Behind The Painted Door

Written in response to: "Write about a portal or doorway that’s hiding in plain sight."

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You’ve walked past it a hundred times. Maybe more.

A weathered blue door, its paint cracked and peeling, stands quietly between a dry cleaner’s and a coffee shop that never closes. It doesn’t call attention to itself. It simply exists, blending into the city’s background like an old scar on a familiar street. People glance at it without ever really seeing it. And if someone does stop, hesitation creeps in—an odd fog curling at the edges of their thoughts, nudging them to move along, to forget they ever noticed.

But the door isn’t forgotten.

Late at night, when the streets empty and the hum of the city dies down, it changes. A ripple at its edges, a flicker in the air around it, like a mirage or the moment before a dream slips away. If you watch too long, the world around you feels less real, like something is waiting just beyond your reach.

No one knows where it leads. Or if they do, they never return to tell.

Some say it leads to another world, one layered over ours but running on different rules. Others claim it opens to a place just slightly off, where the air crackles with something nameless, and the stars don’t match the ones we know.

But who would dare?

Tonight, the door is still there. Still quiet. Still watching.

Next time you pass it, slow down. Look a little longer.

Do you feel it? The pull?

The choice is yours.

Decades ago—maybe even centuries, depending on who you ask—this door belonged to a building that no longer exists. Some say it was an old boarding house, a waystation for weary travelers passing through the city. A place where no one asked too many questions, and the guests rarely stayed long. The kind of place that had more rooms than it should, where hallways stretched a little too far, and where footsteps echoed even when no one was walking.

But others claim it was something stranger. Something older.

There are whispers that the land beneath the building was never meant to be settled, that long before streets were paved and walls were raised, something else stood there—something forgotten. The house, they say, was built on a fracture, a place where reality had worn thin. And the doorway? It wasn’t crafted by human hands. It was always there, waiting to be framed, waiting to be found.

The stories don’t agree on the details, but one thing is certain: people who stepped through that doorway sometimes didn’t come back.

There are names in old newspapers, faded into history. A tenant from the 1890s, a man who had just moved into the city, vanished without a trace one evening—his belongings untouched, his room undisturbed. A housekeeper in the 1920s who was last seen carrying a tray of tea toward a guest’s door, only for the tray to be found neatly set on the hallway floor, the tea still warm. A traveling salesman in the 1950s, whose colleagues swore he had entered the building but was never seen leaving.

And then there are the stories not written down, the ones only spoken in hushed tones. The ones that say the house itself was hungry, that it lured people in, that the doorway was never meant to be crossed from this side.

The first notable disappearance was a woman named Sofia Moretti, a historian who had come to the city in the late 1800s. She had a reputation for being skeptical, and she scoffed at the local rumors about the old boarding house, dismissing them as mere superstition. The house was rundown, she wrote in one of her articles, but it was “no stranger than any other establishment of its kind.” Yet, when she moved in for a few nights, something about the place gnawed at her. She started to notice odd occurrences—doors that wouldn’t open, hallways that seemed to curve in impossible ways. One morning, her room was covered in a thick layer of dust, despite her having just checked in the previous day. Her shoes, perfectly placed by the door the night before, were gone.

One night, Sofia disappeared. She’d been in the boarding house’s common room, chatting with the landlady about a strange noise in the walls, but when the morning came, Sofia’s room was empty. Her coat, the one she had left hanging on the door, was gone. Her journal was found—her last, unfinished entry: “I feel like something is watching. The door is... too quiet.”

No one ever saw Sofia again. Her disappearance remained a mystery, but it wasn’t the only one. Over the years, the tales of missing guests became more frequent, though none of them made it into the official police reports. The disappearances weren’t the only strange thing. Sometimes, those who had once checked in would return without warning, only to vanish again just as suddenly. They had the same empty expression when they returned as when they left, as if they had not truly been anywhere at all, their stories either forgotten or replaced with a strange, vague sense of dread.

There were rumors that the landlady, a sharp-eyed woman named Margery, knew more than she let on. She was never seen leaving the building, and it was said that her gaze never quite met anyone’s eyes, always flicking downward as if watching something invisible at her feet. Some said she’d lived there for decades, that she was somehow immune to the house’s oddities, though no one could recall when she had first appeared.

It wasn’t until the 1920s, when the building was left abandoned, that the stories surrounding it truly took root. The house had become a place of mystery, a half-ruined structure that the city had all but forgotten. The dry cleaner’s and coffee shop sprang up around it, buildings of new and modern construction that stood in sharp contrast to the decaying old structure behind them. Yet, no matter how the city changed, that blue door stayed the same. And it wasn’t just a door—it was a marker, a relic of something older that was still clinging to the city, unnoticed but always present.

For years, the door stood there, quiet and unobtrusive, its purpose shrouded in myth. The stories of those who had stepped through remained fragmented, like pieces of a puzzle no one could quite put together. But there were those who still dared to ask questions, to investigate what lay beyond it. Most of them, however, weren’t seen again.

The most recent of them was Sofia Moretti, a historian who had become obsessed with the old boarding house. She had heard the rumors, read the old articles, and scoured forgotten records. There was something about the door that kept pulling at her, as if it called to her in her dreams, whispering its secret.

Sofia moved into an apartment just a few blocks away from the doorway, convinced that the answer to the mystery was within reach. Every night, she would walk past the door, eyeing it with a mixture of fear and fascination. She would stop, almost involuntarily, and stare at the peeling paint, the edges of the door seeming to shimmer faintly in the moonlight. One evening, after months of research, Sofia finally stood in front of it long enough to reach for the handle.

It was cold to the touch, colder than it should have been. And when she pulled it open, she didn’t find the dusty interior of an old building. Instead, she found darkness—black, impenetrable, and unnervingly still. There was no sound, no wind, no sense of time or space. She stepped through, and for a moment, she thought she saw a flash of something—something other. Something that didn’t belong.

She tried to turn back, but the door was gone. The space around her, once an endless black void, now seemed to stretch in ways that didn’t make sense. There was no up, no down, no direction. Only the feeling of something ancient, something watching.

For what felt like an eternity, Sofia drifted, her mind overwhelmed by the sensation of falling through nothingness. Her own heartbeat seemed to reverberate in the air, louder and louder, until it became the only sound. Then, there was a shift. A cold whisper in the air—so faint, so soft, that she almost didn’t hear it. Almost.

“You shouldn’t have come.”

Her pulse raced. She was no longer alone.

The air seemed to solidify around her, and in the distance, something began to form—a figure. It was distant, hard to make out, but its presence felt as real as the ground beneath her feet. A shadow. A form that didn't belong to any world she knew.

The whispering grew louder, now more like a chorus of voices. Not speaking, but calling, a familiar sensation that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end.

And then the figure moved closer. Sofia stumbled backward, her mind still grasping for understanding. She had no time. The darkness was swallowing her whole, the figure closing in.

Her breath came in short, frantic gasps.

And just like that, everything was gone.

When the police found her apartment empty the next morning, they saw no signs of struggle. Her books were undisturbed. Her coffee cup still sat on the table, half-filled, as though she had just stepped out for a moment. But Sofia was gone. Her disappearance was added to the growing list, but none of the authorities had any explanation for it.

Some people said they saw her later—standing just outside the door, staring at it with wide eyes. But whenever someone tried to approach, she would disappear into the shadows.

And so the door remains. Quiet. Waiting.

The door is still there, untouched by time. Perhaps it’s waiting for someone who doesn’t know better. Someone who believes in the thrill of discovery. Someone who thinks they can walk through without consequence.

But don’t be fooled by the door’s silence. It’s not a simple entrance, nor is it a mere relic of the past. It’s a threshold. A boundary between worlds, between what is and what could be. The doorway doesn’t ask for permission. It simply exists, waiting for the curious, the brave, or the foolish to reach for it.

It’s always been here. Perhaps it was always meant for you.

And next time you pass it, take a moment to stop. Really look. If you dare.

The door is waiting.

Posted Mar 23, 2025
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