Fiction

The silver coins were still warm when Helel slipped through the cracks they had opened in the betrayer's soul.

Thirty pieces of temple currency—enough to purchase a field, enough to purchase a man's loyalty, enough to shatter the spiritual defenses that had once protected one of the Twelve. The metal's heat lingered against Judas's palm like a brand as Helel settled into the deepest chambers of his consciousness, coiling around thoughts and memories like smoke filling a sealed jar.

Three days. Three days to orchestrate the end of the greatest threat his dominion had ever faced.

Through Judas's eyes, he watched the Teacher move through Jerusalem's narrow streets, followed by the usual collection of fishermen, tax collectors, and other social refuse who had somehow mistaken this carpenter's son for the promised deliverer. The irony was exquisite—they expected a conquering king, but they would get a crucified criminal. Helel had spent three years ensuring that outcome, threading his influence through the religious establishment, the Roman authorities, and even the Teacher's own inner circle.

The morning air carried the scent of blood from the temple sacrifices, a daily reminder of humanity's need for atonement. How beautifully appropriate that their supposed savior would soon add his blood to that ancient stream, accomplishing nothing except his own destruction.

Helel had been the unchallenged ruler of this world for four millennia, ever since that moment in the garden when the woman's teeth had broken the forbidden fruit's skin. The taste of that first rebellion still lingered in his memory—sweet flesh yielding to desire, followed by the bitter aftertaste of knowledge gained too soon. Four thousand years of variations on the same theme: identify what humans craved, whisper that they deserved it, then watch them tear themselves apart reaching for what would destroy them.

The Teacher had seemed different at first. That encounter in the wilderness had been... unsettling. Forty days of fasting should have made him malleable, desperate, vulnerable to the standard temptations. Instead, he had quoted ancient texts with the casual authority of someone who had been there when they were written. Still, Helel had been patient. Three years of careful pressure through the disciples, through the crowds, through the religious authorities who saw their power threatened by this upstart rabbi.

Now the endgame was finally at hand.

"Helel."

The voice cut through his calculations like a blade through flesh. Gabriel stood in the street, his human form flickering at the edges with barely contained fire. The other humans moved around him without seeing, but Helel felt the angel's presence like heat against his borrowed skin—the kind of heat that preceded burning.

"Herald," Helel said, forcing Judas's mouth to form words that tasted like ash. The betrayer's guilt sat heavy in his throat, making every syllable feel like swallowing broken glass. "How... unexpected to find you here."

"The Lord rebuke you." Gabriel's words carried the weight of mountains, and Helel felt himself recoil as if struck. But only for a moment. Gabriel might speak with heaven's authority, but that authority had no foothold here. Not in this realm, not anymore.

"Rebuke me for what?" Helel smiled with Judas's face, though the expression felt wrong on features twisted by guilt and silver-bought betrayal. "I have broken no law. This one opened his heart to me through his own choice. The thirty pieces were freely accepted, the betrayal freely planned. I am simply... honoring a contract."

Gabriel's form solidified, becoming more purely human in appearance, though his eyes still burned with otherworldly intensity. The air around him shimmered with heat distortion, as if reality itself was bending under the weight of his presence. "You do not understand what you are accomplishing."

"Don't I?" Helel stepped closer, and felt Gabriel's power wash over him like standing too close to a forge. "Your Teacher will be dead before the sun sets. The great hope of humanity, extinguished. His followers will scatter, his message will fade, and I will remain what I have always been—the god of this world."

"The Lord rebuke you," Gabriel repeated, but there was something in his voice now that made Helel's borrowed flesh crawl. Not anger, not frustration, but something that sounded almost like... certainty?

"Repeat it as often as you like," Helel said, though his confidence felt suddenly brittle. "Your Master gave humanity dominion, and through their choice, that dominion became mine. Even He cannot simply reclaim it without violating His own word. And you certainly cannot."

Gabriel's form began to fade, but his voice lingered in the air like the echo of distant thunder. "You see only the surface of things, fallen one. You always have."

Then he was gone, leaving behind only the acrid scent of lightning and Helel's growing unease. Something in Gabriel's tone had been wrong—too calm, too confident for someone whose side was about to suffer defeat. Angels had never been good at masking their emotions, their righteousness burning too bright for deception. But Gabriel had seemed almost... expectant. Through a dozen different human agents—corrupted priests, ambitious politicians, fearful citizens—he began weaving the web that would trap the Teacher. A whispered suggestion here, an amplified fear there, a carefully timed reminder of Roman brutality when anyone spoke of sedition. Humans were such beautifully predictable instruments once you understood their motivations.

The Teacher himself remained maddeningly untouchable. Three years of direct assault through temptation, through His followers' doubts, through the mounting pressure of religious opposition—none of it had produced so much as a hairline crack in that perfect spiritual armor. But perfect or not, He was still flesh. And flesh could be killed.

By noon, the pieces were falling into place with mechanical precision. The religious council had been convinced that the Teacher represented an existential threat to their authority. The Roman governor had been persuaded that any talk of kingship was inherently seditious. The crowd had been turned through the simple expedient of offering them a choice between releasing a beloved rebel and a controversial mystic.

Through Judas's increasingly fractured consciousness, Helel watched the Teacher carry His cross through Jerusalem's streets. The wood beam was heavy, the wounds from the scourging were deep, and the man beneath the burden was entirely, perfectly human. Each stumble, each gasp for breath, each drop of blood confirmed what Helel had always known: flesh was flesh, no matter how pure, and flesh could be broken.

But something nagged at him. A wrongness in the spiritual atmosphere, like a discordant note in an otherwise perfect symphony. The light seemed different today, charged with potential that made his borrowed skin crawl. And there was something else—a gathering presence just beyond the veil of human perception that he couldn't quite identify.

At Golgotha, they stretched the Teacher between earth and sky with iron spikes through flesh that Helel knew—had always known—was entirely without stain. The sound of hammer striking metal rang across the execution ground like a death knell, each blow driving home the certainty of Helel's victory. Not even the whisper of corruption that made other humans accessible to his influence. The Teacher was perfectly, impossibly clean.

But clean or not, He was going to die. And death, Helel had learned long ago, was the great equalizer.

"Helel."

The archangel's presence hit him like a physical blow, making Judas's body stagger. Through the betrayer's failing vision, he could see Michael standing at the foot of the cross, his hand resting on his sword hilt, his eyes fixed on the dying man above them. The warrior's face was stone, but Helel could feel the barely-contained power radiating from him like heat from a banked fire.

"Come to watch your Champion fail?" Helel asked, though the words came out rougher than intended. Judas's throat was raw from screaming—whether from guilt or possession, Helel couldn't tell anymore.

Michael's gaze never wavered from the cross. "The Lord rebuke you."

"Not you as well." Helel felt something crack inside Judas's chest—whether bone or spirit, he wasn't sure. "You have no authority here, warrior. This is my domain, my victory. Look at Him—your precious Anointed One, dying like a common criminal. Where is the divine intervention? Where are the legions of heaven?"

For the first time, Michael looked directly at him, and what Helel saw in those ancient eyes made him stumble backward. Not grief, not defeat, but something that looked disturbingly like... anticipation?

"They are here," Michael said quietly, and now Helel could feel it—a vast presence pressing against the boundaries of perception, like an ocean held back by the thinnest of veils. "More than you can imagine. But they will not intervene."

Helel felt his borrowed heart hammering against Judas's ribs. "Cannot, you mean. The same law that gives me dominion over this world prevents you from—"

"Will not." Michael's voice carried the finality of granite. "By His choice, not by constraint."

The words hit Helel like ice water. "His choice? To die? To fail?"

"The Lord rebuke you," Michael said a third time, but now Helel heard something new in the formula. Not condemnation, but correction. As if Helel was missing something fundamental about what was happening here.

Hours passed. The sun climbed toward its zenith as the Teacher's body slowly surrendered to the cross's methodical torture. Helel watched through a dozen sets of eyes—soldiers, priests, curious onlookers—waiting for the moment when fear would break through and the Teacher would reveal Himself to be just another frightened human grasping for meaning in the face of death.

But it never came.

Instead, even hanging between heaven and earth, the Teacher continued to speak words of forgiveness. Even as His strength failed, He made provision for His mother's care. Even as darkness gathered around Him, He promised paradise to a thief.

This wasn't how mortals faced death. This was something else entirely.

"My God, my God, why have You forsaken me?"

The cry pierced the afternoon air, and for a moment Helel allowed himself to hope that the facade was finally cracking. But even as the words left the Teacher's lips, Helel recognized them. Ancient script, written a thousand years before. This wasn't despair—this was fulfillment.

And then, with His final breath, the Teacher spoke words that made the spiritual atmosphere around Golgotha explode with power:

"It is finished."

The phrase hit Helel like a tsunami of revelation. Not the defeated gasp of a dying man, but the satisfied declaration of completed work. And suddenly, horribly, he understood what work had been completed.

The Teacher hadn't simply died. He had become sin itself—every human transgression, every violation of divine law, every act of rebellion that had given Helel dominion over humanity. The weight of it had crushed Him, but in accepting it, He had satisfied justice's demands completely.

And if justice was satisfied...

"No." The word tore from Judas's throat, but it was Helel's voice, Helel's horror, Helel's dawning comprehension of the trap he had walked into. "No, this cannot be!"

But it was already done. Through the Teacher's death, the legal ground for Helel's dominion was crumbling. The authority he had stolen through humanity's fall was being reclaimed through their representative's sacrifice.

Michael appeared beside him again, and this time his expression was unmistakably triumphant. "Did you think the Ancient of Days had not foreseen this moment? Did you imagine your rebellion was outside His plan?"

"I killed Him!" Helel screamed through Judas's broken voice, all pretense of cosmic sophistication finally cracking. "I orchestrated every single step! Every betrayal, every lie, every spike driven through His flesh—it was my doing! My plan! My victory!"

"Yes," Michael said with the patience of someone explaining something obvious to a particularly slow student. "It was. And in doing it, you gave Him exactly what He wanted. Death has no claim on perfect innocence. Justice has no hold on satisfied law. You've just destroyed the only barrier between fallen humanity and complete redemption. Congratulations—you played yourself."

The truth hit Helel like a collapsing mountain. For four thousand years, he had held dominion through death—humanity's separation from their Creator. But death could not hold One who had committed no sin, and this death had paid the price for all who would accept it.

He had stopped at nothing to preserve his stolen kingdom. And in stopping at nothing, he had ensured its destruction.

Three days later, when the tomb exploded with resurrection light and the Teacher walked out wearing the keys of death and hell like jewelry, Helel finally understood the ultimate irony of his situation.

The Ancient of Days had never been trying to prevent humanity's fall. He had been preparing for its reversal. And Helel, in his arrogance, in his determination to eliminate this threat to his power, had played his part in that ancient plan perfectly.

The morning star had become the prince of darkness, only to discover that even his darkness served the light.

Authority had never been about power.

It had always been about sacrifice.

And the One who had sacrificed everything had just reclaimed it all.

Posted Jun 19, 2025
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Alexis Araneta
02:08 Jun 20, 2025

Glorious work, Alex! I grew up in church (and am, in fact, a pastor's daughter), so I have read multiple versions of the crucifixion from Satan's perspective. But this one is particularly vivid. I love the multiple angels showing him that he's sorely mistaken. Of course, great use of tension here. Lovely work!

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