Submitted to: Contest #296

Three Wishes, Minus One

Written in response to: "Write about a character doing the wrong thing for the right reason."

Fiction Horror Urban Fantasy

They say the road to hell is paved with good intentions; Lena’s was paved with three wishes, the last one granted on a rainy night when she thought she could save humanity.

The rain fell in sheets across the windshield, each drop illuminated momentarily by the passing streetlights before being swept away. Lena’s eyes burned from twelve hours behind the wheel, her third consecutive day pulling a double shift. The Uber app chimed—another pickup.

“Five more rides,” she whispered, massaging her temples where a headache bloomed like ink in water. “Just five more and I can make rent.”

Her sedan pulled alongside the curb, wipers slashing frantically across the glass. Through the downpour, she saw him—an elderly man, impossibly thin, standing without umbrella or raincoat. Water streamed from his silver hair, yet he seemed unbothered, as if the rain passed through him rather than soaking him.

When he slid into the backseat, the interior temperature seemed to drop. Lena adjusted her rearview mirror, catching glimpses of his face—weathered as ancient parchment, with eyes that held a peculiar luminescence, like distant stars viewed through telescope lenses.

“Pleasant evening,” he remarked, his voice unexpectedly resonant in the small space.

Lena forced a laugh. “If you’re a duck, maybe.”

The old man didn’t respond, merely gazed out the window as city lights blurred against the deluge. The silence stretched between them, elastic and strange. Twice Lena attempted small talk, but her words evaporated in the space between them, leaving only the rhythmic thump of wipers and rain.

When they arrived at his destination—an unmarked building at the edge of downtown—he simply nodded, pressed a generous tip into the app, and disappeared into the night. Something about his departure left Lena unsettled, like waking from a dream she couldn’t quite remember.

She was three blocks away when she noticed it—a glint from the back seat. A ring, no larger than a quarter, cast prismatic light across the leather upholstery. Pulling to the curb, she reached back and lifted it. The metal was warm, almost uncomfortably so, and inscribed with symbols she couldn’t decipher. As she turned it in her palm, it pulsed with a deep crimson glow that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat.

A folded paper had been tucked inside the band. With trembling fingers, she unfolded it, revealing elegant script that seemed to shift beneath her gaze:

Three wishes. Two for you. One for another.

“Right,” Lena snorted, but her voice lacked conviction. The ring continued its steady pulse, casting ruddy shadows across her face. She pocketed it, dismissing the superstition even as her fingers kept returning to trace its contours through the fabric of her jeans.

That night, after counting out exactly half the money needed for rent, Lena lay awake in her studio apartment, listening to the radiator’s asthmatic wheeze. The ring sat on her nightstand, its crimson pulse matching the blinking of her alarm clock.

“This is ridiculous,” she told the empty room, but still she reached for it, slid it onto her finger. It adjusted immediately, contracting to fit her perfectly.

“If you’re magic,” she whispered, half-mocking, half-desperate, “I wish for money. Not just enough for rent—enough to never worry about money again.”

The ring flared briefly, then resumed its steady pulse. Lena’s laugh was hollow as she placed it back on the nightstand and closed her eyes, sleep finally claiming her beneath a blanket of rain.

***

Morning arrived with sunlight filtering through threadbare curtains, transforming Lena’s cramped studio into a kaleidoscope of dust motes and shadow. She reached instinctively for her phone, squinting at the screen’s harsh light while checking for ride requests.

Instead, a notification from her banking app caught her attention. She tapped it absently, expecting the familiar anxiety of a balance hovering near zero.

The number that greeted her made no sense. She blinked, rubbed her eyes, looked again. Seven digits where there should have been two. A deposit labeled only as “Anonymous Benefactor” had arrived at 3:33 AM—precisely when she’d made her wish.

“No,” Lena whispered, her voice trembling in the empty room. “That’s not—it can’t—”

Her finger hovered over the ring, which now pulsed with a slightly dimmer red, as if some of its vitality had transferred into her bank account. She slid it on again, feeling its warm weight settle against her skin like an old friend.

Three debt collectors called that morning. Each conversation began with threats and ended with confused apologies. By noon, her landlord had received six months’ rent in advance. By evening, she had paid off her mother’s medical bills and her sister’s student loans.

The money was real. Tangible. Transformative.

Lena stood before the bathroom mirror, studying herself. The same dark circles stained the skin beneath her eyes. The same premature lines etched her forehead. The same persistent ache haunted her lower back—a souvenir from a car accident three years prior.

She had money now, yes. But what was wealth without the health to enjoy it?

The ring seemed to pulse in agreement as she turned it on her finger. A second wish beckoned—tantalizingly close, impossibly tempting.

“I want perfect health,” she whispered to her reflection, watching the ring’s crimson light cast her face in blood-red shadow. “No sickness. No pain. No aging.”

The sensation began at her core—a liquid warmth spreading outward through her veins like honey dissolved in hot tea. It pooled in her aching back, dissolved the knot of tension between her shoulder blades, soothed the arthritic twinge in her knees. Even her teeth felt stronger, whiter.

The mirror revealed subtle changes—her skin smoother, eyes brighter, posture straightened by the absence of pain. Not dramatically different, but better. Optimized. As if someone had adjusted her reflection the way photographers edit portraits, enhancing what was already there.

Lena laughed—a sound of pure, unfiltered joy she hadn’t produced in years. She danced around her small apartment, reveling in the absence of discomfort, the promise of longevity.

The ring’s glow had dimmed further, now a gentle pulse like distant embers. She examined the note again, running her thumb over the elegant script:

Three wishes. Two for you. One for another.

Two wishes spent. One remained. But this last one, according to the cryptic instructions, couldn’t be for her. It had to benefit someone else.

“So what?” she rationalized, pacing her apartment with newfound energy. “I keep it. Save it for Mom, or Jenny’s kids. Someone who needs it.”

But something troubled her about the diminishing glow—as if the ring itself were impatient, waiting to fulfill its purpose. She slid it off, placed it in a jewelry box, and hid it in her dresser drawer beneath a stack of t-shirts.

That night, she dreamed of the old man, his star-bright eyes penetrating her thoughts. In the dream, he stood in her apartment, pointing silently at the dresser where the ring lay hidden.

“It’s mine,” she told him in the dream. “Finders keepers.”

His smile was sad, knowing. When he spoke, his voice seemed to emanate not from his mouth but from the walls themselves: “Nothing so powerful is ever truly possessed, Lena. It possesses you.”

She woke with the ring clutched in her palm, though she had no memory of retrieving it from the drawer. Its red glow illuminated her bedroom, casting long shadows that seemed to move independently of any light source.

***

The next three weeks unfolded like a dream from which Lena feared waking. She left her job, moved to a penthouse overlooking the city, and watched her investments multiply with impossible speed. Her body remained flawless—no headaches, no fatigue, not even a paper cut marred her perfect health.

Yet the ring’s presence haunted her. Each morning it appeared in her palm upon waking, regardless of where she’d hidden it the night before. Its glow had dimmed to a barely perceptible flicker, like the last ember in a dying fire, awaiting the breath that would ignite it once more.

The news grew increasingly dire. Civil unrest. Border skirmishes. Nuclear posturing. Lena watched it all from the safety of her gleaming tower, trying to ignore the growing weight of the ring, now heavy as a stone against her skin.

***

On the twenty-third night after her first wish, Lena stood on her balcony, watching distant demonstrations flicker like fireflies across the city center. Police lights strobed against glass facades. The ring burned cold against her finger.

Her phone rang—her sister Jenny, voice tense with worry.

“They’re calling up reservists, Lena. Marcus got his notice today. Thirty-six hours to report.”

Marcus, Jenny’s husband. Father to five-year-old twins.

“It’s insane,” Jenny continued, her voice cracking. “Everyone’s saying this is it—the big one. Some analyst on CNN said we’re closer to global conflict than we’ve been since 1962.”

After they hung up, Lena clutched the railing, watching a military convoy snake through downtown streets. The third wish pulsed between her heartbeats, a forbidden temptation.

One for another.

The balcony doors slid open behind her. Lena whirled, heart hammering—but found only empty air. A breeze rustled the curtains, carrying distant shouts and sirens.

“Who’s there?” Her voice sounded thin, frightened.

No answer came, yet she felt watched—studied—by eyes she couldn’t see. The ring’s dim light seemed to flare briefly, responding to her fear.

Turning back to the cityscape, Lena’s gaze landed on a newspaper headline displayed on her tablet: “DIPLOMATIC TALKS FAIL; MILITARY READINESS AT HIGHEST LEVEL.”

The decision crystallized inside her, a dawning certainty that felt simultaneously like surrender and resolve. She raised her hand, watching the ring’s feeble light pulse against her skin.

“It has to be for everyone,” she whispered. “Not just Marcus, or Jenny’s kids. Everyone.”

The weight of power settled across her shoulders. With wealth came isolation. With health came the burden of watching others suffer. Perhaps with peace…

“My final wish,” she said, voice strengthening. “I wish for world peace.”

The ring’s color transformed instantly—from dim crimson to absolute black, a darkness that seemed to absorb light rather than emit it. The sensation wasn’t warmth this time, but a cold so profound it burned. The blackness spread from the ring up her arm like spilled ink, momentarily enveloping her in complete darkness.

When her vision cleared, Lena noticed the silence first. The ever-present urban symphony—car horns, distant conversations, music spilling from apartments—had vanished. The city stood eerily mute beneath a star-filled sky.

She reached for her phone, dialed Jenny. The call connected, but her sister’s voice sounded oddly flat.

“Hello, Lena.”

“Jenny? Are you okay? What’s happening with Marcus?”

“Marcus is fine. There won’t be any war.”

“That’s… that’s good, right? Jenny?”

“Yes. It’s good. Goodbye, Lena.”

The line went dead. No emotion. No relief. No gratitude. Just empty acknowledgment.

***

Dawn broke over a city Lena no longer recognized. From her balcony, she watched people move along sidewalks in orderly lines, their faces vacant as mannequins. No one hurried. No one lingered. No one smiled or frowned or gestured as they spoke in muted, efficient exchanges.

The ring had become a cold, dead weight on her finger—a black hole that neither reflected nor emitted light. She couldn’t remove it; it had fused to her skin like a scar that would never heal.

Venturing outside, Lena walked through a shopping district that had bustled with chaotic life just yesterday. Now shoppers moved with mechanical precision, selecting items without expression, paying without complaint.

At a crowded intersection, she deliberately bumped into a businessman.

“Hey, watch it!” she snapped.

The man turned empty eyes toward her. “I apologize,” he said without inflection, then continued walking.

No anger. No irritation. Nothing.

Panic rising, Lena shoved a teenager, knocked the phone from his hand.

“What’s wrong with you?” she shouted. “Aren’t you mad?”

The boy simply retrieved his phone. “No harm done,” he said in the same flat tone as the businessman, the same flat tone as Jenny.

Heart hammering, Lena ran through the city, testing her horrifying theory. She cut in lines. Spilled coffee on strangers. Played music at full volume in quiet spaces. Each transgression met with the same placid acceptance, the same absence of reaction.

At a neighborhood park, she found a child who had fallen from a swing. The girl stood expressionless beside her skinned knee, blood trickling down her shin.

“Doesn’t that hurt?” Lena asked, kneeling beside her.

“Yes,” the child answered.

“Then why aren’t you crying?”

The girl’s vacant eyes met Lena’s. “Crying would disturb others.”

Her mother approached—walking, not running—and bandaged the wound with efficient movements. No comforting words. No kisses to make it better.

***

In a downtown square, Lena found a man with a microphone addressing a small crowd. His words advocated for environmental protection, yet his voice carried no passion, his audience showed no engagement. When he finished, they dispersed without applause or discussion.

“Excuse me,” Lena approached him. “Don’t you care if they agree with you?”

“Everyone agrees,” he replied. “There is nothing to dispute.”

“But—”

“Peace means absence of conflict. Conflict requires disagreement. There is no disagreement.”

The truth crystallized in her mind, terrible and complete. Her wish hadn’t created harmony—it had erased the capacity for discord. Without the ability to disagree, to feel strongly, to choose differently than others, humanity had become a collection of automatons, moving through life without passion or purpose.

No war, yes. But also no debate. No discovery. No art that challenged or provoked. No love that consumed or transformed.

Days blurred into weeks. Museums closed—their contents deemed unnecessarily provocative. Theaters went dark—drama required conflict. Music simplified to mathematical patterns without emotional resonance.

Governments dissolved, replaced by administrative units that merely coordinated resources. Elections ceased—what was there to vote on when everyone agreed? Religious institutions consolidated, doctrinal differences evaporating into bland spiritual uniformity.

Through it all, Lena remained unchanged—her mind still capable of rage, joy, despair. The black ring ensured she alone retained free will, witnessing the horror her selfless wish had wrought.

She tried everything to reverse it. Pleaded with the ring. Attempted to destroy it. Sought out the old man’s unmarked building, now vacant like so many others. Even contemplated ending her own life, wondering if the spell might die with her.

But the ring’s blackness mocked her efforts. The note had warned, though she hadn’t understood: One for another. She’d wished for everyone else, changing them while leaving herself unchanged—creating a world where she alone could still choose, still feel, still disagree.

She was utterly, completely alone.

***

Six months after her final wish, Lena sat in what had once been a vibrant café. Around her, people consumed food without enjoyment, conversed without animation. A barista handed her a coffee with the same vacant efficiency that characterized this new world.

Lena clutched the cold ring, turning it on her finger, feeling the weight of eternity before her. How long would her perfect health sustain her in this hell of her own creation? Decades? Centuries?

“I just wanted to do something good,” she whispered to no one, her voice breaking the perfect, terrible silence.

The world stared back with indifferent eyes, incapable of judgment, forgiveness, or understanding.

Outside, the sun shone on a perfect, peaceful world where choice had become the ultimate casualty of tranquility, and where Lena—wealthy, healthy, and utterly alone—would bear witness to the cost of peace without freedom for as long as her immortal body endured.

The black ring pulsed once, a singular acknowledgment of her eternal sentence.

Posted Mar 30, 2025
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35 likes 17 comments

Barrel Coops
16:47 Apr 08, 2025

Very thought-provoking. That old adage, Be careful what you wish for, springs to mind. As it has for others, I see.

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Ellen Neuborne
00:25 Apr 08, 2025

This is why you should practice your three wishes — so you’ll be ready when the time comes! Fun story.

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Rebecca Buchanan
20:52 Apr 07, 2025

Be careful what you wish for, very well written, and no boring "happy ending" you feel the angst even after the story is finished.

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Shauna Bowling
15:26 Apr 07, 2025

What an amazing story! I was captivated with every word, every sentence. Your mastery of "show, don't tell" along with the protagonist's inner turmoil kept me glued to the page. The moral here that resonates with me is to choose our words carefully and intentionally. Had Lena wished for harmony rather than peace, the story and her seemingly selfless final wish would have had an entirely different outcome.

Well done, Jim! These are the kind of stories that capture my attention and propel me to read more from the author.

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Sandra Moody
13:14 Apr 07, 2025

It seems we all create our own worlds with our wants and wishes! Loved this one!

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Helen A Howard
10:31 Apr 06, 2025

Everything has its price. Peace means absence of conflict. Excellent story. Love the effortless play of concepts in a story that resonates with meaning and relevance.

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P. Turner
05:36 Apr 06, 2025

Really interesting story. Sad that trying to do something good can have such unintended consequences.

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Jen Mengarelli
23:13 Apr 05, 2025

So well done and devastating ending! Great job, Jim!

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Lena Hazim
21:42 Apr 05, 2025

I really liked this story! I was initially intrigued because I saw the main character had my name, but I stayed because of how philosophically sound it is. We both talk about war in our stories, but in different ways I more so focused on how most people are disgusted by war but won't actually do anything to stop it and you focus on the necessity of war, which I found really interesting. Although id I say I was more preachy about it which I definetely need to work on. Once again, I really enjoyed this well done!

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Dennis C
21:08 Apr 05, 2025

Loved how this one unfolds, the way Lena’s choices spiral into something so haunting. Got a knack for making us feel the weight of those wishes without preaching. It's hard to find a wish that ISN'T actually for yourself, eh?

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Elaine Steffen
17:47 Apr 05, 2025

It does make one think about the cliché answer to "What do you want?" "World Peace"sometimes conflict is what makes us human, gives us depth and challenges us.

I enjoyed reading this story. Well done.

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Martha Kowalski
13:43 Apr 05, 2025

A great one here Jim - brilliant!

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14:25 Apr 02, 2025

Oh blimey, this really does say 'be careful what you wish for!' Compelling and well written as usual! Great writing Jim.

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Rebecca Hurst
13:17 Apr 02, 2025

This is philosophically sound. War appears to be necessary whether we like it or not. You have written it in such a clever style that it doesn't sound polemic, but matter-of-fact. I really like this, Jim. Well done for stating what has always been rather obvious to me.

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Calvin Kirby
15:09 Mar 31, 2025

Fascinating story Jim. You don't always appreciate what you wish for. I loved that she wanted to do good, but the result came back to bite her in the butt. Good story.😊 Cal

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Alexis Araneta
14:44 Mar 30, 2025

Jim, your creativity with concepts is always on point. Incredible work !

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Jim LaFleur
14:47 Mar 30, 2025

Same with you, Alexis. I always enjoy your work!

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