When Love Becomes A Cage

Submitted into Contest #286 in response to: Center your story around a character who’s struggling to let go.... view prompt

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African American Drama Fiction





Brandon was trapped in a marriage that felt like a prison, a brutal relationship he had tried countless times to leave behind. Emma, his wife of four years, refused to let him go. Every attempt to leave ended with threats—child support, court battles, and taking everything he had worked so hard to build.


Brandon had poured his soul into building his business from the ground up, and the thought of losing it made him feel as though his life’s work would be stripped away. He tried again and again to reason with Emma, to work out a fair plan, but it was always her way or no way. The endless frustration left him drained and broken.


One day, at the office, one of Brandon’s employees, Carlos, noticed how out of sorts he looked. "Brandon’s eyes were dull and heavy, framed by dark circles that revealed his sheer exhaustion." His neatly trimmed beard was beginning to grow out unevenly, and his clothes were wrinkled, as if he had been sleeping in them. The truth wasn’t far off—some nights, Brandon slept in his car to avoid going home and arguing with his wife, Emma. He would arrive at the office early, to freshen up in the restroom before anyone noticed.


“Hey, boss,” Carlos said cautiously, leaning against the doorframe of Brandon’s office. “You doing okay? You seem... off.”


Brandon forced a weak smile. “Yeah, man, Yeah, I’m fine. Just stressed, but it’s nothing I can’t handle.”


Carlos tilted his head, unconvinced. “You sure? you don’t look fine. Problems at home?” His voice was casual, but there was genuine concern in his eyes.


Brandon didn’t say a word at first, staring down at the desk. The silence stretched between them, heavy and telling. Carlos didn’t press, waiting for Brandon to respond in his own time.


Finally, Brandon exhaled deeply, his voice low and strained. “It’s complicated.”


Carlos stepped inside the office, closing the door behind him, he pulled up a chair and sat across from him. “Try me,” he said simply. “Sometimes talking it out helps.”


Carlos words lingered in Brandon’s mind, stirring a flood of memories. He thought back to the first time he met Emma. She had radiant dark skin that seemed to glow under the light, her beauty captivating everyone in the room. She was short, feisty, and carried herself with a polished elegance that demanded respect. When she walked into a room, she didn’t just enter she commanded attention. Her sharp, almond-shaped eyes missed nothing, and her full lips curved into a smile that hinted at both charm and mischief.


Emma exuded ambition, carrying herself with an air of self-assurance that was impossible to ignore. She spoke with intelligence and purpose, her voice firm yet inviting. She owned her own business; she was successful, and that was both impressive and inspiring. Brandon had been drawn to her independence, her drive, and the way she seemed to have it all figured out. She didn’t just dream; she made things happen, and that fire in her spirit had been magnetic.


But as time went on, that fire sometimes burned too bright, too harsh. The qualities that once seemed like strength started to feel like control, and the confidence that had drawn him to her now felt like a barrier he could never break through.


At first, their relationship had felt like a dream. Emma’s charm and wit made every moment electric. She had a way of making him feel like he was the most important person in the world, always encouraging him to pursue his goals and promising that they would build a future together. But looking back now, Brandon could see the cracks that had always been there—small things he had ignored because he was too blinded by love to see the warnings. Her words of encouragement sometimes carried an edge, a subtle reminder of her own dominance. Her laughter, once warm and inviting, had grown colder, often laced with judgment. Those moments, so fleeting at first, had slowly become the norm.


Then there were the financial red flags. Emma had insisted on opening a joint account shortly after they married, saying it would make things easier to manage. But Brandon noticed that while he was depositing money regularly, Emma rarely contributed. When he asked about it, she always had an excuse—her business was in a slow season, she had unexpected expenses, or she simply hadn’t had the time to make a deposit. And yet, the money seemed to disappear faster than he could replenish it. When he pressed her about it, the conversations quickly escalated into heated arguments.


Carlos nodded, his expression unreadable. “I hear you,” he said carefully. “And... I wasn’t going to say anything, but I’ve seen some things, man. Things that didn’t sit right with me.”


Brandon looked up sharply. “What do you mean?”


Carlos hesitated, running a hand over his face. “Look, I didn’t want to interfere. But I’ve seen Emma around town a few times—places that made me wonder what she was up to.”


“Like what?” Brandon demanded, his voice rising. “What places?”


Carlos leaned in slightly. “You know that lounge on Fifth?”

“Yeah, what about it?” Brandon replied, his curiosity piqued.

“I saw your wife there a few weeks ago,” Carlos said, choosing his words carefully. “She was with some guy. At first, I thought it was a business meeting, but…”

“But what?” Brandon interrupted.

“When I saw how they were acting, I knew it wasn’t business,” Carlos continued. “They were close—too close. That’s when I realized something wasn’t right.”


Brandon’s face turned pale, a storm of emotions flashing in his eyes—confusion, anger, and a deep sadness. “What are you saying? You think she’s cheating on me?”


“I don’t know, man,” Carlos admitted. “I’m just telling you what I saw. You deserve to know.”


Brandon sat back in his chair, his thoughts swirling in chaos. Carlos’s words hit like a sledgehammer, shaking loose memories he had fought to suppress. The late nights, the excuses, the growing distance between them—it all began to add up. Yet, even as the truth stared him in the face, a part of him clung to the hope that things could somehow be salvaged. Could he ever find the strength to let go?

Hope, however, was fleeting. Every time Brandon thought things might be getting better, Emma’s true colors would come through, shattering the fragile peace between them. “Do you want to leave me?” she would say. “Do you want to leave me!” Her voice dripping with anger. “Go ahead. By the time I’m done with you, you’ll be living in the streets. I’ll take it all. Don’t think for one second I’ll make it easy for you. You’ll lose it all, the house, the cars, the business, and I’ll make sure you’re drowning in child support. Go ahead, leave.”

Her words echoed in his mind, each threat a reminder of the price he would pay for his freedom. Brandon wasn’t just afraid of losing his assets; he was terrified of what it would mean for his son. Emma had a way of using their child as a pawn, making Brandon feel like leaving would mean abandoning his role as a father.


“She’s not who I thought she was,” Brandon said finally, “Damn it!” he shouted, banging his hand on the desk. “There were so many red flags that I ignored from the very beginning. I wanted to believe in us.”


Carlos placed a hand on his shoulder. “You’ve survived this long, man. That takes strength. You’re stronger than you think. And if you fall, you’ll get back up. But staying? Staying is the same as giving up.”


Carlos words echoed long after the conversation ended. Brandon couldn’t shake the thought: Maybe leaving wasn’t about losing—it was about finally choosing himself.

January 23, 2025 11:55

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