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Western Urban Fantasy Fiction

In a small village in Provence in the south of France, surrounded by endless lavender fields and wide wine vineyards, lived a boy named Lucas, fifteen years old, who was known in the village as "weird". His wild hair and deep dark eyes seemed to look into places that no one but himself could see. While the rest of the boys in the village spent their days playing soccer in the fields or riding bicycles through the vineyards, Lucas preferred to wander alone, an old camera hanging around his neck. He looked for the unusual and exciting: shadows of ancient olive trees, the light of sunset reflected on an abandoned windmill, or a dry leaf blowing in the wind.

His unusual hobbies made him a marginal figure. At school the children avoided him, and did not try to understand his world. They called him "the weirdo", "the artist", and sometimes, when they were particularly cruel, "the sorcerer". Lucas tried, time after time, to join their friends, but was always met with contempt or disregard.

Still, Lucas refused to change. He found solace in the quiet beauty of Provence, between the scent of lavender and the hum of cicadas. He used to wander far outside the village boundaries, driven by an insatiable curiosity to discover the hidden stories of the area. On one of these wanderings, when he climbed a small hill surrounded by wild flowers and ancient olive trees, he encountered something unusual.

Under the shade of an ancient olive tree, Lucas noticed a strange object sticking out of the dry ground. He knelt down, removed the layer of dust and discovered an ancient book. The leather binding was cracked and worn, and the pages were yellowed for many years. These pages were decorated with strange symbols and intricate illustrations, and the text was written in an unfamiliar language. Even though he didn't understand a word, Lucas felt an inexplicable attraction to the book. He opened it and began to flip through, and stories of forgotten magic, spells and powerful rituals unfolded before his eyes.

In the following days, Lucas couldn't stop thinking about the book. He carried it with him everywhere, secretly reading it. The more he read into it, the stronger his feeling that the book had found him for a reason. One evening, when the sun went down and painted the sky in shades of orange and purple, Lucas decided to try one spell.

The instructions seemed simple: he had to whisper the spell while holding a certain object. Lucas picked up a smooth stone and whispered the foreign words, his voice trembling with a mixture of fear and excitement. At first nothing happened, but just as he gave up, the stone began to glow with a faint light. Startled, he dropped it, but the light continued to burn for a split second before disappearing.

The following days brought with them a new sense of purpose for Lucas. He began experimenting with spells, and each success filled him with a quiet sense of satisfaction. One night, he whispered over a dry fountain in the center of the village, and the next morning clear and fresh water gushed out from it. The people of the village were shocked, but Lucas stood aside, watching from the shadows, his heart bursting with pride.

Encouraged by his successes, Lucas began to use magic more boldly. He caused a barren vineyard to yield sweet grapes as if all at once. During the village's annual wine festival, it painted the sky with brilliant and magnificent lights, leaving everyone in attendance speechless. Slowly, the villagers began to notice him. Invitations to meals and social gatherings poured in. The children who mocked him before now wanted to get closer to him, as if attracted by the new glow around him.

For the first time in his life, Lucas felt he belonged. But deep inside, a small voice whispered to him that this acceptance was fragile, depending only on the miracles he was able to produce. Still, he continued, determined to retain the admiration of the villagers.

As Lucas's name spread, his dependence on the book increased. But the magic took a toll. Each spell required more of him—energy, concentration, and eventually parts of his soul. The book began to whisper to him more and more, sometimes even in the language of his dreams. It was no longer a tool in his hands; It was a force that penetrated deep into his being, and took over him.

On one fateful night, Lucas decided to perform a more ambitious spell than anything he had tried before. He wanted to create such a spectacular show that the people of the village would never forget it. He climbed a hill overlooking the village, opened the book to a page he had never dared to read, and began to recite the words. The instructions were long and complicated, and the warnings hinted at great dangers, but Lucas was determined.

As the spell neared its climax, the lavender fields were colored with a glowing golden light. The stars in the sky swirled and created magnificent shapes that could not be explained. The people of the village gathered in the square, looking at the amazing spectacle in amazement. They cheered for Lucas, and called his name excitedly.

But Lucas did not feel victory. As the magic grew stronger, the book became hot in his hands. A deep, resonant voice filled his thoughts, demanding more—more power, more devotion, more of him. The ground beneath him began to shake, and for the first time he realized the price he had paid. He gave so much of himself to magic that there was almost nothing left of him.

The next morning, Lucas disappeared. Some said he left for the big cities like Paris or Marseille, looking for a new life away from the village. Others whispered that he was swallowed up in the magic he created. His house remained empty, and the book was not found.

But on certain nights in Provence, when the lavender fields are illuminated by the moonlight, some claim to see a small, mysterious light flickering among the hills. Some say this is Lucas, still looking for the acceptance he so longed for. Others believe it's a warning sign—a reminder of the price we may pay when we try to change ourselves just to fit into a world that will never truly understand us.

November 19, 2024 06:09

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Kenneth Penn
22:21 Nov 24, 2024

This is a beautiful story. I loved the descriptions and artful similes woven throughout. The tragic ending and cautionary words makes the story feel like a classic fairy tale. Great job

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