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Crime

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October 23, 2021 15:54

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19:41 Oct 23, 2021

Wow, Dhwani! I loved this story and the screen play layout to it :) I also loved the meanings to the names-your handwriting is amazing! The plot was also good, and I didn't find any plot holes, so well done!

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Dhwani Jain
08:45 Oct 24, 2021

Thank you so much Sienna! I am really flattered, I don't think that my handwriting is that good.... :)

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Angel {Readsy}
19:25 Oct 24, 2021

Ohhhh ! Is it your hand writing; I thought superman has written all these , just kidding

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Dhwani Jain
03:05 Oct 25, 2021

Yeah, it is my handwriting...

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hey DJ. you doing alright? I noticed that you deleted most of your comments from the doc...is it just addictive or is something else up?

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Dhwani Jain
12:35 Nov 14, 2021

Hey Flow! Yes, I am alright. I just thought that I'd take a *little* break and see where it takes me. I am glad that you're concerned for me. :)

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Okay phew! Ofc I’m concerned for you ;)

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Dhwani Jain
15:43 Nov 14, 2021

=D I really appreciate it. But no need to worry, I just set some limits for me, and well, TBH, this is also kinda breaking it. I thought I'd not be here till Wed, but that's another story.... ;) Shhh.. don't tell me that I broke the rules, else I'd have to study for an hour more... 🤫🤐

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Lol well I’m glad you’re setting some limits. I feel like life does need some limits sometimes lol. Lol you got it yOu WeRe NeVeR hErE-

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Dhwani Jain
16:24 Nov 14, 2021

It does Coolio I kNoW Check my bio

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Eliza Entwistle
20:57 Oct 30, 2021

Cute and creative - I loved the usage of color to show status within the kingdom, and the moral aspect involved. Great job :)

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Dhwani Jain
10:13 Oct 31, 2021

Thanks

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Angel {Readsy}
19:24 Oct 24, 2021

Please comment my story

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Angel {Readsy}
19:24 Oct 24, 2021

Yellow is my favourite colour, the story is superb

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Dhwani Jain
03:04 Oct 25, 2021

:)

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22:21 Nov 09, 2021

Hmmm....I'm not sure about the character in your bio.... Party-lover....

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19:33 Nov 09, 2021

Hey, Dhwani! I love your new bio! And, correct me if I'm wrong...But isn't Aurora "Briar Rose?" I'm not sure, but that's what I read in the Brothers Grimm books XD

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