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Written in response to: Start your story with the words “Everything was ready for the ritual.”... view prompt
October 23, 2021 15:54
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Wow, Dhwani! I loved this story and the screen play layout to it :) I also loved the meanings to the names-your handwriting is amazing! The plot was also good, and I didn't find any plot holes, so well done!
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Thank you so much Sienna! I am really flattered, I don't think that my handwriting is that good.... :)
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Ohhhh ! Is it your hand writing; I thought superman has written all these , just kidding
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Yeah, it is my handwriting...
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hey DJ. you doing alright? I noticed that you deleted most of your comments from the doc...is it just addictive or is something else up?
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Hey Flow! Yes, I am alright. I just thought that I'd take a *little* break and see where it takes me. I am glad that you're concerned for me. :)
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Okay phew! Ofc I’m concerned for you ;)
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=D I really appreciate it. But no need to worry, I just set some limits for me, and well, TBH, this is also kinda breaking it. I thought I'd not be here till Wed, but that's another story.... ;) Shhh.. don't tell me that I broke the rules, else I'd have to study for an hour more... 🤫🤐
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Lol well I’m glad you’re setting some limits. I feel like life does need some limits sometimes lol. Lol you got it yOu WeRe NeVeR hErE-
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It does Coolio I kNoW Check my bio
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Cute and creative - I loved the usage of color to show status within the kingdom, and the moral aspect involved. Great job :)
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Thanks
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Please comment my story
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Yellow is my favourite colour, the story is superb
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:)
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Hmmm....I'm not sure about the character in your bio.... Party-lover....
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Hey, Dhwani! I love your new bio! And, correct me if I'm wrong...But isn't Aurora "Briar Rose?" I'm not sure, but that's what I read in the Brothers Grimm books XD
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