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Science Fiction Friendship Fiction

The gray metal of the freighter spacecraft's halls rumbled and vibrated with the activity of the engine. Fans whirred, pushing purified air into the living spaces and sucking out the stale. Heaters warmed the walls and floors. Lights glowed on the balding heads of some, and cast stark shadows on muscles pulled taut in many faces. The freighterโ€™s entire crew was assembled in a line with their backs against the wall, hands on their heads. Their safety suits and air tanks were on, but not their helmets. Those had been taken from them.ย 


The pirate captainโ€™s voice crackled from the speaker on his safety suit as he strolled down the line of freighter crewmen his people were holding at gunpoint. โ€œI just have one more thing I want from you.โ€


As he stared straight ahead, Joshua David, one of the two youngest members of the crew, asked himself what the pirate captain could possibly want from them that he didnโ€™t already have. So far the pirates had stolen as much of the freighterโ€™s cargo as they could fit into their smaller hold, and rifled the few possessions in the cabins. There was nothing left except the ship itself.ย 


Standing beside Josh in the line, Rich, the other youngest member of the crew, asked himself why their own captain hadnโ€™t found a way to keep the pirates from boarding them. They were losing half their cargo, and on top of that, the pirates had stolen his handheld gaming device.ย 


โ€œAny volunteers to join us? โ€˜A pirateโ€™s life for meโ€™, the jolly brotherhood, all that kind of thing. Any takers? We always want new blood and muscle.โ€


Rich looked at the pirates standing across from him, wielding such power, with no one to stop them. He asked himself if working on a freighter under a captain who could be one-upped by lawbreakers was attractive to him, and decided it was more attractive to be a one-upping law breaker. He stepped forward. โ€œIโ€™ll come.โ€ His ginger hair and scraggly beard were wild and bright in the harsh lighting. He looked at Josh and grinned. โ€œCome on!โ€


โ€œRich,โ€ Josh said, โ€œtheyโ€™re pirates.โ€ He asked himself what his friend could possibly be thinking, and hoped that stating the obvious would make him realize his mistake, and step back into line.ย 


โ€œPirates are cool,โ€ Rich informed Josh. Turning to look at the rest of the crew, he hooted, โ€œSo long, suckers!โ€ and grabbed Josh and dragged him out of the lineup.ย 


โ€œWhy him?โ€ the pirate captain asked.ย 


โ€œHeโ€™s my buddy.โ€ Rich shot Josh a look, silently asking him to just be quiet and come.ย 


The pirate captain held up his hand to stop the two from joining his ranks. โ€œYou need to break ties with your captain before you can come with us.โ€ย 


โ€œHow?โ€ Rich asked. He sounded all too eager.ย 


โ€œHeโ€™s right there. Tell him.โ€


โ€œTell him what?โ€ย 


โ€œIf you donโ€™t know what you want to tell him, maybe you donโ€™t want to come with us badly enough. We donโ€™t want you thinking you can just come back to these people. If you come with us, itโ€™s for good. Make your choiceโ€ย 


Rich turned to the freighterโ€™s captain, asking himself what the pirate captain would want to hear, what would prove him worthy to be a pirate, too. He decided cussing the captain out was the best idea. โ€œโ€ฆand Iโ€™m done working for you.โ€ Then Rich stepped backwards into the line of pirates, elbowing for space.ย 


โ€œWell?โ€ the pirate captain asked, looking at Josh.ย 


Rich hollered, โ€œTell him off, Josh!โ€ย 


โ€œGo on then!โ€ the freighterโ€™s first officer shouted, jabbing a finger at Josh. All the pirates swung their weapons to point at the irate man. โ€œKnew we shouldnโ€™t have taken on kids like you! If youโ€™re such good buddies with that no-account deserter, we donโ€™t want you, either! Get out!โ€ย 


โ€œMr. Longโ€”โ€ the freighter's captain started, sounding angry and giving the first officer a hard look, but he was cut off by the pirate captain.


โ€œShut up!โ€ the man barked, shoving his helmet-visored face close to the freighter captainโ€™s exposed face. โ€œYou gonna tell off your guy for saying what the rest of your crew is thinking? Those two are mine now, not yours.โ€ The pirate leader pulled back and jostled Joshua. โ€œTell him youโ€™re not his anymore.โ€ The manโ€™s voice fell to a quieter tone, so only Joshua could hear him. โ€œDo it or Iโ€™m killing you. Youโ€™ve come too far for me to let you pull out.โ€ He slapped Joshua on the back. โ€œIf you even look sorry, youโ€™re dead.โ€ The pirate backed up into his own line of men, leaving Joshua alone in the no-manโ€™s-land between the two crews.ย 


Joshua asked himself what he wanted more: his life, or to be polite to the captain. Then he looked the man who had been his captain in the eyes, summoned all the anger he could, and shouted all the most terrible words heโ€™d never used before at the man whoโ€™d done him only good. Then, out of breath, he turned his back on his former crew and pushed into the line of pirates, telling himself he had made the right decision.


Two of the pirates offered their new recruits the helmets theyโ€™d taken from them. De-helmeting the crew was a common piratical practice. It made it easier for them to shoot the crew if they misbehaved.ย 


As the pirates turned and hustled them into the airlock with their new captain, Rich wrapped an arm around his friendโ€™s shoulders. โ€œCome on, Josh. Donโ€™t tell me you never once thought pirates were cool.โ€ย 


โ€œI did until I read Treasure Island,โ€ Joshua muttered.ย 


โ€œNever read it. This is gonna be great.โ€


In his mindโ€™s eye, again and again Josh saw the hurt and anger well up in the face of the captain, the man who had given him a job when no one else at the last spaceport would, and had done the same for Rich. He asked himself if this was worth what heโ€™d done.ย 


Meanwhile, Rich asked after his handheld game, and happily punched a pirate in the shoulder when it was given back. He got shoved in return, and grinned. It felt good to be part of a powerful brotherhood.ย 

June 22, 2024 00:13

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Kristi Gott
02:07 Jun 22, 2024

A good pirate adventure told in a modern setting and style! Action, suspense, conflict, and some regrets. Well done!

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Thanks for reading, Kristi! I like pirate stories and sci-fi, so combining the two is great fun. Iโ€™m glad it was enjoyable!

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Thank you for reading. Critiques, feedback, and comments are greatly appreciated. This is a prequel to my previous story "What a David Does."

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