Shattered Dreams and Vengeful Skies

Submitted into Contest #204 in response to: Write a story about someone seeking revenge for a past wrong.... view prompt

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Crime Fiction Western

The scorching desert sun beat down on the gallows, casting long shadows across the scene. The executioner tightened the noose around my neck, and the crowd held its breath, their eyes fixed on the tense anticipation of the impending execution.


"Listen closely, partner! This court has decreed that you'll be taken from this very spot and locked up tight until the sun sets. When that time comes, you'll be escorted to the gallows, where your life will be cut short, swinging by the neck until you breathe no more. May the Almighty above show mercy on your soul."


An unusual way to phrase it, to say the least.


"Before you tread the path to eternal darkness, it is customary to grant you the opportunity to utter your final sentiments. Speak now, for time is fleeting, and the desert wind waits not for mortal words," the Marshal declared, turning to me expectantly.


As I locked eyes with the Marshal, a deep anger simmered within me, ready to erupt. I glanced around and, meeting the gaze of the person I longed to see yet wished weren't present, a slight smirk formed on my lips.


"Goodbyes were never my strong suit, Marshal. How about a rain check?" I replied, tauntingly.


The Marshal huffed, showing little surprise. "Let's get on with it, son! Time's running out, and we don't have all day. We have a job to do, and you've wasted enough of ours already."


But just as the lever was pulled, causing the trapdoor to swing open, chaos erupted from the outskirts of the town. Gunshots pierced the air, and a band of mysterious riders stormed in, guns blazing. Panic spread through the townsfolk as they scattered in fear.


In the midst of the turmoil, an unexpected turn of events granted me a moment of divine intervention. I slipped free from the noose, landing gracefully on the ground below.


As the settling dust obscured the chaos, I stood tall, locking eyes with the stunned Marshal. With a determined smile, I swiftly mounted a nearby horse and raced off into the sunset, leaving behind a bewildered and awestruck crowd. Glancing back at the Marshal, I aimed directly for his heart.


Seconds before pulling the trigger, I shouted, "I am not your son!" I watched as the man who had destroyed my life crumpled to the ground like a ragdoll.


As I galloped away, memories surged to the surface. This time, no amount of pushing would suppress them.


Cassidy, a young woman who defied societal expectations, felt a constant sense of discontent within the suffocating confines of the wretched kitchen. The air hung heavy with stifling heat, and the walls closed in on her like a prison of despair. Shackled to a life of menial servitude, her dreams were mercilessly smothered beneath the weight of mundane chores and monotonous routines. Every breath she took became a desperate gasp for freedom, an ardent yearning to break free from the clutches of her mother. It wasn't that she didn't love her deeply, but whenever her mother entered the kitchen, she transformed into a unleashed monster that even her father sought refuge from, fleeing to the barn or the store under the guise of checking on sales. The clanging of pots and the hissing of boiling water became an agonizing symphony, a relentless reminder of the chains that bound her potential and aspirations. With each passing moment, Cassidy's desire to escape intensified, and the kitchen transformed into a metaphorical battleground where she had to summon the courage to defy her predetermined fate, lest she drown in the suffocating depths of her thwarted dreams.


Cassidy held a fervent dream of carrying on her family's legacy through their general store, Jameson and Sons, despite the irony of its name lacking any actual sons. Her father, caught up in the fervor of his desire for a male heir, had even found his way back to the church, praying fervently for a son. How could there be a Jameson and Sons without any sons? Whenever her father returned home, Cassidy would join him, sitting together and concocting grand plans to subvert the very establishment they were supposed to inherit.


However, life took a tragic turn on an otherwise ordinary night. Cassidy, unable to resist the allure of her mother's freshly baked pie, sneaked downstairs from her bed. As she descended the stairs, she heard the shuffle of feet and curiosity led her to peak around the corner, revealing her father sitting at the dining room chair, his face etched with distress. In that moment, the pie forgotten, Cassidy rushed to her father's side, enveloping him in a tight embrace.


"Pa, what's the matter?" she whispered, her young heart aching to ease his pain. "Would a slice of pie help? It always makes me feel better."


"Pie won't fix this, Cassy," he replied with a heaviness in his voice.


Perplexed, Cassidy suggested, "How about some pie with ice cream, then? Maybe that will help."


Her father managed a faint smile, his eyes reflecting a glimmer of hope. "Ice cream might just do the trick."


Determined to bring comfort to her father, Cassidy hurried outside to the dugout where they stored ice cream. Yet, as she was leaving the dugout, a deafening bang pierced the air, causing her ears to ring. Alarmed, she raced back to the house and peered through the window, witnessing the unthinkable—her father lying on the floor, bleeding, while the Marshal stood nearby, a smoking gun in hand. In that horrifying moment, Cassidy's world shattered into a million pieces.


Fear gripped her heart as she retreated behind the house, crouching down and rocking herself in a desperate attempt to find solace. Amidst the overwhelming grief, her father's final words echoed in her mind, a haunting reminder that no amount of ice cream could mend the shattered fragments of her life.


In the bleak aftermath of her father's death and her mother's tragic demise, Cassidy found herself alone, grappling with grief and a burning desire for justice. The sale of the family shop, the dismantling of their cherished legacy, served as a painful reminder of the void left by her father's absence. Her mother, burdened by the weight of loss and the anguish of a miscarriage, had reached her breaking point, choosing to take her own life and leaving Cassidy to face the world on her own. 

June 29, 2023 17:39

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