The Painter
The candlelight flickered against the damp walls of the small room, casting long, wavering shadows. The air smelled of turpentine, old bread, and damp wool—the mingling scents of an artist too poor to afford luxury but too proud to quit. A thin man sat hunched over a wooden table, his shoulders curled inward like a bird shielding itself from the cold. His fingers, stained with ochre and umber, moved with quick precision as he guided his brush across the canvas.
It was a city scene—a row of buildings stacked tightly together, their facades a mixture of pale sandstone and soot-streaked brick. The details were meticulous—each window precisely measured, each cornice and archway placed with architectural devotion. The perspective was flawless, the depth pulling the viewer’s eye naturally toward the cobbled street below.
But something was missing.
The people.
He sighed, wiping his hands on a rag and stepping back. There were figures on the street—shopkeepers, a woman in a long coat, a child clutching his mother’s skirts. But they were stiff. Hollow. They occupied space but did not belong to it. Their faces were blank, their movements unnatural, like marionettes suspended on invisible strings.
He grabbed a small sketchbook from the table and flipped through its pages. Dozens of attempts stared back at him—faces that never quite formed, hands positioned at awkward angles, eyes that refused to meet his gaze.
That morning, he had stood outside the cathedral, watching the way people moved—the way they adjusted their scarves against the wind, the way their bodies leaned into conversation. He had tried, with quick strokes of charcoal, to capture that life. But when he returned to his canvas, that life had drained away, leaving only empty forms.
He closed the sketchbook and reached for his palette. Perhaps it was not the figures themselves but their details that he had overlooked. He loaded his brush with a deep umber and carefully outlined the folds in the woman’s coat, adding weight to the way the fabric pulled against her stride. He deepened the shadows beneath the shopkeeper’s hat, sharpening the lines of his posture. But it was like layering color onto a mannequin—it did not breathe.
Frustration burned at the back of his throat. He had seen the works of great artists in galleries across the city—the vivid oils of old masters, the confident gestures of painters who understood the human form. They captured the soul of a subject, the flicker of thought behind their eyes, the weight of their presence in a room.
He had never been able to do that.
Buildings were easier. They stood still. They obeyed the rules of perspective, light, and shadow. They did not shift unpredictably, did not turn their faces away or carry thoughts he could not understand.
He looked back at the canvas.
Perhaps he should remove the figures entirely. A city scene untouched by human presence—empty streets, silent facades, a world built without people. That, at least, he could perfect.
A knock at the door startled him. He turned quickly, nearly knocking over the candle.
“Are you awake?” The landlord’s voice, gruff and impatient. “The rent was due two days ago.”
He swallowed. “I’ll have it soon.”
A pause. Then a scoff. “You’ll have nothing soon.”
Footsteps receded down the hall.
He turned back to the canvas. He would have to finish this piece quickly and find someone to buy it. The tourists in the city sometimes purchased paintings like these—charming, picturesque scenes of Vienna, neat and untroubled. Perhaps this one would be enough for another week’s rent.
Perhaps, he thought bitterly, he had been aiming at the wrong kind of art all along.
The next morning, he walked along the Danube, his satchel slung over his shoulder, his latest work carefully wrapped in brown paper. The city was just waking up, the streets alive with the sounds of clattering hooves, merchants setting up their stalls, and the occasional burst of laughter from a café terrace.
He passed a group of students—aspiring artists like himself—sitting on the steps of a gallery, sketching. One of them, a young man with smudged hands and an easy smile, caught his eye.
“Would you like to join us?” the young man asked, motioning to an empty spot beside him. His accent was different, softer—French, perhaps.
He hesitated.
For a moment, he considered it. He imagined sitting among them, exchanging ideas, discussing technique, growing better together.
But something inside him recoiled.
Their clothes were finer, their expressions lighter, untouched by the weight of failure. They would not understand.
“No,” he muttered, tightening his grip on his satchel. “I have work to do.”
The young artist shrugged, already returning to his sketch.
He walked on.
By midday, he found himself at the art dealer’s shop. The owner, a stout man with a bushy mustache, barely glanced up from his papers as he stepped inside.
“I have a new piece,” he said, unwrapping the painting and holding it up.
The dealer gave it a cursory glance. “The buildings are good,” he said gruffly. “The detail is impressive. But your figures…” He frowned. “They look like dolls. I can sell it, perhaps, but only if it’s cheap.”
His fingers curled around the frame. “How cheap?”
The man scribbled a number on a slip of paper and slid it across the counter.
His stomach tightened. It was barely enough for rent.
He should refuse. He should demand more, insist on his worth.
But hunger and desperation were stronger than pride.
“Fine,” he muttered, taking the money and shoving it into his coat.
He left the shop without another word, stepping back onto the crowded streets, his pockets heavier but his heart just as empty.
He had failed again.
Not just in selling his work, but in something deeper. In capturing something real. In creating something that mattered.
The professors at the Academy had been right. His talent was precise but cold. He could not see people. Not the way others did.
And if he could not see them, then perhaps they did not deserve to be seen.
Perhaps the world he built would be better without them.
The thought settled into him like a slow-growing root, quiet but firm.
Later that evening, as the candlelight flickered against the damp walls of his small room, he sat at his desk and sketched—not another cityscape, not another empty street.
This time, he drew something else. A symbol. Bold. Simple.
Something that people would see, even if they did not understand it yet.
A future.
A movement.
A new world.
He leaned back, studying the shape on the page, his fingers smudged with graphite. A slow, satisfied breath left his lips.
He whispered to himself, as if testing the weight of the words, as if sealing his fate with them.
“One day, they will all know my name. The world will remember me as the great artist—Adolf Hitler.”
And with that, he blew out the candle.
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