friday 8:21 p:m at the cinema
max sat down to her boyfriend mike sat down nexts to will mike took off his backpack and put it in his lap and opened it*
Will.”said mike
yeah???” said will
i have some snacks do u want some??”said mike
sure.” said will
ok.”said mike
mike grabbed a soda and chips and gaved it to will*
ty.”said will
np.”said mike
mike took out a chocolate and closed his backpack and open it and ate it *
the movie started the lights turned off*
what is this movie???”said max
this movie is call chucky it’s a scary movie.”said lucas
i never heard of it.”said max
will now u did.”said lucas
around the road will use to take there was a weird blowing thing the weird blowing thing blow so hard into the light switch all the lights started to go off
Uh what just happened???”said lucas
i think the lights went off.” said max
will started to feel a weird thing behind his back *
steve it doesn’t turn on!!!”said robin
ur just weak move let me try!!!!!”said steve
robin moved from the light switch and step aside Steve turn down the light switch and up *
it won’t turned on understand.”said robin
yes it will!!!!”said steve
ok if it doesn’t turn on in 2 minutes then ur weak.”said robin
the weird grey blowing thing went away from the light switch all the lights started to go back on *
see im not weak.”smiled steve
robin rolled her eyes and got back to working *
Dude r u serious rn!!!!”said lucas
lucas calm down.”said max
no this is why I spend my money!!!!”said lucas
lucas the lights went off maybe the movie was still playing and it got to the end.”said max
but that quick???”that’s not ok!!!!”said lucas
lucas got up where he was sitting *
where r u going????”said max
to another cinema!!!!”said lucas
ugh!!!!” I hate when that happens Will let’s go.” said mike
ok.” said will
mike put on his backpack and got up where he was sitting and walked will got up where he was sitting and walked behind him max lucas will mike walked out the mall from the cinema*
mike Will.”said lucas
yeah???” said mike
ima go to another cinema wanna come????”said lucas
sure.” said mike
no.” said will
aw why????”said lucas
because i promise My mom that I will be home before 9:21.”said will
oh ok cya on Monday.”said lucas
cya.”said will
bye Will.”said mike
bye.”said will
bye.”Will said max
bye.”said will
will got in his bike and rode his bike home max lucas mike got on their bike and rode to another cinema will arrived home Will parked his backpack outside and walked to the doorsteps and open the door and got in and closed the door Will walked to his room Will closed his bedroom door and walked to his bed and sat down Will got scared *
he’s back!!!!” said Will he’s back!!!”
the nexts day will got his walkie talkie from the table and press the speak button *
mike do u copy????” said will
this is mike I copy???”said mike
i have to tell I something.”said will
what is it???”said mike
it has to be in person.”said will
oh ok come to my house.”said mike
ok.”said will
will got out his room and walked to the front door and opened it and closed it and walked down the doorsteps Will got in his bike and rode his bike to mikes house 4 minutes later Will arrived to mikes house Will parked his bike and knocked the door mike answered *
hi.”said mike
hi.”said will
come in.”said mike
ty.”said will
np.”said mike
will got in mikes house and walked to mikes basement mike closed the door and walked down the basement Will sat down a couch mike had in his basement mike sat down nexts to him*
Will what do u want to tell me???”said mike
so last night when the lights went off I felt a weird feeling thing behind my neck.”said will
a weird feeling behind ur neck???”said mike
yeah u know how u go up on a roller coaster????”and it goes down and u get scared????”said will
yeah.”said mike
it felt like that.” said will
where u scared of the lights going off???”said mike
no.”said will
if u weren’t scared then???”said mike
will looked at his hands and got scared*
mike looked at will*
is he back???”said mike
will didn’t say anything*
Will is he???”said mike
will looked at mike scared*
yeah.”said will
mike keeped looking at Will
to be continued……
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It’s always interesting to see a different approach to telling a story. It reads like a script, without the descriptions and directions. Maybe create some atmosphere by describing locations as well as fleshing out the characters with details of how they look and what they do. Thanks for doing something refreshing, you’ve got something there, I look forward to reading more.
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ok
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and thanks
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Mariana, I think it is wonderful you are writing stories to this week's prompts. I have a couple of questions if you don't mind answering them. What country are you from? Is English your first or main language? Happy birthday, Mariana! Hope you are enjoying your sweet sixteenth!🥳🥳🥰 Happy birthday to you on the 24th of April. It concerns me that you are not excited to turn sixteen. Most teenagers love that age even if everything is not perfect around them. It is always a blessing when our Good Lord blesses us with more time in this life. Fi...
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