajit studied the blurry image, these new lives already caught between worlds—Uganda and India, Britain and elsewhere, past grievances and future possibilities. At seventy-two, he'd thought his battles were behind him.

He'd been wrong.

Some battlefields choose you. And sometimes, they're exactly where you need to fight.

Posted Apr 03, 2025
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14:28 Apr 07, 2025

'Success isn't changing who you are to fit in. It's finding people who value you as you are'
Exactly this.
Love this story Alex, the humour, the cultural narrative, the digs at the PTA! Oh the school assembly... you could write a book on just that!

Super writing!

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Alexis Araneta
02:00 Apr 04, 2025

Okay, Alex. It seems like in every story, you're out to impress. Incredible work again !

I love these little explorations on diasporas and that pinch of being stuck between cultures. Glorious ! I love how your immigrant character was himself a bit judgmental towards his son-in-law. Of course , I love how every detail from the dialogue to the smell of cheese sandwiches was obviously scrupulously chosen.

Also, had to laugh at the accent bit. My RP accent was adopted by personal choice. But yes, for others, it's a survival tactic. Amazing work!

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Alex Marmalade
13:15 Apr 05, 2025

🤗 Alexis! Your comments always brighten my day! You caught exactly what I was exploring with those cultural tensions. The RP accent bit was actually inspired by your previous comment - your insights keep shaping these stories!

And yes, Ajit's judgmental stance toward his son-in-law came from some personal experiences - those contradictions we all carry.

Thank you for following along on Substack! Looking forward to sharing some extras and behind-the-scenes stories there soon! ✨

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Alexis Araneta
15:02 Apr 05, 2025

Hahahaha! This accent has gotten me the most amusing comments, my favourite until you basing a character off of it being 'Are you a BBC newsreader?' Hahahaha!

Again, please keep writing these stories. I can't wait for more stories on your Substack.

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