Rouge: Alice's Transformation

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After the horrible mistake has happened, Alice had fell into the ground, she's in a deep sleep. And all the kids except for Rebecca and Anna and Lincoln stayed there.


Kid: Somebody call 911.


Kid 2: There's a phone next to the fire alarm.


Rebecca: Alice?


Lincoln: Alice?


They both tried to call her name but she didn't respond, she did hear them but she can't open her eyes.


Rebecca: Alice can you hear me?


Anna: What happened.


Rebecca: Don't know.


Anna: Not to mention, I heard all this coughing and sneezing and then later all the sudden the snot and the blood came out.


Anna: Alice, please respond.


One of these main students began to cry.


Kid 1 : Ambulance is here.


And the people came inside and started taking Alice to the bed where she'll be safe from now on.


Anna: Is she gonna be okay?


Principal: I'm 300% positive.


Lincoln got into Rebecca's arms and then he started crying. Rebecca knows how the emotion just ran into his head and his heart. Other words, that disease really hurts. And everyone was very worried.



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Meanwhile in the hospital, Alice had opened her eyes and then she found herself in the nurses bedroom, the nurses office was ahead.

She never know about what did really happen to her. She was knowing that the disease just made it worse to all the kids in the county of the city, however, thanks to Alice, she must know the reason why she has a transformation.


Alice: Where am I?


She said. And she did sound pretty different. And then she pumped her head a little bit and then said.


Alice: Why's my head reached to the wall?


Nurse: Haven't you heard?


Alice: No mam.


I might wanna ask the nurse about what truly happen though but anyway, that's what I'm gonna ask her.


Alice: Why I'm in the bedroom?


Nurse: Of course this is the bedroom, but your in for the reason of the disease, but we're very proud of you by following the simple rules of that stuff. So anyway, the reason why your in here for a secret surprise, that's because you have the "Rozella's Disease." You know what that means right?


Alice: No mam.


Nurse: Rozella's Disease is like you started having some unknown issues of meeting a star before and every time you see him or her in tight clothes, you pass out right?


Alice: Yes mam, but how?


Nurse: I'm not sure what yet. But anyway, the time you feel something like a panic, you started coughing out blood, and then, every time you sneeze out of your mouth or nose, it comes out snot with pink stuff right?


Alice: Yes mam, but why would pink mix in with the snot? I thought the snot color was green and yellow.


Nurse: I know, but for females, they get to have pink in their


Alice: What are they symptoms?


Nurse: low temperature at 58.9, coughing, sneezing, period, and that's all.


Alice: You said the period the one we use pads on right?


Nurse: Right, so at this time, you might wanna get up and i'll give you a different underwear and an pad just n case you see any blood.


Alice: Alright.


This nurse is a genius. She always comes up with the solution and details when it comes to diseases. So I got both the stuff and just ran into the bathroom.


Nurse: (sighs)


-knock on door.


Nurse: Who is it?


Principal: Is Alice okay?


She saw her door a tiny bit half open and she hoped that none of the males come around and starting to hear all of this. Cause that disease is a secret.


Nurse: She's fine.


Principal: I supposed.


He closed the door. And sighed.


Nurse: How you feeling over there?


Alice: Good, I'm coming out.


She said. The nurse was worried all cause she had the Rozella's disease.


But luckily it was all fine but safe.


Alice: Ready.


As she opened the door, the nurse had looked at her and said.


Nurse: You feeling okay?


Alice: Yes.


Nurse: Now, onto the secret surprise.


Alice: What surprise?


Nurse: You know what your going to get?


Alice: What?


Nurse: A body transplant.


Alice: Into who?


Nurse: Who's your favorite superstar?


Alice: Aurora Goodman.


Nurse: Let's get working.


Alice: Is it gonna hurt right.


Nurse: If your in deep sleep that's not gonna hurt but if your awake, that's gonna hurt for 7 minutes. You ready?


Alice: Ready.


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After the surprise. Alice opened her eyes and then she saw herself looking at the shadow.


Nurse: You okay?


Alice: Yep.


And then just to let you now, the nurse just did a few changes, hair, eyes, and she said I'm gonna get myself fit and easy.


Nurse: Alice, meet your favorite?


Alice: What favorite?


Nurse: Your favorite.


As she opened the door, she saw the famous stars in the world, Aurora Goodman. Oh my goodness!!! It's Aurora Goodman. She's gonna shout out.


Aurora: (to the nurse) I never know you have a mirror.


Nurse: This is no mirror, this is Alice Masses.


Alice: Hey.


Aurora: I never know that....


She stopped and then Aurora recognized that I'm up to her height and then she haven't done anything to hers. We're both the same but we have different clothes on. Different hair color and eyes,


Alice/Aurora: You look just like me.


Nurse: That's right.


Aurora: How did you have my look?


Alice: Easy Rozella's Disease. How about you?


Aurora: Just a cold, that's because I got walking pneumonia.


Alice: Your the popstar?


Aurora: Superstar. Yes of course.


Alice: Oh my goodness. Your fantastic,


Aurora: Thank you.


We both have the same voice though but this stuff right here needs a little difference.


Nurse: Just in case you need to wear these bracelets.


Alice: Thank you Nurse.


Nurse: Anytime.



After the nurse time, the two girls walk out and then showed everyone their switched bodies.


Rebecca: What the...


Lincoln: You guys look?


Everyone walked around them and looked at Aurora and Alice. They looked confused.


Alice: Look at these kids.


Aurora: First of all, is it just me, or did they just gasped, or you just sucked up all their oxygen,


Alice: Apparently cause my hair jut streaked in with blue and pink,


Anna: Did you to know each other?


Alice: We first met at the nurse.


Rebecca: And what's up with these bracelets?


Alice: Beautiful looking.


Anna: You beautiful.


Aurora: Thank you Anna.


Anna: (gasped) She knows my name.


And she fainted.


Alice: Sounds like we got work to do.


Aurora: Ready to work?


Alice: Ready to fly.


As everyone applauded except for Anna, she knows what really did happen to Alice. She had a body transplant in order to switch with Aurora Goodman.





May 29, 2020 18:04

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Cinnamon Pilcher
18:53 Sep 27, 2020

According to this scene, I should say that the flu shot that Alice is going to be getting, is going to place her life into Aurora Goodman. The canary-blonde hair and the same color eyes has her. Meaning she's going to be Aurora Goodman for 2 weeks. Since her old body is up to no good.

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