The story is about racial intolerance. In particular, the death of a man. Because of the colour of his skin, his occupation, and the ignorance of the cowardly men who show their true colours with their hatred. They hid their cowardice and dressed in white robes and hoods to carry out their actions of hatred. It is also about the abuse of power by those elected into government office, mayor, and police since they were instrumental in turning a blind eye to the attacks perpetrated by the KKK.
**Please read to the very end.
Troy Sampson, a negro boy, and George Bentley, a white boy, were best friends but couldn't spend time together at school. They went to different schools since they were different colours. After school, before they went to work at Troy’s grand pappy’s grainery, both would make a beeline to the bush and hang out there to talk about their lives at home and growing up in Montgomery, Alabama.
“Too many times,” George said, “I witnessed my parents discussing bar b que and Daddy having to cook it.”
“My parents never want to eat anything bar b queued," Troy said. "And they never know whether to stay home at night or to go to the church with the rest of our people.”
“Troy, what do you mean? You go to church at night? Why?” George said.
"Yeah, George, because if we don't, sometimes men in tall white hats and white sheets that cover their bodies come to our houses to scare us and take some of our adult male family members or older teen boys to beat up or bully," Troy said.
“I don't understand any of what you're telling me. I’ve never seen any of that kind of stuff going on in this town," George said.
“George, wake up already. You're white. How could you understand or ever see any kind of that stuff going on in this town? They only visit black people’s homes.”
“They do? Well, do you recognize their voices or know anything about them? Like how tall they are?”
“No," Troy said.
"Why do they do it?"
"To spread hatred and rule by fear so none of us can tell who they are.”
“Nobody should spread those things or rule by fear.”
“My grandpappy always says, ‘Revenge is a dish best served cold," Troy said.
“That's clever. I wonder what it means.”
***
The day after, the black preacher was taken, dragged behind a pickup truck, and severely beaten and horsewhipped until his back was red with blood; everyone’s tongue was wagging about it in town. His body arrived in a makeshift pine box casket that opened on the sides and left in front of the town hall, where everybody in the city was sure to see his beaten body.
The day's unrest began at 7:00 a.m. when Dorothy, the woman who worked with the mayor at town hall, screamed and was unable to pass by the dead, brutalized body. Gail, who worked with the sheriff, was on her way into the town hall and passed out at the sight. Gail's knees gave out as she flopped onto the cement steps in front of the town hall, where she remained until the sheriff showed up at 7:10 a.m.
“What do you believe is the reason for this negro to be on display like that?” Dorothy said.
“I don’t know, but I’ll take care of it,” the local sheriff—George’s Daddy—told Gail when he got her off the ground and into his office.
“Please do. And do it quickly.” Her lips were pursed, and she didn’t look amused. She gave Sheriff Bentley a stern look and then tilted her head.
“I’ll make some calls.” He went outside, closed the box, covered the top with the Confederate flag, and went inside to his office.
He called the church and asked to speak with the spiritual advisor.
“Sorry, sheriff, someone beat and dragged our preacher for over an hour behind a pickup truck and then left him at the foot of our church steps last night," she said. "They mocked him, saying, 'Where's your Lord, Jesus, now, boy?' Those cowards didn’t even wait around so we could see who they were to report them to you," she paused.
"Well, that's unfortunate. You know my office is always willing to serve justice," the sheriff said.
"Well, sheriff, I'm glad to hear that because even if they did stay around, it wouldn't have mattered since they all wore white robes and hoods. But we did get a good look at their shoes." She paused.
"That's excellent news! Maybe you should draw some of what the shoes looked like down and send them to my office," he said.
"Yes, I'll get some of the parishioners to do that. Thank you. Maybe you'll be gracious enough to have all the men come forward in town so we can see their everyday shoes. What do you think about that, sheriff?"
“Noted. But the reason I'm calling and the issue at hand is that his body is in a pine casket-looking box that has the sides down in the town centre so that all of his bruises and beatings show."
“Yes, it is. That’s where it will remain until the Reverend Martin Luther King Jr. comes to preside over funeral arrangements. You know that preacher was the reverend’s first cousin. And it doesn't really show all of his beatings, sheriff. Those white-sheeted men horsewhipped him, too."
“I see. How fortunate for us here in Montgomery. How soon is he coming to do that, then?”
“He’ll be here by the weekend.”
“Thank you. I'll see what I can do to get you a shoe lineup. In the meantime, if you could send me the sketches of the shoes, that would be great. Thank you, Goodbye."
“Have a blessed day, Sheriff.”
***
“Man, Troy, I never heard my Daddy so upset in all my life. Ranting and raving about a reverend and how it was a mistake to watch him die.”
“Who watched him die?” Troy said.
“I think my Daddy did,” George said.
“He did? Does your Daddy wear those white robes?” Troy said.
“I don’t know. But I don’t think so,” George said.
“That wouldn’t be too good for us if he did,” Troy said.
“Yeah, I agree," George said.
***
“The FBI investigation into the death of the preacher now that Reverend Martin Luther King Jr. arrived to preside over the funeral,” the sheriff said, "means this place will be crawling with people from different newspapers."
“How unfortunate for those involved,” Momma said. “I’m sure glad we don’t have any white sheet suits in this house. Do we?” Momma asked, looking annoyed at Daddy.
“Of course not. Do you think I’m stupid? I don’t keep any of that shit in here. Not with the boy being so young and his friend being who it is,” Daddy looked annoyed, this time, at Momma.
“I’m telling you, Troy, that’s what I overheard them saying,” George said.
“Oh, my God. Is your Daddy? ...Huh, he's the wizard?” Troy said.
“No, he’s not. Don’t you think I’d know something like that if he was a wizard?” George said.
“How could you know? What time do you go to bed?” Troy said.
“Come on, Troy, at the same time as you, 8:00 p.m.,” George said.
“How do you know what your Daddy does after 8:00 every night? And what about your Momma? Does she go out at night?” Troy said.
“No. That I’m sure of; she’s a homebody,” George said.
***
The Reverend arrived, and the media coverage was extensive. People opened up their homes to those who needed places to stay until the funeral was over. That’s how the many stories of the dead and the missing came to light, and every name of every child, man, and woman who had been killed, beat up, raped, or disappeared was compiled into a single document. The reporters gathered, started talking about the stories of the people they were staying with, and discovered there was a lengthy list of the dead, missing, and raped and beaten.
Everything died down again, but the story soon surpassed Montgomery, Alabama.
When the mayor's elections came around again, there was no campaigning; this time, there was a push for a black mayor. As the election ended and the ballots were counted, the former white mayor and the former white sheriff stood on the platform in front of city hall—this time on the losers' side of the platform. The men stood before the town with their heads hung low and faced the town's people in shame.
The people sent a clear message with their votes. They elected a new sheriff and a new mayor. The men of colour stood with their heads held high, knowing they could pay the former mayor and sheriff for what occurred under their watch without penalty or fear of reprisal.
The newly elected mayor looked down on the two men, turned to his people, and said, “I forgive these two men, their evil trespasses, as the Lord doth forgive me of mine."
The sheriff spoke next. “Gentleman, and I use that term loosely, during your incumbency, I wished for nothing more than your justice to be inflicted on you—but it didn’t happen. Now, I’m in a position to do to you what you did to my people, but I’m not that kind of person.”
The two men bowed their heads.
“On my family’s lives. I'm truly sorry for all the pain and suffering I've caused,” the former sheriff told the people. I chose to do harmful things over my family life and the well-being of my family; I won’t make that mistake again.”
"I have one last request for you two," the mayor said.
"What's that?" the former mayor said.
"Name it," the former sheriff said.
“I have a yoke with both your names on it, and I’d like you two to come here every day for the next two weeks. I’ll place you in it every morning as a reminder of the terrible atrocities that have sullied our town. Anyone who chooses to have a crack at you will get their chance.”
The people were pleased as they clapped and cheered. White and black people stood together and breathed a sigh of relief. Then, they got to know one another as they stood in the streets of Montgomery and shared their stories.
***
“I never knew your Daddy was so big before. With those cowboy boots on, he looks big and tough, too,” George said.
“Yeah, I think so too. I never knew so many people wanted to take a crack at your dad. I’m sorry about that,” Troy said.
“It’s okay. Ultimately, my dad chose his family above all else,” George said.
“George, maybe racism will be ousted from this town. Maybe our town could even be an example for others. What do you think?” Troy said.
“Wouldn’t that be nice---for a change?” George said.
***
“Daddy, I want to invite a friend to dinner and a sleepover. Is that okay?” George said.
“Who is it? Troy Sampson? Yeah. I’m fine with that. He’s welcome here anytime," George's Daddy, Montgomery's former sheriff, said.
**(AP) — Three former Memphis officers were convicted Thursday of charges of witness tampering in the 2023 fatal beating of Tyre Nichols, and two were acquitted of federal civil rights violations in a death that sparked national protests and calls for broad changes in policing. Take a look at the story. This is a clear example of abuse of power at work and remains alive and well in the South. Shameful.
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Lily, I see you already saw that Jon used AI. You may want to leave your comment on his story. You may be writing to a computer. :-)
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To me, the story featured familiar themes and no plot twists. The story described generic characters as "negro” and "white" instead of "black" and "white" with individual qualities. That alone made me date the time to a hundred years ago. It's clear that some effort went into crafting the narrative, but I think it needs more originality.
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I thank you for your reply. I shall take that under advisement. However, concerning your comment about plot twists and originality, we greatly differ in our thoughts.
1. I thought if the boys talked about what only happened in their homes it would demonstrate people believig what was most important.
2. I thought Troy's father's preaching and uniting the black folk were also important to the story because Troy was wired the same way, and his core beliefs were the same as his father's. Even when his father was killed, he welcomed George into his home.
3. Leaving the preacher's body for all the white folk to see outside the city town centre with the sides open so they could see almost his entire bruised and beaten body, except for the horsewhipping marks, was original, too. But I could be wrong on that.
4. And George wandering alone through the black part of town, I thought, was also original. I doubt too many white kids did that in the South 100 years ago.
5. I doubt many towns elected a black mayor and a black sheriff in any city in the South, but I could be wrong. That may have been a very original take on things. But again, I could be wrong.
5. The townsfolk who, after the election, realized the black folk held no resentment and just wanted to be seen and accepted as people, so they visited with each other in the street was also an interesting and original occurrence.
6. The fact that the boys finally get to eat together at the end of the story inside George's house is also original.
7. His Daddy allowed it and realized the error of his ways. I thought it was the most original thought of them all.
As you can see above there are many original points in this story that you would never find in the actual deep South 100 years ago. Just like the plot twists that have been pointed out here. I see many original points made in the story and many plot twists.
But I am only one. Your opinion matters too. If you are going to make such comments,
"familiar themes and no plot twists. The story described generic characters as "negro” and "white" instead of "black" and "white" with individual qualities." and but I think it needs more originality." I thank you for the comments because your opinion matters, too, but you should probably point out where it is lacking in the story. Much like I pointed out, where in the story did I put originality and plot twists above.
Originality means something different for everyone, I guess, so I'll go back and see what I can think of now to add to this piece. To make it more original. But people 100 years ago in the deep South were black and white or negro and white. Using black and white is publically correct now, but it wasn't then.
As for featuring familiar themes - I would like to know what themes you speak of.
I would also be interested in knowing what your plot is for this story?
As for generic characters - 100 years ago that's what you got. I used two boys to combat that "generic character notion."
It's always a good idea to comment in the following way:
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2. I noticed the ...........
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3. I might suggest ...............
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Thanks for sharing.
If you speak of something specific, show it to your reader. Don't mention without showing.
Anyway, Richar Morris, thank you for your review. I have work to do now to find more ways to make this story more original and less generic with plot twists.
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Great take on a historical event, Lily ! Great work !
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Okay, this story is not typical for me. I would like vital feedback and critiques.
Thank you.
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