Submitted to: Contest #300

Where the Wildflowers Grow

Written in response to: "Write a story about someone who sets off in one direction and ends up somewhere else."

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The sun hung low behind the hills as Lillian Fletcher stuffed the last of her things into the battered red Subaru. A heavy July heat clung to the air, making the horizon ripple like a mirage. Her parents stood on the porch of the old white farmhouse, worn wood creaking beneath their weight. Her mother wrung her hands in her apron; her father pressed his cap lower over his eyes. Neither said a word.

It was time to leave.

Time to chase something bigger than the fields and forests of her childhood.

Time for New York City — where the streets buzzed with life and dreams were supposed to grow like vines up the side of skyscrapers.

Lillian turned the key in the ignition. The engine coughed, then caught, and she gave one last look at the sagging barn, the muddy creek winding through the fields, the chicken coop her brother built by hand.

Home was a patchwork quilt of memories stitched with dirt roads and honeysuckle summers — beautiful, but too small for her now.

Or so she thought.

She backed down the long gravel driveway, dust pluming behind her like smoke. When she reached the fork at the end — one path leading toward the interstate, the other into the hills — she paused. A deer lifted its head from the brush and stared at her, unblinking, before disappearing into the trees.

The GPS chirped on the dashboard: Turn left.

But something in her chest — a tug, soft but insistent — made her turn the wheel right instead.

Just for a little detour, she told herself. Just to see.

The road wound through the hills, a ribbon of cracked asphalt lined with wild daisies and tall grass that brushed the car’s sides like ghostly fingers. Every so often, a mailbox would jut from the ground like a lone sentry, the names on them faded and peeling: Crawford, Mullins, Hartley.

Soon the hills thickened into woods, sunlight filtering through the leaves in molten shafts. The smell of pine sap and earth drifted through the open windows. Lillian turned the radio off, letting the chorus of cicadas and birds fill the car instead.

Miles melted away until she came upon it:

A town so small it barely deserved the name.

The sign read Maple Hollow — Population 612, its paint chipped, leaning at a precarious angle. A single main street stretched before her, lined with crooked buildings of red brick and weathered wood. A diner with a flickering neon sign. A hardware store whose windows displayed a chaotic collage of hoses, nails, and garden gnomes. A little bookstore tucked between them, its door propped open with a stone.

It looked like the kind of place where time moved slower, where strangers waved without knowing your name.

Her stomach growled. She hadn’t eaten since morning.

With a tentative curiosity, she pulled into a space in front of the diner. The sign above the door read “Milly’s Place” in cheerful blue paint. Bells jingled as she stepped inside, and the smell of coffee and fried potatoes hit her like a warm hug.

The interior was straight out of a postcard — booths upholstered in cracked red vinyl, a jukebox in the corner playing Patsy Cline, and a counter lined with pie stands under glass domes. An older woman with silver-streaked hair smiled from behind the counter.

“Well, look at you,” she said with a grin, wiping her hands on a towel. “You must be new. Passing through?”

Lillian nodded, sliding onto a stool. “On my way to New York.”

“New York, huh? Big dreams,” the woman said, pouring her a cup of coffee without asking. “Name’s Milly. You hungry?”

“Starving,” Lillian admitted.

“Good. I make a mean grilled cheese.”

As Milly bustled around the kitchen, Lillian watched the people drift in and out: a man in overalls carrying a basket of fresh peaches, a pair of sunburned teenagers laughing over milkshakes, an old woman knitting by the window.

It wasn’t loud or flashy. It wasn’t rushing toward anything.

It just was.

Milly slid a plate in front of her — a golden, buttery sandwich oozing with melted cheddar, a pickle on the side. It was perfect.

For a long time, Lillian just sat there, eating slowly, listening to the clink of coffee cups and the low hum of conversation.

She felt herself… exhale.

Something she hadn’t even realized she’d been holding inside for years.

When she finished, she lingered, sipping her second cup of coffee, watching the light shift through the front windows. It spilled over the floor like liquid gold, turning the dust motes into floating stars.

Outside, the town carried on in its slow, deliberate rhythm. A dog lay sprawled on the sidewalk. Someone swept their porch. Kids chalked hopscotch grids onto the pavement.

Maybe she would stay for an hour.

Maybe a day.

Maybe just long enough to stretch her legs.

An hour turned into a day.

A day turned into a week.

Milly offered her a job waitressing at the diner when she found out Lillian had no real schedule to keep. “We could use a young face around here,” she said with a wink.

Lillian found a room to rent above the bookstore, where the owner — a gruff but kind man named Hank — let her browse late into the evenings. She started helping him sort the old books, brushing off the scent of paper and dust with loving hands.

She explored the hills in the afternoons, following deer trails and sitting by streams that gurgled over smooth stones. She started learning names: Mrs. Hartley at the post office. Joe Crawford who carved walking sticks by hand. Little Sophie Mullins who picked wildflowers and left them on the diner tables.

She went to Friday night bonfires and Sunday morning farmers’ markets.

She laughed more.

Slept better.

Breathed deeper.

New York City faded into the background, less a goal, more a memory of something she once thought she needed.

One night, sitting on the bookstore’s rooftop under a sky freckled with stars, Milly plopped down beside her with two bottles of root beer.

“You know,” Milly said, “Sometimes we think we know where we’re meant to be. And then life goes and shows us we were wrong all along.”

Lillian smiled, tipping her bottle against Milly’s in a soft clink.

“Yeah,” she said, staring out at the velvet hills, the sleepy town glowing faintly below. “Yeah, it does.”

The wildflowers by the roadside swayed in the breeze.

The creek murmured in the distance.

And for the first time in her life, Lillian wasn’t chasing anything.

She was already exactly where she was meant to be.

Posted Apr 28, 2025
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Frances Goulart
12:35 May 08, 2025

Lovely and poetic. I expected more of a sharp surprise at the end, but maybe that is the surprise, the soft landing. Definitely an "A".

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