A man's love is what any woman would want. For Porsha, love alone couldn't heal the damage the world had carved into her self-worth. Her fiancé is a plastic surgeon, Dr. Jonathan Taylor, a man many would call a dream—loyal, kind, driven, and most importantly, in love with her for who she was.
Despite the warmth he offered, Porsha still felt cold inside. Her reflection was her worst enemy and each morning, as the sun spilled into their shared apartment in Houston, Texas. She finds herself staring into the mirror, analyzing every curve, pinching every fold of skin, as she admires all the imperfections.
FADE IN:
EXT. HOUSTON APARTMENT - MORNING
Sunlight spills through a window.
INT. BATHROOM - CONTINUOUS
PORSHA (30s, African-American, overweight) stares into the mirror. She pinches her skin, analyzing every curve.
PORSHA
One day, Porsha, you'll get rid of all this... by any means necessary.
FLASHBACK - EXT. HIGH SCHOOL ROOFTOP - DAY
Teen Porsha runs in tears. Her FATHER chases after her.
FATHER
Baby, please! Don't! It's okay.
Frantic, Porsha smears red lipstick across her face. As she steps near the edge—
YOUNG PORSHA
No one wants me!
FATHER (CONT'D)
Babygirl, watch out!
He lunges—pulls her back—but he’s the one who FALLS through a hole in the roof.
FLASHBACK TO:
INT. PARK - DAY
Porsha works out with her three best friends from college:
- MALIYAH (African American, obese, sassy)
- DEVIN (Latina, thin, hot-headed)
- SANDRA (African American, thick, supportive)
MALIYAH
I can't wait until this is over 'cause I'm going home and eat what I lost. A panini sandwich with french fries.
PORSHA
Maliyah, hush about food PLEASE!
Porsha struggles to zip up a jacket. She rips off the tag.
PORSHA (CONT'D)
I bought this smaller jacket on purpose. Three weeks and it's still tight. This weight isn't coming off fast enough.
DEVIN
It just means you need more time. You look good.
MALIYAH
Devin, I ask myself everytime I see you at the park, "What are you doing here?" You're a size 4.
DEVIN
That would be a size 2 and genetically blessed.
PORSHA
So your saying being thin is better Devin?
SANDRA
Ladies, enough! Porsha, I have a friend with access to new weight loss pills. Try it and see.
PORSHA
I’m down.
JONATHAN (30s, Caucasian/Latin, fit) walks up, wraps Porsha in a hug.
JONATHAN
You look good.
PORSHA
Babe, I'm sweaty and sticky.
JONATHAN
Hey ladies. I have to say, you've been putting in the work.
PORSHA
Is that all you see? Pounds dropped?
Her friends leave. Tension lingers.
JONATHAN
Are we really doing this again? Do you even hear me when I say, "I love you?" Or are you just waiting for the mirror to tell you something better?”
They walk toward the car.
JONATHAN (CONT'D)
I’ve got three surgeries today and I don’t want to argue.
PORSHA
Don't you see women stare at me like I don’t belong with you.
JONATHAN
I don't give a damn about other women. I’m a plastic surgeon, it’s my job to look at other women. I love *you*. You want to know what I don't get are these...
He pulls shape-wear from her gym bag.
JONATHAN (CONT'D)
Spanx, girdles, tummy huggers, shape wears and what ever else are you hiding?
PORSHA
Give me that!
Jonathan softens as he sees her hurt in her face.
JONATHAN (CONT'D)
I’m sorry. You mean the world to me, My-lot-of-woman.
MONTAGE —
-- Acupuncture, juicing, diets, and more workouts.
INT. LINGERE STORE - DAY
PORSHA
I like this one.
SALESLADY approaches Porsha.
SALESLADY
We don’t have your size. Only XS to L.
DEVIN (reading tag)
Carmen, she was asking ME. And I’m a size 2—extra small compared to you.
Saleslady retreats, embarrassed.
PORSHA
See what society does. Where are the pills you promised?
SANDRA
Take one for two weeks, then increase to two.
Porsha takes one.
INT. PRACTICE - DAY
Dr. MARK SPELLMAN (African American, model-type like Jeremy Meeks, Jonathan’s adopted brother) working at his desk.
MARK
Porsha, what do I owe the pleasure?
PORSHA
I have a proposition for you. (hesitates) What if I got lipo?
MARK
Not here. I have you spoken to Jonathan, than again a therapist?
PORSHA
Look I' know your trying to get from under your brother and I know Jonathan was the one that put up more money in this practice. What if I gave you $20K?
MARK
That's chump change Darling.
Porsha picks up the office magazine that on his desk and dangle the carrot.
PORSHA
$120K and change my name so Jonathan doesn't know.
MARK
Deal!
INT. JONATHAN’S OFFICE - NIGHT
Porsha enters Jonathan's office and surprises him in lingerie and heels. They make love.
EXT. AIRPORT - DAY
Jonathan drops the women off.
MALIYAH
We need $2,500, Daddy!
JONATHAN
You got jokes Maliyah. Porsh, let me know when you land. You need anything??
PORSHA
No. What if the fashion show doesn't...?
JONATHAN
I know you didn't say that when you left your job as an Editor-in-Chief. If you can increase their revenue by 35% then you can do this.
INT. NYC FASHION SHOW - NIGHT
The show is vibrant. Jonathan surprises Porsha. Photographers and taking pictures. They are surround by the MEDIA.
MEDIA
Who’s this handsome man?
PORSHA
The love of my life.
Jonathan kneels and pulls out a Tiffany Ring.
JONATHAN
I love you, Buttercup. Will you marry me?
PORSHA
Yes!
INT. HOTEL - NIGHT
Porsha is packed. Watches Jonathan sleep. A black sedan picks her up.
INT. SURGERY PREP ROOM - TEXAS - MORNING
PORSHA (on phone)
Hey babe, they’re about to wheel me in.
INT. SURGERY ROOM
ANESTHESIOLOGIST
Ms. Valerie Dunn, count back from 100.
The NURSES know that isn't Porsha's name and they look at Mark.
PORSHA
100, 99, 98...
INT. SURGERY ROOM - MOMENTS LATER
Mark performs the surgery. Suddenly, alarms BEEP.
ANESTHESIOLOGIST
BP dropping—110/80, 90/60...
MARK
I need gauze! I have a bleeder!
INT. NYC HOTEL - DAY
Jonathan wakes. No Porsha. He listens to her voicemail.
PORSHA (V.O.)
I hated being called plus-size, full figure. I did this for me... I hope you understand.
Jonathan panics. BANGS on the girls’ door. Paces the hallway
JONATHAN
Somebody call Porsha!
MALIYAH
What's wrong Jonathan?!
INT. SURGERY ROOM - SAME
FLATLINE. Mark looks like a deer in head lights for the moment.
NURSE
Dr. Taylor?
MARK
Paddles!
He shocks her. No response.
INT. HOTEL ROOM - MOMENTS LATER
Jonathan’s phone rings.
MARK (O.S.)
Jonathan... I couldn't... I need to talk to you... she took some pills that was counter-active to the anesthesia and...
Jonathan falls to his knees.
JONATHAN
Porsha is dead.
He SCREAMS in agony.
FADE OUT.
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Hey, interesting take on this week's prompt! It's not easy telling a full story in such short form. Also congrats on broaching such a meaningful subject! But it might be conveyed even better if you invest more time in editing. Like in the introduction there is a sentence that starts in the present tense and ends in the past. And maybe you could add some scenery descriptions when switching to a new scene to ground the reader. I'm looking forward to see what else you write!
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Part 2 please!
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