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Christmas Romance

I’d rented the cabin to escape the chaos of the holidays, not to entertain strangers. The storm hit hard, turning the surrounding forest into an impenetrable wall of white. I’d barely settled into the place, and my only company was the low hum of a fire and the occasional creak of the old wooden beams. That’s when I heard the pounding at the door—relentless, desperate.


I opened it to find a young woman bundled in a too-thin coat, her cheeks flushed red from the cold. Snowflakes clung to her eyelashes, giving her the appearance of some misplaced winter angel.


“Please,” she gasped, trembling. “My car… It’s stuck, and I can’t…”

I hesitated, the weight of solitude pulling at me. But her eyes—vivid, desperate—left me no choice. “Come in,” I said gruffly, stepping aside.


The woman stumbled inside, shedding her coat with clumsy fingers. Beneath it, she wore a slim red dress that clung to her curves, entirely unsuited for the weather. She caught me staring and wrapped her arms around herself self-consciously.


“Thank you,” she said, her voice soft now. “I didn’t know what else to do.”


“You shouldn’t be out here,” I replied, grabbing a blanket from the couch and draping it over her shoulders. “What were you thinking?”

She sank into the armchair near the fire, her eyes following the flames. “I was driving to meet someone,” she said vaguely. “The snow came out of nowhere. I thought I could make it, but then the car skidded, and…” She shuddered. “I’m Leah, by the way.”


“Daniel,” I said, pulling a chair across from her. “You’re lucky to be alive.”


She smiled. “Merry Christmas, huh?”


The hours passed slowly as the storm raged outside. I’d offered Leah a mug of hot cocoa—the only thing I had besides whiskey and canned soup—and she held it tightly, her fingers brushing the ceramic as if to absorb every ounce of warmth.


“So, Daniel,” she said, her voice breaking the comfortable silence.


“What’s your story? Why are you out here alone?”


I shrugged. “Needed a break. Too much family, too many obligations. You?”


Her gaze darkened slightly. “A bad decision. That’s all.”


“Running from something?” I asked.


“Aren’t we all?” she countered, her lips puckering. “Maybe it’s fate that brought me here. Some cosmic joke.”


“Fate doesn’t usually come in the form of a blizzard,” I said dryly.

Her laugh was low, almost sultry. “Maybe not. But it does have a sense of humor.”


As the evening deepened, the power flickered and went out, plunging the cabin into shadows. The fire became our sole source of light, casting flickering patterns on the walls. The intimacy of the space grew more pronounced—a bubble of warmth in the howling cold.


Leah stood, wrapping the blanket tightly around herself. “It’s so quiet,” she remarked. “Like the world’s disappeared.”


“It might as well have,” I replied, watching her move. She had a grace that was both natural and practiced, like someone used to being observed.


“You’re staring,” she said without looking at me, her tone teasing.

I didn’t deny it. “You’re hard to ignore.”


She turned, her eyes catching the firelight. “You don’t seem like the type to give compliments lightly.”


“I’m not.”


The air between us thickened, charged with unspoken tension. She took a step closer, her bare feet silent on the wooden floor. “You’re not what I expected, Daniel.”


“And what did you expect?” I asked, my voice low.


“A gruff recluse. Someone who’d slam the door in my face.”


“Maybe I should have,” I said, though my words lacked conviction.


She smiled. “But you didn’t.”


Leah sat beside me on the couch, the blanket slipping from her shoulders. Her dress shimmered in the firelight, a stark contrast to the rough, rustic surroundings.


“Can I ask you something?” she said softly.


I nodded, my throat suddenly dry.


“Do you always keep people at arm’s length?” she asked.


“Depends on the person,” I replied.


“And me?” Her voice was a whisper now.


I didn’t answer. Instead, I leaned in, closing the distance between us. Her lips were warm and soft, tasting faintly of cocoa. She responded immediately, her hands tangling in my hair as the fire crackled behind us.


The kiss deepened, a collision of need and heat. When we finally broke apart, she was breathing hard, her cheeks flushed.


“I didn’t expect that,” she sighed, her fingers still tracing the line of my jaw.


“Neither did I,” I admitted. “But I don’t regret it.”




Later, the fire burned lower, the embers casting a soft glow over the room. Leah leaned against me, her head resting on my shoulder. My arm draped over her, fingers lightly brushing her arm. The silence between us was rich, not awkward, the kind of quiet that spoke volumes.


“I don’t want to be alone tonight,” she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper. She turned to face me, her eyes dark with intent.


“You’re not,” I replied, my voice low and steady.


She shifted, her hand coming to rest on my chest. “No,” she said, her eyes meeting mine. “I mean, I don’t want to feel alone.”


Her words hung in the air, charged and unmistakable. She leaned in closer, her lips brushing mine with a deliberate slowness that was hypnotic. This kiss was different—deeper, hungrier, an unraveling of all the tension that had been simmering between us since she’d walked through the door.


Leah slid into my lap, her movements unhurried but decisive. Her hands roamed over my shoulders, pulling me closer as her lips claimed mine. The blanket fell away, leaving her in just that thin, clinging dress. The heat of her body, the softness of her curves against me—it was intoxicating.


“Leah,” I murmured against her lips, my hands settling at her waist.

“Are you sure?”


She pulled back slightly, her eyes meeting mine. “I’ve never been more sure of anything.”


Her words ignited something in me. I stood, lifting her effortlessly as she wrapped her legs around my waist. The bedroom was just steps away, but it felt like a universe. By the time we reached it, we were both breathless, our kisses growing more fervent with each passing second.


I laid her on the bed gently, pausing to take in the sight of her—cheeks flushed, hair tousled, her lips swollen from our kisses. She reached for me, her fingers curling into the fabric of my shirt, pulling me down to her.


The night stretched on, filled with whispered words and soft gasps, the storm outside a distant memory. Every touch, every kiss, felt like the culmination of something inevitable, something neither of us could deny any longer.


The storm eased by dawn, leaving the world blanketed in pristine snow. Leah stood at the window, her silhouette outlined by the pale light. She’d changed into one of my old flannel shirts, the hem brushing her thighs.


“It’s beautiful,” she said, her breath fogging the glass. “Like nothing bad could ever touch it.”


I joined her, slipping an arm around her waist. “Looks can be deceiving.”


She turned to face me, her expression unreadable. “What happens now, Daniel?”


“You tell me,” I said. “You’re the one who stumbled into my life.”

Her smile was bittersweet. “Maybe I’ll stay a little longer.”


And for the first time in years, I hoped she would.


Leah stayed. At first, it was practical—the snow hadn’t melted enough for her to even think about retrieving her car. But as the hours stretched into days, practicality gave way to something else, something neither of us wanted to define too clearly.


By the third night, we’d fallen into a rhythm. I’d chop firewood in the morning while she cooked breakfast, always managing to scrape together something edible from my limited supplies. We’d talk about everything and nothing, the hours sliding by like a dream.


“Tell me something real about you,” Leah said one night, her legs curled under her on the couch. The firelight danced in her eyes, and she looked impossibly beautiful, as if the storm had brought her into focus just for me.


“Something real?” I asked, sitting across from her. “Like what?”


“Something you’d never tell anyone else,” she said, her tone teasing but her eyes serious.


I hesitated, then said, “I came here to avoid my family. But not for the reasons you think. They’re not overbearing or difficult. They’re… perfect. Too perfect. Every holiday is a reminder of how much I don’t fit in.”


Leah’s expression softened. “You’re running from that?”


I nodded. “I’ve spent my whole life trying to be something I’m not.


This cabin… it’s the only place where I feel like myself.”


She leaned forward, her hand brushing mine. “You seem pretty perfect to me.”


The words hung between us, heavy with meaning. I leaned in, my lips finding hers again, and this time, there was no hesitation, no uncertainty. The kiss deepened, and the world outside faded into nothing.


By the end of the week, the snow had melted enough for Leah to leave. Her car, buried under layers of ice and snow, had miraculously survived the storm. We stood by the cabin door, the silence between us louder than any words could have been.


“I don’t know how to thank you,” Leah said, her voice breaking slightly.


“You don’t have to,” I said. “But if you’re ever in the area…”


She smiled, and for the first time, I saw something vulnerable in her eyes. “Maybe fate will bring me back here.”


As I watched her drive away, a part of me hoped that it would. For the first time in years, I wasn’t running from anything. Instead, I found myself waiting—for her, for whatever came next, for the possibility of something more.

January 02, 2025 22:56

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Jes Oakheart
19:30 Jan 09, 2025

Hi Ronald! I was matched with you for the critique circle. I loved the "snowed in" trope and you pulled it off beautifully. The dialogue between the characters was electric! I loved how Leah kept noticing things about Daniel, like how he held people at arms length. She was very intuitive and insightful and it made me really like her character. She was also very mysterious and I wanted to learn more about her. The ending was just so perfect, how Daniel realized he didn't want to run away from her. The overall vibes of this story were immacula...

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09:30 Jan 10, 2025

Hi there Jes! Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind words about my story "Snowbound on Christmas Eve!" I’m thrilled you enjoyed the “snowed in” trope—I had a lot of fun writing it and creating that cozy, intimate atmosphere where Leah and Daniel’s connection could really shine. I’m especially glad you liked Leah’s character. Her intuition and insight were key elements I wanted to highlight, and hearing that you found her mysterious and engaging makes my day! Daniel’s growth by the end of the story was so important to me, and it’s g...

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Jes Oakheart
18:18 Jan 10, 2025

You're so welcome! Thanks for writing such a compelling story!

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