The Inheritance Car

Submitted into Contest #293 in response to: Set your entire story in a car, train, or plane.... view prompt

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American Fiction Inspirational

Rain pattered on the midnight blue hood of the 1967 Cadillac DeVille. Eliza Thorne sat behind the wheel, key hovering near the ignition, as water streamed down the windshield in rivulets that distorted the view of her mother's Boston brownstone. The funeral had ended hours ago. The other mourners had long since departed for their hotels or homes, leaving only Eliza and this car—her inheritance.

She knew what would happen when she turned the key. Family legend was explicit: the first time a new owner drove the Cadillac alone, the previous owner would appear in the passenger seat for exactly one journey. One chance for words left unsaid. One opportunity for goodbye.

Which explained why she'd been sitting there for nearly an hour.

Eliza exhaled slowly and inserted the key. The engine rumbled to life with a deep, throaty purr that cars no longer made. As the dashboard illuminated with a soft amber glow, the passenger seat cushion depressed slightly, as though an invisible weight had settled upon it.

"Hello, Mother," Eliza said, her voice barely audible above the rain.

For several seconds, nothing happened. Then the air shimmered, and Vivian Thorne materialized in the passenger seat—not as the gaunt 67-year-old woman who had died of a sudden heart attack, but as the striking 45-year-old pianist Eliza remembered from childhood. Dark hair pulled back in an elegant chignon. Spine straight as a piano key.

"Hello, Eliza." Vivian's voice was clearer than it had been in their last phone conversation, three months before her death. "You kept the car in good condition."

"I only inherited it yesterday." Eliza shifted into drive, pulling away from the curb. "But yes, I had it serviced regularly even when you couldn't drive anymore."

The silence between them stretched taut as a piano wire. Eliza navigated through Boston's rain-slicked streets toward the interstate, focusing on the mechanics of driving to avoid the presence beside her.

"You know the rules?" Vivian finally asked.

"You'll remain until we reach San Francisco. My final destination."

The radio suddenly flickered to life, though Eliza hadn't touched the dial. The soft, melancholy notes of Debussy's "Clair de Lune" filled the car. Eliza reached over and snapped it off.

"I didn't do that," Vivian said quietly. "The car has its own way of communicating. It always has."

"Let's just drive in silence for a while," Eliza replied, merging onto the highway westbound, rain beating a steady rhythm on the roof.

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Dawn broke over Pennsylvania, painting the sky in pale pinks and golds. Eliza had driven through the night, stopping only for gas and coffee. At a rest area overlooking a valley filled with morning mist, she finally cut the engine.

"Do you want to rest, or keep driving?" Vivian asked, breaking hours of silence.

Eliza studied her mother's face—younger than her own now, which felt disorienting. The question felt weighted, about more than just the journey.

"Keep driving," she decided, but didn't immediately restart the engine. "Tell me about the car. You never explained how Great-Grandmother Margot acquired it."

"She bought it new in 1967 with her first royalty check," Vivian said. "She wrote jingles for radio advertisements. Not the career she wanted, but it paid well."

"A family tradition," Eliza murmured. "Abandoning artistic dreams."

The radio suddenly switched on, blaring Aretha Franklin's "Respect." Vivian's mouth quirked into a small smile. Eliza rolled her eyes but didn't turn it off.

"The car does that," Vivian explained. "It seems to... sense things."

As they continued westward, Eliza noticed her mother repeatedly touching a spot on the dashboard below the radio, her fingers tracing a pattern that didn't appear to exist on the polished wood.

"What are you doing?" she finally asked as they crossed into Indiana.

"I should show you," Vivian said. "Pull over when you can."

At a roadside picnic area, Vivian pressed her fingers against the dashboard in a specific sequence. A small panel slid open beneath the radio, revealing a hidden compartment.

"Every owner leaves something behind," Vivian explained, reaching inside and withdrawing several small objects. "For the next one."

She placed them on the seat between them: a guitar pick worn nearly translucent, a broken piano key, a jade ring, a silver thimble, a folded page of sheet music.

"That's Margot's pick," Vivian said, pointing. "She played guitar before switching to commercial jingles. The piano key is mine. It broke during the last recital I gave before..."

"Before me," Eliza finished.

The radio softly began playing Chopin's Nocturne in E-flat major. The piece Vivian used to play while Eliza did homework at the kitchen table.

"I didn't bring anything to leave," Eliza said.

"You will by the end of our journey," Vivian replied, carefully returning the items to their hiding place.

This time, Eliza let the music play.

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Dark clouds gathered as they approached the Mississippi River. The rain began again, heavier than in Boston, drumming against the convertible top with increasing urgency. With visibility deteriorating, Eliza pulled into an overlook above the river.

Lightning flashed, briefly illuminating the churning waters below. Thunder followed seconds later.

"We should talk about that night," Vivian said suddenly.

Eliza's hands tightened on the steering wheel. "Do we have to?"

"Twenty-five years later, and we're still circling it. Like this storm."

Another flash of lightning, closer now.

"Fine," Eliza said. "You wanted me to go to Juilliard. I wanted RISD. You said I was throwing away my talent. I said it was my life."

"That's what we said," Vivian agreed. "But not what it was really about."

Rain lashed against the windows as Vivian turned in her seat to face her daughter. "You saw art restoration as creating something permanent in a chaotic world. I understood that better than you knew."

"You called it 'gluing broken pottery for rich people,'" Eliza reminded her.

"I was afraid," Vivian admitted. "Performance is ephemeral. Notes exist and then they're gone. I thought I was protecting you by pushing you toward something more...tangible."

"By making me do exactly what you didn't?"

"I told you I gave up a European tour to raise you. What I never said was how relieved I felt when I made that decision." Vivian's voice softened. "I was terrified of failing. Of not being exceptional enough. I used you as my excuse."

Lightning flashed again, illuminating tears on Vivian's face.

"And then I resented you for it," she continued. "Not because you existed, but because you showed me my own cowardice."

The rain began to ease, pattering more gently on the roof.

"When you chose art school, chose to preserve beauty rather than perform it, I saw myself all over again. I couldn't bear it."

"So you pushed me away," Eliza said.

"And you let me," Vivian replied.

They fell silent as the storm gradually subsided. Finally, Eliza started the engine again, and they crossed the Mississippi as the last raindrops fell.

On the other side, a small red warning light flickered briefly on the dashboard.

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Nebraska stretched before them, endless fields painted gold by the setting sun. Eliza had just remarked on the emptiness of the landscape when she noticed something in the rearview mirror—a figure in the back seat.

"Hello, Eliza," said an older woman with Vivian's cheekbones and eyes the color of the Cadillac's paint. "I'm Margot."

"How is this possible?" Eliza asked, glancing between her mother and the apparition behind her. "I thought only the previous owner appears."

"At crossroads, the rules bend," Margot explained. "Decisions echo across generations."

Eliza pulled over, cutting the engine. The three women sat in silence as the sun hung low on the horizon.

"You stand at the same crossroads we all faced," Margot continued.

"The choice between what you love and what feels safe. Each woman in our family has had to decide. The legacy is yours now."

"Why did you always make your choices sound so easy when they weren't?" Vivian interrupted, turning to face her mother.

Margot looked startled, then sad. "Because acknowledging the difficulty meant acknowledging the doubt," she admitted. "I couldn't bear to show weakness."

"And I learned that from you," Vivian said. "I presented my sacrifices to Eliza as simple choices because that's what you showed me."

Margot nodded slowly. "Perhaps the true inheritance isn't the choice itself, but the honesty about its cost." She looked directly at Eliza. "Break that pattern, if you can."

As the sun disappeared, so did Margot, fading like a photograph left in light too long.

When Eliza started the car again, the engine made an irregular clicking sound that hadn't been there before.

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Through Wyoming and Utah, as mountains rose around them, Eliza and Vivian moved beyond blame toward understanding. The car's problems gradually worsened—temperature gauge rising, engine sputtering occasionally.

"Will we make it to San Francisco?" Eliza asked, eyeing the dashboard with concern.

"Does it matter?" Vivian replied. "Perhaps the journey is enough."

They shared stories they had never told each other: Vivian revealed letters and articles she had kept about Eliza's career achievements, proudly tracking the daughter who rarely called. Eliza admitted how her restoration work was partly inspired by her mother's musicality—preserving beauty rather than creating it.

"I restored a Baroque harpsichord last year," Eliza said. "The soundboard had cracked, and everyone said it would never sing again. I spent six months on it."

"Did it work?"

"Better than before. The wood had settled into itself. Sometimes broken things come back stronger."

The radio played "Bridge Over Troubled Water"—a song Vivian used to hum while cooking Sunday dinners long ago.

Near the Nevada-California border, the car overheated completely, steam hissing from beneath the hood. They spent the night in a roadside motel, the Cadillac cooling in the parking lot.

"Will you still be here tomorrow?" Eliza asked before leaving the car.

"As long as we're in the car and haven't reached our destination, I'll be here," Vivian assured her.

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The mechanic at the gas station shook his head. "I can patch it enough to get you a little further, but this old girl needs serious work."

Entering California, with the engine clearly struggling, Eliza took a coastal route rather than the inland highway. The Pacific appeared before them, vast and blue beneath a cloudless sky.

The car began to overheat again as they reached a dramatic cliff overlooking the ocean. Eliza pulled over, cutting the engine as steam rose from the hood. San Francisco was visible in the distance, its buildings glinting in the afternoon sun.

"We might not make it," Eliza said.

"We've come far enough," Vivian replied. She looked more translucent now, the sunlight seeming to pass through her.

"Were you happy?" Eliza asked suddenly. "With your life, even without the career you wanted?"

Vivian considered this, her gaze on the horizon. "I had moments of pure joy. And stretches of bitter regret. Sometimes in the same day." She turned to Eliza. "I was not unhappy. But I wasn't brave enough to be truly happy either."

Eliza nodded. "I'm afraid of starting over in San Francisco. That I might be repeating family patterns of abandoning one path for another."

"There's a difference between abandonment and adaptation," Vivian said. "The car shows us who we've been. It's up to you what you do with who you are now."

Steam continued to rise from the hood. The radio played a song Eliza didn't recognize—something jazzy with piano prominently featured.

"What's this?" she asked.

"It was popular the year I bought my first piano after giving up touring," Vivian explained. "I taught students in our living room. Not the career I'd dreamed of, but I kept music in my life. Found new ways to love it."

Eliza called for roadside assistance, uncertain if Vivian would remain until they reached San Francisco.

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A tow truck delivered them to Eliza's new apartment just as the sun was setting. The street was lined with Victorian houses painted in bright colors, nothing like the stately brownstones of Boston.

As the tow truck driver unhooked the Cadillac, Vivian began to fade, her outline blurring like watercolors in rain.

"We made it," Eliza said.

"So we did." Vivian's voice sounded distant now.

"I don't know how to say goodbye," Eliza admitted. "Again."

"Then don't." Vivian pointed to the glove compartment. "Look there first."

With trembling fingers, Eliza opened it. Inside lay a small brass key with an intricate Art Deco design.

"What does it open?" she asked, but Vivian was already fading more rapidly.

"You'll know when you find it," her mother replied, her voice an echo. Then, just before disappearing completely: "I loved watching you become yourself, Eliza. Even when I couldn't say it."

And then she was gone.

Eliza sat alone in the Cadillac, the brass key warm in her palm. It might open something in her mother's house, or in this new city, or perhaps something less tangible. The not knowing felt right somehow.

She reached for her bag and withdrew a small object—a delicate paintbrush she had used on her first restoration project. She opened the hidden compartment beneath the radio and placed it carefully alongside the other mementos, before closing the panel with a soft click.

The radio came on one last time, playing Debussy's "Clair de Lune." This time, Eliza let it finish before stepping out of the car to face her new beginning.

March 08, 2025 15:27

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