Friday Nights with Lucy

Written in response to: "Center your story around someone who’s secretly running the show."

Fiction

The vacuum cleaner's hum provided cover as Adunni Okafor guided it across the marble floor of Meridian Capital's executive boardroom, her movements precise despite the tremor that had started in her left hand three months ago. Through the glass walls, London's financial district pulsed with Friday evening urgency, but here on the thirty-second floor, three men discussed nations like chess pieces.

"The Lagos situation needs delicate handling," Marcus Whitfield was saying, his accent sharp enough to cut crystal. "These African banks still think relationship trumps mathematics."

Adunni maneuvered around the mahogany table, her reflection ghostlike in its polished surface. Twenty-three years of cleaning these offices had perfected her invisibility—head down, movements efficient, ears apparently deaf to the casual dismantling of economies disguised as strategy sessions.

"What about the Okafor family? They've been sniffing around those same assets." Simon Cross loosened his tie, the gesture unconscious after twelve-hour days. "Some traditional outfit from the eighties. Probably overextended themselves decades ago."

The vacuum cord caught on Adunni's ankle. She steadied herself against the wall, the men's conversation flowing around her like water around a stone.

"Family money rarely survives globalization," James Rothwell observed, checking his phone. "They'll fold when we apply proper pressure. These people don't understand leverage."

Adunni unplugged the vacuum, wrapping the cord with practiced efficiency. She'd heard variations of this conversation four hundred times over the years, the same assumptions, the same blindness.

"I'll handle the African side personally," Whitfield continued. "Sometimes these situations require someone who understands their... cultural limitations."

The laughter that followed was sharp as winter against glass. Adunni gathered her supplies, the cart's faulty wheel announcing her departure across the marble.

"Grace," Cross called—he'd never learned her actual name despite two decades of Friday interactions. "That wheel's rather irritating. Sort it out, would you?"

"Yes, sir."

The elevator descended through layers of assumed authority. Adunni pulled out her battered Samsung, noting missed calls from her children—Kemi from Singapore, Femi from Dubai, Segun from New York. The usual Friday check-ins that kept the family constellation aligned across time zones.

Outside Meridian's glass towers, London's October dampness seeped through her coat as she joined the queue at Patel's Indian Takeaway. Two young men ahead of her discussed weekend plans in Gloucestershire, their voices carrying the casual certainty of inherited wealth.

"Bloody hell, how long does curry take?" one asked Mr. Patel, his impatience performed rather than felt.

"Just few minutes more, sir. Very sorry."

"Some of us have actual lives to attend to," his companion added, signet ring catching fluorescent light.

Mr. Patel's movements quickened with familiar efficiency. When Adunni's turn came, his demeanor shifted—still professional, but warmer.

"The usual, Mrs. Adunni?"

"Please. And those cashew sweets Lucy enjoys."

"No charge," he said quietly, tucking them into the bag with conspirator's care.

The bus to Lucy's Bermondsey flat took forty-three minutes through Friday evening traffic. Adunni used the time to sort through overheard fragments—names, numbers, casual references to deals that would reshape supply chains. This mental filing system had been honed across decades until it operated below conscious thought.

Lucy Chen opened her door before the knock, a habit formed during fifteen years of Friday evening sanctuary that had begun in a hospital waiting room where they'd both kept vigil over sick grandchildren.

"You look tired," Lucy said, accepting the takeaway bags and leading her into the small sitting room overlooking the Thames.

"Some weeks require more patience than others," Adunni replied, settling into her usual chair beside the window where London's lights scattered like dice across felt.

Lucy had prepared their weekly game—Gin Rummy with cards so worn their edges felt like silk. They'd evolved toward this particular game without discussion, perhaps because it rewarded both strategy and acceptance of what chance delivered.

"How are your cards looking this week?" Lucy asked, dealing with practiced efficiency.

"Mixed hand. But you know what they say about waiting for the right moment to play your strongest pieces."

"Patience is undervalued," Lucy agreed, arranging her cards. "People think acting fast shows strength. Really shows they don't understand the game."

They played the first hand in comfortable rhythm. Lucy won with a combination that seemed to surprise even her.

"Lucky draw," Adunni observed.

"Sometimes the pieces just fall into place. Michael's restaurant approval came through yesterday, by the way."

"The bank saw sense?"

"Eventually. Amazing how cooperative institutions become when the right people ask the right questions."

Adunni dealt the second hand, her movements deliberate. "And your other project? The one with the city council?"

"Progressing nicely. Amazing what civic leaders accomplish when they understand long-term consequences." Lucy discarded a king, which Adunni immediately picked up. "Though I suspect your situation is more complex than mine."

"Different scales, same principles. Sometimes you have to let people think they're winning until the very last play."

"Dangerous strategy."

"Only if you miscalculate." Adunni laid down a winning combination. "But when you've been playing as long as we have..."

Lucy shuffled for the final hand, the one that would determine the evening's bragging rights. "Are you worried about Monday?"

"Should I be?"

"Depends on whether all your pieces are positioned correctly."

"They are." Adunni picked up her cards, studying the combination chance had delivered. "Though there's always the possibility of... unexpected developments."

"Such as?"

"Players making moves before they understand the full board."

Lucy's phone buzzed. She glanced at the message, her expression shifting almost imperceptibly before setting the device aside.

"Everything alright?"

"Just confirmation that certain people are exactly where they need to be."

They continued playing, their conversation drifting between family updates and seemingly casual observations about patience, timing, and the importance of letting opponents reveal their strategies before responding.

"The thing about gin," Lucy said, studying her cards, "is that winning often means holding back your best combinations until the perfect moment."

"And knowing when that moment arrives," Adunni added.

"Experience helps with timing."

"So does understanding your opponents."

Adunni's phone rang. The international number made Lucy glance up from her cards with knowing attention.

"I should take this," Adunni said, stepping onto the small balcony.

"Mama." Segun's voice carried across the Atlantic with an edge she hadn't heard since he was twelve and had broken grandmother's china. "Something's wrong. Everything's accelerating."

The careful composure Adunni had maintained for sixty-three years developed its first hairline crack. "Slow down, Segun. What exactly is happening?"

"Whitfield moved the announcement up to Monday morning. London time. And the Singapore consortium—they pulled out completely. Said they had 'concerns about governance structures' and 'unclear succession planning.' Mama, thirty-seven years of positioning, and these people are making us look like amateurs."

Lucy had moved to the balcony door, abandoning her cards to listen with the focused attention of someone witnessing a critical moment in a game she'd been following for years.

"Segun." Adunni's voice carried a new authority that would have stopped Marcus Whitfield mid-sentence had he been present to hear it. "What did I teach you about panic?"

"That it's a luxury we can't afford." His breathing steadied slightly. "But Mama, if Whitfield announces Monday and our backing isn't solid—"

"Our backing was never solid, my son. It was strategic theater. You think I spent twenty-three years cleaning that man's office without learning how his mind works?"

"I don't understand."

"I understand that every 'independent' market analysis he's commissioned over the past eighteen months came from firms that answer to people who answer to me. Every local contact he thinks gives him advantages, every consultant he trusts for African market intelligence—all of them have been feeding him exactly the information I wanted him to have."

The silence stretched across continents while Segun processed this revelation.

"The Singapore pullout," he said slowly, "was that—?"

"Was planned six months ago. Let them think family-run businesses are too primitive for their sophisticated risk models. When they come crawling back next quarter offering double terms, we'll remember how quickly they abandoned ship at the first sign of complexity."

"Jesus, Mama. How long have you been orchestrating this?"

Adunni looked through the glass at Lucy, who was watching with the expression of someone witnessing a masterpiece reach its crescendo.

"Since the day I realized that real power isn't about being seen making decisions, Segun. It's about creating conditions where the decisions you want feel inevitable to everyone else. Now listen carefully—when Whitfield makes his announcement Monday morning, I want you to wait exactly four hours before responding. Let him have his moment of triumph. Let him call his colleagues, celebrate with champagne, brief his board about his brilliant strategy."

"And then?"

"Then you show him what happens when someone confuses a cleaning lady with someone who's actually clean."

After ending the call, Adunni returned to find Lucy had laid down a gin combination that should have won the hand—three sevens and a run of clubs that represented careful strategy and patient timing.

"Your move," Lucy said quietly.

Adunni looked at her cards one final time, then placed a queen of spades that transformed everything on the table. "I believe that's gin."

Lucy studied the final arrangement, then shook her head with mock disapproval. "Adunni, you're so controlling with your children's lives. Why don't you let them live their best life, be free, do what they want... just like me."

Adunni looked at her for a moment, then burst out laughing. Lucy joined in, and soon both women were laughing until tears streamed down their faces—the kind of helpless laughter that comes when someone states something so fundamentally absurd it transcends into pure comedy.

They finished clearing up in comfortable silence, the laughter having settled into something deeper—an understanding that extended beyond their Friday evening routine into territories neither would ever name explicitly. Outside, autumn rain began tapping against the window with the persistence of small decisions that accumulated into historical shifts. The droplets traced irregular paths down the glass, each one following the route carved by its predecessors, gradually wearing new channels that would guide future storms.

Lucy gathered the worn cards with the reverence of someone handling instruments of power disguised as entertainment, while Adunni folded the takeaway containers with the same methodical precision she brought to everything else—from cleaning office floors to positioning family members across three continents. The empty containers would be recycled, but their Friday evening would join the accumulating weight of similar evenings, each one a small investment in a larger architecture of change.

"The weather's turning," Lucy observed, watching rivulets merge and separate on the window surface.

"Seasons change," Adunni replied, understanding they weren't discussing meteorology. "But the cycles continue."

"Next week will be interesting."

"Next week will be inevitable."

They moved through the closing rituals of their evening with the unhurried grace of people who understood that the most important changes happened slowly, almost imperceptibly, like erosion reshaping coastlines or rivers carving new paths through ancient stone. Lucy switched off the table lamp, leaving them in the softer glow of the standing lamp by the window. Adunni gathered her coat and bag, checking her phone one final time for messages from her global network of children and grandchildren, nieces and nephews, strategic alliances disguised as family connections.

"Same time next week?" Lucy asked, the question carrying more weight than its simplicity suggested.

"Same time," Adunni confirmed, understanding that next Friday would arrive in a world subtly but irreversibly altered by Monday's revelations. "Though I suspect we'll need new topics of conversation."

"Different topics," Lucy corrected gently. "But the same underlying themes."

"Patience, positioning, and the long view."

"The fundamentals never change."

As Adunni prepared to leave, she paused at Lucy's door, looking back at the small room that had witnessed fifteen years of Friday evenings—their shared sanctuary where two women who spent their weeks being underestimated came to speak in codes that acknowledged their true nature. The sitting room looked exactly as it always did: modest furniture, worn but comfortable, the kind of space that suggested quiet retirement rather than the coordination center for generational influence campaigns.

"Lucy," she said, her hand on the door handle. "There's something I want you to know."

"Yes?"

"When this is all over—when Whitfield realizes what's happened, when the financial papers start analyzing the 'surprising' emergence of African business networks, when business schools begin writing case studies about 'traditional' family enterprises outmaneuvering modern corporations—they'll never understand the real story."

Lucy waited, recognizing the tone of someone approaching a truth too large for casual conversation.

"They'll never understand that the real decisions weren't made in boardrooms or government offices. They were made here, in rooms like this, by women like us who learned that the most effective power is the kind that operates through influence rather than authority, through relationships rather than contracts, through patience rather than pressure."

"And that's exactly how it should be," Lucy replied. "Let them write their case studies and their business theories. Let them think they're analyzing market forces and competitive strategies. As long as they're looking in the wrong direction, we can continue our work undisturbed."

The night air carried autumn's promise of transformation as Adunni walked to the bus stop, her phone lighting up with messages from a family constellation that spanned continents and industries. Each message was confirmation that the architecture she'd been building in shadow was finally ready for daylight—not the harsh glare of publicity, but the steady illumination of acknowledged power.

"Same time next week?" Lucy asked as Adunni prepared to leave.

"Same time. Though I suspect we'll need a new deck of cards."

The night air carried autumn's promise as Adunni walked to the bus stop, her phone lighting up with messages from a family constellation that spanned continents and industries. Each message was confirmation that the architecture she'd been building in shadow was finally ready for daylight.

Monday would bring revelations. But tonight was just another Friday evening—a sixty-three-year-old woman riding the night bus home, carrying the quiet satisfaction of a game well played and the knowledge that the most effective revolutions were the ones nobody saw coming until they were already complete.

In her reflection in the bus window, Adunni saw exactly what she'd always been: a woman who understood that power wasn't about being seen, but about seeing everything while remaining invisible. The wheel of her cleaning cart might squeak with mechanical imperfection, but the wheels of change—those turned smoothly, silently, and with the inexorable momentum of someone who had learned that patience wasn't passive, but the most active force in the universe.

Posted Sep 05, 2025
Share:

You must sign up or log in to submit a comment.

1 like 0 comments

Reedsy | Default — Editors with Marker | 2024-05

Bring your publishing dreams to life

The world's best editors, designers, and marketers are on Reedsy. Come meet them.